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** In contrast to the cutesy females, all minor male characters are drawn far more detailed, with appearances ranging from unattractive to monstrously deformed, like they've come out of an entirely different series.
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* ReactionShot: In all of his series, Murata frequently uses the bottom right panel of pages for reaction shots. It gets to the point of an OverlyLongGag of Alice being confused or shocked at everyone and everything. Chapter 33 manages to end on something of an inversion of this use -- it's a splash page close-up of a puzzled Alice looking at Chiyuri, with the roach-girl holding at the bottom right of the page a mugshot picture of Alice with a blank expression.

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* ReactionShot: In all of his series, Murata frequently uses the bottom right panel of pages for reaction shots. It gets to the point of an OverlyLongGag of Alice being confused or shocked at everyone and everything. Chapter 33 manages to end on something of an inversion of this use -- it's [[https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/412261068279250945/1154896190693970032/F6lXJsdWAAEkceU.png a splash page close-up close-up]] of a puzzled Alice looking at Chiyuri, with the roach-girl holding at the bottom right of the page a mugshot picture of Alice with a blank expression.
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** The moment they set foot on Hibarigaoka Prison, Alice and Hanakamakiri are sexually harassed by fugly hobos and Alice is so disgusted that she itches to crush their necks with wire. Hanakamakiri casually offers himself to get himself searched by them in Alice's place, which only gets the girl more disturbed. Then Chiyuri shows up and makes the men stop and apologize just by shouting at them, much to Alice's surprise.

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** The moment they set foot on Hibarigaoka Prison, Alice and Hanakamakiri are sexually harassed by fugly hobos and Alice is so disgusted that she itches to crush their necks with wire. Hanakamakiri casually offers himself to get himself be searched by them in Alice's place, which only gets the girl more disturbed. Then Chiyuri shows up and makes the men stop and apologize just by shouting at them, much to Alice's surprise.
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* MurderIsTheBestSolution:
** While fighting Dinoponera, the thought of Murder crosses Chiyuri's mind before she dismisses it and manages to successfully talk things out instead. This sets her apart from Ms. "no choice but to kill" Alice, who later drives Dinoponera away with fear.
** The moment they set foot on Hibarigaoka Prison, Alice and Hanakamakiri are sexually harassed by fugly hobos and Alice is so disgusted that she itches to crush their necks with wire. Hanakamakiri casually offers himself to get himself searched by them in Alice's place, which only gets the girl more disturbed. Then Chiyuri shows up and makes the men stop and apologize just by shouting at them, much to Alice's surprise.


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* ReactionShot: In all of his series, Murata frequently uses the bottom right panel of pages for reaction shots. It gets to the point of an OverlyLongGag of Alice being confused or shocked at everyone and everything. Chapter 33 manages to end on something of an inversion of this use -- it's a splash page close-up of a puzzled Alice looking at Chiyuri, with the roach-girl holding at the bottom right of the page a mugshot picture of Alice with a blank expression.
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* CastHerd: The story starts divided between Chiyuri and Setsuna's side and Alice and Hanakamakiri's side, with other main characters like Imomushi, Kabutomushi and Gokiburi eventually converging into one place.

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* CastHerd: The story starts divided between Chiyuri and Setsuna's side and Alice and Hanakamakiri's side, with other main characters like Imomushi, Kabutomushi and Gokiburi eventually converging into one place. It's on chapter 33 that Chiyuri finally meets Alice.

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** Even without anything to do with the outbreak, nearly every male character in the series is a deranged rapist. The exceptions are Chiyuri's adoptive father Yamato and his pals, who he scolds for thinking he had any dirty thoughts over her. But once those minor hobos are infected, they act like deep down they did want to rape their adopted niece. Unlike in ''Arachnid'', though, female zombies are also shown trying to rape people.

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** Even without anything to do with the outbreak, nearly every male character in the series is a deranged rapist. The exceptions are Chiyuri's adoptive father Yamato and his pals, who he scolds for thinking he had any dirty thoughts over her. But once those the minor hobos are infected, they act like deep down they did want to rape their adopted niece. Unlike It's worth noting that unlike in ''Arachnid'', though, female zombies are also shown trying to rape people.


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** When Alice and Hanakamakiri arrive on Hibarigaoka Prison, they first come across a settlement of inhuman-looking male hobos between the front gates and the building. They waste no time in making Alice wish to murder them all, but a nearby Chiyuri orders the men to stop harassing Alice and they actually listen to her.


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** Chapter 33 frames Alice and Hanakamakiri arriving at Hibarigaoka Prison the same way as when Chiyuri and Setsuna got there. The same chapter has Chiyuri scolding some hobos for harrassing Alice while posing like when she ordered Setsuna to not bath naked on a fountain.


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** Megumi was all ready to bully Chiyuri and Setsuna when they arrived at Hibarigaoka Prison but when her dearest Alice-sama finally comes up she is nowhere to be seen.
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* StylisticSuck: The artwork for several flashbacks in the story are left as sketches. It's very jarring.


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* TracedArtwork:
** Several bug funfact scenes have artwork traced from research papers.
** Flashbacks to ''Arachnid'' early on are copy-pasted from that story. Later ones are traced and have a faded look to them.
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* AnimalMotifs: About every character has a bug motif, and once or twice per chapter the narrator will hype those critters with wild life trivia. Naturally, you can expect roaches to be treated like the apex of living beings here, even above spiders.

