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* BigBrotherMentor: Downplayed as Cai becomes Arthur's loyal follower and infantry commander but he is a trusted adviser, and when they're growing up together, comes to regard him as a generous, supportive older brother might with a more talented younger sibling, with no sign of resentment.
* FireForgedFriends: Arthur and Bedwyr first meet as young teens at a fair where Bedwyr's people are selling horses (while Merlin's people are selling Avalon's apples), and after Arthur impresses Bedwyr with horse-riding, they get into a fight with muggers and quickly become friends after fighting them off.
* StarterVillain: Lot has his eyes on the high kingship and challenges Uther after he presents Arthur to the chiefs and kings as his heir, and Arthur puts down his rebellion.
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* StarterVillain: Lot has his eyes on the high kingship and challenges Uther after he presents Arthur to the chiefs and kings as his heir, and Arthur puts down his rebellion.
* TwoGuysAndAGirl: Arthur, Cai and Morgan grow up together in Avalon like this but the focus is on Arthur and Morgan. They're very close in age with Cai only being one year older than Arthur and two years older than Morgan.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: Bedwyr is this.
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* WorldsStrongestMan: Bedwyr is this.this, being a matchless warrior in combat and at one point beating a bunch of Saxons in arm-wrestling when Arthur negotiates a treaty.
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* {{Excalibur}}: Arthur's sword is never named let alone [[ExcaliburInTheStone stuck in a stone,]] and completely ordinary except for a jewel in the hilt. Aside from that, it's only special because Arthur gets it as a belated coming of age/birthday present. Though Merlin says that Arthur will one day have Uther's own sword, this isn't elaborated upon further and this sword becomes Arthur's favored one.
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** Arthur marries Gwenhwyfar mostly just to produce an heir, yet she is sterile. This leads to a lot of angst on her her end, as she wants to give him a child and is initially afraid he'll replace her due to her barrenness until he assures her he won't do anything of the sort. When she begins her affair with Bedwyr, she flirts with the possibility of ''him'' getting her pregnant, but it doesn't happen either.
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** Arthur marries Gwenhwyfar mostly just to produce an heir, yet she is sterile. This leads to a lot of angst on her her end, as she wants to give him a child and is initially afraid he'll replace her due to her barrenness until he assures her he won't do anything of the sort. When she begins her affair with Bedwyr, she flirts with the possibility of ''him'' getting her pregnant, but it doesn't happen either.
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* SiblingYinYang: Igraine is cold, ambitious and given to politicking while her full sister Morgause is warm, easygoing and content as long as she has a suitable man.
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* SiblingYinYang: Igraine is cold, ambitious, given to politicking and devoted to Uther, while her full sister Morgause is warm, easygoing and content as long as she has a suitable man, so she doesn't miss Lot too much as she's married off to Pellinore.
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* NewChildLeftBehind: Merlin mulls over whether Morgause can plausibly pass off Morgan's baby as hers and Lot's using this rationale once it's born, as Lot is currently off at war challenging Arthur. He decides it's safer for Lot to be disposed of, and tells Cai to make sure he dies.
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* SiblingYinYang: Igraine is cold, ambitious and given to politicking while her full sister Morgause is warm, easygoing and content as long as she has a suitable man.
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* StarterVillain: Lot has his eyes on the high kingship and challenges Uther after he presents Arthur to the chiefs and kings as his heir, and Arthur puts down his rebellion.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthur takes a lot after his father Uther in height, face and grey eyes and black hair, with his finer facial features coming from his also dark-haired mother Igraine. Mordred so strongly resembles him in turn that Pellinore was able to deduce his parentage when he was a toddler, and his mere arrival at Camelot years later causes a stir. It gets to the point that [[spoiler:after Arthur is mistakenly believed dead, Mordred as the heir (as prodded by Agravaine) suggests to Gwenhwyfar that they marry to keep things stable, and though it never comes to pass, he looks so much like a younger Arthur that Gwenhwyfar flirts with him bcoming her DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest and agrees, but it's called off once Arthur is revealed to be alive.]]
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthur takes a lot after his father Uther in height, face and grey eyes and black hair, with his finer facial features coming from his also dark-haired mother Igraine. Mordred so strongly resembles him in turn that Pellinore was able to deduce his parentage when he was a toddler, and his mere arrival at Camelot years later causes a stir. It gets to the point that [[spoiler:after Arthur is mistakenly believed dead, Mordred as the heir (as prodded by Agravaine) suggests to Gwenhwyfar that they marry to keep things stable, and though it never comes to pass, he looks so much like a younger Arthur that Gwenhwyfar flirts with him bcoming becoming her DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest and agrees, but it's called off once Arthur is revealed to be alive.]]
