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* The griffins there are first [[spoiler:artificially brought to heat and forced to rape one another.]] The eggs that come with those almost random pairings are not always compatible: A Prairie Griffin (based on a Prairie Falcon) is forced to try to lay a White Shoulder's egg - imagine a [[BodyHorror human woman trying to give birth to a bowling ball]]. It tears her apart inside and she dies in terrible agony, with all the other captives having to listen to her death screams.
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* The griffins there are first [[spoiler:artificially brought to heat and forced to rape ''gang rape'' one another.]] The eggs that come with those almost random pairings are not always compatible: A Prairie Griffin (based on a Prairie Falcon) is forced to try to lay a White Shoulder's egg - imagine a [[BodyHorror human woman trying to give birth to a bowling ball]]. It tears her apart inside and she dies in terrible agony, with all the other captives having to listen to her death screams.
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-->'''Aera''': [[CaptainObvious It's never a good idea to get her started.]]
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-->Winter: I had a territory on Volcano Island. The greenies brought some Herders and sheep to graze in my territory. [[BloodKnight I killed the sheep.]] Then I [[AxCrazy killed the herders]]. When the greenies tried to stop me I [[KillEmAll killed them too]]. [[SuddenlyShouting I killed a whole family of them!]] I [[EatenAlive swallowed the chicks whole!]] I could feel them [[NauseaFuel still kicking in my crop]] [[LaughingMad heehhhh heeeeeehh!]]"
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-->'''[[DarkChick Winter]]''': I had a territory on Volcano Island. The greenies brought some Herders and sheep to graze in my territory. [[BloodKnight I killed the sheep.]] Then I [[AxCrazy killed the herders]]. When the greenies tried to stop me I [[KillEmAll killed them too]]. [[SuddenlyShouting I killed a whole family of them!]] I [[EatenAlive swallowed the chicks whole!]] I could feel them [[NauseaFuel still kicking in my crop]] [[LaughingMad heehhhh heeeeeehh!]]"
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* Once Harrell joins the captives, one of them, Winter White-Tail, happily chirps this to him when he asked how she got there:
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** Even Harrell, the biggest badass in the story and no stranger to shredding greenies, is revolted by that happy little soliloquy and the other captives make a point to tell him to ''never get her started again.''
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* Then the captives start to disappear, and it doesn't take long for the remaining ones to suspect they're being euthanized. The truth, however, is far worse - [[spoiler:they're being used as test subjects for the bioengineered griffin plague. If they don't die of that version of the plague, it's tested again and again until they *do* die of it.]]
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* The griffins there are first [[spoiler:artificially brought to heat and forced to rape one another. ]] The eggs that come with those almost random pairings are not always compatible: A Prarie Griffin (based on a Prarie Falcon) is forced to try to lay a White Shoulder's egg - imagine a small falcon trying to lay a large eagle's egg. It tears her apart inside and she dies in terrible agony, with all the other captives having to listen to her death screams.]]
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-->'''[[DarkChick Winter]]''': I had a territory on Volcano Island. The greenies brought some Herders and sheep to graze in my territory. I killed the sheep. Then I [[AxCrazy killed the herders]]. When the greenies tried to stop me I [[KillEmAll killed them too]]. [[SuddenlyShouting I killed a whole family of them!]] I [[EatenAlive swallowed the chicks whole!]] I could feel them [[NauseaFuel still kicking in my crop]] [[LaughingMad heehhhh heeeeeehh!]]"
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-->'''[[DarkChick Winter]]''': I had a territory on Volcano Island. The greenies brought some Herders and sheep to graze in my territory. [[BloodKnight I killed the sheep. sheep.]] Then I [[AxCrazy killed the herders]]. When the greenies tried to stop me I [[KillEmAll killed them too]]. [[SuddenlyShouting I killed a whole family of them!]] I [[EatenAlive swallowed the chicks whole!]] I could feel them [[NauseaFuel still kicking in my crop]] [[LaughingMad heehhhh heeeeeehh!]]"
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** Even Harrell, the biggest BadAss in the story, is revolted by that happy little soliloquy and the other captives make a point to tell him to ''never get her started again.''
