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* AccidentalDownerEnding: [[spoiler:Because the author DiedDuringProduction, the last book ends with the protagonist's rapist remaining unpunished and her little sister abducted, the villains' schemes still active and a possible demonic invasion about to happen.]]
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* AccidentalDownerEnding: [[spoiler:Because the author DiedDuringProduction, the last book ends with the protagonist's rapist remaining unpunished and her little sister abducted, the villains' schemes still active and a possible demonic invasion about to happen.]]
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* AlienInvasion: According to Nuevaropan belief, the Creators created Paradise from Old Hell. According to Uma, the Creators came to Fae's world as invaders along with their "meat toys".


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* MonsterLord: The Grey Angels actually have a king and that is Michael, though he doesn't show up in the series - his ruling prevents Raguel from making an immediate second attack. The Fae sort of have Uma, though technically hers is just a self-proclaimed title and it's her greater power and mentality that gets her to generally get the fickle Fae to do her bidding.


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* TheUnmasquedWorld: Paradise has existed long enough that many people including Karyl and Melodía see the Fae and the Grey Angels as well as their magic as myth and superstition. Even the Creators are believed to be mythical or long gone by many other than the relgious. This disbelief starts breaking apart with Raguel's attack.

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* BadassArmy: The Fugitive Legion is this. When they were still the army of Providence, Karyl and Rob had succeeded in whipping into a potent force by bringing on several triceratops with howdahs (they're not on par with the White River Legion, so the Fugitive Legion's howdah riders used powerful but slow arbalests compared to the WRL's hornbow archers) that alone makes them unique since the White River Legion. They combine this with irregulars experienced in guerrilla warfare in their Wildrunners and even managed to enlist a number of true Dinosaur Knights. With Melodía joining, the light cavalry branch also improves to a respectable fighting force where they lacked a leader to rally behind before.

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* BadassArmy: The Fugitive Legion is this. When they were still the army of Providence, Karyl and Rob had succeeded in whipping into a potent force by bringing on several triceratops with howdahs (they're not on par with the White River Legion, so the Fugitive Legion's howdah riders used powerful but slow arbalests compared to the WRL's hornbow archers) that alone makes them unique since the White River Legion. They combine this with irregulars experienced in guerrilla warfare in their Wildrunners and even managed to enlist a number of true Dinosaur Knights. With Melodía joining, the light cavalry branch also improves to a respectable an effective fighting force where they lacked a leader to rally behind before.


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* PutOnABus: After the 1st book, Melodía's GirlPosse never show up again (there was indication they'd appear in the future some time after Book 3 but then the author DiedDuringProduction).

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* BadassArmy: The Fugitive Legion is this. When they were still the army of Providence, Karyl and Rob had succeeded in whipping into a potent force by bringing on several triceratops with howdahs (they're not on par with the White River Legion, so the Fugitive Legion's howdah riders used powerful but slow arbalests compared to the WRL's hornbow archers) that alone makes them unique since the White River Legion. They combine this with irregulars experienced in guerrilla warfare in their Wildrunners and even managed to enlist a number of true Dinosaur Knights.

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* BadassArmy: The Fugitive Legion is this. When they were still the army of Providence, Karyl and Rob had succeeded in whipping into a potent force by bringing on several triceratops with howdahs (they're not on par with the White River Legion, so the Fugitive Legion's howdah riders used powerful but slow arbalests compared to the WRL's hornbow archers) that alone makes them unique since the White River Legion. They combine this with irregulars experienced in guerrilla warfare in their Wildrunners and even managed to enlist a number of true Dinosaur Knights. With Melodía joining, the light cavalry branch also improves to a respectable fighting force where they lacked a leader to rally behind before.



* ElectiveMonarchy: The Empire of Nuevaropa actually chooses its ruler from the several different branches of the large royal family, and a child of a former emperor cannot directly inherit.

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* ElectiveMonarchy: The Empire of Nuevaropa actually chooses Nuevaropa's government uses an elector system where the Torres or Towers are the major noble houses, Torre Menor - the Tower representing the minorities, and Torre Delgao (the ruling family since its legendary founder Manuel) get a vote. The unique stipulation is that the incoming ruler must always come from the several different branches of the large royal family, Torre Delgao and a child of a former emperor cannot directly inherit.



