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--->'''Pyotr:''' Monomacy[[labelnote:*]]Monomacy is a Sabbat tradition for solving disputes that boils down to a fight to the death, typically ending in [[MonstrousCannibalism Diablerie.]]]] it is! [[EvilLaugh (laughs maniacally)]]

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--->'''Pyotr:''' Monomacy[[labelnote:*]]Monomacy is a Sabbat tradition for solving disputes that boils down to a fight to the death, typically ending in [[MonstrousCannibalism Diablerie.]]]] ]][[/labelnote]] it is! [[EvilLaugh (laughs maniacally)]]
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--->'''Pyotr:''' Monomacy[[labelnote:*]]Monomacy is a Sabbat tradition for solving disputes that boils down to a fight to the death, typically ending in [[MonstrousCannibalism Diablerie.]] it is! [[EvilLaugh (laughs maniacally)]]

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--->'''Pyotr:''' Monomacy[[labelnote:*]]Monomacy is a Sabbat tradition for solving disputes that boils down to a fight to the death, typically ending in [[MonstrousCannibalism Diablerie.]] ]]]] it is! [[EvilLaugh (laughs maniacally)]]
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** What's more, Pyotr makes his cannibalistic intent ''blatantly clear'' when the fight starts as he makes it very clear he's not going to help Ape out at all. Made worse by his still missing eyes and skeletal face making him the most overtly ''monstrous'' vampire in the room.
--->'''Pyotr:''' Monomacy[[labelnote:*]]Monomacy is a Sabbat tradition for solving disputes that boils down to a fight to the death, typically ending in [[MonstrousCannibalism Diablerie.]] it is! [[EvilLaugh (laughs maniacally)]]
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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus reveals that Kitten is worried about the Arcanum finding out about his hunting activities with Markus and his family. Markus is confident that whatever punishment the organization would inflict will be as toothless as their hands-off approach to studying the supernatural. But Harry has a warning: the Arcanum has and will put out out hits on anyone they deem too problematic. If Markus' family isn't careful, then [[UnPerson more than just their research will be snuffed out]]...

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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus Marckus reveals that Kitten is worried about the Arcanum finding out about his hunting activities with Markus Marckus and his family. Markus Marckus is confident that whatever punishment the organization would inflict will be as toothless as their hands-off approach to studying the supernatural. But Harry has a warning: the Arcanum has and will put out out hits on anyone they deem too problematic. If Markus' Marckus' family isn't careful, then [[UnPerson more than just their research will be snuffed out]]...
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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus reveals that Kitten is worried about the Arcanum finding out about his hunting activities with Markus and his family. Markus is confident the organization is too toothless to inflict a serious punishment, given their counterintuitively hands-off approach to studying the supernatural. But Harry has a warning: the Arcanum has and will put out out hits on anyone they deem too problematic. If Markus' family isn't careful, then [[UnPerson more than just their research will be snuffed out]]...

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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus reveals that Kitten is worried about the Arcanum finding out about his hunting activities with Markus and his family. Markus is confident that whatever punishment the organization is too would inflict will be as toothless to inflict a serious punishment, given as their counterintuitively hands-off approach to studying the supernatural. But Harry has a warning: the Arcanum has and will put out out hits on anyone they deem too problematic. If Markus' family isn't careful, then [[UnPerson more than just their research will be snuffed out]]...
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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering in the fetal position on the floor, covered in blood, and Fatigue ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mention goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]

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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering in the fetal position on the floor, covered in blood, and Fatigue ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mention goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, Brok, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]
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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus reveals that Kitten is worried about the Arcanum finding out about his hunting activities with Markus and his family. Markus doesn't think anything serious will happen; he finds the organization toothless because of their counterintuitively distant regard for the supernatural, so whatever punishment they inflict on Kitten must be similarly ineffective. But Harry has a warning: the Arcanum has and will put out out hits on anyone they deem too problematic. If Markus' family aren't careful, then [[UnPerson more than just their research will be snuffed out]]...

