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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/62828/the-discarded-half-eaten-apple-core-new-life-an/ The Discarded, Half-Eaten Apple Core New Life]]'' is a post-apocalyptic [[ADungeonIsYou Dungeon Core]] LitRPG, written for the Royal Road January 2023 community writing contest, but never actually entered.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/62828/the-discarded-half-eaten-apple-core-new-life-an/ The Discarded, Half-Eaten Apple Core New Life]]'' is a post-apocalyptic [[ADungeonIsYou Dungeon Core]] LitRPG, written for the Royal Road Website/RoyalRoad January 2023 community writing contest, but never actually entered.
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* GameBreaker: InUniverse. When the Dungeon starts experimenting with [[spoiler:Primordial Transmutation]], he quickly concludes that it's powerful enough to completely unbalance the System.
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* GameBreaker: InUniverse. When the Dungeon starts experimenting with [[spoiler:Primordial Transmutation]], Transmutation, which allows him to ''create mana crystals at a lower cost than their value'']], he quickly concludes that it's powerful enough to completely unbalance the System.
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* ReincarnatedAsANonHumanoid: The protagonist goes from average human guy, is killed by aliens and finds his soul attached to the remains of a discarded eaten fruit and then is taken by The System and turned into a Dungeon Core.
