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* Amanda storms into the restaurant Tory works at, and demands her to leave Sam alone. But she ends up pushing a few buttons, and Tory acts, which led to her getting promptly fired. Even after Amanda learns Tory's home life from Kreese, she leaves a grocery bag at a doorstep right after she lost her job because of her. Tory misinterprets this as CondescendingCompassion and confronts Amanda at the dealership, declaring [[DontYouDarePityMe she doesn't need her sympathy]] and is more determined then ever to humiliate Sam. It's only after Tory's situation becomes dire enough that she swallows her pride and starts accepting Amanda's help.
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* Amanda storms into the restaurant Tory works at, and demands her to leave Sam alone. But she ends up pushing a few buttons, and Tory acts, which led leads to her getting promptly fired. Even after Amanda learns Tory's home life from Kreese, she leaves a grocery bag at a doorstep right after she lost her job because of her. Tory misinterprets this as CondescendingCompassion and confronts Amanda at the dealership, declaring [[DontYouDarePityMe she doesn't need her sympathy]] and is more determined then ever to humiliate Sam. It's only after Tory's situation becomes dire enough that she swallows her pride and starts accepting Amanda's help.
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--> '''Sam:''' My entire family has suffered.. because of ''you''!
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--> '''Sam:''' My entire family has suffered..suffered... because of ''you''!
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* Daniel doesn't tell Amanda his complete history with Terry Silver so when Terry decides to drive a wedge between Amanda and Daniel he succeeds due to his VillainWithGoodPublicity. Daniel ends up pushing Amanda too far with his vendetta and she abandons him and takes Sam and Anthony with her to Ohio. A devastated Daniel is left a drunken mess and is brutally beaten by Silver as revenge for his constant interference in Silver's affairs. This leaves Daniel too frightened to fight back, luckily Amanda and Johnny rejoin him and help him recover.
* Sam has this reaction towards Tory when the latter finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemesis and blames the pain her family has gone through--from her parents' marriage nearly falling apart to Daniel being beaten down and having a HeroicBSOD, and her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi-Do shut down as part of the bet, on top of Sam's own issues after her sketchy defeat, including blaming herself--on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth. She even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
--> '''Sam:''' My entire family has suffered because of you!
* Sam has this reaction towards Tory when the latter finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemesis and blames the pain her family has gone through--from her parents' marriage nearly falling apart to Daniel being beaten down and having a HeroicBSOD, and her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi-Do shut down as part of the bet, on top of Sam's own issues after her sketchy defeat, including blaming herself--on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth. She even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
--> '''Sam:''' My entire family has suffered because of you!
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* Daniel doesn't tell Amanda his complete history with Terry Silver so when Terry decides to drive a wedge between Amanda and Daniel the couple, he succeeds due to his VillainWithGoodPublicity. Daniel ends up pushing Amanda too far with his vendetta and she abandons by humiliating her at a fundraiser held at Silver's home, causing her to leave him and takes take Sam and Anthony with her to Ohio. A devastated Daniel is left a drunken mess and is brutally beaten by Silver as revenge for his constant interference in Silver's affairs. This leaves Daniel too frightened and depressed to fight back, luckily back. Luckily, Amanda and Johnny rejoin him and help him recover.
* Sam has this reaction towards Tory when the latter finally reveals Silver'scheating bribery to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemesis and blames the pain her family has gone through--from her parents' marriage nearly falling apart to Daniel being beaten down and having a HeroicBSOD, and her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi-Do shut down as part of the bet, on top of Sam's own issues after her sketchy defeat, including blaming herself--on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth. She even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
--> '''Sam:''' My entire family hassuffered suffered.. because of you!''you''!
* Sam has this reaction towards Tory when the latter finally reveals Silver's
--> '''Sam:''' My entire family has
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* Daniel doesn't tell Amanda his complete history with Terry Silver so when Terry decides to drive a wedge between Amanda and Daniel he succeeds due to his VillainWithGoodPublicity and Daniel ends up pushing Amanda too far with his vendetta and she abandons him by taking Sam and Anthony with her to Ohio. A devastated Daniel is left a drunken mess and is brutally beaten by Silver as revenge for his interference in Silvers affairs. This leaves Daniel too frightened to fight back, luckily Ananda and Johnny rejoin him and help him recover.
