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* CleverCrows: Otto has a crow named Richard. Not only can he say a few words, but he can fly around, watch for dangerous individuals, and warn Otto of them.
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* PoliceAreUseless: When Ellen returns to her home and finds that it has burned down, she walks up to a police officer and tells him it was ''her'' house that burned and she can't find her mother or father. Officer Drogue's first response is to ask the traumatized, recently orphaned 10 year old girl if she has an ID that can prove her claim. Ellen produces Aunt Sarah's letter and her monogramed pocket book. The officer promises to take her to the precinct, but warns her she better not be pulling a "kid trick." They never make it to the precinct -- Ellen and Officer Drogue witness a green-hooded assassin kill a shopkeeper and Officer Drogue runs off in pursuit, leaving her alone.
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* PoliceAreUseless: When Ellen returns to her home and finds that it has burned down, she walks up to a police officer and tells him it was ''her'' house that burned and she can't find her mother or father. Officer Drogue's first response is to ask the traumatized, recently orphaned 10 year old girl if she has an ID that can prove her claim. Ellen produces Aunt Sarah's letter and her monogramed pocket book. The officer promises to take her to the precinct, but warns her she better not be pulling a "kid trick." They never make it to the precinct -- Ellen and Officer Drogue witness a green-hooded assassin kill a shopkeeper shopkeeper, and Officer Drogue runs off in pursuit, leaving her alone.
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* HostileHitchhiker: {{Inverted}} -- Ellen tries to hitchhike to her aunt's house, but the driver turns out to be a murderer intent on kidnapping Ellen.
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* HostileHitchhiker: {{Inverted}} -- Ellen tries to hitchhike to her aunt's house, but the driver turns out to be a murderer maniac intent on kidnapping Ellen.
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With few other options, Ellen tries to hitchhike. The kindly driver who offers her a ride turns out to by a maniac who wants to kidnap her for unknown reasons. Fleeing from him on foot she meets Otto, a mischievous young boy who joins her on her quest to reach Aunt Sarah's home. But their journey is fraught with peril, as they encounter a strange hidden castle inhabited by evil minds and a vile force to which all who enter the castle fall prey -- all, except for Ellen. It's up to Ellen to harness the power of her silver crown, conquer the evil force within the castle, and rescue its hapless victims before it's too late.
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With few other options, Ellen tries to hitchhike. The kindly driver who offers her a ride turns out to by a maniac who wants to kidnap her for unknown reasons. Fleeing from him on foot foot, she meets Otto, a mischievous young boy who joins her on her quest to reach Aunt Sarah's home. But their journey is fraught with peril, as they encounter a strange hidden castle inhabited by evil minds and a vile force to which all who enter the castle fall prey -- all, except for Ellen. It's up to Ellen to harness the power of her silver crown, conquer the evil force within the castle, and rescue its hapless victims before it's too late.
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->''"It lay beside her on the pillow, shinier than silver, glowing softly, with twinkling blue stones set all around....It did not occur to her to wonder from whom it had come; she was merely aware that it was hers by right."''
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->''"It lay beside her on the pillow, shinier than silver, glowing softly, with twinkling blue stones set all around....around... It did not occur to her to wonder from whom it had come; she was merely aware that it was hers by right."''
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A novel for young adults/ children by [[Creator/RobertCOBrien Robert C. O'Brien]], author of Literature/MrsFrisbyAndTheRatsOfNIMH and Literature/ZForZachariah. First published in the [=UK=] in 1968 (with slight edits made to subsequent printings and the [=US=] version that changed the final chapter).
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A novel for young adults/ children adults/children by [[Creator/RobertCOBrien Robert C. O'Brien]], author of Literature/MrsFrisbyAndTheRatsOfNIMH ''Literature/MrsFrisbyAndTheRatsOfNIMH'' and Literature/ZForZachariah. ''Literature/ZForZachariah''. First published in the [=UK=] UK in 1968 (with slight edits made to subsequent printings and the [=US=] US version that changed the final chapter).
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With few other options, Ellen tries to hitchhike. The kindly driver who offers her a ride turns out to by a maniac who wants to kidnap her for unknown reasons. Fleeing from him on foot she meets Otto, a mischievous young boy who joins her on her quest to reach Aunt Sarah's home. But their journey is fraught with peril, as they encounter a strange hidden castle inhabited by evil minds and a vile force to which all who enter the castle fall prey—all, except for Ellen. It's up to Ellen to harness the power of her silver crown, conquer the evil force within the castle, and rescue its hapless victims before it's too late.
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With few other options, Ellen tries to hitchhike. The kindly driver who offers her a ride turns out to by a maniac who wants to kidnap her for unknown reasons. Fleeing from him on foot she meets Otto, a mischievous young boy who joins her on her quest to reach Aunt Sarah's home. But their journey is fraught with peril, as they encounter a strange hidden castle inhabited by evil minds and a vile force to which all who enter the castle fall prey—all, prey -- all, except for Ellen. It's up to Ellen to harness the power of her silver crown, conquer the evil force within the castle, and rescue its hapless victims before it's too late.
