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* TheVerse: This book shares a universe with numerous other short stories by Barron, most notably ''The Broadsword'' and ''Mysterium Tremendum''.
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* LesCollaborateurs: Several powerful human families are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. [[spoiler:Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them. As is Don's boss Barry Rourke.]] Don goes as far to speculate that the American government, and maybe other governments of the world are also in on it to some degree or another. Kurt even invokes the name of the trope, when [[spoiler:he muses on how deep his mother's family is in with the Children]].
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* LesCollaborateurs: Several powerful human families are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. [[spoiler:Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them. As is Don's boss Barry Rourke.]]]] Don goes as far to speculate that the American government, and maybe other governments of the world are also in on it to some degree or another. Kurt even invokes the name of the trope, when [[spoiler:he muses on how deep his mother's family is in with the Children]].
-->'''Kurt:''' Fucking collaborators!
-->'''Kurt:''' Fucking collaborators!
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** [[spoiler:Most telling, Bronson Ford doesn't need to give the people he offers to make a deal (a wish in exchange for one of their children) with any choice in the matter. He admits that him and his kin could just take whatever they damned well pleased if they wanted do so. He really just likes to see the unfortunate human squirm under the weight of the SacasticChoice.]]
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** [[spoiler:Most telling, Bronson Ford aka Rumpelstiltskin doesn't need to give the people he offers to make a deal (a wish in exchange for one of their children) with any choice in the matter. He admits that him and his kin could just take whatever they damned well pleased if they wanted do so. He really just likes to see the unfortunate human squirm under the weight of the SacasticChoice.]]
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* HumansAreInsects: Don all but directly says the trope name doing his confrontation with [[spoiler:Bronson Ford]]. [[spoiler:Ford]], however, tells him that it doesn't quite work like that.
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'''[[spoiler:Ford]]:''' Despite our superiority to you, we remain but a clog in the gears. [[AGodIAmNot We aren't gods]], although the distinction is insignificant from your perspective.
-->'''Don:''' Right. We're ants and you're the kid with the magnifying glass. Is that really all there is to this? I'd hoped that the universe either had a grant scheme or was at least monumentally indifferent. [[DisappointedByTheMotive This Olympus crap is rather disappointing.]]\\
'''[[spoiler:Ford]]:''' Despite our superiority to you, we remain but a clog in the gears. [[AGodIAmNot We aren't gods]], although the distinction is insignificant from your perspective.
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* IHaveYourWife: And daughter. While the Children would ordinarily not want to hurt a Mock, they explain that [[spoiler: Michelle's love for Don, combined with the fact he's openly defied them, presents a problem. They cannot tolerate divided loyalties, so either Don ''un''divides her loyalty right quick by joining them, or they'll torture Michelle for all eternity along with him. They don't explicitly mention Holly, but they don't have to.]]
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* DefiantToTheEnd: [[spoiler:Don is incredibly stubborn, and steadfastly refuses to be browbeat into submission by any threats of how the wrath of the Children and the Old Leech might rain down upon him that Rourke, Wolverton, and Ford level at him, no matter how much existential dread they might instil in him, even at one point gathering enough willpower to overcome being frozen by fear and managing to kill Rourke, when he is otherwise at him and Wolverton's mercy. Ford even implies that it is something he has InTheBlood, telling him that his distant ancestors often have shown the same tenacity throughout the ages. It is eventually subverted though; Don might be able shrug off threats against himself, but Michelle and the twins is another matter entirely...]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Don reasons he doesn't need to worry about [[spoiler: Old Leech and his Children taking over the world]], because it's so far in the future he and everyone he knows will be long dead. Mr. R/Bronson, however, corrects him: if the Children are sufficiently pissed off at Don, they are perfectly capable of keeping him alive as long as they want, so just that [[ForcedToWatch they can force him to witness it]].
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Don reasons he doesn't need to worry about [[spoiler: Old Leech and his Children taking over the world]], because it's so far in the future he and everyone he knows will be long dead. Mr. R/Bronson, however, corrects him: if the Children are sufficiently pissed off at Don, they are perfectly capable of keeping him alive as long as they want, so just that so [[ForcedToWatch they can force him to witness it]].
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Don reasons he doesn't need to worry about [[spoiler: Old Leech and his Children taking over the world]], because it's so far in the future he and everyone he knows will be long dead. Mr. R/Bronson, however, corrects him: if the Children are sufficiently pissed off at Don, they are perfectly capable of keeping him alive as long as they want.
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* ForTheEvulz: The Children delight in casually inflicting traumatizing horror and pain upon any hapless human unlucky enough who happen to stumble upon them, just for kicks.
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* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler:It is revealed that the holes in Don's memory is due to onset dementia, but because the Children and the Dark Ones induce small scale brain damage in everyone they come into contact with. Don, however, suspects that it is also his own mind at play, trying to protect itself from remembering the full implications of what it has witnessed during his encounters with the Children of the Old Leech.]]
