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* MedalsForEveryone: In the final chapter, [[spoiler: Queen Victoria herself visits the Athena Club and gives them all medals for service to the commonwealth.]]
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* MedalsForEveryone: In the final chapter, [[spoiler: Queen Victoria herself visits the Athena Club and gives them all medals for service to the commonwealth.]]
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--> Mary: I don't know! I'll think of something!
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--> Mary: '''Mary:''' Help me! I have to get to Sherlock!
-->Justine: '''Justine:''' Mary, what are you going to do?
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-->[[spoiler: Margaret Trelawny: "Princess of Isis, Queen of Egypt, accept our sacrifice!"
** or moreso,sacrifice!"]]
**Moreso, [[spoiler: Moriarty andRaymond's Raymond's]] reactions to this that line.]]
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**Moreso, [[spoiler: Moriarty and
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-->[[spoiler: Margaret Trelawny: "Princess of Isis, Queen of Egypt, accept our sacrifice!" or sacrifice!"
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**or moreso, Moriarty and Raymond's reactions to this line.]]
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: In the second half of the book, [[spoiler: Helen Raymond becomes much more loving toward Alice/Lydia even than she was in the first volume, and Margaret Trelawny shoots Helen in the final battle when she comforts Alice instead of helping in the fight.]] She is still partially responsible for the girls who died in Whitechapel back in the first book, though.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: In the second half of the book, [[spoiler: Helen Raymond becomes much more loving toward Alice/Lydia even than she was in the first volume, and Margaret Trelawny shoots Helen in the final battle when she comforts Alice instead of helping in the fight.]] She She]] is still partially responsible for the girls who died in Whitechapel back in the first book, though.
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* RedemptionEqualsDeath: [[spoiler: In the second half of the book, [[spoiler: Helen Raymond becomes much more loving toward Alice/Lydia even than she was in the first volume, and Margaret Trelawny shoots Helen in the final battle when she comforts Alice instead of helping in the fight. Mrs. Raymond fight.]] She is still partially responsible for the girls who died in Whitechapel back in the first book, though.]]
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* DesignatedGirlFight: Inverted. In the [[spoiler: Battle of Kyllion Keep]], 12 of the 13 participants (except Sherlock Holmes) are women.
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* DesignatedGirlFight: Inverted. In the [[spoiler: Battle of Kyllion Keep]], Keep, 12 of the 13 participants (except Sherlock Holmes) are women.
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* HistoricalDomainCharacter: Queen Victoria is the target of the plot by the villains [[spoiler: and has a cameo at the end]].
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* PerceptionFilter: The most common use of mesmeric waves. Mrs. Raymond, Queen Tera, and [[spoiler: Alice]] use their mesmeric powers to make people's appearances change, people invisible, or once, an entire castle invisible.
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* PerceptionFilter: The most common use of mesmeric waves. Mrs. Raymond, Queen Tera, and [[spoiler: Alice]] Alice use their mesmeric powers to make people's appearances change, people invisible, or once, an entire castle invisible.
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: [[spoiler: In the battle of Kyllion Keep, Queen Tera's illusions make Beatrice, Justine, Catherine, and Lucinda think back on how they were created and the four of them internally ask whether they still deserve to exist.]]
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: [[spoiler: In the battle of Kyllion Keep, Queen Tera's illusions make Beatrice, Justine, Catherine, and Lucinda think back on how they were created and the four of them internally ask whether they still deserve to exist.]]
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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: [[spoiler: In the battle of Kyllion Keep, Queen Tera's illusions make Beatrice, Justine, Catherine, and Lucinda think back on how they were created.created and the four of them internally ask whether they still deserve to exist.]]
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: "Princess of Isis, Queen of Egypt, accept our sacrifice!" or moreso, Moriarty and Raymond's reactions to this line.]]
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: "Princess of Isis, Queen of Egypt, accept our sacrifice!" or moreso, Moriarty and Raymond's reactions to this line.]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: [[spoiler: In the battle of Kyllion Keep, Queen Tera's illusions make Beatrice, Justine, Catherine, and Lucinda think back on how they were created.]]
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: [[spoiler: In the battle of Kyllion Keep, Queen Tera's illusions make Beatrice, Justine, Catherine, and Lucinda think back on how they were created.]]
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* IndyPloy: Attempted by [[TheStrategist ''Mary'']] of all people at the British Museum.
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--> Justine: Mary, what are you going to do?
--> Mary: I don't know! I'll think of something!
--> Mary: Help me! I have to get to Sherlock!
--> Justine: Mary, what are you going to do?
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* HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler: Required for the resurrection of Queen Tera. See AssholeVictim above.]]
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* DesignatedGirlFight: Inverted. In the [[spoiler: Battle of Kyllion Keep]], every participant (of which there are 13) except Sherlock Holmes is a woman.
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* [[OffWithHisHead Off with Her Head!]]Head!]] [[spoiler: Diana defeats Queen Tera by cutting off her head. Subverted in that it actually takes Diana a long, gross time to do this and she needs Laura's help to complete the job.]]
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