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I don't think we're supposed to add stuff like that. I also tried revising something else in this entry.
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* GothGirlsKnowMagic: As mentioned directly above and below, Ambrosia is a {{Goth}} vampiress with all the supernatural powers that come with it.
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* GothGirlsKnowMagic: As mentioned directly above and below, Ambrosia is a vampiric {{Goth}} vampiress with all the supernatural powers that come with it.
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* GothGirlsKnowMagic: As mentioned above and below, Ambrosia is a {{Goth}} vampiress with all the supernatural powers that come with it.
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* GothGirlsKnowMagic: As mentioned directly above and below, Ambrosia is a {{Goth}} vampiress with all the supernatural powers that come with it.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Winona's eyes are blood red, but she's an extroverted (if a bit [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]]) young ghost girl.
* ScaryStitches: Subverted as while Victoria's body is covered in stitches, she's a CuddleBug who cares deeply for and easily makes friends with others.
* ScaryStitches: Subverted as while Victoria's body is covered in stitches, she's a CuddleBug who cares deeply for and easily makes friends with others.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: Subverted. Winona's eyes are blood red, but she's an extroverted (if a bit [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]]) young ghost girl.
* ScaryStitches:Subverted as while Subverted. While Victoria's body is covered in stitches, she's a CuddleBug who cares deeply for and easily makes friends with others.
* ScaryStitches:
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* {{Mummy}}: Sanura.
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* {{Mummy}}: Sanura.Sanura is a mummy who's over 3,000 years old.
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Winona.
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Winona.Winona became a ghost after getting hit and killed by a speeding truck.
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** As mentioned above, Cordelia enjoys watching Creator/{{Disney}} movies.
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* BespectacledCutie: Cordelia wears purple oval glasses, is a [[NiceGuy NiceGirl]], and is described as quite beautiful.
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* BespectacledCutie: Cordelia wears purple oval glasses, is a [[NiceGuy NiceGirl]], Nice Girl]], and is described as quite beautiful.
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* {{Goth}}: Between her black and gray clothes and cynical attitude, Ambrosia fits this to a T.
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* {{Goth}}: Between her black and gray black-and-gray clothes and cynical attitude, Ambrosia fits this to a T.
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* TheMatchmaker: The Luv Monsters are a renowned dating agency that provides matchmaking services to both monsters ''and'' humans. In the story, they set Jermaine up with a young woman named Cordelia as a surprise for him.
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* TheMatchmaker: The Luv Monsters are a renowned dating agency that provides provide matchmaking services to both monsters ''and'' humans. In the story, they set Jermaine up with a young woman named Cordelia as a surprise for him.
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** A few to ''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}.
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** A few to ''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}.''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}''.
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* BandageBabe: Sanura, being a SeductiveMummy.
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We can use that redirect and How To Write An Example (please see what it states yourself) mentions we're not supposed to edit trope names.
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* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: Cordelia. She's a CuddleBug and ThePollyanna who cares about and believes in the good in everybody.
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* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: NiceGirl: Cordelia. She's a CuddleBug and ThePollyanna who cares about and believes in the good in everybody.
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* BespectacledCutie: Cordelia wears purple oval glasses and is described as quite beautiful.
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* BespectacledCutie: Cordelia wears purple oval glasses glasses, is a [[NiceGuy NiceGirl]], and is described as quite beautiful.
* InLoveWithLove: Cordelia is described as being in love with the concept of love and ThinksLikeARomanceNovel.
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* InLoveWithLove: Cordelia is described as being in love with the concept of love and ThinksLikeARomanceNovel.
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** Lucine being a BloodKnight werewolf who wears a red shirt makes her similar to [[Characters/PokemonGenerationVIIFamiliesRowletToComfey Midnight Form Lycanroc]].
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** Lucine being a BloodKnight werewolf who wears a red shirt makes her similar to [[Characters/PokemonGenerationVIIFamiliesRowletToComfey [[Characters/PokemonGenerationVIIRowletToComfey Midnight Form Lycanroc]].
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** Lucine being a BloodKnight werewolf who wears a red shirt makes her similar to [[Characters/PokemonGenerationVIIFamiliesRowletToComfey Midnight Form Lycanroc]].
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* DorkInASweater: Cordelia is a BespectacledCutie who wears a magenta sweater, is InLoveWithLove, ThinksLikeARomanceNovel, and loves Disney films.
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* BespectacledCutie: Cordelia wears purple oval glasses and is described as quite beautiful.
