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In a world of monsters and villains, there's bound to be plenty of things that can make you wince in horror. '''Unmarked spoilers ahead.'''
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In a world of monsters and villains, there's bound to be plenty of things that can make you wince in horror.
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-->'''Supayra:''' I have to thank you. Thank you for working so hard to restore this planet's true heir, and for accpeting that humans no longer have claim to it...or the right to live. Let me show you a true daikaiju, unlike those...(glares at Mokwa)...who have enabled your ways to continue. Never again...[[MakeMeWannaShout will you see the light of day!]]
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-->'''Supayra:''' I have to thank you. Thank you for working so hard to restore this planet's true heir, and for accpeting that humans no longer have claim to it...or the right to live. Let me show you a true daikaiju, unlike those...(glares at Mokwa)...who have enabled your ways to continue. Never again...[[MakeMeWannaShout will you see the light of day!]]day!
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* The deep-sea leviathans that menace the oceans of this post-apocalyptic world are scary just thinking about, but this story shows there's more to it than standard giant squids. This one features a gargantuan [[SeldomSeenSpecies bobbit worm.]] Basically, imagine a burying worm with HUGE blade-like jaws for catching fish, and you have the right idea. Except this one's so big, Kai and Taika's boat is barely as big as its head!
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* The deep-sea leviathans that menace the oceans of this post-apocalyptic world are scary just thinking about, but this story shows there's more to it than standard giant squids. This one features a gargantuan [[SeldomSeenSpecies bobbit worm.]] worm. Basically, imagine a burying worm with HUGE blade-like jaws for catching fish, and you have the right idea. Except this one's so big, Kai and Taika's boat is barely as big as its head!
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* Even after King Supayra is killed, his spirit STILL isn't down, as it possesses the weak-willed Bill instead. He had the Mecha Knight lay waste to the city before Mokwa stops him.
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* Even after King Supayra is killed, his spirit STILL isn't down, as it possesses the weak-willed Bill instead. He had the Mecha Knight lay waste to the city before Mokwa stops him.him.
** Once he escapes the Knight's wreck, Bill/Supayra runs off and stabs random people as Allie chases him. Once he's cornered, the girl proceeds to smash Bill's head in slowly with her boot. It's eerily reminiscent of Mungonde's death in the last story, the difference being that it's happening to the most loathed character. It all ends when Allie crushes Bill's possessed eyes, the last vestiges of Supayra there are.
** Once he escapes the Knight's wreck, Bill/Supayra runs off and stabs random people as Allie chases him. Once he's cornered, the girl proceeds to smash Bill's head in slowly with her boot. It's eerily reminiscent of Mungonde's death in the last story, the difference being that it's happening to the most loathed character. It all ends when Allie crushes Bill's possessed eyes, the last vestiges of Supayra there are.
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* While rampaging during the FinalBattle, Setanayra eats up a lot of people who didn't want to go into the bunker, at one point giving his father/brother a big blood smile when the latter praises him.
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* While rampaging during the FinalBattle, Setanayra eats up a lot of people who didn't want to go into the bunker, at one point giving his father/brother a big blood smile when the latter praises him.
* Even after King Supayra is killed, his spirit STILL isn't down, as it possesses the weak-willed Bill instead. He had the Mecha Knight lay waste to the city before Mokwa stops him.
* Even after King Supayra is killed, his spirit STILL isn't down, as it possesses the weak-willed Bill instead. He had the Mecha Knight lay waste to the city before Mokwa stops him.
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** King Supayra is our villain's new name, and he promises Allie that he'll get a lot stronger to face her.
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** King Supayra is our villain's new name, and he promises Allie that he'll get a lot stronger to face her.her.
* King Supayra reacting in glee when Mokwa blasts him, reveling in the pain he's currently feeling.
* While rampaging during the FinalBattle, Setanayra eats up a lot of people who didn't want to go into the bunker, at one point giving his father/brother a big blood smile when the latter praises him.
* King Supayra reacting in glee when Mokwa blasts him, reveling in the pain he's currently feeling.
* While rampaging during the FinalBattle, Setanayra eats up a lot of people who didn't want to go into the bunker, at one point giving his father/brother a big blood smile when the latter praises him.
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* After Supayra is exorcised from Allie, his most vile move of all is revealed. Earlier throughout the story, Allie has felt large boil-like growths on her back, causing her to itch. Well...it turn out those boils are INCUBATING EGGS. ''SUPAYRA IMPREGNATED HER''. And sure enough, they hatch right after Supayra is expunged. Allie can only scream in pain and shock as they burst out...one of which speaks in Supayra's voice and calls her mommy. Yup, not only did he impregnate her in the most unconventional of ways (for f*cks sake, they come out of her back like she's a suriname toad), but he also did it to reincarnate. Mokwa manages to crush ten of them, but the rest escape into the woods.
