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* InMediaRes: The story begins in the middle of one of the orphan's missions.
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* InMediaRes: The story begins in the middle of one of the orphan's missions.orphans missions.
* ItOnlyWorksOnce: Anything that's used ''against'' the Academy becomes this, as they have the resources and knowledge advantage to break it down, analyze it, and develop a working countermeasure for next time.
* ItOnlyWorksOnce: Anything that's used ''against'' the Academy becomes this, as they have the resources and knowledge advantage to break it down, analyze it, and develop a working countermeasure for next time.
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* BavarianFireDrill: Sylvester uses one to get the Headmistress of Mothmont to institute a quarantine by leaving her a polite note in a locked room ''signed in his own blood.'' The Bad Seeds then turn this around on him by catching on and pretending to be agents of the Academy while telling the Headmistress that the Lambsbridge Gang are the Bad Seeds.
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* AndThenWhat: Sylvester uses this rhetorical tactic against Mary, pointing out that even if she kills them all and escapes, she'll ''never'' be able to trust her creator again.
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* HannibalLecture: Sly uses this to turn the tables on his interrogator in Taking Root 1.7, using his enhanced intelligence and some quick guesswork to learn far more about her than she manages to learn about him, then turn this around to make her doubt herself. He's doing well enough that when TheCavalry arrives to rescue him, he's ''disappointed''.
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* HannibalLecture: Sly uses this to turn the tables on his interrogator Mary, who has him at gunpoint, in Taking Root 1.7, using his enhanced intelligence and some quick guesswork to learn far more about her than she manages to learn about him, then turn this around to make her doubt herself. He's doing well enough that when TheCavalry arrives to rescue him, he's ''disappointed''.
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* TalkingTheMonsterToDeath: Sylvester does this to Mary, his Bad Seed counterpart, over the course of the second part of the first arc, steadily picking away at her (engineered) love for her creator, and convincing her that he had abandoned her as a disposable tool.
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* TapOnTheHead: Discussed by Sly when he notes that if the child clone Gordon knocked out doesn't come to soon, they would suffer major brain damage.
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* AlternateUniverse: The divergence point seems to be a massive leap forward in biotechnology sometime in the early 19th century.
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* AlternateUniverse: AlternateUniverse:
** The divergence point seems to be a massive leap forward in biotechnology sometime in the early 19thcentury.century.
** Lillian mentions an Indian Empire that tried making a slave race about a decade before the story.
** The divergence point seems to be a massive leap forward in biotechnology sometime in the early 19th
** Lillian mentions an Indian Empire that tried making a slave race about a decade before the story.
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* TheRoaringTwenties: Takes place in an alternate version of the 1920s.
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* SlaveRace: The Indian Empire tried making a literal slave race of humans, but it didn't work.
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* HannibalLecture: Sly uses this to turn the tables on his interrogator in Taking Root 1.7, using his enhanced intelligence and some quick guesswork to learn far more about her than she manages to learn about him.
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* HannibalLecture: Sly uses this to turn the tables on his interrogator in Taking Root 1.7, using his enhanced intelligence and some quick guesswork to learn far more about her than she manages to learn about him.him, then turn this around to make her doubt herself. He's doing well enough that when TheCavalry arrives to rescue him, he's ''disappointed''.
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* HannibalLecture: Sly uses this to turn the tables on his interrogator in Taking Root 1.7, using his enhanced intelligence and some quick guesswork to learn far more about her than she manages to learn about him.
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* AcademyOfAdventure: Radham Academy are the ones funding the group, but only one of them is a student.
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* AcademyOfAdventure: Radham Academy are ArtificialHuman: Most of the ones funding the group, but only one main cast was created as a group of them is a student.artificial humans intended to work together.
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** The dime store novel that had a man in a bird mask is referencing ''Face'', a thriller story that was focused-tested at the same time Pact was.
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** The dime store novel that had a man in a bird mask is referencing ''Face'', a thriller story that was focused-tested at the same time Pact was.was.
* TrueCompanions: The main characters (excluding Lillian) were created to serve this role to each other.