* PraetorianGuard: The Scarlet Tyrants, named after the ''T. rex'', who serve as bodyguards and palace police of the Emperor. Insinuating himself a

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* PraetorianGuard: The Scarlet Tyrants, named after the ''T. rex'', who serve as bodyguards and palace police of the Emperor. Insinuating himself aEmperor and are often taken from minority groups in the Empire. Duke Falk is the current leader.


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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Done deliberately by Falk. He challenges the commander of the Scarlet Tyrants to a death duel and in winning, he becomes their new commander.
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* StressInducedVomiting: Melodia has to run off and go puke after she learns what the nobles actually think of her experiences as a light cavalry member of the Fugitive Legion. It turns out they believe she ran off when her father needed her most in the fight against the hordelings and when she counters saying that she fought the hordelings long before Imperial forces did, the nobles she hung out with tell her that her light cavalry did could hardly be called fighting and they felt she was just slumming with commoners who were also renegades.

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* StressInducedVomiting: Melodia StressVomit: Melodía has to run off and go puke after she learns what the nobles actually think of her experiences as a light cavalry member of the Fugitive Legion. It turns out they believe she ran off when her father needed her most in the fight against the hordelings and when she counters saying that she fought the hordelings long before Imperial forces did, the nobles she hung out with tell her that her light cavalry did could hardly be called fighting and they felt she was just slumming with commoners who were also renegades.

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* KryptoniteFactor: Karyl's ''shikomizue'' given to him by Uma, is one of the few weapons capable of killing Fae.



* MasterSwordsman: The two most notable in the series are Voyvod (later Duke) Karyl Borgomirsky and Count (later Prince) Jaume Llobregat. In Jaume's case, there's no better swordman in the country of Nuevaropa and uniquely among Dinosaur Knights in mounted combat, Jaume not only still favors a sword but can put each attack in whatever target he aims at despite the incredible jostling of the dinosaur mount (most mounted Dinosaur Knights instead favor mauls or long-hafted maces to knock over enemies from their mounts). Karyl is so amazing a swordsman that he was able to go toe to toe with the superhuman Grey Angel Raguel, despite the being's inhuman size and speed, he even cuts off one of Raguel's hands before tiring out. Melodía is later tutored by Maestra Auriana who La Madrota Rosamaria says is a swordsmaster though not on Karyl's level.
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: A question for the reader rather than the characters. On one hand, it'd be easy to see Aphrodite's actions and the Angel from the prologue as magic. On the other hand, there are indications that Paradise has been colonized by humans who later regressed technologically, so Aphrodite's "magic" that regrows Karyl's hand could be some sort of ClarkesThirdLaw-adhering tech.

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* MasterSwordsman: The two most notable in the series are Voyvod (later Duke) Karyl Borgomirsky and Count (later Prince) Jaume Llobregat. In Jaume's case, there's no better swordman in the country of Nuevaropa and uniquely among Dinosaur Knights in mounted combat, Jaume not only still favors a sword but can put each attack in whatever target he aims at despite the incredible jostling of the dinosaur mount (most mounted Dinosaur Knights instead favor mauls mauls, poleaxes or long-hafted maces to knock over enemies from their mounts). Karyl is so amazing a swordsman that he was able to go toe to toe with the superhuman Grey Angel Raguel, despite the being's inhuman size and speed, he even cuts off one of Raguel's hands before tiring out. Melodía is later tutored by Maestra Auriana who La Madrota Rosamaria says is a swordsmaster though not on Karyl's level.
* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: A question for the reader rather than the characters. On one hand, it'd be easy to see Aphrodite's actions and the Angel from the prologue as magic. On the other hand, there are indications that Paradise has been colonized by humans who later regressed technologically, so Aphrodite's "magic" that regrows Karyl's hand could be some sort of ClarkesThirdLaw-adhering tech. However given that all the supernatural beings call what they do as magic and what they are as supernatural, it could be that future humanity has developed SufficientlyAnalyzedMagic as a technology in the manner of ''Literature/LegendsOfTheRedSun''. There's also a throwaway line by Jaume mentioning the existence of [[PsychicPowers PSI]].

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* AttemptedRape: When drunk, Falk almost rapes Melodía; only intervention of her handmaiden lets her slip away.

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* AttemptedRape: When drunk, Falk almost rapes Melodía; only intervention of her handmaiden lets her slip away. Unfortunately for her, he succeeds later.



