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* The whole story. '''Nonstop'''. Taking place ''seven years'' after the events of ''Undertale'', the entire Underground has gone to absolute hell from there, with the CORE dying and Undyne, the new Queen, being unable to stop it. Consequentially, the monsters start starving to death because their magic food is fading away from the core's death. The monster children start dying first and the adult monsters start losing their minds, killing and/or eating each other. In the case of Snowdin, however, after a currently unknown altercation between Sans and Undyne which resulted in part of Sans' skull getting smashed open, Snowdin has been eating any human children they come across to fight off starvation and to spite Undyne, who just wants the SOULS to be harvested.
** One particular monster that got it the worst was Horrortale Grillby. After the CORE died, the magic that kept his body from burning itself started fading, leading to his soul being in perpetual agony as he feels himself burning alive constantly but cannot die. In one particular chilling scene in the past, right when everything starts going to hell, he grabs Sans suddenly out of nowhere after a long night in his bar and starts pleading for him to help him as his face starts melting and he is screaming his head off in agony. Remember, he's been living like this for ''8 years''.
** The story's main protagonist, Aliza, has a soul of fear instead of determination (although it's implied she has a little bit of determination). This means that instead of being able to manually save, her soul autosaves right before she dies, so not only will she remember how painful or horrifying the death was, but she will have to re-experience the terror right before she died. She also seems to get scars from her previous horrible deaths. Friendly reminder that Aliza is 11.
* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne: knowing how desperate the latter had become, Alphys convinced her to try extracting Sans' eye to harvest its magic. It seemed to [[HopeSpot work at first...]] but then Sans somehow comes back and not only destroys the CORE, but personally lobotomized Alphys just to screw with Undyne, making it [[RevengeBeforeReason practically impossible]] for the Underground to survive without killing humans.
** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager (the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.
** One particular monster that got it the worst was Horrortale Grillby. After the CORE died, the magic that kept his body from burning itself started fading, leading to his soul being in perpetual agony as he feels himself burning alive constantly but cannot die. In one particular chilling scene in the past, right when everything starts going to hell, he grabs Sans suddenly out of nowhere after a long night in his bar and starts pleading for him to help him as his face starts melting and he is screaming his head off in agony. Remember, he's been living like this for ''8 years''.
** The story's main protagonist, Aliza, has a soul of fear instead of determination (although it's implied she has a little bit of determination). This means that instead of being able to manually save, her soul autosaves right before she dies, so not only will she remember how painful or horrifying the death was, but she will have to re-experience the terror right before she died. She also seems to get scars from her previous horrible deaths. Friendly reminder that Aliza is 11.
* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne: knowing how desperate the latter had become, Alphys convinced her to try extracting Sans' eye to harvest its magic. It seemed to [[HopeSpot work at first...]] but then Sans somehow comes back and not only destroys the CORE, but personally lobotomized Alphys just to screw with Undyne, making it [[RevengeBeforeReason practically impossible]] for the Underground to survive without killing humans.
** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager (the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.
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* The whole story. '''Nonstop'''. Taking place ''seven years'' seven years after the events of ''Undertale'', the entire Underground has gone to absolute hell from there, with the CORE dying and Undyne, the new Queen, being unable to stop it. Consequentially, the monsters start starving to death because their magic food is fading away from the core's death. The monster children start dying first and the adult monsters start losing their minds, killing and/or eating each other. In the case of Snowdin, however, after a currently unknown altercation between Sans and Undyne which resulted in part of Sans' skull getting smashed open, Snowdin has the residents have been eating any human children they come across to fight off starvation and to spite Undyne, who just wants the SOULS to be harvested.
harvested - this happens after a altercation between Sans and Undyne, which there are no known details of other than the result being part of Sans' skull getting ''smashed open''.
**One particular monster that Grillby got it the worst was Horrortale Grillby. After - after the CORE died, the magic that kept his body from burning itself started fading, leading to his soul being in perpetual agony as he feels himself burning alive constantly constantly, but cannot die. In one particular chilling scene in the past, flashback, right when everything starts going to hell, he suddenly grabs Sans suddenly out of nowhere after a long night in his bar and starts pleading for him to help him as him, his face starts melting and starting to melt while he is screaming screams his head off in agony. Remember, And he's been living like this for ''8 years''.
** The story's main protagonist, the 11-year-old Aliza, has asoul SOUL composed of fear instead of determination (although fear, although it's implied she has a little bit of determination).determination. This means that instead of being able to manually save, her soul autosaves right before she dies, so not only will she remember how painful or horrifying the death was, but she will have to re-experience the terror right before she died. She also seems to get have scars from her previous horrible deaths. Friendly reminder that Aliza is 11.
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* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne:knowing Knowing how desperate the latter had become, Alphys convinced her to try extracting Sans' eye to harvest its magic. It seemed to [[HopeSpot work at first...]] but then Sans somehow comes back and not only destroys the CORE, but personally lobotomized lobotomizes Alphys just to screw with spite Undyne, making it [[RevengeBeforeReason practically impossible]] for the Underground to survive without killing humans.
** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager (the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, andunfortunately, is unfortunately what leads to things going downhill.
