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30th Nov '14 8:05:57 PM ScarlettWhite
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* Holmes's canonical conversation with Culverton Smith gets a rewrite from Holmes's PointOfView. He's dying with Smith gloating over him - needless to say, it's a pretty intense, heart-in-your-throat scene.
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* Holmes's canonical conversation with Culverton Smith gets a rewrite from Holmes's PointOfView. He's dying with Smith gloating over him - needless to say, it's a pretty intense, heart-in-your-throat scene. Though it ends badly for Smith.
1st Aug '12 2:15:46 PM aleineskyfire2
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* Some of Holmes's torture scenes are longer and more graphic than others, but none of them are fully played-out. This might be considered worse than seeing them all blow-for-blow - especially the poker scene, which is only mentioned afterwards and never described in-detail. All we know is that Sherlock [[SayMyName screamed his brother's name]].
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* Some of Holmes's torture scenes are longer and more graphic than others, but none of them are fully played-out. This might be considered worse than seeing them all blow-for-blow a case of NothingIsScarier - especially the poker scene, which is only mentioned afterwards and never described in-detail. All we know is that Sherlock [[SayMyName screamed his brother's name]].

* Speaking of [[DoggedNiceGuy dear, dear]] [[TheHero Watson]]... BewareTheNiceOnes. He feels no compunction in terrifying a criminal into talking and then ''shooting'' him [[BerserkButton when Holmes's life is on the line.]]
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* Speaking of [[DoggedNiceGuy [[NiceGuy dear, dear]] [[TheHero Watson]]... BewareTheNiceOnes. He feels no compunction in terrifying a criminal into talking and then ''shooting'' him [[BerserkButton when Holmes's life is on the line.]]


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* The bullet-pierced corpses of Mary and her ''baby'' in "Those Dark Hours". The author hated herself for writing that...

19th Jun '12 4:19:18 PM aleineskyfire2
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* Holmes's canonical conversation with Culverton Smith gets a rewrite from Holmes's PointOfView. He's dying with Smith gloating over him - needless to say, it's a pretty intense, heart-in-your-throat scene.
18th Jun '12 3:17:43 PM aleineskyfire2
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* When the narrative looks at Holmes's rescue via Lestrade's [=POV=], Holmes's appearance is described in detail, including this: ''his gaunt face bruised, burnt, and scarred, his half-clothed body far more so'' and this: ''The ragged shirt [...] hanging in tatters on Holmes's truly emaciated frame.'' ClothingDamage. DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything
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