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* Hilda suffering a PoliceBrutality and Ange being tortured by Sylvia towards the end of "Traitorous Homeland".
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* Hilda suffering a PoliceBrutality and Ange being tortured by Sylvia [[CuteButPsycho Sylvia]] towards the end of "Traitorous Homeland".
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** In the GrandFinale, he attempts to kill Tusk and Ange and get into Salia, Ange, Sala and Hilda's Ragna-mail to save his skin.
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** In the GrandFinale, he attempts to kill Tusk and Ange and get into Salia, Ange, Sala and Hilda's Ragna-mail to save his skin.
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* In Ange's first battle one pilot was [[HalfTheWomanSheUsedToBe bifurcated]] by a laser, another was [[DevouredByTheHorde quartered and devoured by [=DRAGONs=]. Then again, the over-the-top nature of said deaths, specially the [[HighPressureBlood ridiculously copious]] [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank amount of blood]], may drive said deaths straight into {{Narm}} territory.
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* In Ange's first battle one pilot was [[HalfTheWomanSheUsedToBe bifurcated]] by a laser, another was [[DevouredByTheHorde quartered and devoured by [=DRAGONs=].[=DRAGONs=]]]. Then again, the over-the-top nature of said deaths, specially the [[HighPressureBlood ridiculously copious]] [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank amount of blood]], may drive said deaths straight into {{Narm}} territory.
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* In Ange's first battle one pilot was [[HalfTheWomanSheUsedToBe bifurcated]] by a laser, another was quartered and devoured. Then again, the over-the-top nature of said deaths, specially the [[HighPressureBlood ridiculously copious]] [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank amount of blood]], may drive said deaths straight into {{Narm}} territory.
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* In Ange's first battle one pilot was [[HalfTheWomanSheUsedToBe bifurcated]] by a laser, another was [[DevouredByTheHorde quartered and devoured.devoured by [=DRAGONs=]. Then again, the over-the-top nature of said deaths, specially the [[HighPressureBlood ridiculously copious]] [[OverdrawnAtTheBloodBank amount of blood]], may drive said deaths straight into {{Narm}} territory.
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** Embryo's [[AssholeVictim well-deserved death]] [[KarmicDeath at the hands of Tusk]] caught people off-guard because of its gruesomeness. His [[OhCrap look of terror]] is suitably unsettling.
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** Embryo's [[AssholeVictim well-deserved death]] [[KarmicDeath KarmicDeath at the hands of Tusk]] Tusk caught people off-guard because of its gruesomeness. His [[OhCrap look of terror]] is suitably unsettling.
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** He abandons the Diamond Rose Knights to their fate in "Eve of Destruction". Watching two of them get killed at the hands of the DRAGONs was awfully disturbing. Before that, Embryo strangles Ersha and begins to merge the two worlds together in "Necessary".
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** He abandons the Diamond Rose Knights to their fate in "Eve of Destruction". Watching two of them get killed at the hands of the DRAGONs dragons was awfully disturbing. Before that, Embryo strangles Ersha and begins to merge the two worlds together in "Necessary".
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** Embryo's [[KarmicDeath well-deserved death at the hands of Tusk]] caught people off-guard because of its gruesomeness. His [[OhCrap look of terror]] is suitably unsettling.
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** Embryo's [[AssholeVictim well-deserved death]] [[KarmicDeath well-deserved death at the hands of Tusk]] caught people off-guard because of its gruesomeness. His [[OhCrap look of terror]] is suitably unsettling.
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** He abandons the Diamond Rose Knights to their fate in "Eve of Destruction". Before that, he strangles Ersha and begins to merge the two worlds together in "Necessary".
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** He abandons the Diamond Rose Knights to their fate in "Eve of Destruction". Watching two of them get killed at the hands of the DRAGONs was awfully disturbing. Before that, he Embryo strangles Ersha and begins to merge the two worlds together in "Necessary".
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* Anyone who died from Embryo's merger of the two worlds.
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* Anyone who died from being sucked into Embryo's merger of the two worlds.
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** Even Julio's well-deserved death at his hands was pretty disturbing.
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** Even Julio's well-deserved death KarmicDeath at his hands was pretty disturbing.
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** Embryo's [[AssholeVictim well-deserved]] KarmicDeath at the hands of Tusk caught people off-guard because of its gruesomeness. His [[OhCrap look of terror]] is suitably unsettling.
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** Embryo's [[AssholeVictim well-deserved]] KarmicDeath [[KarmicDeath well-deserved death at the hands of Tusk Tusk]] caught people off-guard because of its gruesomeness. His [[OhCrap look of terror]] is suitably unsettling.
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** Even Julio's death at Embryo's hands was pretty disturbing, even if it was satisfying.
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** Even Julio's well-deserved death at Embryo's his hands was pretty disturbing, even if it was satisfying.disturbing.
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** Even though it was a KarmicDeath that he [[AssholeVictim so rightfully deserved]], Embryo being bisected in half and bleeding while screaming Ange's name is gruesome to think about. Before Tusk bisects him, Embryo has a brief [[OhCrap look of terror]].
