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* ShortDistancePhoneCall: In Chapter 31, Shizuku and Kaori text each other in the same room, [[spoiler:because Kaori's condition has worsened to the point at which speaking causes her to break down in a coughing fit]].
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* DownerBeginning: The initial scenes establish that Shizuku is suicidal and would have killed herself if not for Kaori's intervention.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: While Shizuku is the primary POV character, and the only one whose thoughts are shown, Chapter 24 mainly focuses on Ruri's point of view, as do the bonus chapters 9.5 and 20.5


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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Quite a few secondary characters make note of how close Kaori and Shizuku are. Seri casually remarks that Shizuku, as Kaori's "girlfriend," should know about her condition, having immediately assumed that Shizuku and Kaori were a couple. Ruri notices that Kaori is happiest when talking about Shizuku. Shiori feels rather threatened by her sister's closeness with Shizuku.


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* ShooOutTheClowns: Shizuku's older sister Shizuka appears significantly less often after Kaori is hospitalized and the series gets darker, only appearing in Chapter 19, which focuses on Shizuku's relationship with her family, and the immediate aftermath at the start of Chapter 20.
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* HoldingHands:
** Shizuku and Kaori do this in Chapter 13, on the way to meeting Ruri and Seri.
** In the final chapter, [[spoiler:Shizuku and Kaori are shown this way in the panel in which Kaori, in her posthumous letter, expresses her wish that they could have been an actual couple]], with the holding hands part being shorthand for being a couple.

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* MeaningfulEcho: Shizuku and Kaori go to a library early on in the series, while pretending to go out with each other. When Kaori gets excited, Shizuku, who's less enthusiastic, says, "We're in a library! Shhh!" Shortly thereafter, Shizuku is so surprised that Kaori likes the same author she does that she raises her voice, whereupon Kaori giggles and says, "Shhh! We're in a library! Right?" with a smile.

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Shizuku and Kaori go to a library early on in the series, while pretending to go out with each other. When Kaori gets excited, Shizuku, who's less enthusiastic, says, "We're in a library! Shhh!" Shortly thereafter, Shizuku is so surprised that Kaori likes the same author she does that she raises her voice, whereupon Kaori giggles and says, "Shhh! We're in a library! Right?" with a smile.smile.
** After Shizuku runs away from the aquarium date with Kaori, she gets a letter from Kaori, but is afraid of what it might say, thinking, "Knowing is just as scary as not knowing." She then repeats this phrase to herself after making up her mind to read Kaori's letter.



** Because Kaori has a habit of downplaying how much she is suffering and Shizuku has a tendency to assume the worst, Shizuku comes to the conclusion that Kaori doesn't want her to come visit her every day, since Kaori might find it exhausting but be unwilling to admit it. After Shizuku doesn't come visit for a few days (initially because she wasn't allowed to, but later because she didn't have anything to show Kaori), it takes Kaori begging Shizuku to come see her for her to realize the error of her ways.



* RomanticFakeRealTurn: Kaori proposes a fake relationship so that Shizuku has material to write a novel, with her goal being to ensure that Shizuku does not commit suicide, although Kaori seems to have had feelings for Shizuku all along. Shizuku goes along with the fake relationship reluctantly at first, but gradually becomes more invested in it, and realizes she has genuine romantic feelings for Kaori. [[spoiler:The ending reveals that Kaori has always admired Shizuku and perhaps been in love with her, but chose to keep the relationship fake so that Shizuku would not be too devastated by her inevitable death]].

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* RomanticFakeRealTurn: Kaori proposes a fake relationship so that Shizuku has material to write a novel, with her goal being to ensure that Shizuku does not commit suicide, although Kaori seems to have had feelings for Shizuku all along. Shizuku goes along with the fake relationship reluctantly at first, but gradually becomes more invested in it, and realizes she has genuine romantic feelings for Kaori. [[spoiler:The ending reveals that Kaori has always admired Shizuku and perhaps been in love with her, her all along, but chose to keep the relationship fake so that Shizuku would not be too devastated by her inevitable death]].