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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus reveals that Kitten is worried about the Arcanum finding out about his hunting activities with Markus and his family. Markus doesn't think anything serious will happen; he finds is confident the organization is too toothless because of to inflict a serious punishment, given their counterintuitively distant regard for hands-off approach to studying the supernatural, so whatever punishment they inflict on Kitten must be similarly ineffective.supernatural. But Harry has a warning: the Arcanum has and will put out out hits on anyone they deem too problematic. If Markus' family aren't isn't careful, then [[UnPerson more than just their research will be snuffed out]]...
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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus brings up Kitten being worried about what the Arcanum would do if they found out about their activities with Markus thinking that it is very unlikely that the Arcanum would actually do anything given how toothless they seem. Harry remarks that, in the past, the Arcanum has not been above putting out hits on people and having them taken out if they become too problematic. Given how much effort the Arcanum went to wipe out evidence of the Family's research, it does hint they are not quite as harmless as they seem [[UnPerson and are prepared to do the same to the family themselves if they become too much of a problem]].

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* During the talks about the Arcanum, Markus brings up reveals that Kitten being is worried about what the Arcanum would do if they found finding out about their his hunting activities with Markus thinking that it is very unlikely that the Arcanum would actually do and his family. Markus doesn't think anything given how serious will happen; he finds the organization toothless because of their counterintuitively distant regard for the supernatural, so whatever punishment they seem. inflict on Kitten must be similarly ineffective. But Harry remarks that, in the past, has a warning: the Arcanum has not been above putting and will put out out hits on people and having them taken out if anyone they become deem too problematic. Given how much effort the Arcanum went to wipe out evidence of the Family's research, it does hint they are not quite as harmless as they seem If Markus' family aren't careful, then [[UnPerson and are prepared to do the same to the family themselves if they become too much of a problem]]. more than just their research will be snuffed out]]...
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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering in the fetal position on the floor, covered in blood, and Fatigue ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]

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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering in the fetal position on the floor, covered in blood, and Fatigue ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions mention goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]
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--> Whichever one of you did this... '''you won't see the morning.'''

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--> Whichever one of you did this... '''you '''[[ThisMeansWar you won't see the morning.''']]'''
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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering in the fetal position on the floor, covered in blood, and Fatique ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]

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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering in the fetal position on the floor, covered in blood, and Fatique Fatigue ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]
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---> Whichever one of you did this... '''you won't see the morning.'''

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---> --> Whichever one of you did this... '''you won't see the morning.'''
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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering and covered in blood in the fetal position on the floor, and Fatique ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]

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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering and covered in blood in the fetal position on the floor, covered in blood, and Fatique ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]
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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming form the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering and covered in blood in the fetal position on the floor, and Fatique ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]

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* The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming form from the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering and covered in blood in the fetal position on the floor, and Fatique ''utterly mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the room in a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, and Occam, the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]

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* THE ENDING. Fatigue is found ''utterly mutilated'' while Spit is left on the floor, covered in blood while whimpering in terror. The shots of the characters saw it all.
* Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, but then we get to Occam, who is positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]

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* THE ENDING. Fatigue The final scuffle between D's family and the Blacklaws abruptly ends when everyone hears screaming coming form the Chapter House's upper floors. They find the source of the noise.... and it is found ''gruesome.'' Whatever happened left Giles barricaded within a closet, Spit cowering and covered in blood in the fetal position on the floor, and Fatique ''utterly mutilated'' while Spit is left on mutilated,'' his remains sprawled across the floor, covered room in blood while whimpering in terror. The shots of a grotesque display. Everyone witnessing the characters saw it all.
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atrocity can only stare in silence, all exhibiting so many emotions at once. Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, but then we get to and Occam, who is the last to arrive, positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]
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* The mystery. Someone in the group is a ghoul and no one knows who. The paranoia and tension begins to pile until it all comes to a head.
* THE ENDING. Fatigue is found ''utterly mutilated'' while Spit is left on the floor, covered in blood while whimpering in terror. The shots of the characters saw it all.
* Special mentions goes to D, who has a look of angry shock, Brock, who looks like he wants to inflict the same thing on the person responsible, but then we get to Occam, who is positively '''overflowing''' with [[TranquilFury cold fury.]]
---> Whichever one of you did this... '''you won't see the morning.'''
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--->'''Ape:''' ''Pyotr, you [[AccentUponTheWrongSyllable tree-sone-uss]] dog!'' Face your death, like a true Sabbat!\\

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--->'''Ape:''' -->'''Ape:''' ''Pyotr, you [[AccentUponTheWrongSyllable tree-sone-uss]] dog!'' Face your death, like a true Sabbat!\\



* The scene where Kitten has to close the office door. The tension is almost at Hitchcockian levels.