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* AmbiguousSituation: As Gwenhwyfar angsts over not getting pregnant, Arthur says that it might be due to him being sterile, not (only) her. Unknown to him at this point, he has already sired a son but that was years earlier, and while both of them start or resume sleeping with other people, nobody gets (or can get) pregnant again if Arthur is indeed .
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* AmbiguousSituation: As Gwenhwyfar angsts over not getting pregnant, Arthur says that it might be due to him being sterile, him, not (only) her. Unknown to him at this point, he has already sired a son but that was years earlier, and while both of them start or resume sleeping with other people, nobody gets (or can get) pregnant again again, so it's unclear if Arthur is indeed .indeed (mostly) infertile himself.
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* AgeGapRomance: Arthur is 26 and Gwenhwyfar is 17 when their arranged marriage happens, and she genuinely falls in love with him though he only comes to see her as a dear comrade at most. This leads her into the arms of Arthur's cavalry commander Bedwyr, who is around his age.
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* AgeGapRomance: AerithAndBob: The novel mixes spellings of Arthurian names from various stages of the myth's development, like using the Celtic spellings of Cai, Bedwyr and Gwenhwyfar instead of Kay, Bedivere and Guinevere, along with name spellings from the chivalric romance literature like Meliagrance and Mordred instead of Celtic Melwas and Medraut. Plus names that look "ordinary" or "normal" out of context, like Arthur and Morgan.
* AgeGapRomance:
** Arthur is 26 and Gwenhwyfar is 17 when their arranged marriage happens, and she genuinely falls in love with him though he only comes to see her as a dear comrade at most. This leads her into the arms of Arthur's cavalry commander Bedwyr, who is around hisage.age.
** In the backstory this was implied with Merlin and Nimue.
* AmbiguousSituation: As Gwenhwyfar angsts over not getting pregnant, Arthur says that it might be due to him being sterile, not (only) her. Unknown to him at this point, he has already sired a son but that was years earlier, and while both of them start or resume sleeping with other people, nobody gets (or can get) pregnant again if Arthur is indeed .
* AgeGapRomance:
** Arthur is 26 and Gwenhwyfar is 17 when their arranged marriage happens, and she genuinely falls in love with him though he only comes to see her as a dear comrade at most. This leads her into the arms of Arthur's cavalry commander Bedwyr, who is around his
** In the backstory this was implied with Merlin and Nimue.
* AmbiguousSituation: As Gwenhwyfar angsts over not getting pregnant, Arthur says that it might be due to him being sterile, not (only) her. Unknown to him at this point, he has already sired a son but that was years earlier, and while both of them start or resume sleeping with other people, nobody gets (or can get) pregnant again if Arthur is indeed .
* BrokenPedestal: Late in the story, the noble youths in training hero-worship Bedwyr and so they're stunned after his affair with Gwenhwyfar is exposed [[spoiler:by Agravaine leading them to catch the two in bed]], and even more so after Arthur, who was turning a blind eye to it, sweeps it under the rug.
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* ChickMagnet: The dashing blond {{Hunk}} Bedwyr has many female admirers, while the bronze-haired HeadTurningBeauty Gwenhwyfar is similarly a DudeMagnet leaving many men in awe, not quite including Arthur.
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* ChickMagnet: The dashing blond {{Hunk}} Bedwyr has many female admirers, while the bronze-haired HeadTurningBeauty Gwenhwyfar is similarly a DudeMagnet leaving many men in awe, not quite including Arthur. [[spoiler:Even Mordred has a crush on her though she's kind of his stepmother, which Agravaine exploits.]]
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* CoolBigSis: Morgause to Morgan, who helps her with her pregnancy and raises the baby as her own son, and later goes along with Arthur's plan to [[spoiler:continue posing as Mordred's birth mother even after Arthur acknowledges him as his son, to keep Morgan's secret safe]].
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* CoolBigSis: Morgause to Morgan, who helps her with her pregnancy and raises the baby as her own son, and later goes [[spoiler:goes along with Arthur's plan to [[spoiler:continue continue posing as Mordred's birth mother even after Arthur acknowledges him as his son, to keep Morgan's secret safe]].