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* ExpositoryHairstyleChange: Shizuku grew out her bangs after her bullying Ruri caused her to become ostracized, since she willingly isolated herself from others. [[spoiler:She cuts her bangs short in the final scene, now that she is willing to reach out to others again]].



* HidingBehindYourBangs: Shizuku has long bangs, indicative of her withdrawn nature.

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* HidingBehindYourBangs: Shizuku has long bangs, indicative of her withdrawn nature. They weren't as long in the flashbacks to elementary school, when she was outgoing and confident to the point of arrogance, [[spoiler:and are cut short once again in the final scene, when she decides to stop isolating herself]].



* InconsistentDub: In the first volume of the localization, Shiori calls her older sister Kaori "[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseSiblingTerminology Onee-chan]]." In later volumes, she and Shizuku call their respective older sisters "Sis."



* RomanticFakeRealTurn: Kaori proposes a fake relationship so that Shizuku has material to write a novel, with her goal being to ensure that Shizuku does not commit suicide, although Kaori seems to have had feelings for Shizuku all along. Shizuku goes along with the fake relationship reluctantly at first, but gradually becomes more invested in it, and realizes she has genuine romantic feelings for Kaori.

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* RomanticFakeRealTurn: Kaori proposes a fake relationship so that Shizuku has material to write a novel, with her goal being to ensure that Shizuku does not commit suicide, although Kaori seems to have had feelings for Shizuku all along. Shizuku goes along with the fake relationship reluctantly at first, but gradually becomes more invested in it, and realizes she has genuine romantic feelings for Kaori. [[spoiler:The ending reveals that Kaori has always admired Shizuku and perhaps been in love with her, but chose to keep the relationship fake so that Shizuku would not be too devastated by her inevitable death]].
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* IShouldWriteABookAboutThis: {{Invoked|Trope}}. At the start of the series, Kaori suggests Shizuku they should pretend to be a couple to give Shizuku inspiration to write their love story. [[spoiler:In the final chapter, Shizuku manages to finish her novel when Kaori is in critical condition and through it, she confesses her love to her right before Kaori dies. The final panel of the manga shows Shizuku's novel is titled "The Summer You Were There".]]


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* SummerRomance: As the title indicates, the plot is about the romance that bloomed between Shizuku and Kaori over the course of the first and only summer they spent together [[spoiler:before Kaori's death at the end of the season]].

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Seri can be rather sharp-tongued, especially to Shizuku, but she's a loyal friend to Ruri and can be surprisingly kind to Shizuku at times.

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Seri can be rather sharp-tongued, especially to Shizuku, but she's a loyal friend to Ruri and can be surprisingly kind to Shizuku at times.times.
** When Shizuku was younger, she was rather sharp-tongued and abrasive, but went out of her way to help others. [[DeconstructedTrope Unfortunately, her good intentions ended up being negated by her harsh way of helping others]].



* WhamEpisode: Chapter 14-15. Not only does Ruri reject Shizuku's apology, but Kaori collapses, resulting in Shizuku learning of her condition.

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* WhamEpisode: WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 5. Shizuku reaches her breaking point and confesses to having been a bully in elementary school, only for Kaori to reveal that she already knew it. After the fallout of these admissions, Shizuku actually starts trusting Kaori more, and getting her help in apologizing to Ruri.
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Chapter 14-15. Not only does Ruri reject Shizuku's apology, but Kaori collapses, resulting in Shizuku learning of her condition.condition.
** Chapter 25. Kaori slips into unconsciousness, and it becomes apparent to everyone close to her that she doesn't have much time left.
** At the end of Chapter 30, [[spoiler:Kaori goes into critical condition, forcing Shizuku to race to fulfill all her promises to Kaori and setting the stage for Kaori's death one chapter later]].


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** In Chapter 25, Shiori gives Shizuka some disturbing news about Kaori.
--->'''Shiori''': She slipped unconscious yesterday and hasn't come back yet.
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--->[[spoiler:The summer she were there. I want to believe it was a happy story.]]