* TrueCompanions: The main characters (excluding Lillian) were created to serve this role to each other.
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* MarshmallowHell: Happens to Sly once upon getting hugged by an older student in Taking Root 2.5.
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* MarshmallowHell: Happens to Sly once upon getting hugged by an older student in Taking Root 2.1.5.
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* MarshmallowHell: Happens to Sly once upon getting hugged by an older student in Taking Root 2.5.
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** "Barber John and the Dark Forest Monster" is ''{{Literature/Pact}}'s'' climactic chapter, again told from the perspective of the villain, [[spoiler:Barbatorem]].
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** "Barber John and the Dark Forest Monster" is ''{{Literature/Pact}}'s'' climactic chapter, again told from the perspective of the villain, [[spoiler:Barbatorem]].[[spoiler:Barbatorem possessing Johannes]].
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** "Barber John and the Dark Forest Monster" is ''{{Literature/Pact}}'s'' climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or the villain.
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** "Barber John and the Dark Forest Monster" is ''{{Literature/Pact}}'s'' climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or of the villain.villain, [[spoiler:Barbatorem]].
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** "Barber John and the dark forest monster" is ''{{Literature/Pact}}'s'' climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or the villain.
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** "Barber John and the dark forest monster" Dark Forest Monster" is ''{{Literature/Pact}}'s'' climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or the villain.
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* ShoutOut: The dime store novels in [[https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2015/03/21/taking-root-1-5/ Taking Root 1.5]] reference previous works of Wildbow's.
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* ShoutOut: The dime store novels in [[https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2015/03/21/taking-root-1-5/ Taking Root 1.5]] reference previous works of Wildbow's. Wildbow's:
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** The Doll Man series is the story of [Literature/Worm]] from the perspective of Mannequin.
** "Barber John and the dark forest monster" is [[Literature/Pact]]'s climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or the villain.
** "Barber John and the dark forest monster" is [[Literature/Pact]]'s climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or the villain.
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** The Doll Man series is the story of [Literature/Worm]] ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' from the perspective of Mannequin.
** "Barber John and the dark forest monster" is[[Literature/Pact]]'s ''{{Literature/Pact}}'s'' climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or the villain.
** "Barber John and the dark forest monster" is
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* ShoutOut: The titles of the dime store novels in [[https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2015/03/21/taking-root-1-5/ Taking Root 1.5]] reference both ''Worm'' and ''Pact''.
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* ShoutOut: The titles of the dime store novels in [[https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2015/03/21/taking-root-1-5/ Taking Root 1.5]] reference both ''Worm'' previous works of Wildbow's.
** The Doll Man series is the story of [Literature/Worm]] from the perspective of Mannequin.
** "Barber John and''Pact''.the dark forest monster" is [[Literature/Pact]]'s climactic chapter, again told from the perspective or the villain.
** The dime store novel that had a man in a bird mask is referencing ''Face'', a thriller story that was focused-tested at the same time Pact was.
** The Doll Man series is the story of [Literature/Worm]] from the perspective of Mannequin.
** "Barber John and
** The dime store novel that had a man in a bird mask is referencing ''Face'', a thriller story that was focused-tested at the same time Pact was.
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* MadScientist: They are everywhere. Radham Academy is suggested to be one of many, institutions of scientists which twist and warp the communities that spring up around them.
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* MadScientist: They are everywhere. Radham Academy is suggested to be one of many, many institutions of scientists which twist and warp the communities that spring up around them.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The viewpoint characters are a group of tweens, only one of whom (a budding MadScientist) is not an ArtificialHuman.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The viewpoint characters are a group of tweens, only one of whom (a budding MadScientist) is not an ArtificialHuman.ArtificialHuman.
* ShoutOut: The titles of the dime store novels in [[https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2015/03/21/taking-root-1-5/ Taking Root 1.5]] reference both ''Worm'' and ''Pact''.
* ShoutOut: The titles of the dime store novels in [[https://twigserial.wordpress.com/2015/03/21/taking-root-1-5/ Taking Root 1.5]] reference both ''Worm'' and ''Pact''.