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* AnimalMotifs: About The series is set in an apparently mundane world but there is a bizarre and widespread obsession with insects among people and secret syndicates made up of mutants with bug-like superpowers rule over everyone. On every character has a bug motif, and once or twice per chapter the narrator will hype those critters hypes a character with (sometimes wildly inaccurate) wild life trivia. Naturally, you trivia about the critters they represent. You can expect roaches to be treated like the apex of living beings here, even above spiders.spiders, for their continued survival despite being on the bottom of the food chain.
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** The pod Alice is put in to connect her mind to worldwide news looks very similar to the teletransportation pod from ''Film/TheFly''.

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** The pod Alice is put in to connect her mind to worldwide news looks very similar to the teletransportation pod from ''Film/TheFly''.''Film/TheFly1986''.

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* CrimeOfSelfDefense: The staff of Hibarigaoka Prison, including the TokenGoodTeammate expy of Creator/ShotaroIshinomori, are all extremely hostile to Chiyuri and Setsuna, wanting nothing but to dominate, rape and kill them as soon as they ask Megumi for shelter. Despite this they act indignant when Chiyuri fights back against Juzuhigemushi or when Setsuna starts brutalizing a massive crowd of inmates who were all willing to rape her to death under Megumi's orders.



** Kabutomushi is known as a SadistTeacher and an indirect child killer for how she manages the Pomario orphanage, but even she feels sorry for Hibarigaoka Prison if her pupil Megumi "Gokiburi" Oki became its director.



* EyeTake: ''Several'' chapters end on a two-panel page layout with a close up of a shocked character's eyes as they react to somebody's appearance or statement.



** Hibarigaoka prison is made into a shelter from the zombie outbreak outside and Imomushi guides Chiyuri and Dinoponera to it, but she makes vague ominous remarks about not wanting to be there and for Chiyuri and Dinopo to survive no matter what. The place's director is Gokiburi of all people, who claims it's like Heaven in there but immediately starts bullying both of them before they even reach the main gate and has the two arrested as common prisoners for forced labor. It's also said by Bekkōbachi that the prison is actually intended to hold rebels from within the Organization under captivity.

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** Hibarigaoka prison is made into a shelter from the zombie outbreak outside and Imomushi guides Chiyuri and Dinoponera to it, but she makes vague ominous remarks about not wanting to be there and for Chiyuri and Dinopo to survive no matter what. The place's director is Gokiburi of all people, who claims it's like Heaven in there but immediately starts bullying both of them before they even reach the main gate and has the two arrested as common prisoners for forced labor. It's also said by Bekkōbachi that the prison is actually intended to hold rebels from within the Organization under captivity.captivity, and later Kabutomushi openly dissuades Alice from visiting it even though Gokiburi, for all her faults, is an ally to her.



** ...But afterwards the story makes a point of portraying Dinoponera [[ButtMonkey very weakly]] to the point she's repeatedly humiliated and practically disappears into the background. Then she meddles in the fight between Hebitonbo and Kamadouma from out of nowhere, instantly defeating Hebitonbo with her venom while declaring she's tired of playing nice in front of Chiyuri.

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** ...But afterwards the story makes a point of portraying Dinoponera [[ButtMonkey very weakly]] to the point she's repeatedly humiliated and practically disappears into the background. Then she meddles in the fight between Hebitonbo and Kamadouma from out of nowhere, instantly defeating Hebitonbo with her venom while declaring she's tired of playing nice in front of Chiyuri.Chiyuri... but ''then'' she gets harshly humiliated yet again by both Kocho and Sasori...



** There's plenty of female nudity here even compared to ''Arachnid'', even if, as usual, in a FanDisservice fashion with all the rape going on. Following ''Manga/ChoubuNoShinobi'', and unlike in ''Arachnid'', [[NippleAndDimed female nipples]] are uncensored on the volume releases.

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** There's plenty of female nudity here even compared to ''Arachnid'', even if, as usual, in a FanDisservice fashion with all the eroticized distress and rape going on. Following ''Manga/ChoubuNoShinobi'', and unlike in ''Arachnid'', [[NippleAndDimed female nipples]] are uncensored on the volume releases.



** The status of Setsuna's panties is used to express her vulnerability. She used to be threatening and untouchable, so readers couldn't get a look at her panties no matter how scenes framed her. As ''Caterpillar'' retconned Imomushi's positive opinion of Setsuna to make her seem weak, the redrawn scenes then did feature panty shots of the ant-girl. Following Setsuna's humiliation and gang-rape, her panties are ripped off and she starts to get portrayed as very frail and ineffective for some time, with way more outright nude shots of her than readers could know what to do with.
* RunningGag: A scene of Megumi imagining Alice in a wedding dress is followed by Alice imagining Imomushi and Hanakamakiri as groom and bride. It was immediately followed by the author doing the same gag in ''[[Manga/KamiKatsuWorkingForGodInAGodlessWorld Kaminaki Sekai no Onee-chan Katsudou]]'' with same framing, background and all, as its protagonist imagines herself [[BrotherSisterIncest marrying her own brother]].