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* Daniel doesn't tell Amanda his complete history with Terry Silver so when Terry decides to drive a wedge between Amanda and Daniel he succeeds due to his VillainWithGoodPublicity and VillainWithGoodPublicity. Daniel ends up pushing Amanda too far with his vendetta and she abandons him by taking and takes Sam and Anthony with her to Ohio. A devastated Daniel is left a drunken mess and is brutally beaten by Silver as revenge for his constant interference in Silvers Silver's affairs. This leaves Daniel too frightened to fight back, luckily Ananda Amanda and Johnny rejoin him and help him recover.
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* Daniel doesn't tell Amanda his complete history with Terry Silver so when Terry decides to drive a wedge between Amanda and Daniel he succeeds due to his VillainWithGoodPublicity and Daniel ends up pushing Amanda too far with his vendetta and she abandons him by taking Sam and Anthony with her to Ohio. A devastated Daniel is left a drunken mess and is brutally beaten by Silver as revenge for his interference in Silvers affairs. This leaves Daniel too frightened to fight back, luckily Ananda and Johnny rejoin him and help him recover.
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* After Daniel finally gets tired of being ambushed by random foes from his past, he decides to preemptively go after the one enemy he has left that he hadn't confronted recently: Mike Barnes. Unfortunately, at this point Daniel is running on complete paranoia, and Chozen is, well...Chozen, so neither of them figure out the obvious clues that Mike is just working a normal job and has nothing to do with Silver anymore, only having that resolved when a brawl erupts with the three of them. Mike does end up giving Daniel a potential lead on a lawyer who drafted up his contract with Silver, but Silver finds out immediately and [[DisproportionateRetribution decides to BURN DOWN MIKE'S STORE IN RESPONSE.]] Poor Mike is financially ruined from this, and while it's understandable that Daniel didn't think Silver would go that far in response, all he really accomplished was getting an innocent man put to ruin.
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* After Cobra Kai win the All Valley Tournament, Daniel closes down Miyagi-Do despite the protest of Sam and his students under the stubborn belief he is protecting them from Cobra Kai and must fight Silver by himself. Daniel fails to realize that Cobra Kai will threaten to hurt his students, whether the Dojo is open or not like they did back in Season 3. Daniel's decision also further alienates Sam who feels guilty that her loss led to the Dojo closure and Anthony is left defenceless from a vengeful Kenny targeting him and unable to learn karate due to the Dojo's closure.
* Daniel finally gets tired of being ambushed by random foes from his past, he decides to preemptively go after the one enemy he has left that he hadn't confronted recently: Mike Barnes. Unfortunately, at this point Daniel is running on complete paranoia, and Chozen is, well...Chozen, so neither of them figure out the obvious clues that Mike is just working a normal job and has nothing to do with Silver anymore, only having that resolved when a brawl erupts with the three of them. Mike does end up giving Daniel a potential lead on a lawyer who drafted up his contract with Silver, but Silver finds out immediately and [[DisproportionateRetribution decides to BURN DOWN MIKE'S STORE IN RESPONSE.]] Poor Mike is financially ruined from this, and while it's understandable that Daniel didn't think Silver would go that far in response, all he really accomplished was getting an innocent man put to ruin.
* Daniel finally gets tired of being ambushed by random foes from his past, he decides to preemptively go after the one enemy he has left that he hadn't confronted recently: Mike Barnes. Unfortunately, at this point Daniel is running on complete paranoia, and Chozen is, well...Chozen, so neither of them figure out the obvious clues that Mike is just working a normal job and has nothing to do with Silver anymore, only having that resolved when a brawl erupts with the three of them. Mike does end up giving Daniel a potential lead on a lawyer who drafted up his contract with Silver, but Silver finds out immediately and [[DisproportionateRetribution decides to BURN DOWN MIKE'S STORE IN RESPONSE.]] Poor Mike is financially ruined from this, and while it's understandable that Daniel didn't think Silver would go that far in response, all he really accomplished was getting an innocent man put to ruin.
