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* When Annagramma takes hiver-invaded Tiffany to Zakzak's shop, Hiver!Tiffany casually turns the shop's security guard -- the young, inept Brian -- into a frog. That is, the hiver turned 'part' of Brian into a frog. All of the leftover Brian that didn't fit now floats and wobbles gently above the small frog...
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* When Annagramma takes hiver-invaded Tiffany to Zakzak's shop, Hiver!Tiffany casually turns the shop's security guard -- the young, inept Brian -- into a frog. That is, the hiver turned 'part' turns ''part'' of Brian into a frog. All of the leftover Brian that didn't fit now floats and wobbles gently above the small frog...
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Rewriting an example to better catch the nightmarish feel of the incident, and removing natter that doesn't happen in the book. Anything about Granny Weatherwax in the other Discworld books belongs on either the general Discworld page or on the specific book where Granny states her views on frog-changing.
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* A man was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, the rest of him turned into a sloshing pink balloon. He got better.
** It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs with the line "why go to all that trouble". Now we know what that trouble is...
** It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs with the line "why go to all that trouble". Now we know what that trouble is...
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* A man was turned When Annagramma takes hiver-invaded Tiffany to Zakzak's shop, Hiver!Tiffany casually turns the shop's security guard -- the young, inept Brian -- into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, That is, the rest of him hiver turned 'part' of Brian into a sloshing frog. All of the leftover Brian that didn't fit now floats and wobbles gently above the small frog...
--> Zakzak didn’t look at the frog. He was looking at the thing that went 'gloop, gloop'. It was like a large pinkballoon. He got better.
** It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs withballoon full of water, quite pretty really, wobbling gently against the line "why go to all that trouble". Now we know what that trouble is...ceiling.
--> Zakzak didn’t look at the frog. He was looking at the thing that went 'gloop, gloop'. It was like a large pink
** It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs with
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** What makes the Hiver worse is that it lacks any true intelligence, acting on base instinct for most of the book. It's noted that several people fell victim to EvilIsNotAToy not because they underestimated its intelligence, but rather because [[TooDumbToFool it's not sapient]] and the various countermeasures and contingency plans for other magical brings simply don't work.
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** What makes the Hiver worse is that it lacks any true intelligence, acting on base instinct for most of the book. It's noted that several people fell victim to EvilIsNotAToy not because they underestimated its intelligence, but rather because [[TooDumbToFool it's not sapient]] and the various countermeasures and contingency plans for other magical brings beings simply don't work.
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* A man was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, the rest of him turned into a sloshing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
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** What makes the Hiver worse is that it lacks any true intelligence, acting on base instinct for most of the book. It's noted that several people fell victim to EvilIsNotAToy not because they underestimated its intelligence, but rather because [[TooDumbToFool it's not sapient]] and the various countermeasures and contingency plans for other magical brings simply don't work.
* A man was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, the rest of him turned into a sloshing pink balloon.[[spoiler:He He got better.]]
* A man was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, the rest of him turned into a sloshing pink balloon.
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* The hiver killing one of Ms. Level's bodies, made all the worse by the minimal description, and the implication in the next chapter that it basically ''disintegrated'' it.
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* The hiver killing one of Ms. Level's bodies, made all the worse by the minimal description, and the implication in the next chapter that it basically ''disintegrated'' it.it.
* The moment the hiver takes over Tiffany. She says "see me" to trigger her spell, steps out of her body, looks at herself, starts relaxing because everything is in order... and then she sees her body [[WhamShot smile and open its eyes.]]
-->'''Hiver!Tiffany:''' We see you. [[GrandTheftMe Now we are you.]]
* The moment the hiver takes over Tiffany. She says "see me" to trigger her spell, steps out of her body, looks at herself, starts relaxing because everything is in order... and then she sees her body [[WhamShot smile and open its eyes.]]
-->'''Hiver!Tiffany:''' We see you. [[GrandTheftMe Now we are you.]]
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* The hiver killing one of Ms. Level's bodies, made all the worse by the minimal description.
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* The hiver killing one of Ms. Level's bodies, made all the worse by the minimal description.description, and the implication in the next chapter that it basically ''disintegrated'' it.
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** It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs with the line "why go to all that trouble". Now we know what that trouble is...
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** It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs with the line "why go to all that trouble". Now we know what that trouble is...is...
* The hiver killing one of Ms. Level's bodies, made all the worse by the minimal description.
* The hiver killing one of Ms. Level's bodies, made all the worse by the minimal description.
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* The Hiver hides in people, but their brains die. They always die.
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* The Hiver hiver hides in animals and people, choosing the most powerful hosts it can find, but their brains minds die. They always die.
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** A guy was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, the rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
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** A guy was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, the rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
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** A guy was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average frog, the rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]]]
**It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs with the line "why go to all that trouble". Now we know what that trouble is...
**It's often mentioned in previous books that Granny Weatherwax very much prefers to make people think they've been turned into frogs than actually doing it, played for laughs with the line "why go to all that trouble". Now we know what that trouble is...
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** A guy was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average from, the rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
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** A guy was turned into a frog. As a human being has far more mass than that of your average from, frog, the rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
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** A guy was turned into a frog. The rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
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** A guy was turned into a frog. The As a human being has far more mass than that of your average from, the rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
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* The Hiver hides in people, but their brains die. They always die.
--> As it went past, it made a noise like a swarm of flies.
** A guy was turned into a frog. The rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
--> As it went past, it made a noise like a swarm of flies.
** A guy was turned into a frog. The rest of him turned into a slushing pink balloon. [[spoiler:He got better.]]