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** The status of Setsuna's panties is ClothingDamage and panty shots are used to express her vulnerability. how vulnerable Setsuna is from scene to scene. She used to be threatening and untouchable, untouchable in ''Arachnid'', so readers [[MagicSkirt couldn't get a look at her panties panties]] no matter how scenes framed her. As ''Caterpillar'' retconned Imomushi's positive opinion of Setsuna to make her seem weak, the redrawn scenes then did feature panty shots of the ant-girl. Following Setsuna's humiliation and gang-rape, it is immediately pointed out how her panties are got ripped off and she starts to get portrayed as very frail and ineffective for some time, ineffective, with way more outright nude shots of her than readers could know what to do with.
with. Setsuna still hangs on to her damaged middle school sailor uniform for a whole year until it is sliced to pieces and she's left at Sasori's mercy, with the nurse remarking Setsuna hasn't grown at all since they last met.
* RunningGag: A scene of Megumi imagining Alice in a wedding dress is followed by Alice imagining Imomushi and Hanakamakiri as groom and bride. It was immediately followed by the author doing the same gag in ''[[Manga/KamiKatsuWorkingForGodInAGodlessWorld Kaminaki Sekai no Onee-chan Katsudou]]'' with same framing, recycled background and all, as its protagonist imagines herself [[BrotherSisterIncest marrying her own brother]].
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** When Imomushi [[AngerBornOfWorry argues with]] Hanakamakiri about him leaving her behind in the previous year without even spending a night together like they promised, she says he can't complain if she later rapes him. He answers it's not rape if it's consensual, since he loves her too, and gets her to calm down. The whole time, Alice is a few steps away thinking a fight could break out any second and comically reacting to everything they say.
--->'''Alice''': (Who's raping who?!)
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** The story refrains from showing Setsuna being raped by zombies during the Arachnid Hunt just to show her being assaulted by thugs a while afterwards. Then her zombiefication kicks him and she comically rapes one of the scumbags offscreen while the other two are unaware of what's actually going on.

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** The story refrains from showing Setsuna being raped by zombies during the Arachnid Hunt just to show her being assaulted by thugs a while afterwards. Then her zombiefication kicks him in and she comically and violently rapes one of the scumbags offscreen while the other two are unaware of what's actually going on.

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* BlackComedy: This ZombieApocalypse story was serialized during the COVID-19 pandemic. There's one scene where Kabutomushi, who's dressed in an essential [=McDonald's=] worker uniform, meets Alice and Hanakamakiri while jokingly acting like they're zombies and that she's going to whack them away. Hanakamakiri responds by casually pulling up a certificate that proves neither of them are infected.

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* BlackComedy: BlackComedy:
** One chapter opens with Setsuna comically crawling on the ground while begging Chiyuri for something, like she's zombiefied again. It turns out she just wants candy, with the implication that Chiyuri beat her to the ground to deny her some of it. Despite the lighthearted tone of the scene, it also reads as disturbing because it explicitly mirrors Alice amputating the limbs of the zombie girl covered in roaches in the prologue, as if implying Alice will eventually cripple or murder Setsuna too.
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This ZombieApocalypse story was serialized during the COVID-19 pandemic. There's one scene where Kabutomushi, who's dressed in an essential [=McDonald's=] worker uniform, meets Alice and Hanakamakiri while jokingly acting like they're zombies and that she's going to whack them away. Hanakamakiri responds by casually pulling up a certificate that proves neither of them are infected.

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* AnArmAndALeg: The story opens with Alice having just completely crippled a hapless zombie girl. In one of the next pages, there's a newspaper ''recommending'' the survivors amputate all four limbs of the not-exaclty-dead zombies to neutralize them. Said zombie girl is also notable because Dinoponera is juxtaposed with her in chapter 8, adding to multiple scenes from ''Caterpillar'' which had a suspicious subtext tying poor Dino to characters getting their limbs severed...

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* AnArmAndALeg: The story opens with Alice having just completely crippled a hapless nude zombie girl. In one of the next pages, there's girl covered in roaches with a hatchet, with a nearby newspaper ''recommending'' the telling survivors to amputate all four limbs of the not-exaclty-dead zombies to neutralize them. Said zombie girl is also notable This scene becomes ''very ominous'' because Dinoponera Dinoponera, who's friends with a "roach", is juxtaposed with her the chopped-up zombie girl in chapter 8, adding 8. It adds to multiple scenes from ''Caterpillar'' which had a suspicious subtext tying poor Dino to characters getting their limbs severed...



* BlackComedyRape: The story seems to be going for this to avoid making the mood too bleak despite relishing in the inevitable SequelEscalation of the attempted and successful rape scenes that actually get portrayed more graphically than in the ''Caterpillar'' seinen spinoff.

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* BlackComedy: This ZombieApocalypse story was serialized during the COVID-19 pandemic. There's one scene where Kabutomushi, who's dressed in an essential [=McDonald's=] worker uniform, meets Alice and Hanakamakiri while jokingly acting like they're zombies and that she's going to whack them away. Hanakamakiri responds by casually pulling up a certificate that proves neither of them are infected.
* BlackComedyRape: The story seems to be going ''Blattodea'' goes for this to avoid making the mood too bleak despite relishing in the inevitable SequelEscalation of the attempted and successful rape scenes that actually sometimes get portrayed more graphically than in the ''Caterpillar'' seinen spinoff.spinoff.
** The story refrains from showing Setsuna being raped by zombies during the Arachnid Hunt just to show her being assaulted by thugs a while afterwards. Then her zombiefication kicks him and she comically rapes one of the scumbags offscreen while the other two are unaware of what's actually going on.
** Setsuna tries to jump on a sleeping Chiyuri at night due to being a ZombieInfectee in heat, but it's PlayedForLaughs with the latter merely being annoyed and pinning Setsuna to the floor.



** Gokiburi was a main character in ''Arachnid'' with a supporting role in ''Caterpillar''. Instead of helping Chiyuri find Alice and solve the outbreak, she is highly hostile for no reason other than being her usual bossy-bitch-to-anyone-not-named-Alice self and takes Geji along to harass her and Dinoponera near the gates of Hibarigaoka prison. Likewise, Soichiro is supposed to be the TokenGoodTeammate in there, and yet his reasoning is that if two 16 year-old dumbos show up in the prison and refuse to be subjugated by his henchmen, then they are American spies and must be annihilated.