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* Sam has this reaction towards Tory when the latter finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemesis and blames the pain her family has gone through--from Daniel being beaten down and having a HeroicBSOD, her parents' marriage nearly falling apart, and her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi-Do shut down as part of the bet, on top of Sam's own issues after her sketchy defeat, including blaming herself--on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth. She even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
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* Sam has this reaction towards Tory when the latter finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemesis and blames the pain her family has gone through--from her parents' marriage nearly falling apart to Daniel being beaten down and having a HeroicBSOD, her parents' marriage nearly falling apart, and her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi-Do shut down as part of the bet, on top of Sam's own issues after her sketchy defeat, including blaming herself--on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth. She even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
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** The soccer fight gets all of the Miyagi-Do students [[InsistentTerminology rehabilitative]] detention, while Cobra Kai get off scot free.
** Instead of calling the cops and having Hawk and his gang banned from the arcade for harassing Chris at work, the Miyagi-Dos decide to take matters into their own hands and ambush them. They start with the upper hand, but the fight turns into a CurbStompBattle for Cobra Kai when Tory's arrival causes Sam to have a [[HeroicBsod panic attack.]] Demetri winds up with a broken arm and Kreese is able to use the ambush to make Cobra Kai look like VillainsWithGoodPublicity at the City Council meeting later in the season.
* Pretty much every person watching the show cheered when Amanda stormed into Cobra Kai, eviscerated Kreese verbally and gave him a good slap for his troubles. Unfortunately Kreese is smart and uses said incident to have an personal protection order taken out against her and essentially make it all but impossible for the [=LaRussos=] to prosecute him.
** Instead of calling the cops and having Hawk and his gang banned from the arcade for harassing Chris at work, the Miyagi-Dos decide to take matters into their own hands and ambush them. They start with the upper hand, but the fight turns into a CurbStompBattle for Cobra Kai when Tory's arrival causes Sam to have a [[HeroicBsod panic attack.]] Demetri winds up with a broken arm and Kreese is able to use the ambush to make Cobra Kai look like VillainsWithGoodPublicity at the City Council meeting later in the season.
* Pretty much every person watching the show cheered when Amanda stormed into Cobra Kai, eviscerated Kreese verbally and gave him a good slap for his troubles. Unfortunately Kreese is smart and uses said incident to have an personal protection order taken out against her and essentially make it all but impossible for the [=LaRussos=] to prosecute him.
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** The soccer fight gets all of the Miyagi-Do students [[InsistentTerminology rehabilitative]] detention, while Cobra Kai get off scot free.scot-free thanks to Hawk's manipulations.
** Instead of calling the cops and having Hawk and his gang banned from the arcade for harassing Chris at work, the Miyagi-Dos decide to take matters into their own hands and ambush them. They start with the upper hand, but the fight turns into a CurbStompBattle for Cobra Kai when Tory's arrival causes Sam to have a [[HeroicBsod panicattack.]] attack]]. Demetri winds up with a broken arm and Kreese is able to use the ambush to make Cobra Kai look like VillainsWithGoodPublicity at the City Council meeting later in the season.
* Pretty much every person watching the show cheered when Amanda stormed into Cobra Kai, eviscerated Kreese verbally and gave him a good slap for his troubles.Unfortunately Unfortunately, Kreese is smart and uses said incident to have an a personal protection order taken out against her and essentially make it all but impossible for the [=LaRussos=] to prosecute him.
** Instead of calling the cops and having Hawk and his gang banned from the arcade for harassing Chris at work, the Miyagi-Dos decide to take matters into their own hands and ambush them. They start with the upper hand, but the fight turns into a CurbStompBattle for Cobra Kai when Tory's arrival causes Sam to have a [[HeroicBsod panic
* Pretty much every person watching the show cheered when Amanda stormed into Cobra Kai, eviscerated Kreese verbally and gave him a good slap for his troubles.
