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** Zombie!Ashley's murder of Noah is hard to watch. If you've ever wanted to see a horror chase scene take place [[DaylightHorror during school hours]], you get to watch her chase him down the hallway, taking a few potshots at him while he screams for help and desperately tries to duck into a classroom, before finally knocking him down and ''[[CruelAndUnusualDeath ripping his spinal cord out of his back]]!!'' Even Jules and Cal are unsettled by the sight of his mangled corpse.
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** Zombie!Ashley's murder of Noah is hard to watch. If you've ever wanted to see a horror chase scene take place [[DaylightHorror during school hours]], hours, you get to watch her chase him down the hallway, taking a few potshots at him while he screams for help and desperately tries to duck into a classroom, before finally knocking him down and ''[[CruelAndUnusualDeath ripping his spinal cord out of his back]]!!'' Even Jules and Cal are unsettled by the sight of his mangled corpse.
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*** While it's hard to tell, the girl looks somewhat similar to Juliette. Given that some of the events in this dream come to fruition over time, it's likely that this is Jules [[FeralVampires falling to savagery]].
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*** While it's hard to tell, the girl looks somewhat similar to Juliette. Given that some of the events in this dream come to fruition over time, it's likely that this is Jules [[FaceHeelTurn falling to]] [[FeralVampires falling to savagery]].
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*** While it's hard to tell, the girl looks somewhat similar to Juliette. Given that some of the events in this dream come to fruition over time, it's likely that this is Jules [[FeralVampires falling to savagery]].
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[[caption-width-right:1000:Um, I don't think makeup is supposed to run like that...]]
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[[caption-width-right:1000:Um, I don't think Jules, your makeup is supposed to run like that...running.]]
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** The serpent slithering around Juliette and targeting Calliope in their dream.
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** The serpent serpent, implied to be the Emerald Malkia herself, slithering around Juliette and targeting Calliope in their dream.
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** When Davina finally agrees to save a dying Sebastian, she does it by sending the Emerald Malkia to him. What happens next? [[OrificeInvasion It slithers into his chest wound!]]
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** When Davina finally agrees to save a dying Sebastian, she does it by sending the Emerald Malkia to him. What happens next? [[OrificeInvasion It The serpent slithers into his chest wound!]]
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** Not only is it heinous on its own, but it throws the concern she's shown for the other members of her family into question. When she was scared for her dying father, was she only afraid that losing a parent would make it more difficult to become the Emerald Malkia's keeper? Was she truly trying to help raise Juliette into a "proper legacy" or was she simply grooming Juliette to be more like her? Given how easily she betrayed her brother for no real reason, it makes you wonder how much of a prime candidate for betrayal everyone in her life is. And the worst part? Only Oliver and Juliette have the slightest idea of how dangerous she is. The only bright spot at this point is that their parents aren't getting involved with her new legal troubles, so she's likely not going anywhere anytime soon.
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*** As if that's not bad enough, Elinor [[LaserGuidedAmnesia wipes their memory]] of her and their encounter that night, so they're stuck there wondering why Theo brother is dying, only aware that Apollo had something to do with it.
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*** As if that's not bad enough, Elinor [[LaserGuidedAmnesia wipes their memory]] of her and their encounter that night, so they're stuck there wondering why Theo brother is dying, only aware that Apollo had something to do with it.
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** While Elinor is in the interrogation room, we learn that she manipulated Oliver into committing a number of homicides that put their family and the legacy society at risk of exposure. She was the one who tricked their parents into thinking he was the one at fault, which got him kicked out of the society and shipped off to Prague five years prior. And her reason for stabbing her brother in the back like this? [[TheSociopath She just]] [[ForTheEvulz felt like it]].
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** While Elinor is in the interrogation room, we get another good glimpse into the depths of her depravity. We learn that she manipulated Oliver into committing a number of homicides that put their family and the legacy society at risk of exposure. She was the one who tricked their parents into thinking he was the one at fault, which got him kicked out of the society and shipped off to Prague five years prior. And her reason for stabbing her brother in the back like this? [[TheSociopath She just]] [[ForTheEvulz '''She just felt like it]].it.''' He didn't do anything to provoke her, she wasn't under some sort of mind control, nobody bribed her... she just did it ForTheEvulz. She's so fucked up that she'll gleefully stab her own brother in the back just for fun.
** Not only is it heinous on its own, but it throws the concern she's shown for the other members of her family into question. When she was scared for her dying father, was she only afraid that losing a parent would make it more difficult to become the Emerald Malkia's keeper? Was she truly trying to help raise Juliette into a "proper legacy" or was she simply grooming Juliette to be more like her? Given how easily she betrayed her brother for no real reason, it makes you wonder how much of a prime candidate for betrayal everyone in her life is. And the worst part? Only Oliver and Juliette have the slightest idea of how dangerous she is. The only bright spot at this point is that their parents aren't getting involved with her new legal troubles, so she's likely not going anywhere anytime soon.
