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* ElementalPersonalities: Enforced. Using one of the four aligned magics actually affects your personality. Shamais (water mages) are almost always staunch, hidebound traditionalists, Aeshes (fire mages) are generally brilliant, innovative, and inconoclastic, Aretzes (earth mages) are stable, kind, and reliable, and Ruahks (air mages) tend to be flighty and hyperactive.
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* PersonalityPowers: Justified to a certain degree, as it seems using one of the four aligned magics actually affects your personality. Shamais are almost always staunch, hidebound traditionalists, Aeshes are generally brilliant, innovative, and inconoclastic, Aretzes are stable, kind, and reliable, and Ruahks tend to be flighty and hyperactive.
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* NaturalDisasterCascade: PlayedWith. Thanks to the FisherKing nature of Caederan's royal house, storms, tornadoes and droughts plague the country when the current ruling monarchs are "ruahks in all but name".
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* RunningGag: "Badgers."
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* GrandRomanticGesture: [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.]] Both a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.
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* GrandRomanticGesture: [[spoiler: Alaric using the Prince's Crown to transform Laeshana into an orah, thus simultaneously allowing her to marry him, giving her the full power that she has been seeking for years, and freeing her of the black aspect of her fire-magic that she's been fighting her whole life.]] Both a CrowningMomentOfAwesome and a CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming.]]
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* BilingualBonus: The names of the disciplines are based on the Hebrew words for their elements.
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* TheBechdelTest: Passes early in the third chapter, when Laeshana has a couple of pages of political conversation with Vinna the innkeeper.