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** The story's main protagonist, the 11-year-old Aliza, has a
* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne:
** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager (the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and
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* Flowey not only [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishing the world they're in]], but revealing himself as the OnlySaneMan is shocking to anyone who has any surface-level knowledge about Undertale. Then, [[HopeSpot after he promises to help you out]], ''he's killed off.'' Your only hope is now dead.
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* Flowey not only [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishing the world they're in]], but revealing himself as the OnlySaneMan OnlySaneMan, is shocking to anyone who has any surface-level knowledge about Undertale. Then, [[HopeSpot after he promises to help you out]], ''he's killed off.'' Your only hope is now dead.
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** Toriel saving you is twisted from a rescue from a sadistic villain to your new partner being killed off by the very thing he warned you about,
** During the spike puzzle, Aliza has an aside to herself wondering about other kids who met their fate to the spikes. It's then noted that she grabs Toriel's hand harder.
* The scene where Toriel kills the thing hiding in the leaves. You're almost lulled into a false sense of security with her. Her presence becomes comforting to you. Then you see something shifting in the leaves, and immediately, Toriel raises her hands and kills it without a second thought. She tries to justify herself, but that sight of the dust covering the ground is scary to anyone familiar with Undertale.
** During the spike puzzle, Aliza has an aside to herself wondering about other kids who met their fate to the spikes. It's then noted that she grabs Toriel's hand harder.
* The scene where Toriel kills the thing hiding in the leaves. You're almost lulled into a false sense of security with her. Her presence becomes comforting to you. Then you see something shifting in the leaves, and immediately, Toriel raises her hands and kills it without a second thought. She tries to justify herself, but that sight of the dust covering the ground is scary to anyone familiar with Undertale.
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** Toriel saving you is twisted turned from a rescue from a sadistic villain to into your new partner being killed off by the very thing he warned you about,
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** During the spikepuzzle, puzzle Aliza has an aside to herself herself, wondering about other kids who met their fate to the spikes. It's spikes, then noted that she grabs Toriel's hand harder.
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* The scene where Toriel kills the thing hiding in the leaves.
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* When you read the book about snails, instead of giving you light-hearted facts like it would in Undertale, it tells you about the snail's radula, a tongue with [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily thousands of microscopic teeth]] that rips up the food it eats.
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* When you read the book about snails, instead of giving you light-hearted facts like it would in Undertale, it tells you about the snail's radula, a tongue with [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily thousands of microscopic teeth]] that [[FreakierThanFiction rips up the food it eats.eats]].
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!! The webcomic:
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** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager (the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.
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** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager (the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.downhill.
!! The game:
* Flowey not only [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishing the world they're in]], but revealing himself as the OnlySaneMan is shocking to anyone who has any surface-level knowledge about Undertale. Then, [[HopeSpot after he promises to help you out]], ''he's killed off.'' Your only hope is now dead.
* Many moments from Undertale have become this with the added context.
** Toriel saving you is twisted from a rescue from a sadistic villain to your new partner being killed off by the very thing he warned you about,
** During the spike puzzle, Aliza has an aside to herself wondering about other kids who met their fate to the spikes. It's then noted that she grabs Toriel's hand harder.
* The scene where Toriel kills the thing hiding in the leaves. You're almost lulled into a false sense of security with her. Her presence becomes comforting to you. Then you see something shifting in the leaves, and immediately, Toriel raises her hands and kills it without a second thought. She tries to justify herself, but that sight of the dust covering the ground is scary to anyone familiar with Undertale.
* When you read the book about snails, instead of giving you light-hearted facts like it would in Undertale, it tells you about the snail's radula, a tongue with [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily thousands of microscopic teeth]] that rips up the food it eats.
!! The game:
* Flowey not only [[EstablishingSeriesMoment establishing the world they're in]], but revealing himself as the OnlySaneMan is shocking to anyone who has any surface-level knowledge about Undertale. Then, [[HopeSpot after he promises to help you out]], ''he's killed off.'' Your only hope is now dead.
* Many moments from Undertale have become this with the added context.
** Toriel saving you is twisted from a rescue from a sadistic villain to your new partner being killed off by the very thing he warned you about,
** During the spike puzzle, Aliza has an aside to herself wondering about other kids who met their fate to the spikes. It's then noted that she grabs Toriel's hand harder.
* The scene where Toriel kills the thing hiding in the leaves. You're almost lulled into a false sense of security with her. Her presence becomes comforting to you. Then you see something shifting in the leaves, and immediately, Toriel raises her hands and kills it without a second thought. She tries to justify herself, but that sight of the dust covering the ground is scary to anyone familiar with Undertale.
* When you read the book about snails, instead of giving you light-hearted facts like it would in Undertale, it tells you about the snail's radula, a tongue with [[MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily thousands of microscopic teeth]] that rips up the food it eats.
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** One particular monster that got it the worst was Horrortale Grillby. After the CORE died, the magic that kept his body from burning itself started fading, leading to his soul being in perpetual agony as he feels himself burning alive constantly but cannot die. In one particular chilling scene in the past, right when everything starts going to hell, he grabs Sans suddenly out of nowhere after a long night in his bar and starts pleading for him to help him as his face starts melting and he is screaming his head off in agony. He's been living like this for ''8 years''.
