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** Gene [=McDowell=] may be a ruthless gang boss who trained a little boy as an assassin and used him as a killer, but while he may despise his son, but he won't allow him to be killed and will even risk his life for his sake. He is also disgusted by his former friend Edward's pointless cruelty.
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** Gene [=McDowell=] may be a ruthless gang boss who trained a little boy as an assassin and used him as a killer, but while he may despise his son, but he won't allow him to be killed and will even risk his life for his sake. He is also disgusted by his former friend Edward's pointless cruelty.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Gene [=McDowell=] is a mob boss who resorts to extortion and assassination while also running brothels. But he is nonetheless disgusted by his former friend Edward's pointless cruelty.
** Gene is very adamant on protecting is people, especially the prostitutes who work for him. When he says what he will do to the guy who badly injured Karen, Kip is so afraid he puts the blame on the Butterflies rather than confessing the deed to his father.
** Gene is very adamant on protecting is people, especially the prostitutes who work for him. When he says what he will do to the guy who badly injured Karen, Kip is so afraid he puts the blame on the Butterflies rather than confessing the deed to his father.
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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: Emma is a prostitute working at a brothel. She is also a loyal friend (and lover) of Brad's and deeply cares for her friends.
%% * TheImmodestOrgasm: JJ when he's with a prostitute.
%% * TheImmodestOrgasm: JJ when he's with a prostitute.
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* HookerWithAHeartOfGold: Emma is a prostitute working at a brothel. She is also a loyal friend (and lover) of Brad's and deeply cares for her friends. \n%% * TheImmodestOrgasm: JJ JJ, Luke's friend, gets one when he's he has sex for the first time, with a prostitute.
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%% * {{Jerkass}}: Edward King, very much so.
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%% * OffingTheOffspring: Edward King certainly has no qualms about trying to do this.
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%% * SpoiledBrat: Kip [=McDowell=], explicitly named so by Raymond....and his own father.
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%% * ThemeNaming: Hawk, Swallow, Eagle, Dodo, Parrot...Edward King seems to have a thing for birds.
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%% * WhyWontYouDie: Said almost word for word by Kip after Brad somehow manages to not to be killed by [[spoiler:his Gatling]].
%% * WouldHitAGirl: Kip. Also, [[spoiler:Edward King killed Brad and Luke's mother]].
%% * WouldHurtAChild: Raymond would shoot one in the head.
%% * WouldHitAGirl: Kip. Also, [[spoiler:Edward King killed Brad and Luke's mother]].
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* AxCrazy: Kip is visibly mentally and emotionally unstable, on the verge of going on a violent spree at the slightest provocation, real or [[TwistingTheWords supposed]]. Gene [=McDowell=] has to constantly keep him monitored for him to stay in line.
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* DirtyCoward: Gene [=McDowell=] constantly berates Edward King for having fled NY "with the tail between the legs".
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* DirtyCoward: Gene [=McDowell=] constantly berates Edward King for having fled NY "with the tail between the legs".
%%legs". Given how formidable a fighter King is, this is obviously not about some defeat or dire combat situation. Gene berates Edward for selfishly fleeing his alleged responsabilities towards Five Points, unlike him.
**Kip.Kip prefers putting the blame on the rival gang, provoking a massive undergrouds war, rather than admit and assume he's the one who badly injured and sent through the window Karen, one of the prostitutes under the supervision of the Gold Diggers.
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* BadBoss: [[{{Sadist}} Edward King]] [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Gruesomely]] [[HeadCrushing kills]] one of his henchmen after the latter got [[YouHaveFailedMe defeated]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness incapacitated]] by Brad.
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* BadBoss: [[{{Sadist}} Edward King]] [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Gruesomely]] gruesomely]] [[HeadCrushing kills]] one of his henchmen after the latter got [[YouHaveFailedMe defeated]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness incapacitated]] by Brad.
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* BadBoss: [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Gruesomely]] [[HeadCrushing kills]] one of his henchmen after the latter got [[YouHaveFailedMe defeated]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness incapacitated]] by Brad.
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* BadBoss: [[{{Sadist}} Edward King]] [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Gruesomely]] [[HeadCrushing kills]] one of his henchmen after the latter got [[YouHaveFailedMe defeated]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness incapacitated]] by Brad.
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* BadBoss: [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Gruesomely]] [[HeadCrushing kills]] one of his henchmen after the latter got [[YouHaveFailedMe defeated]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefuleness incapacitated]] by Brad.
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* BadBoss: [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Gruesomely]] [[HeadCrushing kills]] one of his henchmen after the latter got [[YouHaveFailedMe defeated]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefuleness [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness incapacitated]] by Brad.
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* BadBoss: [[CruelAndUnusualDeath Gruesomely]] [[HeadCrushing kills]] one of his henchmen after the latter got [[YouHaveFailedMe defeated]] and [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefuleness incapacitated]] by Brad.
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%% * EyeScream: Plenty. [[spoiler: Edward especially gets his eye shot out by Luke.]]
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* FightingIrish: Most of the main characters are this, but Edward King exemplifies it, being an over two meters {{Hunk}} big enough to kill a man with his bare hands who co-founded and runs a series of increasingly violent "gangs", even when a more proper word for them would be [[RefugeInAudacity warband]].
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* FightingIrish: Most of the main characters are this, but Edward King exemplifies it, being an over two meters {{Hunk}} big enough to instantly kill a man with his bare hands who co-founded and runs a series of increasingly violent "gangs", even when a more proper word for them would be [[RefugeInAudacity warband]].
