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** A major theme of the series is how the existence of the Augurs ability to see the future implies a lack of free will in the universe. This is often used by the Venerate to excuse any evil they've done: to them it is not their fault, and they have been promised that success will create a new universe with free will, and any who died in the old one will be saved. [[spoiler: Shammaeloth is exceptionally good at using this argument to sway otherwise good people into commuting atrocities, "for the greater good". Eventually the main cast choose to interpret time as only a lens to make sense of events; while you may not be able to change the future, in the end everyone still makes the choices they make, and everyone must live with the evils they commit.]] The philosophical quandary is solved anyway [[spoiler: when the rift is destroyed, severing any Kan powers, including the ability to see the future. No one can cheat and see how future events turn out anymore.]]
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* FunctionalMagic: Two different kinds:
** Essence is an energy generated by all life, and required by it to survive. Gifted have a Reserve of Essence over and above what their bodies need to survive, and can shape this Essence to heal themselves or others, strengthen themselves, go long periods without sleep, move objects, or generate light and heat.
** Kan is a BackgroundMagicField that radiates out from the Deilannis rift. In its natural state, kan consumes Essence, but it can also be used to shape and direct Essence with more finesse than Gifted are capable of, or to manipulate various non-physical things such as thoughts, memories, and time.
** Essence is an energy generated by all life, and required by it to survive. Gifted have a Reserve of Essence over and above what their bodies need to survive, and can shape this Essence to heal themselves or others, strengthen themselves, go long periods without sleep, move objects, or generate light and heat.
** Kan is a BackgroundMagicField that radiates out from the Deilannis rift. In its natural state, kan consumes Essence, but it can also be used to shape and direct Essence with more finesse than Gifted are capable of, or to manipulate various non-physical things such as thoughts, memories, and time.
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** Early on in the story, it's established that Davian's source was extinguished well before the story started, that he has been able to survive this by using kan to draw Essence from external sources, and that his lack of a source is what allows him to traverse the time rift without being destroyed. Later on, [[spoiler: it's further established that a shapeshifter can only assume the forms of those whose sources they have personally extinguished, and Caeden is cut by a Named blade that extinguishes his source, which he survives by using the Essence-sharing Vessel. All this comes together at the very end of the story, when Caeden realizes that ''he'' was the one to extinguish Davian's source (during the evacuation of Zvaelar, while Davian was still an unborn babe), and that he can go back through the rift, assume Davian's form, and take Davian's fated death on himself.]]
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* [[spoiler: AnyoneCanDie: Not even all the main characters survive the story, and even most of the important supporting characters are toast.]]
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** {{Averted}} through much of the rest of the series, as a defining characteristic of the series is the fact that [[spoiler: nearly everything that is happening is part of a millennium-old plan]] and that generally the characters are excellent strategists.
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* DevilButNoGod: Shammeloth is very active throughout the story, but we never see the ''real'' El acting.
** Throughout Book 1, multiple characters comment on how odd Elocin's [[HeelFaceTurn total about-face regarding the Gifted and Augurs]] was. Near the end of the book, it's revealed that he was being Controlled.
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** The Third Tenet forbids Gifted from harming Administrators or Gifted in any fashion.
*** [[spoiler: The amended version prevents Administrators from harming Gifted in any fashion as well.]]
*** [[spoiler: The amended version prevents Administrators from harming Gifted in any fashion as well.]]
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** The Third Tenet forbids Gifted from harming Administrators or in any fashion, and prevents Administrators from harming Gifted in any fashion.fashion as well.
*** [[spoiler:The amended version prevents Administrators from harming Gifted in any fashion as well.This tenet is left unaltered.]]
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On the eve of his final exam, Davian stays up late in a last-ditch attempt to overcome his block. He is [[TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive interrupted]] by Ilseth Tenvar, an Elder visiting from [[CourtMage Tol Athian]], who brings shocking news: [[TheGreatWall The Boundary]] that has protected Andarra from [[BigBad Aarkein Devead's]] [[TheLegionsOfHell forces]] for 2000 years is failing, and Davian is needed to help repair it. He also knows Davian's biggest secret -- That he's an Augur, with the ability to tell when anyone [[LivingLieDetector lies to him]]. Given a [[OminousCube mysterious glowing cube]] to guide his way, Davian embarks immediately to discover how he can help. Before he leaves, Wirr catches him and shakes him down for information. Unwilling to let Davian go it alone, Wirr packs his bags as well and the two head out on a secret mission to save Andarra. The next day, [[SoleSurvivor Asha]] wakes to find everyone in the Academy [[DoomedHometown brutally massacred]]. Before she can figure out what's going on, Tenvar turns her into a Shadow and wipes her memory. Confused and heartbroken, she sets out on her own journey to find answers, unaware that she's surrounded by enemies.