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* After Supayra is exorcised from Allie, his most vile move of all is revealed. Earlier throughout the story, Allie has felt large boil-like growths on her back, causing her to itch. Well...it turn out those boils are INCUBATING EGGS. ''SUPAYRA IMPREGNATED HER''. And sure enough, they hatch right after Supayra is expunged. Allie can only scream in pain and shock as they burst out...one of which speaks in Supayra's voice and calls her mommy. Yup, not only did he impregnate her in the most unconventional of ways (for f*cks sake, they come out of her back like she's a suriname toad), but he also did it to reincarnate. Mokwa manages to crush ten of them, but the rest escape into the woods.woods.
* The sons of Supayra, him included, launch an assault on the soldiers coming to look for them. Many are snatched without warning and dragged into their mouths, and for the most part, it's like watching hapless colonial marines against a horde of huge Xenomorphs. Granted, seven out of ten sons end up dying, but that just begs the question as to what will happen when they grow up.
** King Supayra is our villain's new name, and he promises Allie that he'll get a lot stronger to face her.
* The sons of Supayra, him included, launch an assault on the soldiers coming to look for them. Many are snatched without warning and dragged into their mouths, and for the most part, it's like watching hapless colonial marines against a horde of huge Xenomorphs. Granted, seven out of ten sons end up dying, but that just begs the question as to what will happen when they grow up.
** King Supayra is our villain's new name, and he promises Allie that he'll get a lot stronger to face her.
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* After Supayra is exorcised from Allie, his most vile move of all is revealed. Earlier throughout the story, Allie has felt large boil-like growths on her back, causing her to itch. Well...it turn out those boils are INCUBATING EGGS. ''SUPAYRA IMPREGNATED HER''. And sure enough, they hatch right after Supayra is expunged. Allie can only scream in pain and shock as they burst out...one of which speaks in Supayra's voice and calls her mommy. Yup, not only did he impregnate her in the most unconventional of ways (for f*cks sake, they come out of her back like she's a surnam toad), but he also did it to reincarnate. Mokwa manages to crush ten of them, but the rest escape into the woods.
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* After Supayra is exorcised from Allie, his most vile move of all is revealed. Earlier throughout the story, Allie has felt large boil-like growths on her back, causing her to itch. Well...it turn out those boils are INCUBATING EGGS. ''SUPAYRA IMPREGNATED HER''. And sure enough, they hatch right after Supayra is expunged. Allie can only scream in pain and shock as they burst out...one of which speaks in Supayra's voice and calls her mommy. Yup, not only did he impregnate her in the most unconventional of ways (for f*cks sake, they come out of her back like she's a surnam suriname toad), but he also did it to reincarnate. Mokwa manages to crush ten of them, but the rest escape into the woods.
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* The moment everyone starts to investigate the Colonel's disappearance, Supayra encourages Allie to fuse with Mokwa for the investigation. When they find evidence of it being Allie's doing, THAT'S when Supayra shows his true colors, POSSESSING MOKWA. He has her fire upon countless innocent civilians, and even blast the castle apart with the queen in it, killing her. Once again, even for a brief moment, [[HistoryRepeats an evil force possesses the great bear.]]
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* The moment everyone starts to investigate the Colonel's disappearance, Supayra encourages Allie to fuse with Mokwa for the investigation. When they find evidence of it being Allie's doing, THAT'S when Supayra shows his true colors, POSSESSING MOKWA. He has her fire upon countless innocent civilians, and even blast the castle apart with the queen in it, killing her. Once again, even for a brief moment, [[HistoryRepeats an evil force possesses the great bear.]]]]
* While possessed, Allie ends up stabbing Obasi at the base of the neck. She very nearly kills him as she screams for Supayra to make her stop. Mokwa arrives just in time to save the both of them, thankfully.
* The dividing of the mind is a DangerousForbiddenTechnique done before the amulets were used to henshin, and Mokwa does it to get Supayra out of Allie's mind. the following BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind is a trippy and harrowing affair that even has a scene of Allie getting blasted apart by Supayra's super-sonic scream before reforming again.
*After Supayra is exorcised from Allie, his most vile move of all is revealed. Earlier throughout the story, Allie has felt large boil-like growths on her back, causing her to itch. Well...it turn out those boils are INCUBATING EGGS. ''SUPAYRA IMPREGNATED HER''. And sure enough, they hatch right after Supayra is expunged. Allie can only scream in pain and shock as they burst out...one of which speaks in Supayra's voice and calls her mommy. Yup, not only did he impregnate her in the most unconventional of ways (for f*cks sake, they come out of her back like she's a surnam toad), but he also did it to reincarnate. Mokwa manages to crush ten of them, but the rest escape into the woods.