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--->[[spoiler:The summer she were there. --->'''Shizuku narrating''': [[spoiler:Because I want to believe it that, in the end, the summer you were there was a happy story.]]story. (final panel shows the manuscript titled "The Summer You Were There."]]
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'''Kaori''': I don't think so, not this time around. They're the leading doctors on it. Famous even.\\
'''Shizuku''': F-Famous? But that's great! Maybe you have to stay a bit and somehow...\\

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'''Kaori''': I don't think so, not this time around. They're the ''the'' leading doctors on it. Famous even.\\
'''Shizuku''': F-Famous? But But, that's great! Maybe you have to stay a bit and somehow...\\

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-->'''Seri''': Oh yeah...? So that's how you're bullying Ruri.
** Kaori gives a series of these after telling Shizuku about her terminal illnesses, refuting all of Shizuku's attempts to find some hope and culminating in the following exchange.
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-->'''Seri''': --->'''Seri''': Oh yeah...? So that's how you're bullying Ruri.
** Kaori gives a series of these after telling Shizuku about her terminal illnesses, refuting all of Shizuku's attempts to find some hope hope. While Shizuku's voice is quaking, Kaori's is grimly resolute.
--->'''Shizuku''': There are other hospitals you could try....\\
'''Kaori''': I've been to a lot of places. It's all the same.\\
'''Shizuku''': Maybe they've got the wrong diagnosis...\\
'''Kaori''': I don't think so, not this time around. They're the leading doctors on it. Famous even.\\
'''Shizuku''': F-Famous? But that's great! Maybe you have to stay a bit
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somehow...\\
'''Kaori''': ''Somehow'', I made it up until now. It's a miracle I survived to high school.\\
'''Shizuku''': Gh... But...\\
'''Kaori''': Shizuku. There are no miracles left for me. This is it for me.

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* ArmorPiercingResponse: After Shizuku justifies her mistreatment of Ruri, Seri gives a response that triggers Shizuku's HeelRealization.

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After Shizuku justifies her mistreatment of Ruri, Seri gives a response that triggers Shizuku's HeelRealization.



** Kaori gives a series of these after telling Shizuku about her terminal illnesses, refuting all of Shizuku's attempts to find some hope and culminating in the following exchange.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Kaori passes away from her illness, but she leaves behind a letter and her diary for Shizuku who was left too depressed to even attend her funeral. After reading about Kaori’s thoughts about her as well as their ForgottenFirstMeeting, Shizuku begins attending class again, and she’s ready to move on with her life.]]

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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Kaori passes away from her illness, but she leaves behind a letter and her diary for Shizuku Shizuku, who was left too depressed to even attend her funeral. After reading about Kaori’s thoughts about her as well as their ForgottenFirstMeeting, Shizuku begins attending class again, and she’s ready to move on with her life.]]



* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Seri is first introduced in a flashback, slapping Shizuku for bullying Ruri. This shows how protective she is of Ruri and her hatred for Shizuku.

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Seri is first introduced in a flashback, slapping Shizuku for bullying Ruri. This shows how protective she is of Ruri and her hatred for Shizuku.Shizuku.
** In Chapter 4.5, Shiori expresses worry about whether Kaori is overexerting herself, then insists that Kaori spend time with her, too, showing that she cares a great deal for her sister, and can be a bit clingy, too.



* WebcomicTime: The series is a monthly manga published over the course of multiple years, but takes place over the course of a single summer vacation- late July to the beginning of September, or just over a month.

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* WebcomicTime: The series is a monthly manga published over the course of multiple years, but takes place over the course of a single summer vacation- late July 16 to the beginning of September, September 5, or just over about a month.month and a half.


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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: At the start of the series, Kaori takes the manuscript Shizuku was planning on throwing away, reads it and hangs on to it. When Kaori tries to break up with Shizuku in Chapter 16, she tries to return it, but Shizuku refuses, and the manuscript is last seen laying on Kaori's bed in the hospital. While the story that Shizuku wrote comes up later, the manuscript is never seen again, [[spoiler:not even after Kaori dies]].
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The story is complete after 32 chapters.