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On the eve of his final exam, [[AchievementTestOfDestiny Trials]], Davian stays up late in a last-ditch attempt to overcome makes peace with his block. inevitable failure, and enjoys a last, pleasant evening with his best friends before sleeping peacefully for the first time in months. He is [[TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive interrupted]] awoken]] by Ilseth Tenvar, an Elder visiting from [[CourtMage Tol Athian]], who brings shocking news: [[TheGreatWall The Boundary]] that has protected Andarra from [[BigBad Aarkein Devead's]] [[TheLegionsOfHell forces]] for 2000 years is failing, and Davian is needed to help repair it. He also knows Davian's biggest secret -- That he's an Augur, with the ability to tell when anyone [[LivingLieDetector lies to him]].
Given a [[OminousCube mysterious glowing cube]] to guide his way, Davian embarks immediately to discover how he can help. Before he leaves, Wirr catches him and shakes him down for information. Unwilling to let Davian go it alone, Wirr packs his bags as well and the two head out on a secret mission to save Andarra. The next day, [[SoleSurvivor Asha]] wakes to find everyone in the Academy [[DoomedHometown brutally massacred]]. Before she can figure out what's going on, Tenvar turns her into a Shadow and wipes her memory. Confused and heartbroken, she sets out on her own journey to find answers, unaware that she's surrounded by enemies.
Given a [[OminousCube mysterious glowing cube]] to guide his way, Davian embarks immediately to discover how he can help. Before he leaves, Wirr catches him and shakes him down for information. Unwilling to let Davian go it alone, Wirr packs his bags as well and the two head out on a secret mission to save Andarra. The next day, [[SoleSurvivor Asha]] wakes to find everyone in the Academy [[DoomedHometown brutally massacred]]. Before she can figure out what's going on, Tenvar turns her into a Shadow and wipes her memory. Confused and heartbroken, she sets out on her own journey to find answers, unaware that she's surrounded by enemies.
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** Aarkein Devaed roughly translates to ''The fate of all that must come''.
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The story follows a [[PowerTrio trio]] from a Gifted Academy in Caladel: Davian, a bright young man with a block that prevents him from wielding Essence, his suspiciously talented BestFriend Wirr and his kind-hearted [[ChildhoodFriendRomance love interest]] Asha.
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The story follows a [[PowerTrio trio]] from a Gifted Academy in Caladel: [[DoomedHometown Caladel]]: Davian, a bright young man with a block that prevents him from wielding Essence, his suspiciously talented BestFriend Wirr and his kind-hearted [[ChildhoodFriendRomance love interest]] Asha.
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* BatmanGambit: Davian's plan to stop [[spoiler: Rohin]] is entirely contingent on contriving a specific scenarop, then perfectly predicting his actions.
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* BatmanGambit: Davian's plan to stop [[spoiler: Rohin]] is entirely contingent on contriving a specific scenarop, scenario, then perfectly predicting his actions.
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** The ring Vessel found by Asha in Tol Athian's armory is an excellent self-defense tool, but it eventually [[spoiler: allows Caeden provide his past self with the tools to summon Davian through the rift in Deilannis.]]
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** The ring Vessel found by Asha in Tol Athian's armory is an excellent self-defense tool, but it eventually [[spoiler: allows Caeden provide his provides Caeden's past self with the tools to summon Davian through the rift in Deilannis.]]
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* Precursors: The Shalis and the Builders were ancient species and civilizations that went extinct long before the story.
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* Precursors: {{Precursors}}: The Shalis and the Builders were an ancient species and civilizations that went extinct long before the story.story began. They were incredibly gifted architects, and Andarra uses many of their works to house cities and institutions.
** The Shalis were immortal serpent-like beings with mastery over essence. They went extinct after the Builders, but during [[spoiler: Caeden's lifetime]]. That's because [[spoiler: he killed them]].
** The Shalis were immortal serpent-like beings with mastery over essence. They went extinct after the Builders, but during [[spoiler: Caeden's lifetime]]. That's because [[spoiler: he killed them]].