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** Gokiburi was a main character in ''Arachnid'' with a supporting role in ''Caterpillar''. Instead of helping Chiyuri find Alice and solve the outbreak, she is highly hostile for no reason other than being her usual bossy-bitch-to-anyone-not-named-Alice self and takes Geji along to harass her and Dinoponera near the gates of Hibarigaoka prison. Likewise, Soichiro is supposed to be the TokenGoodTeammate in there, and yet his reasoning is that if two 16 year-old to 17 years-old dumbos show up in the prison and refuse to be subjugated by his henchmen, then they are American spies and must be annihilated.
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* EvilVersusEvil: Unleashing the zombie apocalypse upon Japan is supposed to disrupt the plans of Serena Cervantes, an ageless [[TakeOverTheWorld global conqueror]] from America who's copy-pasted from ''Himenospia''. However, the "rebels" who know of Serena and oppose her continue to be more and more gratuitously evil to Chiyuri and Setsuna while the villainess is just sitting around eating noodles and monitoring Alice's actions.

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** Gokiburi was a main character in ''Arachnid'' with a supporting role in ''Caterpillar''. Instead of helping Chiyuri find Alice and solve the outbreak, she is highly hostile for no reason other than being her usual bossy-bitch-to-anyone-not-named-Alice self and takes Geji along to harass her and Dinoponera near the gates of Hibarigaoka prison.

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** Gokiburi was a main character in ''Arachnid'' with a supporting role in ''Caterpillar''. Instead of helping Chiyuri find Alice and solve the outbreak, she is highly hostile for no reason other than being her usual bossy-bitch-to-anyone-not-named-Alice self and takes Geji along to harass her and Dinoponera near the gates of Hibarigaoka prison. Likewise, Soichiro is supposed to be the TokenGoodTeammate in there, and yet his reasoning is that if two 16 year-old dumbos show up in the prison and refuse to be subjugated by his henchmen, then they are American spies and must be annihilated.



* TheDogWasTheMastermind: In yet another man behind the man twist, it is revealed that the mysterious Kirigirisu had outplayed everyone during the Arachnid Hunt to get Yoriko killed, and that he had not only Alice but also Sasori saved for unknown reasons.

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* TheDogWasTheMastermind: In yet another man behind the man twist, it is revealed that the mysterious Kirigirisu Kirigirisu, who barely did anything on-panel, had outplayed everyone during the Arachnid Hunt to get Yoriko killed, and that he killed. He had not only Alice but also Sasori saved for unknown reasons.



** Serena waxes philosophical about Cup Noodles, which she apparently never ate before, by calling it parasitism to take a traditional Chinese food and industrialize it to sell it back at them.



** Alice also thinks back to her former master Kumo. While the scene gives no context for new readers, he's who kidnapped and trained Alice as an adopted daughter but forced her to a DuelToTheDeath after her training was completed. She often recalls his advices to figure how to win fights.

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** Alice also thinks back to her former Alice's late master Kumo. While the scene gives no context for new readers, he's Kumo is repeatedly mentioned. He's who kidnapped and trained Alice as an adopted daughter but forced her to a DuelToTheDeath after her training was completed. She often recalls his advices to figure how to win fights.



** Yoriko Tajima, whose corpse is seen on-panel in chapter 3, weaseled her way into Alice's heart while hiding that she was the Boss and the one who ruined her family. She wanted to kill Alice for refusing to [[WeCanRuleTogether become her final wasp puppet]] and being a loose end despite caring for her on some level, but was foiled and killed by Kabutomushi. Alice regrets her death a lot, and worse, takes to heart her claims that she would have grown into a murderer no matter what.
** Kamakiri, the mantis assassin killed by Alice early in ''Arachnid'', appears on a flashback in chapter 15. While having tea with Kinohadakamakiri, [[PetTheDog he discourages him from abusing Hanakamakiri]] while he's watching.

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** Yoriko Tajima, whose corpse is seen on-panel in chapter 3, weaseled her way into Alice's heart while hiding that she was the Boss and the one who ruined her family. She wanted to kill Alice for refusing to [[WeCanRuleTogether become her final wasp puppet]] and being a loose end despite caring for her on some level, but was foiled and killed by Kabutomushi. Alice regrets her death a lot, and worse, takes to heart her claims that she would have grown into a murderer no matter what. \n This sequel elaborates on why Yoriko did all the absurd things she did by retconning her as the unwilling slave of a megalomaniacal American immortal girl.
** Kamakiri, the mantis assassin killed by Alice early in ''Arachnid'', appears on a flashback in chapter 15. While having tea with Kinohadakamakiri, [[PetTheDog he discourages him from abusing Hanakamakiri]] while he's watching.Hanakamakiri and tells the latter that by compulsively manipulating others he can kill or save anyone at will.



* WorldOfJerkass: Aside from good girl Chiyuri, every other character in the story is either very flawed or a straight up [[CartoonishSupervillainy cartoonish rapist supervillain]].



* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Strangely, the official synopsis for the story and Alice herself claim she killed the Boss even though she no, she didn't, it was Kabutomushi who blew Yoriko to her death. Alice was hopelessly immobile and being tossed off the building by Yoriko before Kabuto and Goki rescued her (Alice was even trying to reach out for the falling Yoriko in despair), and the event was reported correctly by Kirigirisu. Nonetheless, Hanakamakiri forces Alice to take over the Organization as he promised to Suzumebachi midway through the Arachnid Hunt.

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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Strangely, the official synopsis for the story and Alice herself claim she killed the Boss even though she no, she didn't, it didn't. It was Kabutomushi who blew Yoriko to her death. Alice was hopelessly immobile and being tossed off the building by Yoriko before Kabuto and Goki rescued her (Alice was even trying to reach out for the falling Yoriko in despair), and the event was reported correctly by Kirigirisu. Nonetheless, Hanakamakiri forces Alice to take over the Organization as he promised to Suzumebachi midway through the Arachnid Hunt.