* BadassArmy: The Fugitive Legion is this. When they were still the army of Providence, Karyl and Rob had succeeded in whipping into a potent force by bringing on several triceratops with howdahs (they're not on par with the White River Legion, so the Fugitive Legion's howdah riders used powerful but slow arbalests compared to the WRL's hornbow archers) that alone makes them unique since the White River Legion. They combine this with irregulars experienced in guerrilla warfare in their Wildrunners and even managed to enlist a number of true Dinosaur Knights.



** When talking with Montserrat about helping Melodía, Pilar lampshades this, noting that nobody in the palace notices children or servants.

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** When talking with Montserrat about helping Melodía, Melod&iaacute;a, Pilar lampshades this, noting that nobody in the palace notices children or servants.



* BigCreepyCrawlies: Underplayed, but Melodía mentions off-handedly that the fireflies from which the Palace takes its name are a metre long.

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* BigCreepyCrawlies: Underplayed, but Melodía Melod&iaacute;a mentions off-handedly that the fireflies from which the Palace takes its name are a metre long.



* ChinaTakesOverTheWorld: Among the Creators few if any were Asian given the depictions of each individual Creator. However there's evidence that they were at least partially Chinese in culture: the "holy language" that the Creators used is Chinese as the China expy of Paradise is the nation famous for their everyday language being the same as the Creators, the Book of Law that all nations follow uses Celestial hierarchy and Taoist beliefs as the focus of morality rather than a Christian-based faith and when Jaume and his Companions used their hand to draw the holy symbol in the air, the symbol depicted was the Yin-Yang. Even in the first book, among the Grey Angels meeting in the epilogue they mentioned Taoism by name.

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* ChinaTakesOverTheWorld: Among the Creators few if any were Asian given the depictions of each individual Creator. However there's evidence that they were at least partially Chinese in culture: the "holy language" that the Creators used is Chinese as Chánguo, the China expy of Paradise is the nation famous for their everyday language being the same as the Creators, the Book of Law that all nations follow uses Celestial hierarchy and Taoist beliefs as the focus of morality rather than a Christian-based faith and when Jaume and his Companions used their hand to draw the holy symbol Taiji in the air, the symbol depicted was the Yin-Yang. Even in the first book, among the Grey Angels meeting in the epilogue they mentioned Taoism by name.



* {{Cliffhanger}}: Unfortunately due to Victor Milán's death, it's one for the whole series. Karyl and Rob are forced to flee the Imperial Palace due to an assassination plot and many people (though luckily not Emperor Felipe) believed they were aided in escape by the Fae. The Grey Angel Gabriel has arrived to lead the armies of Nuevaropa against Trebizon for kidnapping Princess Montserrat.



* ConstructedWorld: While the countries and peoples are clearly historical analogues to medieval Earth with countries such as Angleterra, Zipangu, Cheng Guo, Nuevaropa and etc., the world of Paradise is not planet Earth as old texts note that Earth (a.k.a Home, Hogar and Old Home) had a heavier gravity, cooler temperatures and a year that was 1.6 times longer than that of Paradise.

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* ConstructedWorld: While the countries and peoples are clearly historical analogues to medieval Earth with countries such as Angleterra, Anglaterra, Zipangu, Cheng Guo, Chánguo, Nuevaropa and etc., the world of Paradise is not planet Earth as old texts note that Earth (a.k.a Home, Hogar and Old Home) had a heavier gravity, cooler temperatures and a year that was 1.6 times longer than that of Paradise.



* MasterSwordsman: The two most notable in the series are Voyvod (later Duke) Karyl Borgomirsky and Count (later Prince) Jaume Llobregat. In Jaume's case, there's no better swordman in the country of Nuevaropa and uniquely among Dinosaur Knights in mounted combat, Jaume not only still favors a sword but can put each attack in whatever target he aims at despite the incredible jostling of the dinosaur mount (most mounted Dinosaur Knights instead favor mauls or long-hafted maces to knock over enemies from their mounts). Karyl is so amazing a swordsman that he was able to go toe to toe with the superhuman Grey Angel Raguel, despite the being's inhuman size and speed, he even cuts off one of Raguel's hands before tiring out.

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* MasterSwordsman: The two most notable in the series are Voyvod (later Duke) Karyl Borgomirsky and Count (later Prince) Jaume Llobregat. In Jaume's case, there's no better swordman in the country of Nuevaropa and uniquely among Dinosaur Knights in mounted combat, Jaume not only still favors a sword but can put each attack in whatever target he aims at despite the incredible jostling of the dinosaur mount (most mounted Dinosaur Knights instead favor mauls or long-hafted maces to knock over enemies from their mounts). Karyl is so amazing a swordsman that he was able to go toe to toe with the superhuman Grey Angel Raguel, despite the being's inhuman size and speed, he even cuts off one of Raguel's hands before tiring out. Melodía is later tutored by Maestra Auriana who La Madrota Rosamaria says is a swordsmaster though not on Karyl's level.