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* BadFuture: Implied in Asha's vision of Davian. [[spoiler: The reality is more nuanced, as Davian contacts her before the Venerate have actually succeeded in their plan.]]
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* BadFuture: Implied in Asha's vision of Davian.Davian that carries an OminousMessageFromTheFuture. [[spoiler: The reality is more nuanced, as Davian contacts her before the Venerate have actually succeeded in their plan.]]
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* OminousMessageFromTheFuture: Halfway through book 1, an older Davian warns Asha that in the future nearly everyone has been Read, he will be imprisoned and she will be wanted for capital punishment.
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* NoWarpingZone: [[InvertedTrope Invertes]] with the Wells of Mor Aruil, which can only be accessed through portals.
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* NoWarpingZone: [[InvertedTrope Invertes]] Inverted]] with the Wells of Mor Aruil, which can only be accessed through portals.
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** Happens to both [[spoiler: Kol and Fessi]]. They [[ForseeingMyDeath Saw their own deaths]], then later recognized the circumstances of their death, panicked, then accidentally instigate it.
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** Happens to both [[spoiler: Kol and Fessi]]. They [[ForseeingMyDeath [[ForeseeingMyDeath Saw their own deaths]], then later recognized the circumstances of their death, panicked, then accidentally instigate it.
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* AnotherDimension: Zvaelar exists in a pseudo-reality space where time is extremely dilated, complete with a blood-red moon and magically-enhanced metal.
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* AnotherDimension: Zvaelar exists in a pseudo-reality space where [[spoiler: time is extremely dilated, dilated]], complete with a blood-red moon and magically-enhanced metal.
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* EleventhHourSuperpower: The main trio gain these and use them to great effect towards the end of the story. [[spoiler: Davian has his internal hardened kan mechanisms, Asha has the Siphon and Wirr has his Oathstone command ability.]]
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* DarkestHour: Occurs for [[spoiler: Wirr]] when his [[spoiler: Augurs are captured]], his army is eradicated, the Essence-sucking pillars are erected, and the [[spoiler: ilshara falls]], with no backup in sight.
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* DarkestHour: Occurs for [[spoiler: Wirr]] when his [[spoiler: Augurs are captured]], captured, his army is eradicated, the Essence-sucking pillars are erected, and the [[spoiler: ilshara falls]], falls, with no backup in sight.]]
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* AnachronicOrder: Naturally, for a time travel story. Davian's visit with Malshash takes place about 90 years prior to the rest of the events in the book. [[spoiler: His trip to Zvaelar preced the plot by thousands of years.]]
* AndTheAdventureContinues: The main plot, especially [[spoiler: Caeden's]] story, is neatly tied up at the end, but makes it clear that the main characters' story is far from over.
* AndTheAdventureContinues: The main plot, especially [[spoiler: Caeden's]] story, is neatly tied up at the end, but makes it clear that the main characters' story is far from over.
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* AnachronicOrder: Naturally, for a time travel story.
** Davian's first visit withMalshash [[spoiler: Malshash]] takes place about 90 years prior to the rest of the events in the book. book.
** [[spoiler: His trip to Zvaelarpreced precedes the plot by thousands of years.]]
* [[spoiler: AndTheAdventureContinues: The main plot,especially [[spoiler: Caeden's]] especially Caeden's story, is neatly tied up at the end, but makes it clear that the main characters' story is far from over.characters have plenty to deal with in the future.]]
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* EnergyBeing: The Lyth are made of pure Essence.
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* EnergyBeing: The Lyth are made of pure Essence. [[spoiler: This occurred due to a malfunction of the Jha'vett, which eroded all of their physical properties.]]
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* EvilSorcerer: The common people's gut perception of many Gifted and Augurs. [[spoiler: Sometimes justified by the likes of Rohin, or the actions of sociopathic prewar Gifted in the absence of their overseers.]]
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* EvilSorcerer: The common people's gut perception of many Gifted and Augurs.
** [[spoiler: Sometimes justified by the likes of Rohin, or the actions of sociopathic prewar Gifted in the absence of their overseers.]]
** [[spoiler: Sometimes justified by the likes of Rohin, or the actions of sociopathic prewar Gifted in the absence of their overseers.]]
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** Deilannis features an eerie skull mounted on one of its arches, which gives the group a good scare. [[spoiler: The skull actually belongs to Davian (sort of),]] justifying his unsettled reaction.