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* InstantSedation: While Setsuna was shocked from being stripped and nearly slashed to death by Rin, Sasori was stinging her right on the butt with sleep-inducing venom at the same time. The sedation kicks in just a while later, while Setsuna was attempting to stab Sasori from behind.

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* InstantSedation: While Setsuna was shocked from being stripped and nearly slashed to death by Rin, Sasori was stinging her right on the butt with sleep-inducing venom toxin at the same time. The sedation kicks in just a while later, while Setsuna was attempting to stab Sasori from behind.



** Rin always speaks of herself as a ''"shinobi"'', leading to Setsuna's confusion as she somehow isn't familiar with that term despite knowing about ninjas and their weapons and techniques.

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** Rin always speaks uses the term "shinobi" instead of herself as a ''"shinobi"'', the more broad "ninja" to speak of herself, leading to Setsuna's confusion as she somehow isn't familiar with that term "shinobi" at all despite knowing about ninjas and ninjas, their weapons and techniques.


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** Setsuna being disturbed about how Rin reminds her of Alice's CrazyPrepared nature is immediately followed by her best friend Chiyuri being praised by Hibiki for being selfless like Alice.

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** Unlike in ''Caterpillar'' or ''Choubu no Shinobi'', some flashbacks and imagination scenes are [[StylisticSuck portrayed as sketches]].

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** Unlike in ''Caterpillar'' or ''Choubu no Shinobi'', some several flashbacks and imagination scenes are [[StylisticSuck portrayed just left as sketches]].rough drafts]]. ''Really'' rough ones.



** In chapter 27, Setsuna attempts to attack Rin in a BulletTime scene that mirrors her fighting Alice in chapter 46 of ''Arachnid'', complete with Setsuna backflipping over Rin. Unfortunately, Setsuna is the one who gets owned and almost killed in this instance while Rin is always a step ahead of her.

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** In chapter 27, Setsuna attempts to attack Rin in a BulletTime scene that mirrors her fighting Alice in chapter 46 of ''Arachnid'', complete with Setsuna backflipping over Rin. Unfortunately, Setsuna is the one who gets owned and almost killed in this instance while Rin is always a step ahead of her.her despite just standing in place.



** Even if she acts cute and really just wants companionship, Dinoponera is a very self-centered and violent {{cloudcuckoolander}}. She's seen bathing on a public fountain without a care in the world, and then greeting Chiyuri just to kick her in the face while calling Japanese people weak.

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** Even if she acts cute and really just wants companionship, Dinoponera is a very self-centered and violent {{cloudcuckoolander}}. She's seen bathing on a public fountain without a care in the world, and then greeting she greets Chiyuri just to kick her in the face while calling Japanese people weak.weak.
* EvenEvilHasStandards:
** In ''Arachnid'', Hibiki was an antagonist with a twisted sense of justice who attempted to get Alice raped and killed for killing their master Kumo even if she was forced to. In ''Blattodea'', he's disturbed enough by how Megumi rules over Hibarigaoka Prison that he helps Chiyuri in her quest to take her down.
** Megumi and Momoko are disturbed by how Setsuna started gleefully killing a crowd of prisoners around her like it was a game... instead of staying put and getting gangraped to death by those ''hundreds'' of men like the two wanted.



** Being partly themed after the works of Creator/LeijiMatsumoto, Chiyuri Haijima appears to be inspired by Tetsuro Hoshino from ''Manga/GalaxyExpress999'' in how she's a impoverished girl in shabby clothes who lost her family. She ends up looking all too similar to Mayuri Shiina from ''VisualNovel/SteinsGate'', though, and is likely named after her.

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** Being partly themed after the works of Creator/LeijiMatsumoto, Chiyuri Haijima appears to be inspired by Tetsuro Hoshino from ''Manga/GalaxyExpress999'' in how she's a impoverished girl in shabby clothes who lost her family. She ends up looking looks all too similar to Mayuri Shiina from ''VisualNovel/SteinsGate'', though, and is likely named after her.

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** Mixed with her usual gratuitous Thai is Dinoponera shouting "YEAH! Di mak!" after Chiyuri smashes a zombie's head open. She later says "WHY?!" in English out loud to Rin, seemingly establishing it as an habit even though she didn't have it before and had nobody to pick it up from during the time skip.

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** Mixed with her usual gratuitous Thai is Dinoponera shouting "YEAH! Di mak!" after Chiyuri smashes a zombie's head open. She later says "WHY?!" in multiple languages including English out loud to Rin, seemingly establishing it as an habit even though she didn't have it before and had nobody to pick it up from during the time skip.



* GratuitousSpanish: As a FunnyBackgroundEvent while Alice and Hanakamakiri are shooting zombies on chapter 23, one of the zombies has a FunTShirt reading "¡Llena mis adentros con mierda!" ("Fill my insides with shit!") on its back.

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* GratuitousSpanish: As a FunnyBackgroundEvent while Alice and Hanakamakiri GratuitousNinja: The gimmicky assassins in the series are shooting zombies on chapter 23, one explained to be the modern equivalent of the zombies has a FunTShirt reading "¡Llena mis adentros con mierda!" ("Fill my insides Feudal Japan ninjas seen in the ''Choubu no Shinobi'' prequel, with shit!") on its back. Yoriko having hired the last ninja clan in the country to work for her when she started the Organization. During the events of ''Blattodea'', Rin is the only one specifically calling herself a "shinobi" and tossing shuriken around.


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* GratuitousSpanish: As a FunnyBackgroundEvent while Alice and Hanakamakiri are shooting zombies on chapter 23, one of the zombies has a FunTShirt reading "¡Llena mis adentros con mierda!" ("Fill my insides with shit!") on its back.


