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"To Build a Fire" is one of Jack London's most famous and best remembered works, and is often found in [[UsefulNotes/SchoolStudyMedia school literature textbooks]]. Read it [[https://www.thefreshreads.com/to-build-a-fire/ here]].
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"To Build a Fire" is one of Jack London's most famous and best remembered works, and is often found in [[UsefulNotes/SchoolStudyMedia [[MediaNotes/SchoolStudyMedia school literature textbooks]]. Read it [[https://www.thefreshreads.com/to-build-a-fire/ here]].
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* FrozenBodyFluids: It is -75 degrees Fahrenheit; when the man spits, the spit freezes mid-air with "a sharp, explosive crackle."
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* FrozenBodyFluids: It is -75 degrees Fahrenheit; when the man spits, the spit freezes mid-air with "a sharp, explosive crackle."" There's so much ice built up around his nose and mouth that he can't spit his tobacco juice far enough to clear his chin before it freezes.
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It involves an unnamed man up in the Yukon Territory of Canada during a savagely cold winter, who is working a gold claim. He leaves the Yukon Trail, accompanied only by his dog, and heads toward camp where he will meet his fellow prospectors ("the boys"). The man has an unfortunate accident when he falls through a patch of thin ice covering a creek and soaks his pants and lower legs. His situation quickly deteriorates as he struggles to get a fire going so he can warm himself up and stay alive.
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It involves an unnamed man up in the Yukon Territory of Canada during a savagely cold winter, who is working a gold claim. He leaves the Yukon Trail, accompanied only by his dog, and heads toward camp where he will meet his fellow prospectors ("the boys"). The man has an unfortunate accident when he falls through a patch of thin ice covering a creek and soaks his pants feet and lower legs. His situation quickly deteriorates as he struggles to get a fire going so he can warm himself up and stay alive.