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: The plot revolves around Arthur and thus he's the protagonist but Morgan has a good chunk of focus as his LoveInterest.
* FirstKiss: Arthur and Morgan's feelings for each other first boil over this way after they try to comfort each other after her dog dies of old age. They make a habit of it in secret and TheirFirstTime happens not too long after, quite naturally and innocently.
* GiveHimANormalLife: Morgan goes along with Morgause raising her son so that he can have a stable life away from the pressures Arthur must deal with.
* FirstKiss: Arthur and Morgan's feelings for each other first boil over this way after they try to comfort each other after her dog dies of old age. They make a habit of it in secret and TheirFirstTime happens not too long after, quite naturally and innocently.
* GiveHimANormalLife: Morgan goes along with Morgause raising her son so that he can have a stable life away from the pressures Arthur must deal with.
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* {{Deuteragonist}}: The plot revolves around Arthur and thus he's the protagonist but Morgan has a good chunk of focus as his LoveInterest.
LoveInterest. Gwenhwyfar in turn is a tritagonist, getting focus as the not-love interest.
* FirstKiss: Arthur and Morgan's feelings for each other first boil over this way after they try to comfort each other after her dog dies of old age. They make a habit of it in secret and TheirFirstTime happens not too longafter, quite naturally and innocently.
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* GiveHimANormalLife: Morgan goes along with Morgause raising her son so that he can have a stable life away from the pressures Arthur must dealwith. with.
* GiveTheBabyAFather: After Morgan learns she's pregnant, Merlin suggests that she marry Cai - who will probably raise her and Arthur's child as his own without complaint - but she refuses to marry anyone but Arthur.
* FirstKiss: Arthur and Morgan's feelings for each other first boil over this way after they try to comfort each other after her dog dies of old age. They make a habit of it in secret and TheirFirstTime happens not too long
* GiveHimANormalLife: Morgan goes along with Morgause raising her son so that he can have a stable life away from the pressures Arthur must deal
* GiveTheBabyAFather: After Morgan learns she's pregnant, Merlin suggests that she marry Cai - who will probably raise her and Arthur's child as his own without complaint - but she refuses to marry anyone but Arthur.
* GoodGirlsAvoidAbortion: Upon Morgan's pregnancy, Morgause matter-of-factly suggests that she use certain herbs to deal with it, but Morgan can't bear to do that to her and Arthur's love-child.
* HopelessSuitor:
** Gwenhwyfar falls in love with Arthur but he doesn't love her back the same way, which is an issue since they're already married.
** After Arthur gets married, Cai reveals to Morgan that he's quietly been in love with her all along too, though they both know her heart belongs to Arthur and vice versa. Morgan says she'd settle for him if she could, but she can't.
** Gwenhwyfar falls in love with Arthur but he doesn't love her back the same way, which is an issue since they're already married.
** After Arthur gets married, Cai reveals to Morgan that he's quietly been in love with her all along too, though they both know her heart belongs to Arthur and vice versa. Morgan says she'd settle for him if she could, but she can't.
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** Arthur marries Gwenhwyfar mostly just to produce an heir, yet she is sterile.
** Averted however with Mordred's conception, as in many tellings Arthur only has to be seduced once by his sister for that to happen, but here Arthur and Morgan are implied to have innocently and passionately knocked boots more than once in secret even after they realize the complications of their family ties, until they're forced to be apart due to Arthur's duties and Morgan finds out she's pregnant.
** Averted however with Mordred's conception, as in many tellings Arthur only has to be seduced once by his sister for that to happen, but here Arthur and Morgan are implied to have innocently and passionately knocked boots more than once in secret even after they realize the complications of their family ties, until they're forced to be apart due to Arthur's duties and Morgan finds out she's pregnant.
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** Arthur marries Gwenhwyfar mostly just to produce an heir, yet she is sterile.
sterile. This leads to a lot of angst on her her end, as she wants to give him a child and is initially afraid he'll replace her due to her barrenness until he assures her he won't do anything of the sort. When she begins her affair with Bedwyr, she flirts with the possibility of ''him'' getting her pregnant, but it doesn't happen either.
** Averted however with Mordred's conception, as in many tellings Arthur only has to be seduced once by his sister for that to happen, but here Arthur and Morgan are implied to haveinnocently and passionately knocked boots more than once in secret even after they realize the complications of their family ties, until they're forced to be apart due to Arthur's duties and Morgan finds out she's pregnant.