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!!You can list the tropes for our love story:
* AdultsAreUseless: Not a single adult was shown intervening when Shizuku bullied Ruri(although one child is heard calling for a teacher, it is not shown whether the teacher did anything), and the bullying only stopped when, after Shizuku caused Ruri to fall in front of others, Seri slapped Shizuku and called her out on her actions. The only adult involvement happened when Shizuku's mother took her to the Ichinose residence and Shizuku apologized to Ruri's mother.

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!!You can list the tropes for our love story:
!!Tropes:
* AdultsAreUseless: Not a single adult was shown intervening when Shizuku bullied Ruri(although Ruri (although one child is heard calling for a teacher, it is not shown whether the teacher did anything), and the bullying only stopped when, after Shizuku caused Ruri to fall in front of others, Seri slapped Shizuku and called her out on her actions. The only adult involvement happened when Shizuku's mother took her to the Ichinose residence and Shizuku apologized to Ruri's mother.



* FestivalEpisode: In Chapter 10, Kaori and Shizuka put on yukatas and go to a festival with fireworks.



* FestivalEpisode: In Chapter 10, Kaori and Shizuka put on yukatas and go to a festival with fireworks.



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* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the author's previous work, ''Manga/TheGirlIWantIsSoHandsome''. The latter begins with the comedic CrashIntoHello between the protagonist and her crush, while this series begins with a the protagonist ''preparing to kill herself''. While ''The Girl I Want Is So Handsome'' has an unambiguously happy ending, ''The Summer You Were There'' has [[spoiler:Kaori die of her illness]].

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the author's previous work, ''Manga/TheGirlIWantIsSoHandsome''. The latter begins with the comedic CrashIntoHello between the protagonist and her crush, while this series begins with a the protagonist ''preparing to kill herself''. While ''The Girl I Want Is So Handsome'' has an unambiguously happy ending, ''The Summer You Were There'' has a BittersweetEnding, in which [[spoiler:Kaori die dies of her illness]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Kaori passes away from her illness, but she leaves behind a letter and her diary for Shizuku who was left too depressed to even attend her funeral. After reading about Kaori’s thoughts about her as well as their ForgottenFirstMeeting, Shizuku begins attending class again, and she’s ready to move on with her life.]]


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* ForgottenFirstMeeting: [[spoiler:It is shown in the last chapter that Shizuku helped Kaori get a library book when they were children which was one of the reasons she admired her so much.]]
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--->[[spoiler:The summer she were there. I wish it were a happy story.]]

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--->[[spoiler:The summer she were there. I wish want to believe it were was a happy story.]]
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--->'[[spoiler:The summer she were there. I wish it were a happy story.]]

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--->'[[spoiler:The --->[[spoiler:The summer she were there. I wish it were a happy story.]]

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* TitleDrop: The title of Chapter 15 is dropped late in the chapter, when, after learning about Kaori's illness, Shizuku thinks, "You'll be fine, right?"

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The title of Chapter 15 is dropped late in the chapter, when, after learning about Kaori's illness, Shizuku thinks, "You'll be fine, right?"right?"
** The title of the manga is dropped on the last page of Chapter 32.
--->'[[spoiler:The summer she were there. I wish it were a happy story.]]

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* FourIsDeath: Kaori's collapse and the resulting InternalReveal of her terminal illness to Shizuku happens just after meeting of herself, Shizuku, Ruri and Seri, in which Shizuku hoped to apologize to Ruri for bullying her in the past. The meeting date was arranged four days in advance. Chapter 16 (4 x 4) is when Shizuku learns the truth that Kaori is going to die in the near future.



* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Seri can be rather sharp-tongued, especially to Shizuku, but she's a loyal friend to Ruri.

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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Seri can be rather sharp-tongued, especially to Shizuku, but she's a loyal friend to Ruri.Ruri and can be surprisingly kind to Shizuku at times.



* MissingMom: It is strongly implied that Kaori and Shiori's mother is dead. Their father is the only parent seen, the two mention him alone when talking about their family, and in Chapter 16, Kaori says she knows what it is like to have to bear the pain of losing someone.