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** Deilannis features an eerie skull mounted on one of its arches, which gives the group a good scare. [[spoiler: The skull actually belongs to Davian (sort of),]] Davian]] justifying his unsettled reaction.
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** The Venerate's claims that [[spoiler: Davian's]] head will be on a pike, and their warnings that Caeden [[spoiler: will kill Davian]], take on a new significance once [[spoiler: his apparent death at Caeden's hands]] is revealed.
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** The Venerate's claims that [[spoiler: Davian's]] head will be on a pike, and their warnings that Caeden [[spoiler: will kill Davian]], take on a new significance once [[spoiler: his apparent death at Caeden's hands]] is revealed.
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** Happens to both [[spoiler: Kol and Fessi]]. They [[ForeeingMyDeath Saw their own deaths]], then later recognized the circumstances of their death, panicked, then accidentally instigate it.
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** Happens to both [[spoiler: Kol and Fessi]]. They [[ForeeingMyDeath [[ForseeingMyDeath Saw their own deaths]], then later recognized the circumstances of their death, panicked, then accidentally instigate it.
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* KudzuPlot: Highly {{Downplayed}}, despite introducing time travel, multiple POV threads across different time periods and alternate dimensions, almost everything is admirably wrapped up with solid answers by the story's end.
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* KudzuPlot: Highly {{Downplayed}}, despite introducing time travel, multiple POV threads across different time periods and alternate dimensions, [[spoiler: almost everything is admirably neatly wrapped up with solid answers by the story's end.]]
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* Magitek: Some of the Builder's cities, as well as the Darecian's warships, use Essence in a highly technical fashion.
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* Mordor: Talan Gol is usually given this treatment by those in Andarra.
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* Mordor: {{Mordor}}: Talan Gol is usually given this treatment by those in Andarra.
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* NoWarpingZone: Inverted with the Wells of Mor Aruil, which can only be accessed through portals.
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** [[spoiler: Wirr]] plants one on [[spoiler: Dezia]] right before she leaves to rescue her brother from his debtors.
** [[spoiler: Davian]] does the same to [[spoiler: Asha]] before he leaves to rescue Ishelle from the other side of [[spoiler: the ilshara.]]
** [[spoiler: Davian]] does the same to [[spoiler: Asha]] before he leaves to rescue Ishelle from the other side of [[spoiler: the ilshara.]]
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** [[spoiler: Wirr]] plants one on [[spoiler: Dezia]] right before she leaves to [[spoiler: rescue her brother from his debtors.
debtors.]]
** [[spoiler: Davian]] does the same to [[spoiler: Asha]] before he leaves to rescue [[spoiler: Ishelle from the other side of[[spoiler: the ilshara.]]
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** Augurs redirect Essence in the environment through the use of kan, and can also use it for PsychicPowers including MindManipulation, {{ShapeShifting}}, [[TimeMaster slowing time]] and [[LivingLieDetector lie detection]]. They are also able to create strikingly complex [[FunctionalMagic tools and mechanisms]] with kan, which are then powered by Essence.
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** Augurs redirect Essence in the environment through the use of kan, and can also use it for PsychicPowers including MindManipulation, {{ShapeShifting}}, ShapeShifting, [[TimeMaster slowing time]] and [[LivingLieDetector lie detection]]. They are also able to create strikingly complex [[FunctionalMagic tools and mechanisms]] with kan, which are then powered by Essence.
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* OutsideContextProblem: All that is mentioned about Nesk is their geographic location and hostile attitude towards Andarra. The rumblings of military mobility in Book 3 preclude [[spoiler: what seems like an invasion, but they are actually a friendly force.]]
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* OutsideContextProblem: All that is mentioned about Nesk is their geographic location and hostile attitude towards Andarra.
** The rumblings of military mobility in Book 3 preclude [[spoiler: what seems like an invasion, but they are actually a friendly force.]]
** The rumblings of military mobility in Book 3 preclude [[spoiler: what seems like an invasion, but they are actually a friendly force.]]
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* PoisonousCaptive: The two sha'teth held in Tol Athian's dungeon wreak havoc on [[spoiler: Ishelle's mental state]] and attempt to shake Caeden's moral conviction. [[spoiler: They're actually there to destroy the Tol's defenses from the inside.]]
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* PoisonousCaptive: The two sha'teth held in Tol Athian's dungeon wreak havoc on [[spoiler: Ishelle's mental state]] and attempt to shake Caeden's moral conviction.