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* The scene where Kitten has to close the office door. The tension is almost at Hitchcockian [[Creator/AlfredHitchcock Hitchcockian]] levels.



--> '''Kitten:''' Wait, stop!
--> '''Pyotr:''' "Wait, '''[[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor STOMP]]?'''" Well, I was gonna ease up, but if you ''insist...''

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'''Pyotr:''' "Wait, '''[[EvilHasABadSenseOfHumor STOMP]]?'''" STOMP]]'''?" Well, I was gonna ease up, but if you ''insist...''
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** Also doubles as a stealth TheReasonYouSuckSpeech as Door basically calls out the others for [[HeelRealisation instigating in the brutality]].

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** Also doubles as a stealth TheReasonYouSuckSpeech as Door basically calls out the others for [[HeelRealisation [[HeelRealization instigating in the brutality]].
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* Polydora finds D's alias of "Kevin" familiar, and it's not until she reconvenes with her boss why that is. It turns out she's ''in direct contact with the Regent,'' and they both muse over the coincidence of her former accountant's name popping up in her life again. In reality, it's anything ''but'' a coincidence, and Big-D's forged identity may have made things harder for himself and the ''actual'' Kevin under his care.

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* Polydora finds D's alias of "Kevin" familiar, and it's not until she reconvenes with her boss why that is.the reason becomes clear. It turns out she's ''in direct contact with the Regent,'' and they both muse over the coincidence of her former accountant's name popping up in her life again. In reality, it's anything ''but'' a coincidence, and Big-D's forged identity may have made things harder for himself and the ''actual'' Kevin under his care.
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* D's decision to use Kevin's name as an alias may have backfired; Polydora not only finds it familiar, but is ''in direct contact with the Regent.'' They deem it a coincidence when they reconvene, but they still intend to keep tabs on Big-D--who may have just made things harder for himself and Kevin.

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* Polydora finds D's decision to use Kevin's name as an alias may have backfired; Polydora not only finds it of "Kevin" familiar, but is and it's not until she reconvenes with her boss why that is. It turns out she's ''in direct contact with the Regent.'' They deem it a Regent,'' and they both muse over the coincidence when they reconvene, but they still intend to keep tabs on Big-D--who of her former accountant's name popping up in her life again. In reality, it's anything ''but'' a coincidence, and Big-D's forged identity may have just made things harder for himself and Kevin.the ''actual'' Kevin under his care.
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* For once, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Big D is completely on the back foot with this situation.]] Considering how absurdly knowledgeable he is about anything and everything in the setting, the fact this entire experience leaves him so rattled says something.

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* For once, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Big D is completely on the back foot with this situation.]] Considering how He's left with far more questions than answers, which greatly concerns him despite being elated to have gained a 99p blender from this experience. And this is coming from someone who is absurdly knowledgeable he is about anything and everything fantastical in the setting, the fact this entire experience leaves him so rattled says something.setting.
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* For once, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Big D is completely on the backfoot with this situation.]] Considering how absurdly knowledgeable he is about anything and everything in the setting, the fact this entire experience leaves him so rattled says something.

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* For once, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness Big D is completely on the backfoot back foot with this situation.]] Considering how absurdly knowledgeable he is about anything and everything in the setting, the fact this entire experience leaves him so rattled says something.
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* [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness The simple fact that Big D is completely on the backfoot with this situation.]] Considering how absurdly knowledgeable he is about anything and everything in the setting, the fact that this entire experience is sufficient to leave him rattled say something.

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* For once, [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness The simple fact that Big D is completely on the backfoot with this situation.]] Considering how absurdly knowledgeable he is about anything and everything in the setting, the fact that this entire experience is sufficient to leave leaves him so rattled say says something.
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* The entire scenario is surreal, working on some sort of demented dream logic. Big D falls into a tunnel and awakes to discover an ''entire store'' beneath the one he just entered. There's a strange humanoid creature inside that can seemingly only speak over the intercom and keeps alternating between generic supermarket terminology and blatantly cryptic riddles about "growth." Worst of all, the "blender" he purchased appears to have traveled ''outside the dream'' with him.