** Not only is it heinous on its own, but it throws the concern she's shown for the other members of her family into question. When she was scared for her dying father, was she only afraid that losing a parent would make it more difficult to become the Emerald Malkia's keeper? Was she truly trying to help raise Juliette into a "proper legacy" or was she simply grooming Juliette to be more like her? Given how easily she betrayed her brother for no real reason, it makes you wonder how much of a prime candidate for betrayal everyone in her life is. And the worst part? Only Oliver and Juliette have the slightest idea of how dangerous she is. The only bright spot at this point is that their parents aren't getting involved with her new legal troubles, so she's likely not going anywhere anytime soon.
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--->'''Juliette:''' Just... go. [[HellIsThatNoise Now!!]]
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--->'''Juliette:''' Just... go. [[HellIsThatNoise [[VoiceOfTheLegion Now!!]]
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*** There's something off about Sebastian after becoming a legacy. He's twitchier and snippier, as if he's ready to fly into a feral rampage at any moment. He even has to apologize to Juliette about this the following day.
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*** There's Just in general, there's something off about Sebastian after becoming a legacy. He's twitchier and snippier, as if he's ready to fly into a feral rampage at any moment. He even has to apologize to Juliette about this the following day.
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** Zombie!Ashley's murder of Noah is hard to watch. If you've ever wanted to see a horror chase scene take place [[DaylightHorror during school hours]], you get to watch her chase him down the hallway, taking a few potshots at him, before finally knocking him down and ''[[CruelAndUnusualDeath ripping his spinal cord out of his back]]!!'' Even Jules and Cal are unsettled by the sight of his mangled corpse.
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** Zombie!Ashley's murder of Noah is hard to watch. If you've ever wanted to see a horror chase scene take place [[DaylightHorror during school hours]], you get to watch her chase him down the hallway, taking a few potshots at him, him while he screams for help and desperately tries to duck into a classroom, before finally knocking him down and ''[[CruelAndUnusualDeath ripping his spinal cord out of his back]]!!'' Even Jules and Cal are unsettled by the sight of his mangled corpse.
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** The shambler. While the CGI is hardly praiseworthy, the design of the monster is still not the type of thing you'd show to a child to put them to sleep at night.
** We see Elinor's feeding strategy: [[HoneyTrap luring her prey into the bathroom and making out with them]] until they're putty in her hands... and then draining their blood. If they survive, she wipes their memory of her.
** We see Elinor's feeding strategy: [[HoneyTrap luring her prey into the bathroom and making out with them]] until they're putty in her hands... and then draining their blood. If they survive, she wipes their memory of her.
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** The shambler. shambler that appears in the Burns house looks like something straight out of a ''Franchise/{{Metroid}}'' game. While the CGI is hardly praiseworthy, the design of the monster is it's still not the type of thing you'd show to a little child to put them to sleep at night.
** We see Elinor's feeding strategy: [[HoneyTrap luring her prey into the bathroom and making out with them]] until they're putty in her hands... and then draining their blood. If they survive, she wipes their memory ofher.
her. If not, well... see ''First Severing'' below.
** We see Elinor's feeding strategy: [[HoneyTrap luring her prey into the bathroom and making out with them]] until they're putty in her hands... and then draining their blood. If they survive, she wipes their memory of
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** Jack is scarily quick to disown Vampire!Theo and disturbingly eager to try to kill him. This was the same guy who remarked that he would've killed Cook for putting his hands on Cal had Juliette not already killed him... and yet here he is putting his hatred for supernatural beings over his family.
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** Jack is scarily quick to disown Vampire!Theo and disturbingly eager to try to kill him. This was the same guy who remarked that he would've killed Cook for putting his hands on Cal had Juliette not already killed him... and yet here he is putting his hatred for supernatural beings over his family.family.
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'''WARNING: Unmarked spoilers ahead!''' '''[[{{Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned}} You Have Been Warned.]]'''
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'''WARNING: Unmarked spoilers ahead!''' [[{{Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned}} You Have Been Warned.]]
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'''WARNING: Unmarked spoilers ahead!''' [[{{Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned}} '''[[{{Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned}} You Have Been Warned.]]]]'''
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!!'''WARNING: Unmarked spoilers ahead!''' [[{{Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned}} You Have Been Warned.]]
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'''WARNING''': Unmarked spoilers ahead!
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-->-- '''Elinor remembering her first kill'''
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-->-- '''Elinor remembering her first kill'''
'''Elinor, First Kiss'''