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* Miguel is understandably annoyed at Tory for never visiting him while he was in the hospital. However his poor choice of words in their ensuing conversation only incenses Tory and drives her deeper into her rage and her connection with Cobra Kai.
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* Miguel is understandably annoyed at Tory for never visiting him while he was in the hospital. However However, his poor choice of words in their ensuing conversation only incenses Tory and drives her deeper into her rage and her connection with Cobra Kai.
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* After Daniel finally gets tired of being ambushed by random foes from his past he decides to preemptively go after the one enemy he has left that he hadn't confronted recently, in Mike Barnes. Unfortunately, at this point Daniel is running on complete paranoia, and Chozen is well...Chozen, so neither of them figure out the obvious clues that Mike is just working a normal job and has nothing to do with Silver anymore, only having that resolved when a brawl erupts with the three of them. Mike does end up giving Daniel a potential lead on a lawyer who drafted up his contracts, but Silver finds out immediately and [[DisproportionateRetribution decides to BURN DOWN MIKE'S STORE IN RESPONSE.]] Poor Mike is financially ruined from this, and while it's understandable that Daniel didn't think Silver would go that far in response, all he really accomplished was getting an innocent man put to ruin.
* Sam has this reaction Towards Tory when she finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemises and blames the pain her family has gone through from Daniel being beaten down and having a [[HeroicBSOD HeroicBSOD]], her parents marriage nearly falling apart, her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi Do shut down as part of the bet on top of her own issues after her sketchy defeat including blaming herself on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth, she even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
--> Sam: My entire family has suffered because of you!
* Sam has this reaction Towards Tory when she finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemises and blames the pain her family has gone through from Daniel being beaten down and having a [[HeroicBSOD HeroicBSOD]], her parents marriage nearly falling apart, her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi Do shut down as part of the bet on top of her own issues after her sketchy defeat including blaming herself on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth, she even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
--> Sam: My entire family has suffered because of you!
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* After Daniel finally gets tired of being ambushed by random foes from his past past, he decides to preemptively go after the one enemy he has left that he hadn't confronted recently, in recently: Mike Barnes. Unfortunately, at this point Daniel is running on complete paranoia, and Chozen is is, well...Chozen, so neither of them figure out the obvious clues that Mike is just working a normal job and has nothing to do with Silver anymore, only having that resolved when a brawl erupts with the three of them. Mike does end up giving Daniel a potential lead on a lawyer who drafted up his contracts, contract with Silver, but Silver finds out immediately and [[DisproportionateRetribution decides to BURN DOWN MIKE'S STORE IN RESPONSE.]] Poor Mike is financially ruined from this, and while it's understandable that Daniel didn't think Silver would go that far in response, all he really accomplished was getting an innocent man put to ruin.
* Sam has this reactionTowards towards Tory when she the latter finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemises nemesis and blames the pain her family has gone through from through--from Daniel being beaten down and having a [[HeroicBSOD HeroicBSOD]], HeroicBSOD, her parents parents' marriage nearly falling apart, and her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi Do Miyagi-Do shut down as part of the bet bet, on top of her Sam's own issues after her sketchy defeat defeat, including blaming herself on herself--on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth, she truth. She even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
-->Sam: '''Sam:''' My entire family has suffered because of you!
* Sam has this reaction
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* Sam has this reaction Towards Tory when she finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[Rage-Breakingpoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemises and blames the pain her family has gone through from Daniel being beaten down and having a [[HeroicBSOD HeroicBSOD]], her parents marriage nearly falling apart, her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi Do shut down as part of the bet on top of her own issues after her sketchy defeat including blaming herself on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth, she even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
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* Sam has this reaction Towards Tory when she finally reveals Silver's cheating to her. She is [[Rage-Breakingpoint [[RageBreakingPoint absolutely furious]] at her old nemises and blames the pain her family has gone through from Daniel being beaten down and having a [[HeroicBSOD HeroicBSOD]], her parents marriage nearly falling apart, her brother being defenceless against Kenny because Miyagi Do shut down as part of the bet on top of her own issues after her sketchy defeat including blaming herself on Tory taking this long to reveal the truth, she even calls Tory a coward for not coming forward earlier.