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* InsistentTerminology:
** The characters [[NotUsingTheZWord always refer to the zombies as "ants"]], which leads to things like Setsuna calling herself "half-ant" due to being a ZombieInfectee even though she's already the only Dinoponera ant-themed character in comics to begin with.
** Characters always refer to Alice by her full name with the "Alice[=/=]Arisu" part in katakana. Whenever Alice herself does that, [[PronouncingMyNameForYou her dialogue spells out]] the proper homophone kanji her given name is supposed to be written with.
** Rin always speaks of herself as a ''"shinobi"'', leading to Setsuna's confusion as she somehow isn't familiar with that term despite knowing about ninjas and their weapons and techniques.
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* ContinuityNod: The story ties back to ''Choubu no Shinobi'' by establishing that Yoriko started the Organization by hiring the last clan of ninjas who lived in a village isolated from the rest of Japanese society. The Rin who works for Kagimushi is said to be a descendant of Rin and Hanza from that spinoff.
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* TheCameo: One of the trivia scenes about reproduction in cockroaches shows Moriyama from ''Manga/KillingBites'' trying and failing to woo a girl.
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** Despite having spent time at Pomario when she was a child, Chiyuri is very naive and oblivious to anything regarding the Organization and how it might be a bad idea to bring Setsuna to them even if it's to Alice. Due to plot contrivance reasons, Setsuna appears to not ever have told her anything either.
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* RunningGag: A scene of Megumi imagining Alice in a wedding dress is followed by Alice imagining Imomushi and Hanakamakiri as groom and bride. It was immediately followed by the author doing the same gag in ''Kaminaki Sekai no Onee-chan Katsudou'', same framing and all, as its protagonist imagines herself [[BrotherSisterIncest marrying her own brother]].

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* RunningGag: A scene of Megumi imagining Alice in a wedding dress is followed by Alice imagining Imomushi and Hanakamakiri as groom and bride. It was immediately followed by the author doing the same gag in ''Kaminaki ''[[Manga/KamiKatsuWorkingForGodInAGodlessWorld Kaminaki Sekai no Onee-chan Katsudou'', Katsudou]]'' with same framing framing, background and all, as its protagonist imagines herself [[BrotherSisterIncest marrying her own brother]].

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** Chiyuri trusts Hibiki to capture a rampaging Setsuna while believing him to be far nicer a guy than he really is.



* DropDeadGorgeous: The ''Anime/AgentAika''-esque non-lethal version of the trope sees use in how Setsuna keeps getting knocked out while nude, with increasingly exploitative views of her defenseless body.

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* DropDeadGorgeous: The ''Anime/AgentAika''-esque Used in a non-lethal version of the trope sees use in how Setsuna keeps getting sense comparable to PantyFighter series like ''Anime/AgentAika'' or ''VideoGame/SenranKagura''. There's a fixation on Setsuna, who has been violated on-panel while zombified with a dead stare on her face, being repeatedly and specifically knocked out while nude, nude and with increasingly exploitative views of her defenseless body.



** When Alice [[UnsettlingGenderReveal learns Hanakamakiri is a crossdressing boy]], she's so taken aback that Hanakamakiri has to kill the zombie she was trying to warn him about. She remains flabbergasted for a minute before foaming at the mouth and fainting, realizing she spent days walking around half-naked, getting back massages, being taught about underwear sizes and even playing the Pocky Game with a boy and not a girl.

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** When Alice [[UnsettlingGenderReveal learns Hanakamakiri is a crossdressing boy]], she's so taken aback that Hanakamakiri has to kill the zombie she was trying to warn him about. She remains flabbergasted for a minute before foaming at the mouth and fainting, realizing she spent days walking around half-naked, getting back massages, being taught talking about underwear sizes and even playing the Pocky Game with a boy and not a girl.
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* ArentYouGoingToRavishMe: While guiding Alice to Hibarigaoka Prison, Hanakamakiri wears perfume that lures the zombies to himself. Without knowing of either this or the fact her ElegantGothicLolita partner is a crossdressing boy, Alice watches the zombies ignore her and starts feeling inadequate as a girl compared to him.
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** When Setsuna fights Rin the butterfly-like ninja, there are callbacks, and therefore spoilers, to the events and ending of ''Choubu no Shinobi''.

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** Hanakamakiri claims nobody will force Alice to become the Boss if she hates the idea of it so much. The boy has been conditioned for years to be deceitful towards others and yet even he cannot say that with a straight face.

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** Hanakamakiri claims nobody will force Alice to become the Boss if she hates the idea of it so much. The boy has been conditioned for years to be deceitful towards deceive others and yet even he cannot say that with a straight face.



** In chapter 20, when Hibiki is talking crap about all the naked women before him, Setsuna asks him if he's LGBT. Like when Alice and Megumi prevously asked this in ''Arachnid'', he bluntly confirms it just to backpedal on his words right afterwards.

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** In chapter 20, when Hibiki is talking crap about all the naked women before him, Setsuna asks him if he's LGBT."LGBT". Like when Alice and Megumi prevously asked this in ''Arachnid'', he bluntly confirms it just to backpedal on his words right afterwards.



* DefeatByModesty: Karina can easily disrupt Alice's traps by touching the strings she sets all over and around herself and turning them into a sort of vibrator that makes her too aroused to fight properly.



* IDieFree: When confronted by Bekkobachi over joining the Organization or being executed, Alice once again says she'd rather die than lose her identity and freedom to them. Alice's wasp-aunt notices traps all over the corridor and just incapacitates the spider-girl by... [[DefeatByModesty turning her threads into a vibrator]]... instead of shooting her to death, though.