** [[spoiler: They're actually there to destroy the Tol's defenses from the inside.]]
** [[spoiler: They're actually there to destroy the Tol's defenses from the inside.]]
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* PrisonsAreGymnasiums: Played completely straight with [[spoiler: Davian]]. His imprisonment in Ilshan Gathdel Teth provides him with ample time to work out. His time scavenging and lifting metal buckets in [[spoiler: Zvaelar]] give him an even more effective exercise routine.
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* PrisonsAreGymnasiums: Played completely straight with [[spoiler: Davian]].
** His imprisonment in [[spoiler: Ilshan GathdelTeth Teth]] provides him with ample time to work out. out.
** His time scavenging and lifting metal buckets in [[spoiler: Zvaelar]] give him an even more effective exercise routine.
** His imprisonment in [[spoiler: Ilshan Gathdel
** His time scavenging and lifting metal buckets in [[spoiler: Zvaelar]] give him an even more effective exercise routine.
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* PureEnergy: The Lyth are beings made entirely of Essence. [[spoiler: This occurred due to a malfunction of the Jha'vett, which eroded all of their physical properties.]]
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** In Book 1, [[spoiler: Ilin Illan]] is able to successfully fight off [[spoiler: the Blind's Invasion]], though it happens at the expense of thousands of soldiers, many political and military leaders, and considerable destruction to the city.
*** Tragically taken UpToEleven in the fight against [[spoiler: the Banes]] in Book 3, as the [[spoiler: Eletai kill everyone who doesn't make it into Tol Athian]] and Caden is forced to [[spoiler: raze the city to the ground to stop them.]]
** In Book 2, our heroes are able to [[spoiler: fix the ilshara]], but not until after [[spoiler: the entire guardpost is massacred]], [[spoiler: Davian, Fessi and Ishelle]] are trapped in Talan Gol, and thousands of [[spoiler: Banes]] have infiltrated Andarra.
** In Book 3, [[spoiler: Wirr's]] forces successfully engage and defeat the [[spoiler: gil'shar and their Banes]], but at the expense of nearly all the [[spoiler: soldiers, Augurs, Gifted, Shadows and Administrators]] in their army.
*** Tragically taken UpToEleven in the fight against [[spoiler: the Banes]] in Book 3, as the [[spoiler: Eletai kill everyone who doesn't make it into Tol Athian]] and Caden is forced to [[spoiler: raze the city to the ground to stop them.]]
** In Book 2, our heroes are able to [[spoiler: fix the ilshara]], but not until after [[spoiler: the entire guardpost is massacred]], [[spoiler: Davian, Fessi and Ishelle]] are trapped in Talan Gol, and thousands of [[spoiler: Banes]] have infiltrated Andarra.
** In Book 3, [[spoiler: Wirr's]] forces successfully engage and defeat the [[spoiler: gil'shar and their Banes]], but at the expense of nearly all the [[spoiler: soldiers, Augurs, Gifted, Shadows and Administrators]] in their army.
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** In Book 1, [[spoiler: Ilin Illan]] is able to successfully fight off [[spoiler: the Blind's Invasion]], though it happens at the expense of [[spoiler: thousands of soldiers, many political and military leaders, and considerable destruction to the city.
city.]]
*** Tragically taken UpToEleven in the fight against [[spoiler: the Banes]] in Book 3, as the [[spoiler: Eletai kill everyone who doesn't make it into TolAthian]] Athian and Caden is forced to [[spoiler: raze the city to the ground to stop them.]]
** In Book 2, our heroes are able to [[spoiler: fix the ilshara]], but not until after [[spoiler: the entire guardpost ismassacred]], [[spoiler: massacred, Davian, Fessi and Ishelle]] Ishelle are trapped in Talan Gol, and thousands of [[spoiler: Banes]] Banes have infiltrated Andarra.
Andarra.]]
** In Book 3, [[spoiler: Wirr's]] forces successfully engage and defeat the [[spoiler: gil'shar and their Banes]], but at the expense of nearly all the [[spoiler: soldiers, Augurs, Gifted, Shadows andAdministrators]] Administrators in their army.]]
*** Tragically taken UpToEleven in the fight against [[spoiler: the Banes]] in Book 3, as the [[spoiler: Eletai kill everyone who doesn't make it into Tol
** In Book 2, our heroes are able to [[spoiler: fix the ilshara]], but not until after [[spoiler: the entire guardpost is
** In Book 3, [[spoiler: Wirr's]] forces successfully engage and defeat the [[spoiler: gil'shar and their Banes]], but at the expense of nearly all the [[spoiler: soldiers, Augurs, Gifted, Shadows and
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* SecretCircleOfSecrets: Tol Shen and its council of Elders is incredibly secretive. For good reason, as [[spoiler: they've been using forbidden Vessels and stolen Augur Visions to manipulate the king and bolster their reputation.]]