* While possessed, Allie ends up stabbing Obasi at the base of the neck. She very nearly kills him as she screams for Supayra to make her stop. Mokwa arrives just in time to save the both of them, thankfully.
* The dividing of the mind is a DangerousForbiddenTechnique done before the amulets were used to henshin, and Mokwa does it to get Supayra out of Allie's mind. the following BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind is a trippy and harrowing affair that even has a scene of Allie getting blasted apart by Supayra's super-sonic scream before reforming again.
*After Supayra is exorcised from Allie, his most vile move of all is revealed. Earlier throughout the story, Allie has felt large boil-like growths on her back, causing her to itch. Well...it turn out those boils are INCUBATING EGGS. ''SUPAYRA IMPREGNATED HER''. And sure enough, they hatch right after Supayra is expunged. Allie can only scream in pain and shock as they burst out...one of which speaks in Supayra's voice and calls her mommy. Yup, not only did he impregnate her in the most unconventional of ways (for f*cks sake, they come out of her back like she's a surnam toad), but he also did it to reincarnate. Mokwa manages to crush ten of them, but the rest escape into the woods.
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* The way Supayra acts with Allie is much more unsettling than a standard DemonicPossession. No, it's more akin to something a BastardBoyfriend would do. Think about it. He gives Allie immense pleasure with the "dreams" and implicitly sexual affairs with his tongue tentacles, but at the same time actively encourages her to give in to her darker impulses and cut the actual positive elements of her life out. And somehow, he's able to make her start thinking that his goals, whatever they are, align with hers. It's scarily similar to how real-life abusive partners act when they want less love and more someone to control.
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* The way Supayra acts with Allie is much more unsettling than a standard DemonicPossession. No, it's more akin to something a BastardBoyfriend would do. Think about it. He gives Allie immense pleasure with the "dreams" and implicitly sexual affairs with his tongue tentacles, but at the same time actively encourages her to give in to her darker impulses and cut the actual positive elements of her life out. And somehow, he's able to make her start thinking that his goals, whatever they are, align with hers. It's scarily similar to how real-life abusive partners act when they want less love and more someone to control.control.
* While killing the new colonel, Allie ends up stabbed near-fatally. She's forced to crawl all the way back home, barely surviving by henshining with Mokwa. Despite it seemingly being a dream, she can't understand while Supayra doesn't just wake her up.
* The moment everyone starts to investigate the Colonel's disappearance, Supayra encourages Allie to fuse with Mokwa for the investigation. When they find evidence of it being Allie's doing, THAT'S when Supayra shows his true colors, POSSESSING MOKWA. He has her fire upon countless innocent civilians, and even blast the castle apart with the queen in it, killing her. Once again, even for a brief moment, [[HistoryRepeats an evil force possesses the great bear.]]
* While killing the new colonel, Allie ends up stabbed near-fatally. She's forced to crawl all the way back home, barely surviving by henshining with Mokwa. Despite it seemingly being a dream, she can't understand while Supayra doesn't just wake her up.
* The moment everyone starts to investigate the Colonel's disappearance, Supayra encourages Allie to fuse with Mokwa for the investigation. When they find evidence of it being Allie's doing, THAT'S when Supayra shows his true colors, POSSESSING MOKWA. He has her fire upon countless innocent civilians, and even blast the castle apart with the queen in it, killing her. Once again, even for a brief moment, [[HistoryRepeats an evil force possesses the great bear.]]
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-->It was a fantastic dream, a provocative escape. That's all it was. A dream. Just a dream. [[DramaticIrony Otherwise, it would be diabolical.]]
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-->It was a fantastic dream, a provocative escape. That's all it was. A dream. Just a dream. [[DramaticIrony Otherwise, it would be diabolical.]]]]
** Not to mention, right before she kills her most recent victim, her eyes go yellow, and she gains Supayra's voice and sharp teeth. It's safe to say that the frog has mastered a frightening version of DemonicPossession.
* The title page. Right behind "Mokwa", you can see the word "Supayra" behind it. He really is taking over...
* The way Supayra acts with Allie is much more unsettling than a standard DemonicPossession. No, it's more akin to something a BastardBoyfriend would do. Think about it. He gives Allie immense pleasure with the "dreams" and implicitly sexual affairs with his tongue tentacles, but at the same time actively encourages her to give in to her darker impulses and cut the actual positive elements of her life out. And somehow, he's able to make her start thinking that his goals, whatever they are, align with hers. It's scarily similar to how real-life abusive partners act when they want less love and more someone to control.