* JoinOrDie: Implied when Hanakamakiri declares Alice the new "Boss" while backed up by a squad of armed soldiers and Alice has no choice but to follow. After Alice defeats Hanakamakiri in her escape attempt, Bekkobachi directly orders her to do what they say or die. She doesn't go through with her threats, though.

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* JoinOrDie: Implied when Hanakamakiri declares Alice the new "Boss" while backed up by a squad of armed soldiers and Alice has no choice but to follow. After Alice defeats Hanakamakiri in her escape attempt, Bekkobachi directly orders her to do what they say or die. She doesn't go through with Alice ends up accepting the deal, so long as nobody tries to erase her threats, though.name and sense of self.



* PuppetQueen: Alice is pressured to become the Organization's Boss until she accepts, under the pretense of finding a solution to the zombie outbreak. However, the order of assassins has secretly already been taken over by a foreign "queen" named Serena Cervantes who considered Yoriko a failure and wants to make Alice into her perfect slave.



* RefusalOfTheCall: Alice tells Hanakamakiri it was Kumo's dying wish for her to be free from the Organization's grasp, so it doesn't sit right with her to work for them even as the new Boss. Through a HannibalLecture and returning Alice's prized RazorFloss dagger, Bekkōbachi tries convincing her to quit whining and accept her new role already. Even then, Alice remarks that even if she could enjoy being a ShadowDictator, she would only do it if the late Yoriko's vision for Japan really justifies the genocide caused to achieve it.

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* RefusalOfTheCall: Alice tells Hanakamakiri that she would only enjoy being the new Organization Boss if she concluded that their actions are justified, and that it was Kumo's dying wish for her to be free from the Organization's grasp, so it doesn't sit right with her to work for them even as the new Boss. grasp. Through a HannibalLecture and HannibalLecture, returning Alice's prized RazorFloss dagger, dagger and pointing a firing squad at her, Bekkōbachi tries convincing forces her to quit whining and accept her new role already. Even then, Alice remarks that even if she could enjoy being a ShadowDictator, she would only do it if the late Yoriko's vision for Japan really justifies the genocide caused to achieve it.role.

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** Alice starts getting rather enamored with Hanakamakiri despite her trust issues only worsening after he attacked her with killing intent for defying the Organization, because she's impressed with his fighting skills and how nice he seems to be outside of the dirty work he's expected to do for the Organization. This doesn't get anywhere, though, as Hanakamakiri soon reunites with Imomushi and Alice is happy for them.

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** Alice starts getting rather enamored with Hanakamakiri despite her trust issues only worsening after he attacked her with killing intent for defying the Organization, because she's impressed with his fighting skills and how nice he seems to be outside of the dirty work he's expected to do for the Organization.do. This doesn't get anywhere, though, as Hanakamakiri soon reunites with Imomushi and Alice is happy for them.



* RefusalOfTheCall: Alice tells Hanakamakiri it was Kumo's dying wish for her to be free from the Organization's grasp, so it doesn't sit right with her to work for them even as the new Boss. Through a HannibalLecture and returning Alice's prized RazorFloss dagger, Bekkōbachi tries convincing her to quit whining and accept her new role already. Even then, Alice remarks that even if she could enjoy being a ShadowDictator, she would only to it if the late Yoriko's vision for Japan really justifies the genocide caused to achieve it.

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* RefusalOfTheCall: Alice tells Hanakamakiri it was Kumo's dying wish for her to be free from the Organization's grasp, so it doesn't sit right with her to work for them even as the new Boss. Through a HannibalLecture and returning Alice's prized RazorFloss dagger, Bekkōbachi tries convincing her to quit whining and accept her new role already. Even then, Alice remarks that even if she could enjoy being a ShadowDictator, she would only to do it if the late Yoriko's vision for Japan really justifies the genocide caused to achieve it. it.
* RememberTheNewGuy:
** Chiyuri befriends Dinoponera a few hours before the Arachnid Hunt, leading to a few inconsistencies with Dino's scenes back in ''Arachnid'', in which she never mentioned having made a friend or even having fought somebody strong before Alice.
** Yamato is revealed to be one of Osamushi's pupils. In ''Caterpillar'', only Shoichiro was shown working closely with Osamushi and no other pupils were mentioned by name.



** Rin Saotome is based on the heroine from the previous spinoff in the series, ''Manga/ChoubuNoShinobi''.

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** Rin Saotome is based on the heroine from the previous spinoff in the series, ''Manga/ChoubuNoShinobi''.''Manga/ChoubuNoShinobi'', in a case of her being an identical-looking descendant.

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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Hanakamakiri becomes rather intimate with Alice while acting as a maid but tries to beat her into submission as soon as she steps out of line. He even throws [[SchmuckBait a fake apology]] in after his initial threat to try to stab her, with Alice guessing he's been conditioned to deceive others as much as herself.

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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Hanakamakiri becomes rather intimate with Alice while acting as a maid but just to lower her guard and tries to beat her into submission as soon as she steps out of line. He even throws [[SchmuckBait a fake apology]] in after his initial threat to try to stab her, with Alice guessing he's been conditioned to deceive others as much as herself.



* CrazyPrepared: Hanakamakiri assumes that by posing as a friendly maid around Alice for long enough and swiftly beating her to death at the first opportunity, he could be the one to defeat her spider web trickery. However, the apparently defenseless Alice was ProperlyParanoid enough to hack a blast door to slam right over him.
-->'''Alice''': I was able to walk through your trap without even knowing its existence. However, if you had shown... even a bit of disdain for me in your heart, I assure you... that you couldn't even have set it up.



