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* KissingCousins: Moon's mother is sisters with Sparks' mother. Given her actual heritage, they are not actually related; but given their ''cultural'' heritage, it was [[ValuesDissonance not a big deal]] when everyone thought they were.
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* KissingCousins: Moon's surrogate mother is sisters with the twin sister of Sparks' mother. mother, and they were raised together as essentially brother and sister. Given her actual Moon's real heritage, they are not actually related; but given their ''cultural'' heritage, it was [[ValuesDissonance not a big deal]] when everyone thought they were.
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renamed to Clone Angst
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* CloningBlues: Moon differs significantly from her clone-mother Arienrhod.
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* JunkieProphet
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* AIIsACrapshoot
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* WorldBuilding
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Trope has been disambiguated per TRS
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* DeterminedHomesteader: Ngenet Miroe.
* DeterminedWidow: Elsevier says that, after the death of her beloved TJ, the only thing that gives her life meaning is carrying on his crusade.
* DeterminedWidow: Elsevier says that, after the death of her beloved TJ, the only thing that gives her life meaning is carrying on his crusade.
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%% * DeterminedHomesteader: Ngenet Miroe.
* DeterminedWidow: Elsevier says that, after the death of her beloved TJ, the only thing that gives her life meaning is carrying on his crusade.Miroe.
* DeterminedWidow: Elsevier says that, after the death of her beloved TJ, the only thing that gives her life meaning is carrying on his crusade.
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Dark Skinned Redhead is no longer a trope
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* DarkSkinnedRedhead: Sparks Dawntreader, who is half Kharamoughi (a dark-skinned offworlder race.)
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Dewicking per TRS.
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* ManipulativeBitch: Arienrhod. [[NotSoDifferent Moon dips into this as well]] when needed.
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* ManipulativeBitch: Arienrhod. [[NotSoDifferent Moon dips into this as well]] well when needed.
* MirrorCharacter: A major theme of the story -- Moon and Arienrhod are as similar as they are different. Moon is just as capable of manipulative and pragmatic behaviour as Arienrhod, and through her twisted relationship with Sparks Arienrhod rediscovers feelings she'd thought long lost.
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* NotSoDifferent: A major theme of the story -- Moon and Arienrhod are as similar as they are different. Moon is just as capable of manipulative and pragmatic behaviour as Arienrhod, and through her twisted relationship with Sparks Arienrhod rediscovers feelings she'd thought long lost.
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The story begins when Arienrhod, a Winter Queen whose reign is soon to end, seeks to break the cycle of exploitation by cloning herself among the Summer fisherfolk, with the idea of retrieving her daughter at adolescence and having her reign as the next Summer Queen. However Moon, her clone daughter, has other ideas for her life; raised among simple villagers, she falls in love with her cousin Sparks, becomes a sacred advisor/prophetess known as a Sibyl, and is kidnapped and taken off-world where she learns the true nature of the sibyl network and the decay of the forner Empire. Sparks, meanwhile, travels to the capitol city of Carbuncle to find his fortune and becomes the Snow Queen’s lover and chief huntsman responsible for the slaughter of the sacred mers. Woven through all this are the offworlders from the Hegemony, many of whom have their own agendas.
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The story begins when Arienrhod, a Winter Queen whose reign is soon to end, seeks to break the cycle of exploitation by cloning herself among the Summer fisherfolk, with the idea of retrieving her daughter at adolescence and having her reign as the next Summer Queen. However Moon, her clone daughter, has other ideas for her life; raised among simple villagers, she falls in love with her cousin Sparks, becomes a sacred advisor/prophetess known as a Sibyl, and is kidnapped and taken off-world where she learns the true nature of the sibyl network and the decay of the forner former Empire. Sparks, meanwhile, travels to the capitol city of Carbuncle to find his fortune and becomes the Snow Queen’s lover and chief huntsman responsible for the slaughter of the sacred mers. Woven through all this are the offworlders from the Hegemony, many of whom have their own agendas.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: Arienrhod's nobles are described as favoring bizarre, androgynous fashions and trying to play-kill each other with stunguns. They are also hinted to have group sex with each other.
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: DecadentCourt: Arienrhod's nobles are described as favoring bizarre, androgynous fashions and trying to play-kill each other with stunguns. They are also hinted to have group sex with each other.