** Not to mention, right before she kills her most recent victim, her eyes go yellow, and she gains Supayra's voice and sharp teeth. It's safe to say that the frog has mastered a frightening version of DemonicPossession.
* The title page. Right behind "Mokwa", you can see the word "Supayra" behind it. He really is taking over...
* The way Supayra acts with Allie is much more unsettling than a standard DemonicPossession. No, it's more akin to something a BastardBoyfriend would do. Think about it. He gives Allie immense pleasure with the "dreams" and implicitly sexual affairs with his tongue tentacles, but at the same time actively encourages her to give in to her darker impulses and cut the actual positive elements of her life out. And somehow, he's able to make her start thinking that his goals, whatever they are, align with hers. It's scarily similar to how real-life abusive partners act when they want less love and more someone to control.
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** Even worse, Obasi states that both he and Mungonde felt every second of Mungonde's death. He said it had to be done, but still.
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** Even worse, Obasi states that both he and Mungonde felt every second of Mungonde's death. He said it had to be done, but still.still.
* The very end, in which Allie and Supayra end up laughing in unison, one voice, one laugh, one mind. There is the strong implication that Supayra is RealAllAlong, and he's here to stay. It's easily one of the bleakest notes the series has ended on, but it's just the preamble for how this trilogy is going to come to it's conclusion...
!!Mokwa: Exorcism
* The prologue is from the point of view of a bride-to-be. On her wedding day, her fiance doesn't show up. A friend reveals that he perished out at sea. The perpetrator then shows up. It's Supayra, currently running from our heroes in ''Lifesblood of the Earth''. He eats everyone there as the bride can only cross the DespairEventHorizon. Without a second thought, she walks into the evil frog's maw after he coerces her.
* The HORRIBLE things Supayra makes Allie do while living in her head. By day, he's turned her into a bitter shell of her former self, actively alienating her from her friends. By night, he convinces her that she's in a cathartic dream to work out stress, and has her lure gullible people into a furnace, where she straps them to a table, and tells them that they're a blood sacrifice before killing them. The kicker is that this has gone on for several times. And what's more, at the end of each murder, Supayra lavishes her in saliva and tongue tendrils. Allie's life, whether she knows it or not, has become a nightmare of sex and violence.
-->It was a fantastic dream, a provocative escape. That's all it was. A dream. Just a dream. [[DramaticIrony Otherwise, it would be diabolical.]]
* The very end, in which Allie and Supayra end up laughing in unison, one voice, one laugh, one mind. There is the strong implication that Supayra is RealAllAlong, and he's here to stay. It's easily one of the bleakest notes the series has ended on, but it's just the preamble for how this trilogy is going to come to it's conclusion...
!!Mokwa: Exorcism
* The prologue is from the point of view of a bride-to-be. On her wedding day, her fiance doesn't show up. A friend reveals that he perished out at sea. The perpetrator then shows up. It's Supayra, currently running from our heroes in ''Lifesblood of the Earth''. He eats everyone there as the bride can only cross the DespairEventHorizon. Without a second thought, she walks into the evil frog's maw after he coerces her.
* The HORRIBLE things Supayra makes Allie do while living in her head. By day, he's turned her into a bitter shell of her former self, actively alienating her from her friends. By night, he convinces her that she's in a cathartic dream to work out stress, and has her lure gullible people into a furnace, where she straps them to a table, and tells them that they're a blood sacrifice before killing them. The kicker is that this has gone on for several times. And what's more, at the end of each murder, Supayra lavishes her in saliva and tongue tendrils. Allie's life, whether she knows it or not, has become a nightmare of sex and violence.
-->It was a fantastic dream, a provocative escape. That's all it was. A dream. Just a dream. [[DramaticIrony Otherwise, it would be diabolical.]]
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** During their fight, Allie flings a possessed person at the Knight, whose armor shifts to turn into a spinning flower-like shape that shreds the person like a blender.
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** During their fight, Allie flings a possessed person at the Knight, whose armor shifts to turn into a spinning flower-like shape that shreds the person like a blender.blender.
* In order to free Obasi, Mokwa has to kill Mungonde. And by Allie's command, she does. Painfully. We get a long sequence of the bear slowly smashing in the mandrill's head. With each 'crack', details of how gory the affair is are not spared at all. It's equal parts tragic and downright sadistic.
** Even worse, Obasi states that both he and Mungonde felt every second of Mungonde's death. He said it had to be done, but still.
* In order to free Obasi, Mokwa has to kill Mungonde. And by Allie's command, she does. Painfully. We get a long sequence of the bear slowly smashing in the mandrill's head. With each 'crack', details of how gory the affair is are not spared at all. It's equal parts tragic and downright sadistic.
** Even worse, Obasi states that both he and Mungonde felt every second of Mungonde's death. He said it had to be done, but still.