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* SecretCircleOfSecrets: Tol Shen and its council of Elders is incredibly secretive.
** For good reason, as [[spoiler: they've been using forbidden Vessels and stolen Augur Visions to manipulate the king and bolster their reputation.]]
** For good reason, as [[spoiler: they've been using forbidden Vessels and stolen Augur Visions to manipulate the king and bolster their reputation.]]
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** Happens to both [[spoiler: Kol and Fessi]]. They [[ForesawMyDeath Saw their own deaths]], then later recognized the circumstances of their death, panic, then accidentally instigate it.
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** Happens to both [[spoiler: Kol and Fessi]]. They [[ForesawMyDeath [[ForeeingMyDeath Saw their own deaths]], then later recognized the circumstances of their death, panic, panicked, then accidentally instigate it.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Wirr is frustrated at his inability to convince the disparate factions of Administration, the Tols and the military of the danger the [[spoiler: Bane invasion]] poses.
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** [[spoiler: He does eventually, but by then it's almost too late.]]
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* AGodAmI: While the Venerate acknowledges [[spoiler: El/Shammaeloth]] as a being above them, they believe their supreme abilities and [[spoiler: immortality]] basically make them gods compared to the rest of humanity.
** Literally invoked in Desriel, as the [[spoiler: Venerate are the Desrielite gods.]]
** Literally invoked in Desriel, as the [[spoiler: Venerate are the Desrielite gods.]]
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* ExploitedImmunity: The Venerate can't be permanently killed [[spoiler: except by Licanius]]. They often commit suicide or allow themselves to die just to get out of a difficult situation (they wake up in a new body somewhere else).
** [[spoiler: Similarly, in Book 3, Davian's death has been Seen, allowing both his captors and himself to take serious risks with his safety as they know nothing else will actually kill him.]]
** [[spoiler: Similarly, in Book 3, Davian's death has been Seen, allowing both his captors and himself to take serious risks with his safety as they know nothing else will actually kill him.]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[PlayingWithATrope Played with]] to a heavy extent. By the end of Book 2, it's already revealed just how and when [[spoiler: Davian will die...or is it?]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[PlayingWithATrope Played with]] to a heavy extent. By the end of Book 2, it's already revealed just how and when [[spoiler: Davian will die...die]] [[spoiler: ...or is it?]]
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* AGlitchInTheMatrix: Asha experiences this fairly frequently in the dok'en, but she is fully aware of them and able to patch them up herself.
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* IndyPloy: Despite his optimism, Caeden has no clue how he's going to [[spoiler: save Davian]] when he goes through the [[spoiler: rift]] for the last time, but he does it anyway.
** The bonds he's forged with his friends and an encounter with both [[spoiler: Niha and the real Elliavia]] finally push him in the right direction.
** The bonds he's forged with his friends and an encounter with both [[spoiler: Niha and the real Elliavia]] finally push him in the right direction.
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* IndyPloy: Despite his optimism, Caeden has no clue how he's going to [[spoiler: save Davian]] when he goes through the [[spoiler: rift]] rift for the last time, time]], but he does it anyway.
** [[spoiler: The bonds he's forged with his friends and an encounter withboth [[spoiler: both Niha and the real Elliavia]] Elliavia finally push him in the right direction.]]
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* MenAreTheExpendableGender: {{Downplayed}} significantly. While men consist of the majority of soldiers, the Andarra is generally equal-opportunity when it comes to the military, Administration and politics.
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* ResistanceAsPlanned: The revolution that sacked the ruling-class Augurs twenty years prior was actually [[spoiler: orchestrated in secret by Nethgalla and Jakarris, the leader of the prewar augurs.
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* ResistanceAsPlanned: The revolution that sacked the ruling-class Augurs twenty years prior was actually [[spoiler: orchestrated in secret by Nethgalla and Jakarris, the leader of the prewar augurs.]]
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* ShoutOut: Author James Islington mentions [[Literature/MistbornTheOriginalTrilogy ''Mistborn'']] as a major inspiration for the series.