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** One particular monster that got it the worst was Horrortale Grillby. After the CORE died, the magic that kept his body from burning itself started fading, leading to his soul being in perpetual agony as he feels himself burning alive constantly but cannot die. In one particular chilling scene in the past, right when everything starts going to hell, he grabs Sans suddenly out of nowhere after a long night in his bar and starts pleading for him to help him as his face starts melting and he is screaming his head off in agony. He's Remember, he's been living like this for ''8 years''.
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** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager(the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.
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** Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager(the teenager (the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.
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* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne: knowing how desperate the latter had become, Alphys convinced her to try extracting Sans' eye to harvest its magic. It seemed to [[HopeSpot work at first...]] but then Sans somehow comes back and not only destroys the CORE, but personally lobotomized Alphys just to screw with Undyne, making it [[RevengeBeforeReason practically impossible]] for the Underground to survive without killing humans.
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* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne: knowing how desperate the latter had become, Alphys convinced her to try extracting Sans' eye to harvest its magic. It seemed to [[HopeSpot work at first...]] but then Sans somehow comes back and not only destroys the CORE, but personally lobotomized Alphys just to screw with Undyne, making it [[RevengeBeforeReason practically impossible]] for the Underground to survive without killing humans.humans.
**Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager(the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.
**Prior to Sans destroying the CORE, he witnesses a monster teenager(the purple high-schooler from Hotland) turn to dust right in front of him, and we get a ''horrifyingly'' detailed look at their disintegrating face before they die of starvation. Seeing this is what convinces him to propose his plan to repair the CORE, and unfortunately, is what leads to things going downhill.
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* The whole story. '''Nonstop'''. Taking place ''seven years'' after the events of ''Undertale'', the entire Underground has gone to absolute hell. The power is gone causing resources to be very limited, which also applies to food. This in turn causes many monsters to parish and, out of spiteful encouragement from Sans, eat any humans that fall into the area, leaving a trail of dead bodies behind in the aftermath.
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* The whole story. '''Nonstop'''. Taking place ''seven years'' after the events of ''Undertale'', the entire Underground has gone to absolute hell. The power is gone causing resources hell from there, with the CORE dying and Undyne, the new Queen, being unable to be very limited, which also applies to food. This in turn causes many stop it. Consequentially, the monsters start starving to parish and, death because their magic food is fading away from the core's death. The monster children start dying first and the adult monsters start losing their minds, killing and/or eating each other. In the case of Snowdin, however, after a currently unknown altercation between Sans and Undyne which resulted in part of Sans' skull getting smashed open, Snowdin has been eating any human children they come across to fight off starvation and to spite Undyne, who just wants the SOULS to be harvested.
** One particular monster that got it the worst was Horrortale Grillby. After the CORE died, the magic that kept his body from burning itself started fading, leading to his soul being in perpetual agony as he feels himself burning alive constantly but cannot die. In one particular chilling scene in the past, right when everything starts going to hell, he grabs Sans suddenly out ofspiteful encouragement nowhere after a long night in his bar and starts pleading for him to help him as his face starts melting and he is screaming his head off in agony. He's been living like this for ''8 years''.
** The story's main protagonist, Aliza, has a soul of fear instead of determination (although it's implied she has a little bit of determination). This means that instead of being able to manually save, her soul autosaves right before she dies, so not only will she remember how painful or horrifying the death was, but she will have to re-experience the terror right before she died. She also seems to get scars fromSans, eat any humans her previous horrible deaths. Friendly reminder that fall into Aliza is 11.
* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne: knowing how desperate thearea, leaving a trail of dead bodies behind in latter had become, Alphys convinced her to try extracting Sans' eye to harvest its magic. It seemed to [[HopeSpot work at first...]] but then Sans somehow comes back and not only destroys the aftermath.CORE, but personally lobotomized Alphys just to screw with Undyne, making it [[RevengeBeforeReason practically impossible]] for the Underground to survive without killing humans.
** One particular monster that got it the worst was Horrortale Grillby. After the CORE died, the magic that kept his body from burning itself started fading, leading to his soul being in perpetual agony as he feels himself burning alive constantly but cannot die. In one particular chilling scene in the past, right when everything starts going to hell, he grabs Sans suddenly out of
** The story's main protagonist, Aliza, has a soul of fear instead of determination (although it's implied she has a little bit of determination). This means that instead of being able to manually save, her soul autosaves right before she dies, so not only will she remember how painful or horrifying the death was, but she will have to re-experience the terror right before she died. She also seems to get scars from
* A flashback reveals just what happened between Sans and Undyne: knowing how desperate the
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* The whole story. '''Nonstop'''. Taking place ''seven years'' after the events of ''Undertale'', the entire Underground has gone to absolute hell. The power is gone causing resources to be very limited, which also applies to food. This in turn causes many monsters to parish and, out of spiteful encouragement from Sans, eat any humans that fall into the area, leaving a trail of dead bodies behind in the aftermath.