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** Even though it was a KarmicDeath that he Embryo's [[AssholeVictim so rightfully deserved]], Embryo being bisected in half and bleeding while screaming Ange's name is gruesome to think about. Before well-deserved]] KarmicDeath at the hands of Tusk bisects him, Embryo has a brief caught people off-guard because of its gruesomeness. His [[OhCrap look of terror]].terror]] is suitably unsettling.
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* Picturing the demise of the other Norma. They get seduced by Embryo at his most affable nature and join him. But then his sadistic personality shows and they would know that not only is he insane, but he's homicidal. Not only that, but it's already too late to escape and no one's coming to save you.
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* Picturing the demise of the other Norma. They get seduced by Embryo at his most affable nature and join him. But then his sadistic personality shows and they would know that not only is he insane, but he's homicidal. Not only that, but And it's already too late to escape and no one's coming to save you.
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* Almost everything that [[BigBad Embryo]] does in the series caught others off-guard.
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* Almost everything Everything that [[BigBad Embryo]] does in the series caught others off-guard.
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** Even Julio's death at Embryo's hands was pretty disturbing, even if it was satisfying.
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** Even thought it was a KarmicDeath, Embryo being bisected in half and bleeding while screaming Ange's name is gruesome to think about. Before Tusk bisects him, Embryo has a brief [[OhCrap look of terror]].
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** Even thought though it was a KarmicDeath, KarmicDeath that he [[AssholeVictim so rightfully deserved]], Embryo being bisected in half and bleeding while screaming Ange's name is gruesome to think about. Before Tusk bisects him, Embryo has a brief [[OhCrap look of terror]].
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* There's also Marika's death at the hands of Chris in "The Survivors".
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* There's also Marika's death at the hands of the Embryo-influenced Chris in "The Survivors".
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* Anytime a pilot or even a [=DRAGON=] gets killed can result in a ''[[NauseaFuel very]]'' [[{{Squick}} bloody mess]], which happens fairly often. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Anytime a pilot or even a [=DRAGON=] gets killed can result in a ''[[NauseaFuel very]]'' [[{{Squick}} bloody mess]], spurts out HighPressureBlood, which happens fairly often. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Mana is basically Government-Encouraged Magical Meth; it breaks down the willpower of mages for a few circus tricks, leaves them susceptible to fear and decadence, and generally makes them the slaves of Embryo, especially in Episode 22. They've been poisoning their minds with the very thing that keeps them at peace, and they use it decadently because they believe it's unlimited (it just comes from a really, really, REALLY big dragon). Once it runs out...
* Picturing the demise of the other Norma. They get seduced by Embryo and join them. But then his sadistic personality shows and they would know that not only is he insane, but he's homicidal. Not only that, but it's already too late to escape and no one's coming to save you.
* Picturing the demise of the other Norma. They get seduced by Embryo and join them. But then his sadistic personality shows and they would know that not only is he insane, but he's homicidal. Not only that, but it's already too late to escape and no one's coming to save you.
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* Mana is basically Government-Encouraged Magical Meth; it breaks down the willpower of mages for a few circus tricks, leaves them susceptible to fear and decadence, and generally makes them the slaves of Embryo, especially in Episode 22. They've been poisoning their minds with the very thing that keeps them at peace, and they use it decadently because they believe it's unlimited (it just comes from a really, really, REALLY ''really'' big dragon). Once it runs out...
* Picturing the demise of the other Norma. They get seduced by Embryo at his most affable nature and jointhem.him. But then his sadistic personality shows and they would know that not only is he insane, but he's homicidal. Not only that, but it's already too late to escape and no one's coming to save you.
* Picturing the demise of the other Norma. They get seduced by Embryo at his most affable nature and join
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[[caption-width-right:350:The girl is dying from fighting Interdimensional Dragons. And to think that they used ''this'' in a mecha series... '''damn'''!]]
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* Anytime a pilot gets killed by the [=DRAGONs=] can result in a ''[[NauseaFuel very]]'' [[{{Squick}} bloody mess]], which happens fairly often. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Anytime a pilot or even a [=DRAGON=] gets killed by the [=DRAGONs=] can result in a ''[[NauseaFuel very]]'' [[{{Squick}} bloody mess]], which happens fairly often. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Anytime a pilot gets killed by the [=DRAGONs=] can result in a bloody mess, which happens fairly often. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Anytime a pilot gets killed by the [=DRAGONs=] can result in a ''[[NauseaFuel very]]'' [[{{Squick}} bloody mess, mess]], which happens fairly often. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Anytime a pilot gets killed by the [=DRAGONs=] can result in a bloody mess. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Anytime a pilot gets killed by the [=DRAGONs=] can result in a bloody mess.mess, which happens fairly often. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* Anytime a pilot gets killed by the [=DRAGONs=] can result in a bloody mess. [[SincerityMode Seriously, be careful when watching this series if you are afraid of blood and gore]].
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* What World War VII did to humanity's existence on Earth. There's no human life left and all we see are decaying skeletons. Ange pukes at the site of what happened.
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* What World War VII did to humanity's existence on Earth. There's no human life left and all we see are decaying skeletons. Ange pukes at the site of what happened. WarIsHell, ''indeed''.
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[[caption-width-right:350:The girls is dying from fighting Interdimensional Dragons. And to think that they used ''this'' in a mecha series... '''damn'''!]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:The girls girl is dying from fighting Interdimensional Dragons. And to think that they used ''this'' in a mecha series... '''damn'''!]]