* GlassesAreSexy: InUniverse, the Luv Monsters think Jermaine has this viewpoint.
* TheMatchmaker: The Luv Monsters are a renowned dating agency that provides matchmaking services to both monsters ''and'' humans. In the story, they set Jermaine up with a young woman named Cordelia as a surprise for him.
* MonsterMash: The Luv Monsters are made up of a [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolf]] (Lucine), a {{Mummy}} (Sanura), a FrankensteinsMonster (Victoria), a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampire]] (Ambrosia), and a [[OurGhostsAreDifferent ghost]] (Winona).
* MonsterMash: The Luv Monsters are made up of a [[OurWerewolvesAreDifferent werewolf]] (Lucine), a {{Mummy}} (Sanura), a FrankensteinsMonster (Victoria), a [[OurVampiresAreDifferent vampire]] (Ambrosia), and a [[OurGhostsAreDifferent ghost]] (Winona).
* [[NiceGuy Nice Girl]]: Cordelia. She's a CuddleBug and ThePollyanna who cares about and believes in the good in everybody.
* InLoveWithLove: Cordelia is described as being in love with the concept of love and ThinksLikeARomanceNovel.
* InLoveWithLove: Cordelia is described as being in love with the concept of love and ThinksLikeARomanceNovel.
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* OurGhostsAreDiffernt: Winona.
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* OurGhostsAreDiffernt: OurGhostsAreDifferent: Winona.
* ThePollyanna: Cordelia is described as an eternal optimist.
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* ShoutOut: A few to ''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}.
** FrankensteinsMonster Victoria's name is a clear reference to Victor Frankenstein.
** Her creator being named Mary is a clear reference to Creator/MaryShelley.
** Victoria being a FrankensteinsMonster with a single white streak in her otherwise black hair makes her similar to the eponymous character of ''Film/BrideOfFrankenstein''.
** FrankensteinsMonster Victoria's name is a clear reference to Victor Frankenstein.
** Her creator being named Mary is a clear reference to Creator/MaryShelley.
** Victoria being a FrankensteinsMonster with a single white streak in her otherwise black hair makes her similar to the eponymous character of ''Film/BrideOfFrankenstein''.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** A few to ''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}.
** *** FrankensteinsMonster Victoria's name is a clear reference to Victor Frankenstein.
** *** Her creator being named Mary is a clear reference to Creator/MaryShelley.
** *** Victoria being a FrankensteinsMonster with a single white streak in her otherwise black hair makes her similar to the eponymous character of ''Film/BrideOfFrankenstein''.''Film/BrideOfFrankenstein''.
** Winona being an Indian DeadpanSnarker ghost girl with a strong sense of humor and who has a habit of doing or saying things without first thinking them through makes her ''very'' similar to Sally Malik from ''Series/BeingHumanUS''.
** A few to ''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}.
** Winona being an Indian DeadpanSnarker ghost girl with a strong sense of humor and who has a habit of doing or saying things without first thinking them through makes her ''very'' similar to Sally Malik from ''Series/BeingHumanUS''.
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* ThinksLikeARomanceNovel: Cordelia is described as such.
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* BloodKnight: Lucine ''loves'' to fight.
* DeadpanSnarker:
** Winona is described as having a talent for this.
** Lucine is described as a regular snarker.
** Ambrosia snarks at ''everything'' and makes a snide remark towards Lucine.
* DoesNotLikeMen:
** Being cheated on by her boyfriend made Winona begin believing ''all'' men are dishonest and selfish. Jermaine seems to be an exception to this.
** Similarly, Ambrosia had a long spell of bad luck with men that made her grow cynical towards and disillusioned with them. Again, Jermaine is an exception to this.
** Winona is described as having a talent for this.
** Lucine is described as a regular snarker.
** Ambrosia snarks at ''everything'' and makes a snide remark towards Lucine.
* DoesNotLikeMen:
** Being cheated on by her boyfriend made Winona begin believing ''all'' men are dishonest and selfish. Jermaine seems to be an exception to this.
** Similarly, Ambrosia had a long spell of bad luck with men that made her grow cynical towards and disillusioned with them. Again, Jermaine is an exception to this.
* {{Goth}}: Between her black and gray clothes and cynical attitude, Ambrosia fits this to a T.
* GothGirlsKnowMagic: As mentioned above and below, Ambrosia is a {{Goth}} vampiress with all the supernatural powers that come with it.