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* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Raeleth's unwitting parting gift for [[spoiler: Niha]] once they return to their own times. [[spoiler: It turns out to be Davian himself.]]
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* TheChosenOne: Largely {{Downplayed}}. While Davian is referred to as ''the greatest man of this age'', and some of his actions were seen by the prewar Augurs, he is fulfilling no legendary prophecy.
** Similarly, Caeden's achievements don't fit the bill as they are largely [[spoiler: a result of his own planning]], not pre-ordained from a mythical source.
** Similarly, Caeden's achievements don't fit the bill as they are largely [[spoiler: a result of his own planning]], not pre-ordained from a mythical source.
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* YouShallNotPass: The heroes hold off [[spoiler: El/Shammaeloth and its armies]] from reaching [[spoiler: Deilannis]] until [[spoiler: Caeden can finish his business with the Jha'vett.]]
* YourMindMakesItReal: How the universe inside a dok'en works. While nothing inside is technically real, everything can still inflict real pain.
* YourMindMakesItReal: How the universe inside a dok'en works. While nothing inside is technically real, everything can still inflict real pain.
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* WarIsHell: Military conflict in this series is anything but glorified. Plenty of SceneryGorn, {{Squick}} and [[spoiler: the deaths of [[AnyoneCanDie many named characters]] ]] always follow.
* WeAreAsMayflies: Human lives compared to those of [[spoiler: the Venerate, or the Shalis.]]
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Wirr is frustrated at his inability to convince the disparate factions of Administration, the Tols and the military of the danger the [[spoiler: Bane invasion]] poses.
** [[spoiler: He does eventually, but by then it's almost too late.]]
* WeAreAsMayflies: Human lives compared to those of [[spoiler: the Venerate, or the Shalis.]]
* WeAreStrugglingTogether: Wirr is frustrated at his inability to convince the disparate factions of Administration, the Tols and the military of the danger the [[spoiler: Bane invasion]] poses.
** [[spoiler: He does eventually, but by then it's almost too late.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Caeden has a very significant flashback [[spoiler: at the ends of both Book 1 and Book 2]], re-contextualizing all of his past actions and drastically changing the direction of the narrative.
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* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: Most Gifted [[spoiler: and Augurs]] require a significant training period to gain proper control over their powers. Those who cannot demonstrate it are stripped of their ability to use Essence.
* TrapIsTheOnlyOption: Davian and Fessi suspect their journey to rescue [[spoiler: Ishelle]] from across the boundary might be one-way, but they refuse to abandon their friend.
* TrapIsTheOnlyOption: Davian and Fessi suspect their journey to rescue [[spoiler: Ishelle]] from across the boundary might be one-way, but they refuse to abandon their friend.
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* TeleportInterdiction: Asha's initial strategy in her battle against [[spoiler: Diara]] is to set up numerous Essence traps that will explode upon the latter's arrival.
* TemporalParadox: {{Averted}}. Time travelers can take basically any action in the past because [[spoiler: they have already done so]]. They can even [[spoiler: come into contact with past versions of themselves.]]
* ThereAreNoCoincidences: Everything that happens to Davian in the first book is [[spoiler: a result of Caeden's plan]]. This includes oddities like Breshada's sudden choice to save him, and his summoning [[spoiler: through the rift.]]
* TemporalParadox: {{Averted}}. Time travelers can take basically any action in the past because [[spoiler: they have already done so]]. They can even [[spoiler: come into contact with past versions of themselves.]]
* ThereAreNoCoincidences: Everything that happens to Davian in the first book is [[spoiler: a result of Caeden's plan]]. This includes oddities like Breshada's sudden choice to save him, and his summoning [[spoiler: through the rift.]]
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* TrackingSpell: A variation. Every Gifted has a unique Essence signature that can be tracked, though it requires specialty knowledge to actually do so.
* TrainingFromHell: No quick training montages to be found in this series.
** Malshash is a very fast-paced tutor, pushing Davian to learn Augur tactics that would take most people years to use in a few weeks' time. [[spoiler: Even more so during their second round of training in Zvaelar.]]
** Asha's training from [[spoiler: Elli]] requires fighting against al'goriat and learning to parry their time-dilation attacks. [[spoiler: It actually works, but after plenty of painful failed attempts.]]
* TrainingFromHell: No quick training montages to be found in this series.
** Malshash is a very fast-paced tutor, pushing Davian to learn Augur tactics that would take most people years to use in a few weeks' time. [[spoiler: Even more so during their second round of training in Zvaelar.]]