** Even if she acts cute and really just wants companionship, Dinoponera is a very self-centered and violent {{cloudcuckoolander}}. She's seen bathing on a public fountain without a care in the world, then greeting Chiyuri just to kick her in the face while calling Japanese people weak.

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** Even if she acts cute and really just wants companionship, Dinoponera is a very self-centered and violent {{cloudcuckoolander}}. She's seen bathing on a public fountain without a care in the world, and then greeting Chiyuri just to kick her in the face while calling Japanese people weak.



** Alice starts getting rather enamored with Hanakamakiri even after he beat her up with intent to kill her for defying the Organization, because she's impressed with his fighting skills and how nice he seems to be outside of the dirty work he's expected to do for the Organization.

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** Alice starts getting rather enamored with Hanakamakiri even despite her trust issues only worsening after he beat attacked her up with killing intent to kill her for defying the Organization, because she's impressed with his fighting skills and how nice he seems to be outside of the dirty work he's expected to do for the Organization.Organization. This doesn't get anywhere, though, as Hanakamakiri soon reunites with Imomushi and Alice is happy for them.



** Alice while lamenting Yoriko's and Suzumebachi's deaths.
** Dinoponera while confessing to Chiyuri and Yamato she did get raped and zombified by the army ants.
** PlayedForLaughs when Chiyuri realizes Yamato was working for the Organization the whole time. What shocks her is him actually having a job at all.

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** A miserable Alice makes this pose while lamenting Yoriko's and Suzumebachi's deaths.
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** Dinoponera falls to her knees in tears while confessing to Chiyuri and Yamato she did get raped and temporarily zombified by the army ants.
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ants. It's then PlayedForLaughs when Chiyuri realizes also collapses upon learning that Yamato was working for the Organization the whole time. What shocks her is him actually having a job at all.

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* {{Anticlimax}}: ''Arachnid'' ended with Kabutomushi and Gokiburi looking to invade the Organization's headquarters in search of Alice, with Kabutomushi being noted to have a sense of duty over it. A year later, Gokiburi ended up working for the Organization again as a prison director but failed to find Alice despite her surveillance drones and is left in the dark about the whole "make Alice the Boss" thing. As for Kabutomushi, she's just hanging out at an abandoned WcDonalds. Some SequelHook payoff this is...

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* {{Anticlimax}}: ''Arachnid'' ended with Kabutomushi and Gokiburi looking to invade the Organization's headquarters in search of Alice, with Kabutomushi being noted to have a sense of duty over it. A year later, Gokiburi ended up working for the Organization again as a prison director but failed to find Alice despite her surveillance drones and is left in the dark about the whole "make Alice the Boss" thing. As for Kabutomushi, she's just hanging out at an abandoned WcDonalds.[=WcDonald's=]. Some SequelHook payoff this is...



* BlandNameProduct: After disappearing for a whole year in-universe, Kabutomushi is reintroduced hanging around an abandoned [="WcDonald's"=] restaurant in uniform as she casually blasts zombies left and right.



** Kabutomushi herself finally reappears with no build up whatsoever, just casually killing zombies while "working" at an abandoned WcDonalds.

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** Kabutomushi herself finally reappears with no build up whatsoever, just casually killing zombies while "working" at an abandoned WcDonalds.[=WcDonald's=].



* CasualDangerDialogue: Kabutomushi first appears "working" at a WcDonalds in uniform while violently refusing to give Happy Meals to the nearby zombies. It's seen that Imomushi has been living with her, and the two talk about what's going around Hibarigaoka Prison while killing zombies.

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* CasualDangerDialogue: Kabutomushi first appears "working" at a WcDonalds [=WcDonald's=] in uniform while violently refusing to give Happy Meals to the nearby zombies. It's seen that Imomushi has been living with her, and the two talk about what's going around Hibarigaoka Prison while killing zombies.



** After a whole year wandering about without making any progress, Alice is found and saved by Hanakamakiri and the Organization's soldiers. Despite so much effort trying to be free of them, Alice admits she might like to be their Boss and murder people at this point. The whole time Alice was in danger, Gokiburi was unable to find her despite acquiring a ton of security drones and Kabutomushi, who was soooo determined to protect Alice, was slacking in a WcDonalds.

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** After a whole year wandering about without making any progress, Alice is found and saved by Hanakamakiri and the Organization's soldiers. Despite so much effort trying to be free of them, Alice admits she might like to be their Boss and murder people at this point. The whole time Alice was in danger, Gokiburi was unable to find her despite acquiring a ton of security drones and Kabutomushi, who was soooo determined to protect Alice, was slacking in a WcDonalds.[=WcDonald's=].



* WcDonalds: After disappearing for a whole year in-universe, Kabutomushi is reintroduced hanging around an abandoned WcDonalds restaurant in uniform as she casually blasts zombies left and right.



* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Back in ''Arachnid'', Kamadouma and Geji were assumed to have fallen prey to the army ants but they show up looking just fine at Hibarigaoka Prison. This left Kabutomushi as the one important character who's suspiciously absent, especially considering Gokiburi was with her looking to rescue Alice from the Organization but has instead joined them as the director of the prison. Then, in Chapter 17, Kabutomushi finally shows up... dressed like a WcDonalds employee and just having fun killing zombies on the streets. Alice? What's an Alice?

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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Back in ''Arachnid'', Kamadouma and Geji were assumed to have fallen prey to the army ants but they show up looking just fine at Hibarigaoka Prison. This left Kabutomushi as the one important character who's suspiciously absent, especially considering Gokiburi was with her looking to rescue Alice from the Organization but has instead joined them as the director of the prison. Then, in Chapter 17, Kabutomushi finally shows up... dressed like a WcDonalds [=WcDonald's=] employee and just having fun killing zombies on the streets. Alice? What's an Alice?

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