** Melodía's mom died in childbirth bearing Monsterrat.

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** Melodía's mom Mariposa died in childbirth bearing Monsterrat.

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* ChurchMilitant: The Companions, Jaume's EliteArmy, are technically a militant religious order, to current Pope's fury. They worship Bella, Lady of Beauty and Truth.

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* ChurchMilitant: The Companions, Jaume's EliteArmy, are technically a militant religious order, to current Pope's fury. They worship Bella, Bella (a.k.a Lady Li), Lady of Beauty and Truth.



* CoolBigSis: Melodía ties to be this for Montserrat, in lieu of their father's attention.
* ConstructedWorld: While the countries and peoples are clearly historical analogues to medieval Earth with countries such as Anglaterre, Zipangu, Chung Kuo, Nuevaropa and etc., the world of Paradise is not planet Earth as old texts note that Earth (a.k.a Home, Hogar and Old Home) had a heavier gravity, cooler temperatures and a year that was 1.6 times longer than that of Paradise.

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* CoolBigSis: Melodía ties tries to be this for Montserrat, in lieu of their father's attention.
* ConstructedWorld: While the countries and peoples are clearly historical analogues to medieval Earth with countries such as Anglaterre, Angleterra, Zipangu, Chung Kuo, Cheng Guo, Nuevaropa and etc., the world of Paradise is not planet Earth as old texts note that Earth (a.k.a Home, Hogar and Old Home) had a heavier gravity, cooler temperatures and a year that was 1.6 times longer than that of Paradise.



* DeathWorld: Paradise is a full-blown inversion. People have potential to live forever, wounds heal within days, food is so plentiful it takes effort to starve, and climate is on the hot side, but not murderously so.

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* DeathWorld: Paradise is a full-blown inversion. People have potential to live forever, wounds heal within days, food is so plentiful it takes effort to starve, and climate is on the hot side, but not murderously so. Additionally disease is almost unknown.



* GuysSmashGirlsShoot: Applied to some degree, most Dinosaur Knights are men and with their lengthy melee weapon of choice and plate armor - they typically charge into battle to knock enemies around. Most light cavalry are women and with little armor and comparatively lightweight horses, light cavalry mostly uses throwing weapons like the swing dart or if the rider has the skill and training - the horn bow. Melodia notes herself that while noblewomen are all trained with weapons, the focus is mostly with ranged weapons, she was only trained further in the sword because she had the privilege of having a sword instructor.



* TheImmune: Disease is almost unknown to Humanity on Paradise, the only times people get sick from infection is when a plague is sent by the Grey Angels so illness has dark implications. People even get terrified if they see someone who's been sickened due to severe injury.

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* TheImmune: Possibly. Disease is almost unknown to Humanity on Paradise, the only vast majority of times people get sick from infection is when a plague is sent by the Grey Angels so illness has dark implications. People even get terrified if they see someone who's been sickened due to severe injury. However when the Imperials form their Army of Correction, there are several outbreaks of disease that Jaume attributes to the army having so many people that don't bathe or practise good hygiene (though Uriel was lurking within the army and may have been using his poers to sicken pople.


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* StressInducedVomiting: Melodia has to run off and go puke after she learns what the nobles actually think of her experiences as a light cavalry member of the Fugitive Legion. It turns out they believe she ran off when her father needed her most in the fight against the hordelings and when she counters saying that she fought the hordelings long before Imperial forces did, the nobles she hung out with tell her that her light cavalry did could hardly be called fighting and they felt she was just slumming with commoners who were also renegades.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Why did Falk anally rape Melodía? At the ballroom dance where she meets him in person, she thought of having sex with him (Jaume was away campaigning and there's no cultural issue against open relationships in Nuevaropa) and indicated it. Later seeing what a bastard he is to others, she loses her temporary infatuation and declines. This greatly pissed off Falk who was looking forward to getting one over his rival Jaume and was hot for Melodía's beauty.
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* MasterSwordsman: The two most notable in the series are Voyvod (later Duke) Karyl Borgomirsky and Count (later Prince) Jaume Llobregat. In Jaume's case, there's no better swordman in the country of Nuevaropa and uniquely among Dinosaur Knights in mounted combat, Jaume not only still favors a sword but can put each attack in whatever target he aims at despite the incredible jostling of the dinosaur mount (most mounted Dinosaur Knights instead favor mauls or long-hafted maces to knock over enemies from their mounts). Karyl is so amazing a swordsman that he was able to go toe to toe with the superhuman Grey Angel Raguel, despite the being's inhuman size and speed, he even cuts off one of Raguel's hands before tiring out.
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* OverlyLongTitle: ''A Primer To Paradise For The Improvement Of Young Minds'' is a mouthful.