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* MissingMom: It is strongly implied that Kaori and Shiori's mother is dead. Their father is the only parent seen, the two mention him alone when talking about their family, and in Chapter 16, Kaori says she knows what it is like to have to bear the pain of losing someone. Kaori's father and sister are also the only ones who visit her in the hospital.
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* TwoActStructure: The first act, in which Kaori is free to visit Shizuku is relatively lighthearted, although it involves Shizuku's suicidal depression and guilt over bullying Ruri. The second half, in which Kaori is hospitalized, is noticeably darker, and involves Shizuku and other characters coming to terms with Kaori not having long to live.
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** Shiuku's family notices that she's becoming increasingly withdrawn, but rather than seek professional help for their daughter, they get her a dog.

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** Shiuku's Shizuku's family notices that she's becoming increasingly withdrawn, but rather than seek professional help for their daughter, they get her a dog.



--->'''Shizuku narrating''': The next morning, I woke up to my alarm clock, [[spoiler:and the news of Kaori's passing]].

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* BreadEggsMilkSquick: The penultimate chapter ends with Shizuku narrating that she woke up to the sound of her alarm clock [[spoiler:and news of Kaori's death]].


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: While Shizuku visits Kaori in the hospital almost every day when that is able, she's not Kaori's family and doesn't have visitation rights. [[spoiler:This, combined with Kaori passing away in the early morning, means that Shizuku can't be present for Kaori's final moments]].
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* RomanticFakeRealTurn: Kaori proposes a fake relationship so that Shizuku has material to write a novel, with her goal being to ensure that Shizuku does not commit suicide, although Kaori seems to have had feelings for Shizuku all along. Shizuku goes along with the fake relationship reluctantly at first, but gradually becomes more invested in it, and realizes she has genuine romantic feelings for Kaori.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the author's previous work, ''Manga/TheGirlIWantIsSoHandsome''. The latter begins with the comedic meeting between the protagonist and her crush, while this series begins with a the protagonist ''preparing to kill herself''.

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* DarkerAndEdgier: Compared to the author's previous work, ''Manga/TheGirlIWantIsSoHandsome''. The latter begins with the comedic meeting CrashIntoHello between the protagonist and her crush, while this series begins with a the protagonist ''preparing to kill herself''.herself''. While ''The Girl I Want Is So Handsome'' has an unambiguously happy ending, ''The Summer You Were There'' has [[spoiler:Kaori die of her illness]].



* ForegoneConclusion: The first pages reveal that Shizuku's relationship with Kaori only lasts for the summer.

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* ForegoneConclusion: The first pages reveal that Shizuku's relationship with Kaori only lasts for the summer. [[spoiler:Kaori dies of her illness in the penultimate chapter]].



* HopeSpot: In Chapter 15, when Shizuku visits Kaori in the hospital, Kaori initially downplays the severity of her condition, and Shizuku wonders if Seri was lying about Kaori's disease. Kaori then confirms that Seri was telling the truth and refutes each of the optimistic possibilities Shizuku raises.

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* HopeSpot: HopeSpot:
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In Chapter 15, when Shizuku visits Kaori in the hospital, Kaori initially downplays the severity of her condition, and Shizuku wonders if Seri was lying about Kaori's disease. Kaori then confirms that Seri was telling the truth and refutes each of the optimistic possibilities Shizuku raises.raises.
** In Chapter 31, [[spoiler:Kaori manages to survive long enough to regain consciousness and hear Shizuku's LoveConfession. Shizuku hopes to see her again... but then Kaori passes away that night]].
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** Chapter 31, the penultimate chapter, ends with the following.
--->'''Shizuku narrating''': The next morning, I woke up to my alarm clock, [[spoiler:and the news of Kaori's passing]].
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Shizuku Hoshikawa is a first-year in high school who is withdrawn from others and suffers from severe self-loathing. When she goes to throw out a novel manuscript, her classmate Kaori Asaka picks it up and happens to like it. Upon hearing that Shizuku doesn't plan on writing any more, she suggests that Shizuku write a love story with them, with them playing at being a relationship for the duration of the summer. Shizuku hesitantly accepts, not knowing that both she and Kaori will have to confront each other's darkest secrets.

