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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* Something is very wrong with Shining Armor as of the second chapter. [[UncannyValley The description when he begins to trail off while eyeing Twilight like she’s a meal…]]
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* Something is very wrong with Shining Armor as of the second chapter. [[UncannyValley The description when he begins to trail off while eyeing Twilight like she’s a meal…]]meal…
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Bad Dreams was renamed by TRS due to misuse. This is misuse, so it gets cut, but I can replace it.
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* Twilight's [[BadDreams dream sequences]] delve into this. In particular, the constant mention of the "Bloody Tears" is the single, still image she has of the bite marks on Shining Armor's neck.
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* Twilight's [[BadDreams dream sequences]] {{Nightmare Sequence}}s delve into this. In particular, the constant mention of the "Bloody Tears" is the single, still image she has of the bite marks on Shining Armor's neck.
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** And then it gets worse when [[spoiler: it turns out that Rose Blade and his followers are actually working for Dracula]], and [[spoiler: Rose Blade]] gives Rainbow Dash the SadisticChoice of either becoming his sex slave or him killing Shatterstorm.
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** And then it gets worse when [[spoiler: it turns out that Rose Blade and his followers are actually working for Dracula]], and [[spoiler: Rose Blade]] gives Rainbow Dash the SadisticChoice of either becoming his sex slave or him killing Shatterstorm.Shatterstorm.
* The SelfInflictedHell Twilight experiences in Sypha's PocketDimension as part of her [[TrainingFromHell training]].
* The SelfInflictedHell Twilight experiences in Sypha's PocketDimension as part of her [[TrainingFromHell training]].
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* TheReveal as to why Shatterstorm has such issues with mares: [[spoiler: he's been repeatedly abused, emotionally and sexually, by various mares. Including '''[[ParentalIncest his own mother]]'''.]] The epilogue of Book 1 involves him taking a ShowerOfAngst after being taunted about his past by [[spoiler: Actrise-as-Marble]] in previous two chapters.
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** The lustful looks they give Rainbow Dash are enough to make Shatterstorm pretend to be dating her, which makes one fear [[RapeAsDrama what they'd do otherwise.]]
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** The lustful looks they give Rainbow Dash are enough to make Shatterstorm [[HeManWomanHater Shatterstorm]] pretend to be dating her, which makes one fear [[RapeAsDrama what they'd do otherwise.]]
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* [[GrimReaper Death]]. Everything about this guy is terrifying: the fact that his face drives ponies to madness, the fact that his voice is made up of the voices of every person he has ever killed, and now that he’s collecting ponies’ ''cutie marks''...
** Plus, we know that he was always one of the hardest bosses in each Castlevania game he was featured in, and now we know he really has it in for the ponies. This isn’t gonna be an easy fight for them…
** When Death gets angry, his skull shifts and contorts in spasms. Even Actrise is freaked out by this.
* Fluttershy’s animals turn on her in one scene, [[WhamEpisode which is where we start to understand just how powerful Dracula’s influence is]]. Fluttershy’s special talent is her connection with nature, [[BeyondTheImpossible yet Dracula is able to control the animals she raised herself!]]
* Sweetie Belle’s freakouts; the most terrifying one is where [[spoiler: she hallucinates that Rarity has become a dog-faced monster.]]
* Something is very wrong with Shining Armor as of the second chapter. [[UncannyValley The description when he begins to trail off while eyeing Twilight like she’s a meal…]]
* A lot of the MoodWhiplash. First, the author takes time to flesh out characters, throws in some heartwarming scenes, some comedy, and everything is well and g[[spoiler: SURPRISE DEAD CHILDREN AND A NURSE COMMITTED SUICIDE]]
* Twilight's [[BadDreams dream sequences]] delve into this. In particular, the constant mention of the "Bloody Tears" is the single, still image she has of the bite marks on Shining Armor's neck.
* Marble. [[spoiler: Poisons children]], only to go out of her way to intimidate the heroes in any and every way that she can. Her calm description of the process of killing something is chilling.
** [[spoiler: Worse, it wasn't even really Marble. She was possessed by Actrise... who undoes the possession by ''crawling out of Marble's mouth'', leaving her lying on the ground, feeling sickened and violated.]]
* Roseluck's behavior has become more and more disturbing. At first, she's just kind of kooky. Now? She's speaking in a CreepyMonotone, distrusting of others, talking to herself, lashing out violently...
* Babs getting chased through the streets of Manehattan by one of Dracula's monsters, and desperately having to hide in a literal hole in a wall after being cornered in an alley.
* The remaining Royal Guards have become HeWhoFightsMonsters, beating and torturing accused traitors to death and mutilating the corpses.
** The lustful looks they give Rainbow Dash are enough to make Shatterstorm pretend to be dating her, which makes one fear [[RapeAsDrama what they'd do otherwise.]]
** And then it gets worse when [[spoiler: it turns out that Rose Blade and his followers are actually working for Dracula]], and [[spoiler: Rose Blade]] gives Rainbow Dash the SadisticChoice of either becoming his sex slave or him killing Shatterstorm.
** Plus, we know that he was always one of the hardest bosses in each Castlevania game he was featured in, and now we know he really has it in for the ponies. This isn’t gonna be an easy fight for them…
** When Death gets angry, his skull shifts and contorts in spasms. Even Actrise is freaked out by this.
* Fluttershy’s animals turn on her in one scene, [[WhamEpisode which is where we start to understand just how powerful Dracula’s influence is]]. Fluttershy’s special talent is her connection with nature, [[BeyondTheImpossible yet Dracula is able to control the animals she raised herself!]]
* Sweetie Belle’s freakouts; the most terrifying one is where [[spoiler: she hallucinates that Rarity has become a dog-faced monster.]]
* Something is very wrong with Shining Armor as of the second chapter. [[UncannyValley The description when he begins to trail off while eyeing Twilight like she’s a meal…]]
* A lot of the MoodWhiplash. First, the author takes time to flesh out characters, throws in some heartwarming scenes, some comedy, and everything is well and g[[spoiler: SURPRISE DEAD CHILDREN AND A NURSE COMMITTED SUICIDE]]
* Twilight's [[BadDreams dream sequences]] delve into this. In particular, the constant mention of the "Bloody Tears" is the single, still image she has of the bite marks on Shining Armor's neck.
* Marble. [[spoiler: Poisons children]], only to go out of her way to intimidate the heroes in any and every way that she can. Her calm description of the process of killing something is chilling.
** [[spoiler: Worse, it wasn't even really Marble. She was possessed by Actrise... who undoes the possession by ''crawling out of Marble's mouth'', leaving her lying on the ground, feeling sickened and violated.]]
* Roseluck's behavior has become more and more disturbing. At first, she's just kind of kooky. Now? She's speaking in a CreepyMonotone, distrusting of others, talking to herself, lashing out violently...
* Babs getting chased through the streets of Manehattan by one of Dracula's monsters, and desperately having to hide in a literal hole in a wall after being cornered in an alley.
* The remaining Royal Guards have become HeWhoFightsMonsters, beating and torturing accused traitors to death and mutilating the corpses.
** The lustful looks they give Rainbow Dash are enough to make Shatterstorm pretend to be dating her, which makes one fear [[RapeAsDrama what they'd do otherwise.]]
** And then it gets worse when [[spoiler: it turns out that Rose Blade and his followers are actually working for Dracula]], and [[spoiler: Rose Blade]] gives Rainbow Dash the SadisticChoice of either becoming his sex slave or him killing Shatterstorm.