** Averted however with Mordred's conception, as in many tellings Arthur only has to be seduced once by his sister for that to happen, but here Arthur and Morgan are implied to have
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** Bedwyr's ladies' man ways eventually leads him getting Gwenhwyfar's servant girl named Elaine pregnant, though he says he was seduced. Elaine is sent home to bear the child i.e. Galahad since Bedwyr is the Lancelot equivalent.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthur takes a lot after his father Uther in height, face and grey eyes and black hair, with his finer facial features coming from his also dark-haired mother Igraine. Mordred so strongly resembles him in turn that Pellinore was able to deduce his parentage when he was a toddler, and his mere arrival at Camelot years later causes a stir.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthur takes a lot after his father Uther in height, face and grey eyes and black hair, with his finer facial features coming from his also dark-haired mother Igraine. Mordred so strongly resembles him in turn that Pellinore was able to deduce his parentage when he was a toddler, and his mere arrival at Camelot years later causes a stir. It gets to the point that [[spoiler:after Arthur is mistakenly believed dead, Mordred as the heir (as prodded by Agravaine) suggests to Gwenhwyfar that they marry to keep things stable, and though it never comes to pass, he looks so much like a younger Arthur that Gwenhwyfar flirts with him bcoming her DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest and agrees, but it's called off once Arthur is revealed to be alive.]]
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* BrainyBrunette: Morgan has light brown hair and certainly intelligent and educated.
* LargeAndInCharge: Bedwyr and Cai play this straight by being big, tall men, while in contrast Arthur is more of average or lower height, shorter and thinner in build due to his Roman blood through Uther. Gwenhwyfar is tall for a woman and taller than Arthur.
* RedheadsAreRavishing: Gwenhwyfar is renowned for her beauty and has red-gold or bronze hair, with [[SignificantGreenEyedRedhead green eyes]] to boot.
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthur takes a lot after his father Uther in height, face and his grey eyes and black hair, with his finer facial features coming from his also dark-haired mother Igraine. Mordred so strongly resembles him in turn that Pellinore was able to deduce his parentage when he was a toddler, and his mere arrival at Camelot years later causes a stir.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Morgan's most striking feature which Arthur notices even at their first meeting as children.
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* WhatBeautifulEyes: Morgan's most striking feature which Arthur notices even at their first meeting as children.children, her large brown eyes.
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* CoolBigSis: Morgause to Morgan, who helps her with her pregnancy and raises the baby as her own son.
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* CoolBigSis: Morgause to Morgan, who helps her with her pregnancy and raises the baby as her own son.son, and later goes along with Arthur's plan to [[spoiler:continue posing as Mordred's birth mother even after Arthur acknowledges him as his son, to keep Morgan's secret safe]].
* MythologyGag:
** Morgan jokes to Arthur that she should start wearing magician's robes due to her reputation, and Arthur jokes back that he should set her up as his court mage.
** Bedwyr's ladies' man ways eventually leads him getting Gwenhwyfar's servant girl named Elaine pregnant, though he says he was seduced. Elaine is sent home to bear the child i.e. Galahad since Bedwyr is the Lancelot equivalent.
** Arthur asks [[spoiler:Morgause to continue posing as Mordred's birth mother after she and Arthur supposedly had an affair, in order to protect Morgan, and she readily agrees.]]
** Morgan jokes to Arthur that she should start wearing magician's robes due to her reputation, and Arthur jokes back that he should set her up as his court mage.
** Bedwyr's ladies' man ways eventually leads him getting Gwenhwyfar's servant girl named Elaine pregnant, though he says he was seduced. Elaine is sent home to bear the child i.e. Galahad since Bedwyr is the Lancelot equivalent.
** Arthur asks [[spoiler:Morgause to continue posing as Mordred's birth mother after she and Arthur supposedly had an affair, in order to protect Morgan, and she readily agrees.]]
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* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthur looks just like his father Uther, and Mordred so strongly resembles him in turn that Pellinore was able to deduce his parentage when he was a toddler, and his mere arrival at Camelot years later causes a stir.