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Shizuku Hoshikawa is a first-year in high school who is withdrawn from others and suffers from severe self-loathing. When she goes to throw out a novel manuscript, her classmate Kaori Asaka picks it up and happens to like it. Upon hearing that Shizuku doesn't plan on writing any more, she suggests that Shizuku write a love story with about the two of them, with them playing at being a relationship for the duration of the summer. Shizuku hesitantly accepts, not knowing that both she and Kaori will have to confront each other's darkest secrets.



* ExtremeDoormat: Ruri has trouble standing up for herself, hence why she didn't utter a word of protest against Shizuku's bullying.

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* ExtremeDoormat: Ruri has trouble standing up for herself, hence why she didn't utter a word of protest against Shizuku's bullying.bullying and agreed to Kaori's request to meet with Shizuku and hear Shizuku's apology.



* InconsistentSpelling: In the first volume of the localization, Shizuku's surname is "Hoshigawa."

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* InconsistentSpelling: In the first volume of the localization, Shizuku's surname is "Hoshigawa.""Hoshigawa," but it switches to "Hoshikawa" in subsequent volumes.
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** A serious example happens in Chapter 27, when Seri takes the opportunity to speak with Kaori despite the awkward tension between them. She says that she's always been scared of Shizuku, who bullied her in elementary school, and as much as she wants to forget it all, she can't. It seems as though nothing has changed since she [[RejectedApology rejected Shizuku's apology in Chapter 14]]... but then Ruri says that she wants to get to know Shizuku, since Shizuku has changed and getting to know the new her might help Ruri overcome her trauma.

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** A serious example happens in Chapter 27, when Seri takes the opportunity to speak with Kaori Shizuku despite the awkward tension between them. She says that she's always been scared of Shizuku, who bullied her in elementary school, and as much as she wants to forget it all, she can't. It seems as though nothing has changed since she [[RejectedApology rejected Shizuku's apology in Chapter 14]]... but then Ruri says that she wants to get to know Shizuku, since Shizuku has changed and getting to know the new her might help Ruri overcome her trauma.



* BreatherEpisode: After Chapters 6-9 go into Shizuku's backstory and guilt over bullying Ruri, and Chapter 10 gives the first indication that Kaori is not well, Chapters 11-12 have what the author describes as "lovey-dovey" scenes between Kaori and Shizuku as Shizuku works on the apology letter. Chapters 13-14 then involves Shizuku trying to apologize to Ruri, followed by Kaori's collapse and hospitalization.

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* BreatherEpisode: After Chapters 6-9 go into Shizuku's backstory and guilt over bullying Ruri, and Chapter 10 gives the first indication that Kaori is not well, Chapters 11-12 have what the author describes as "lovey-dovey" scenes between Kaori and Shizuku as Shizuku works on the apology letter. Chapters 13-14 then involves involve Shizuku trying to apologize to Ruri, followed by Kaori's collapse and hospitalization.

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** Shortly before the outing late in August, Kaori claims that her doctors think that her getting some fresh air will be good for her. Shizuku realizes that Kaori's condition has not improved in the slightest.

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** In Chapter 11, Kaori notices that Shizuku appears to be pouting, apparently unhappy that she and Kaori are on a LastNameBasis while Kaori is on a FirstNameBasis with the other members of the family, prompting Shizuku, embarrassed, to deny that she is.
** Shortly before the outing late in August, Kaori claims that her doctors think that her getting some fresh air will be good for her. Shizuku realizes that Kaori's condition has not improved in the slightest.slightest, but doesn't know what she can do other than pretend not to notice.
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* MeaningfulEcho: Shizuku and Kaori go to a library early on in the series, while pretending to go out with each other. When Kaori gets excited, Shizuku, who's less enthusiastic, says, "We're in a library! Shhh!" Shortly thereafter, Shizuku is so surprised that Kaori likes the same author she does that she raises her voice, whereupon Kaori giggles and says, "Shhh! We're in a library! Right?" with a smile.

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