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* {{Biopunk}}: Bioaugmentation is a very common thing in this universe.
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* {{Biopunk}}: Bioaugmentation is a very common thing in this universe. universe.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Happens in the very first chapter when the [[NoNameGiven snake charmer]] is EatenAlive by his [[MixAndMatchCritters cat-snake]], which has flesh-dissolving venom. It also eats him feet-first, meaning he survives longer.
* FleshGolem: The stitched.
* CruelAndUnusualDeath: Happens in the very first chapter when the [[NoNameGiven snake charmer]] is EatenAlive by his [[MixAndMatchCritters cat-snake]], which has flesh-dissolving venom. It also eats him feet-first, meaning he survives longer.
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* MixAndMatchCritters: The first to appear is some kind of hybrid between a cat and a snake, although it has traits belonging to neither animal.
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* MadScientist: They are everywhere. There's enough Radham Academy is suggested to be one of them many, institutions of scientists which twist and warp the communities that a group of orphans came make a living hunting them down and reporting them to the Academy. Who may or may not be an organization of MadScientist's.
spring up around them.
* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The viewpoint characters are a group oftweens.tweens, only one of whom (a budding MadScientist) is not an ArtificialHuman.
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''[[https://twigserial.wordpress.com Twig]]'' is the third WebSerialNovel from Wildbow, following on from his superhero novel ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and the Modern Fantasy/Horror ''{{Literature/Pact}}''. The story follows a group of children from the Lambsbridge Orphanage; Sly, Gordon, Helen, Lillian and Jamie, as they make their way in a world where the [[BackFromTheDead dead can come back]], {{Immortality}} is within reach and [[BioAugmentation bio-engineered monsters]] roam the streets
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''[[https://twigserial.wordpress.com Twig]]'' is the third WebSerialNovel from Wildbow, following on from his superhero novel ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and the Modern Fantasy/Horror ''{{Literature/Pact}}''. The story follows a group of children from the Lambsbridge Orphanage; Sly, Gordon, Helen, Lillian and Jamie, as they make their way in a world where the [[BackFromTheDead dead can come back]], {{Immortality}} is within reach and [[BioAugmentation bio-engineered monsters]] roam the streets
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{{Biopunk}}: Bioaugmentation is a very common thing in this universe.
*GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke
GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke: The universe of ''Twig'' appears to be built around biotech.
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''[[https://twigserial.wordpress.com Twig]]'' is the third WebSerialNovel from Wildbow, following on from his superhero novel ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and the Modern Fantasy/Horror ''{{Literature/Pact}}''. The story follows a group of children from the Lambsbridge Orphanage; Sly, Gordon, Helen, Lillian and Jamie, as they make their way in a world where the [[BackFromTheDead dead can come back]], {{Immortality}} is within reach and [[BioAugmentation BioEngineered bio-engineered monsters]] roam the streets
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->''[[GeneticEngineeringIsTheNewNuke The year is 1921, and a little over a century has passed since a great mind unraveled the underpinnings of life itself.]]''
''[[https://twigserial.wordpress.com Twig]]'' is the third WebSerialNovel from Wildbow, following on from his superhero novel ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and the Modern Fantasy/Horror ''{{Literature/Pact}}''. The story follows a group of children from the Lambsbridge Orphanage; Sly, Gordon, Helen, Lillian and Jamie, as they make their way in a world where the [[BackFromTheDead dead can come back]], {{Immortality}} is within reach and [[BioAugmentation BioEngineered monsters]] roam the streets
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''[[https://twigserial.wordpress.com Twig]]'' is the third WebSerialNovel from Wildbow, following on from his superhero novel ''{{Literature/Worm}}'' and the Modern Fantasy/Horror ''{{Literature/Pact}}''. The story follows a group of children from the Lambsbridge Orphanage; Sly, Gordon, Helen, Lillian and Jamie, as they make their way in a world where the [[BackFromTheDead dead can come back]], {{Immortality}} is within reach and [[BioAugmentation BioEngineered monsters]] roam the streets
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