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* The entire scenario is surreal, working on some sort of demented dream logic. Big D falls into a tunnel and awakes to discover an ''entire store'' beneath the one he just entered. There's a strange humanoid creature inside that can seemingly only speak over the intercom and keeps alternating between generic supermarket terminology and blatantly cryptic riddles about "growth." Worst of all, the "blender" he purchased appears to have in the dream traveled ''outside ''into the dream'' real world'' with him.



* D’s constant use of Kevin’s name as an alias may have backfired as the store manager is in ''direct contact with the Regent'' and is now on their radar.

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* D’s constant D's decision to use of Kevin’s Kevin's name as an alias may have backfired as the store manager backfired; Polydora not only finds it familiar, but is in ''direct ''in direct contact with the Regent'' Regent.'' They deem it a coincidence when they reconvene, but they still intend to keep tabs on Big-D--who may have just made things harder for himself and is now on their radar.Kevin.
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** There is another moment that definitely confirms that Chapman is a ghoul prior to that. After Big D jokingly boasts about having a Bruce Campbell jawline and Chapman says he likes The Evil Dead, D panicks for a moment and then backtracks after he realizes Chapman is talking about the movie, not the vampire. Then just as Chapman is about to continue, his face suddenly '' contorts'', eyes bulging and teeth barring. It comes out of nowhere for a split second. And on a rewatch, it is quite obvious thats Chapman's withdrawal kicking in.

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** There is another moment that definitely confirms that Chapman is a ghoul prior to that. After Big D jokingly boasts about having a Bruce Campbell jawline and Chapman says he likes The Evil Dead, D panicks for a moment and then backtracks after he realizes Chapman is talking about the movie, not the vampire. Then just as Chapman is about to continue, his face suddenly '' contorts'', eyes bulging and teeth barring. It comes out of nowhere for a split second. And on a rewatch, it is it's quite obvious thats that this is Chapman's withdrawal kicking in.
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* [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness The simple fact that Big D is completely on the backfoot with this situation.]] Considering how absurdly knowledgeable he is about anything and everything in the setting, the fact that this entire experience is sufficient to leave him rattled say something.
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* Big-D's reaction to The Blue Man [[AmbiguousSituation either revealing his true form or being possessed]] is to recoil in horror and scream about how what he's seeing can't be true because the face he sees belongs to someone he believes to be dead. Given the context, a very likely possibility outside of the guesses towards a [[TheFairFolk Changeling]], some kind of Mage, or Houdini is ''the Methuselah he thought he killed.'' None of the options sound good when it comes to a creature Big-D ''truly fears''.

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* Big-D's reaction to The Blue Man [[AmbiguousSituation either revealing his true form or being possessed]] is to recoil in horror and scream about how what he's seeing can't be true because the face he sees belongs to someone he believes to be dead. Given the context, a very likely possibility outside of the guesses towards a [[TheFairFolk Changeling]], Changeling]] or some kind of Mage, or Houdini Mage is that he's ''the Methuselah he thought he killed.'' None of the options sound good when it comes to a creature Big-D ''truly fears''.
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* Big-D's reaction to The Blue Man [[AmbiguousSituation either revealing his true form or being possessed]] is to recoil in horror and scream about how what he's seeing can't be true because the face he sees belongs to someone he believes to be dead. Given the context, a very likely possibility outside of the guesses towards a [[TheFairFolk True Fae]] or some kind of Mage is ''The Methuselah he thought he killed.'' No options sound good when it comes to a creature Big-D ''truly fears''.

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* Big-D's reaction to The Blue Man [[AmbiguousSituation either revealing his true form or being possessed]] is to recoil in horror and scream about how what he's seeing can't be true because the face he sees belongs to someone he believes to be dead. Given the context, a very likely possibility outside of the guesses towards a [[TheFairFolk True Fae]] or Changeling]], some kind of Mage Mage, or Houdini is ''The ''the Methuselah he thought he killed.'' No None of the options sound good when it comes to a creature Big-D ''truly fears''.

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