** Asha's training from [[spoiler: Elli]] requires fighting against al'goriat and learning to parry their time-dilation attacks. [[spoiler: It actually works, but after plenty of painful failed attempts.]]
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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: In the end, [[the boundary has fallen, the Banes are dead, Northern Andarra is destroyed, and both the Augurs and Venerate are no more. Regardless of what happens next, some major restructuring will be happening in the world.]]
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* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: In the end, [[the [[spoiler: the boundary has fallen, the Banes are dead, Northern Andarra is destroyed, and both the Augurs and Venerate are no more. Regardless of what happens next, some major restructuring will be happening in the world.]]
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[Downplayed]] with [[spoiler: Orkoth]], as its fate is speculated upon during the final trip to Deilannis, but never confirmed.
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* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: [[Downplayed]] {{Downplayed}} with [[spoiler: Orkoth]], as its fate is speculated upon during the final trip to Deilannis, but never confirmed.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Asha is very mistrustful of Caeden and his intentions after learning that [[spoiler: he will be responsible for Davian's death.]]
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* SwordFight: The Song of Swords is an international competition of blade masters. Aelric represents Andarra, finishing in second place [[spoiler: intentionally.]]
** On a more serious note, several sword duels occur between Caeden and [[spoiler: the Venerate]], necessitated by Licanius' effects.
** On a more serious note, several sword duels occur between Caeden and [[spoiler: the Venerate]], necessitated by Licanius' effects.
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* EldritchAbomination: [[spoiler: El/Shammaeloth]] and all of the Banes, to some degree.
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* SimpleYetOpulent: The architectural design philosophy of the Builders.
* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: {{Inverted}} to an insane degree in the Shining Lands during Caeden's flashbacks. Alarais considers those who personally serve him to have earned the highest honour possible, and treats them as equals.
* SimpleYetOpulent: The architectural design philosophy of the Builders.
* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: {{Inverted}} to an insane degree in the Shining Lands during Caeden's flashbacks. Alarais considers those who personally serve him to have earned the highest honour possible, and treats them as equals.
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* ShmuckBait: Far back in Caeden's memory, his town of residence pays hefty bounties for killing giant scorpions. Of course, they travel in massive packs and kill just about everything with their deathly venomous stingers.
** [[spoiler: Naturally, people are shocked when Caeden returns every night with several corpses — so much so that he becomes a local celebrity. They don't know he's immortal, of course.]]
** [[spoiler: Naturally, people are shocked when Caeden returns every night with several corpses — so much so that he becomes a local celebrity. They don't know he's immortal, of course.]]
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** Happens to both [[spoiler: Kol and Fessi]]. They recognize the circumstances of their death, panic, then accidentally instigate it.
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* ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: [[spoiler: Nethgalla]] makes Davian strip to avoid this when he tests out [[spoiler: his dar'gaithin transformation Vessel]] so that the new clothes she got him aren't destroyed. She doesn't look away, either.
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Raeleth's unwitting parting gift for [[spoiler: Niha]] once they return to their own times. [[spoiler: It turns out to be Davian himself.]]
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Raeleth's unwitting parting gift for [[spoiler: Niha]] once they return to their own times. [[spoiler: It turns out to be Davian himself.]]
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* ShapeshiftingExcludesClothing: ScrewTheRulesItsTheApocalypse: Wirr invokes this to convince [[spoiler: Nethgalla]] makes Davian strip the Gifted, Shadows, and Administrators]] to avoid this when he tests out fight on the same side in Andarra's defense in Book 3.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: Tol Shen and its council of Elders is incredibly secretive. For good reason, as [[spoiler:his dar'gaithin transformation Vessel]] so they've been using forbidden Vessels and stolen Augur Visions to manipulate the king and bolster their reputation.]]
* SerpentOfImmortality: Caeden's flashbacks reveal that thenew clothes she got him Shalis could always be revived after death, but [[spoiler: if they aren't destroyed. She doesn't look away, either.
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* SecretCircleOfSecrets: Tol Shen and its council of Elders is incredibly secretive. For good reason, as [[spoiler:
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* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Raeleth's unwitting parting gift for [[spoiler: Niha]] once they return to their own times. [[spoiler: It turns out to be Davian himself.]]
* SomeoneToRememberHimBy: Raeleth's unwitting parting gift for [[spoiler: Niha]] once they return to their own times. [[spoiler: It turns out to be Davian himself.]]