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* StarCrossedLovers: Arthur and Morgan fall in love and want to marry once they reach adulthood, but Arthur turns out to be the hidden rightful heir to the throne and Morgan his half-aunt, so duty and blood relations get in the way, even after Arthur's power is secured years later and he could get away with KissingCousins if he tried. After several years of being willfully apart, they eventually give in and start an affair.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthurlooks just like takes a lot after his father Uther, Uther in height, face and his black hair, with his finer facial features coming from his also dark-haired mother Igraine. Mordred so strongly resembles him in turn that Pellinore was able to deduce his parentage when he was a toddler, and his mere arrival at Camelot years later causes a stir.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Arthur
* TheirFirstTime: Morgan and Arthur first sleep together after being caught in the rain and taking shelter in a barn, where they take off their wet clothes and stuff happens. Years later, Arthur can't help thinking back to it during his wedding night with Gwenhwyfar, though it goes well enough for them that time too.
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* YourSonAllAlong: When Gawain first joins Arthur, he's struck by the king looking exactly like his youngest brother Mordred. Arthur is yet unaware that he has a son so he just says that they must both take after Igraine, which Gawain accepts. Years later, Arthur finally meets Mordred in person and sees that he really takes after Uther, and once told his age, immediately realizes the youth must be his and Morgan's son.
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* YourSonAllAlong: When Gawain first joins Arthur, he's struck by the king looking exactly like his youngest brother Mordred. Arthur is yet unaware that he has a son so he just says that they must both take after Igraine, which Gawain accepts. Years later, Arthur finally meets Mordred in person and sees that he really also strongly takes after Uther, and once told his age, immediately realizes the youth must be his and Morgan's son.
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* DamselInDistress: Gwenhwyfar is waylaid and kidnapped briefly by a smitten admirer, a tribal chief named Meliagrance, who overestimates his own capacity to challenge Arthur. Bedwyr saves her.
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* DamselInDistress: Gwenhwyfar is waylaid and kidnapped briefly by a smitten an overly-smitten admirer, a tribal chief named Meliagrance, who overestimates his own capacity to challenge Arthur. Bedwyr saves her.
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* IdiotBall: [[spoiler: Mordred successfully sneaks away from Agravaine's rebel army and is fleeing to Gaul like Morgan and Arthur advised him to, when he suddenly decides he has to see his father one last time for no apparent reason... and runs right into the impending battle.]]
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* IdiotBall: [[spoiler: Mordred successfully sneaks away from Agravaine's rebel army and is fleeing to Gaul like Morgan and Arthur advised him to, when he suddenly decides he desperately has to see his father one last time time, if for no other apparent reason... reason than to apologize... and runs right into the impending ongoing battle.]]]]
* InadequateInheritor: Mordred is groomed to be Arthur's heir and trains with the young nobles his age, but it soon becomes apparent to the older characters that he's not the natural leader Arthur is (while not a mere "follower" either, he's more of a "dreamer" as Bedwyr says). He doesn't slack off training to be a warrior and statesman, but it's clear that his heart isn't in it, and would rather do other stuff like playing music. He's left in charge along with Gwenhwyfar when Arthur goes off to war in Gaul to support an ally, to test his mettle.
* InadequateInheritor: Mordred is groomed to be Arthur's heir and trains with the young nobles his age, but it soon becomes apparent to the older characters that he's not the natural leader Arthur is (while not a mere "follower" either, he's more of a "dreamer" as Bedwyr says). He doesn't slack off training to be a warrior and statesman, but it's clear that his heart isn't in it, and would rather do other stuff like playing music. He's left in charge along with Gwenhwyfar when Arthur goes off to war in Gaul to support an ally, to test his mettle.
* PetTheDog: It appears that [[spoiler:Agravaine is genuinely fond of his younger brother Mordred]] despite [[spoiler:both fully aware that he's using him as a disposable pawn by the end, and Agravaine is even a bit apologetic to Mordred soon before the looming battle with Arthur, saying that he always liked him.]]
* PuppetKing: [[spoiler:After Agravaine's treachery against Arthur is revealed and he's in open rebellion, Mordred is fully aware that he's only being used to prop up Agravaine's cause as the rightful heir himself, basically held hostage by his own brother.]]
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* RescueRomance; Gwenhwyfar first beds Bedwyr after his RoaringRampageOfRescue soon after Meliagrance waylays her.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: When Gwenhwyfar first meets Morgan around a year after marrying Arthur, she's struck by her looks, as they look the same age (late teens) even though she's heard Morgan is around Arthur's age (mid-20s).
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* OlderThanTheyLook: When Gwenhwyfar first meets Morgan around a year after marrying Arthur, she's struck by her looks, as they look the same age (late teens) even though she's heard Morgan is around Arthur's age (mid-20s).(mid/late 20s).