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* ChinaTakesOverTheWorld: Among the Creators few if any were Asian given the depictions of each individual Creator. However there's evidence that they were at least partially Chinese in culture: the "holy language" that the Creators used is Chinese as the China expy of Paradise is the nation famous for their everyday language being the same as the Creators, the Book of Law that all nations follow uses Celestial hierarchy and Taoist beliefs as the focus of morality rather than a Christian-based faith and when one character used their sword to draw in the air the sign of the holy symbol, the symbol depicted was the Yin-Yang. Even in the first book, among the Grey Angels meeting in the epilogue they mentioned Taoism by name.

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* ChinaTakesOverTheWorld: Among the Creators few if any were Asian given the depictions of each individual Creator. However there's evidence that they were at least partially Chinese in culture: the "holy language" that the Creators used is Chinese as the China expy of Paradise is the nation famous for their everyday language being the same as the Creators, the Book of Law that all nations follow uses Celestial hierarchy and Taoist beliefs as the focus of morality rather than a Christian-based faith and when one character Jaume and his Companions used their sword hand to draw in the air the sign of the holy symbol, symbol in the air, the symbol depicted was the Yin-Yang. Even in the first book, among the Grey Angels meeting in the epilogue they mentioned Taoism by name.



* ConstructedWorld: While the countries and peoples are clearly historical analogues to medieval Earth with countries such as Angle Terre, Zipangu, Chung Kuo, Nuevaropa and etc., the world of Paradise is not planet Earth as old texts note that Earth (a.k.a Home, Hogar and Old Home) had a heavier gravity, cooler temperatures and a year that was 1.6 times longer than that of Paradise.

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* ConstructedWorld: While the countries and peoples are clearly historical analogues to medieval Earth with countries such as Angle Terre, Anglaterre, Zipangu, Chung Kuo, Nuevaropa and etc., the world of Paradise is not planet Earth as old texts note that Earth (a.k.a Home, Hogar and Old Home) had a heavier gravity, cooler temperatures and a year that was 1.6 times longer than that of Paradise.


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* TheImmune: Disease is almost unknown to Humanity on Paradise, the only times people get sick from infection is when a plague is sent by the Grey Angels so illness has dark implications. People even get terrified if they see someone who's been sickened due to severe injury.


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* ToBeLawfulOrGood: Jaume is placed in a deep moral bind when he learns how horrible the atrocities committed by the Army of Correction. Against the wishes of a number of his Companions, he intends to serve his Emperor further rather than quit the field. This leads to a few members of his order quitting.
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* ChinaTakesOverTheWorld: Among the Creators few if any were Asian given the depictions of each individual Creator. However there's evidence that they were at least partially Chinese in culture: the "holy language" that the Creators used is Chinese as the China expy of Paradise is the nation famous for their everyday language being the same as the Creators, the Book of Law that all nations follow uses Celestial hierarchy and Taoist beliefs as the focus of morality rather than a Christian-based faith and when one character used their sword to draw in the air the sign of the holy symbol, the symbol depicted was the Yin-Yang. Even in the first book, among the Grey Angels meeting in the epilogue they mentioned Taoism by name.


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** Likewise the books mention Zipangu and its ninjas reputed to be able to catch arrows in flight with their hands. It's a neighbor of the above Celestial Kingdoms.
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* ThunderboltIron: The planet of Paradise got some of its major metal deposits from large meteor impacts. Jaume's famed sword the Lady's Mirror is made of this "star-steel".

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* ThunderboltIron: The planet of Paradise got some of its major metal deposits from large meteor impacts. Jaume's famed sword the Lady's Mirror is made of this "star-steel". Karyl also gets a star-metal longsword from former Count Etienne since the old noble no longer needs it after joining the Gardeners sect.

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