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** Even Harrell, the biggest BadAss in the story, is revolted by that revelation and the other captives make a point to tell him to ''never get her started again.''
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* InUniverse, the greenies' ultimate NightmareFuel is the Newland griffins getting hold of the same DeflectorShield that the Northern Continent griffins possess. Why? Take a good look at the quite above. Winter White-Tail was a Newland griffin...
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* InUniverse, the greenies' ultimate NightmareFuel is the Newland griffins getting hold of the same DeflectorShield that the Northern Continent griffins possess. Why? Take a good look at the quite quote above. Winter White-Tail was a Newland griffin...griffin. Now imagine her ''immune to firearms...''
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* InUniverse, the greenies' ultimate NightmareFuel is the Newland griffins getting hold of the same DeflectorShield that the Northern Continent griffins possess. Why? Take a good look at the quite above. Winter White-Tail was a Newland griffin...
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The ultimate NightmareFuel, however, comes from the captives in a [[spoiler:human]] lab.
* The griffins there are first [[spoiler:artificially brought to heat and forced to rape one another. The eggs that come with those almost random pairings are not always compatible: A Prarie Griffin (based on a prarie falcon) is forced to try to lay a White Shoulder's egg - imagine a small falcon trying to lay a Stellar's Sea Eagle's egg. It tears her apart inside and she dies in terrible agony, with all the other captives having to listen to her death screams.]]
* The eggs are taken away. [[spoiler:And used as incubators for the griffin death plague.]]
* Then [[spoiler: they start to disappear, and it doesn't take long for them to realize they're being euthanized. The truth, however, is far worse - they're being used as test subjects for the bioengineered griffin plague. If they don't die of the plague, it's tested again and again until they *do* die of it.]]
* Once Harrell joins the captives, one of them, Winter White-Tail, happily chirps this to him when he asked how she got there:
-->'''[[DarkChick Winter]]''': I had a territory on Volcano Island. The greenies brought some Herders and sheep to graze in my territory. I killed the sheep. Then I [[AxCrazy killed the herders]]. When the greenies tried to stop me I [[KillEmAll killed them too]]. [[SuddenlyShouting I killed a whole family of them!]] I [[EatenAlive swallowed the chicks whole!]] I could feel them [[NauseaFuel still kicking in my crop]] [[LaughingMad heehhhh heeeeeehh!]]"
Even Harrell, the biggest BadAss in the story, is revolted by that revelation and the other captives make a point to tell him to ''never get her started again.''
The ultimate NightmareFuel, however, comes from the captives in a [[spoiler:human]] lab.
* The griffins there are first [[spoiler:artificially brought to heat and forced to rape one another. The eggs that come with those almost random pairings are not always compatible: A Prarie Griffin (based on a prarie falcon) is forced to try to lay a White Shoulder's egg - imagine a small falcon trying to lay a Stellar's Sea Eagle's egg. It tears her apart inside and she dies in terrible agony, with all the other captives having to listen to her death screams.]]
* The eggs are taken away. [[spoiler:And used as incubators for the griffin death plague.]]
* Then [[spoiler: they start to disappear, and it doesn't take long for them to realize they're being euthanized. The truth, however, is far worse - they're being used as test subjects for the bioengineered griffin plague. If they don't die of the plague, it's tested again and again until they *do* die of it.]]
* Once Harrell joins the captives, one of them, Winter White-Tail, happily chirps this to him when he asked how she got there:
-->'''[[DarkChick Winter]]''': I had a territory on Volcano Island. The greenies brought some Herders and sheep to graze in my territory. I killed the sheep. Then I [[AxCrazy killed the herders]]. When the greenies tried to stop me I [[KillEmAll killed them too]]. [[SuddenlyShouting I killed a whole family of them!]] I [[EatenAlive swallowed the chicks whole!]] I could feel them [[NauseaFuel still kicking in my crop]] [[LaughingMad heehhhh heeeeeehh!]]"
Even Harrell, the biggest BadAss in the story, is revolted by that revelation and the other captives make a point to tell him to ''never get her started again.''