* GothsHaveItHard: Ambrosia is a {{Goth}} vampiress who's cynical towards and disillusioned with men because of a long string of bad luck with them.
* HairTriggerTemper: Lucine is described as having a short temper.
* GothGirlsKnowMagic: As mentioned above and below, Ambrosia is a {{Goth}} vampiress with all the supernatural powers that come with it.
* GothsHaveItHard: Ambrosia is a {{Goth}} vampiress who's cynical towards and disillusioned with men because of a long string of bad luck with them.
* HairTriggerTemper: Lucine is described as having a short temper.
* OurGhostsAreDiffernt: Winona.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: Ambrosia is a vampire, but it's not clear if she was born or turned into one.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: Lucine is a werewolf through her father's bloodline.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Winona's eyes are blood red, but she's an extroverted (if a bit [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]]) young ghost girl.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: Ambrosia is a vampire, but it's not clear if she was born or turned into one.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: Lucine is a werewolf through her father's bloodline.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Winona's eyes are blood red, but she's an extroverted (if a bit [[DeadpanSnarker snarky]]) young ghost girl.
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* UndeathlyPallor: Winona is a ghost with pale blue skin.
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[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3362598/1/Tough-Love Tough Love]] is an original fictional story written by Creator/{{Gelefant}}.
It deals with Jermaine's monster friends the Luv Monsters setting him up on a Halloween night date.
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!!Tropes:
* BandageBabe: Sanura, being a SeductiveMummy.
* BearHug: Victoria enjoys giving these to her friends, and it's actually the reason why her creator Mary abandoned her.
* CuddleBug: Cordelia, Jermaine, Victoria, and Winona all like hugs. Victoria loving hugs so much is actually why her creator Mary abandoned her.
* CuteMonsterGirl: ''All'' of the Luv Monsters qualify.
* FrankensteinsMonster: Victoria is a rare female version.
* HalloweenSpecial: The story begins and ends on Halloween night.
* {{Mummy}}: Sanura.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Sanura is over 3,000 years old but looks like she could be anywhere from a teenager to a young woman in her late twenties.
* ScaryStitches: Subverted as while Victoria's body is covered in stitches, she's a CuddleBug who cares deeply for and easily makes friends with others.
* SeductiveMummy: As mentioned above, Sanura is an attractive female mummy.
* ShoutOut: A few to ''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}.
** FrankensteinsMonster Victoria's name is a clear reference to Victor Frankenstein.
** Her creator being named Mary is a clear reference to Creator/MaryShelley.
** Victoria being a FrankensteinsMonster with a single white streak in her otherwise black hair makes her similar to the eponymous character of ''Film/BrideOfFrankenstein''.
* StatuesqueStunner: Victoria is over seven feet tall and described as quite beautiful.
* SuperStrength: Every Luv Monster except Winona has some degree of super strength.
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It deals with Jermaine's monster friends the Luv Monsters setting him up on a Halloween night date.
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!!Tropes:
* BandageBabe: Sanura, being a SeductiveMummy.
* BearHug: Victoria enjoys giving these to her friends, and it's actually the reason why her creator Mary abandoned her.
* CuddleBug: Cordelia, Jermaine, Victoria, and Winona all like hugs. Victoria loving hugs so much is actually why her creator Mary abandoned her.
* CuteMonsterGirl: ''All'' of the Luv Monsters qualify.
* FrankensteinsMonster: Victoria is a rare female version.
* HalloweenSpecial: The story begins and ends on Halloween night.
* {{Mummy}}: Sanura.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Sanura is over 3,000 years old but looks like she could be anywhere from a teenager to a young woman in her late twenties.
* ScaryStitches: Subverted as while Victoria's body is covered in stitches, she's a CuddleBug who cares deeply for and easily makes friends with others.
* SeductiveMummy: As mentioned above, Sanura is an attractive female mummy.
* ShoutOut: A few to ''Franchise/{{Frankenstein}}.
** FrankensteinsMonster Victoria's name is a clear reference to Victor Frankenstein.
** Her creator being named Mary is a clear reference to Creator/MaryShelley.
** Victoria being a FrankensteinsMonster with a single white streak in her otherwise black hair makes her similar to the eponymous character of ''Film/BrideOfFrankenstein''.
* StatuesqueStunner: Victoria is over seven feet tall and described as quite beautiful.
* SuperStrength: Every Luv Monster except Winona has some degree of super strength.
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