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* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler:It is revealed that the holes in Don's memory is are not due to onset dementia, but because the Children and the Dark Ones induce small scale brain damage in everyone they come into contact with. Don, however, suspects that it is also his own mind at play, trying to protect itself from remembering the full implications of what it has witnessed during his encounters with the Children of the Old Leech.]]
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* ExactWords: "Rumpelstiltskin" promised the Queen he would not take her child if she could guess his name before the deadline. [[spoiler: Just straight-up murdering her is, technically, not taking her child.]]
* FateWorseThanDeath: Don reasons he doesn't need to worry about [[spoiler: Old Leech and his Children taking over the world]], because it's so far in the future he and everyone he knows will be long dead. Mr. R/Bronson, however, corrects him: if the Children are sufficiently pissed off at Don, they are perfectly capable of keeping him alive as long as they want.
* ForTheEvulz: The Childrendelights delight in casually inflicting traumatizing horror and pain upon any hapless human unlucky enough who happen to stumble upon them, just for kicks.
* FateWorseThanDeath: Don reasons he doesn't need to worry about [[spoiler: Old Leech and his Children taking over the world]], because it's so far in the future he and everyone he knows will be long dead. Mr. R/Bronson, however, corrects him: if the Children are sufficiently pissed off at Don, they are perfectly capable of keeping him alive as long as they want.
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* TitleDrop: A ritual called the croning is referred to several times. [[spoiler: It seems to have something to do with being turned into a Child.]]
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* WasOnceAMan: [[spoiler:Most of the Children were once people. The way they operate is that they take some selected members of the species they colonise to join their ranks, so to speak, by turning them into one of their own.]]
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* WasOnceAMan: [[spoiler:Most of the Children were once people. The way they operate is that they take some selected members of the species they colonise to join their ranks, so to speak, by turning them into one of their own. The process is rather horrifying from the unfortunate human's point of view.]]
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* IncestIsRelative: In addition to being the Queen's brother, the Spy is madly in love with her and the father of the child they're trying to protect.
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* WeMeetAgain: Don gets the strangest feeling that he has met the helicopter pilot, Derek Burton, before. He notices that Burton even gives him an knowingly smug smile as if to say "Yes, Don, we've met." [[spoiler:Turns out that he used to be Ramirez, and still is. [[WasOnceAMan Well, kind of.]]]]
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* WeMeetAgain: Don gets the strangest feeling that he has met the helicopter pilot, Derek Burton, before. He notices that Burton even gives him an knowingly smug smile and a wink as if to say "Yes, Don, we've met." [[spoiler:Turns out that he used to be Ramirez, and still is. [[WasOnceAMan Well, kind of.]]]]
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* WeMetAgain: WeMeetAgain: Don gets the strangest feeling that he has met the helicopter pilot, Derek Burton, before. He notices that Burton even gives him an knowingly smug smile as if to say "Yes, Don, we've met." [[spoiler:Turns out that he used to be Ramirez, and still is. [[WasOnceAMan Well, kind of.]]]]
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: [[spoiler:Barry Rourke tells Don that, the way he sees it, he only has himself to blame for getting in too deep with the Dark Ones.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Rourke:''' Man, you don't know when to let sleeping dogs lie. Always meddling. You simply ''had'' to go hunting for Michelle instead of listening to sage advice and spending a couple of extra days drunk at the hotel bar.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Rourke:''' Man, you don't know when to let sleeping dogs lie. Always meddling. You simply ''had'' to go hunting for Michelle instead of listening to sage advice and spending a couple of extra days drunk at the hotel bar.]]
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* LesCollaborateurs: Several powerful human families are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. [[spoiler:Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them. As as is Don's boss Barry Rourke.]]
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* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler:It is indicated that Don's holes in his memory is not just due to onset dementia, but also his mind trying to protect itself from remembering the full implications of what it has witnessed during his encounters with the Children of the Old Leech.]]
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* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler:It is indicated revealed that the holes in Don's holes in his memory is not just due to onset dementia, but because the Children and the Dark Ones induce small scale brain damage in everyone they come into contact with. Don, however, suspects that it is also his own mind at play, trying to protect itself from remembering the full implications of what it has witnessed during his encounters with the Children of the Old Leech.]]]]
-->[[spoiler:Don figured the low-grade amnesia was also equal parts self-preservation. His consciousness was had evaluated the threat posed by these affronts to sanity and decided to dim the lights and flip the sign to OUT OF SERVICE.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Don decides to enter into a deal with the Children. Eternal life for him and Michelle, and the safe return of his daughter, in exchange for the life of his infant grandson.]]
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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Don decides to enter into a deal with the Children. Eternal life for him and Michelle, and the safe return of his daughter, in exchange for the life of his infant grandson. And once he remembers the deal, he won't be in a position to regret it anymore.]]
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* GoMadFromTheRevelation: [[spoiler:Frequently {{invoked| Trope}} by the Children, because they find the utter terror released by such an event absolutely delicious to feast on.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Bronson Ford:''' We sup of blood and fear, we rejoice in flensing away that which occults the truth. Pointless to repeat what you already know. Wolverton and Rourke told you everything. Your recognition of these facts is a chemical bloom that lights your cerebral cortex with fireworks. It is this dawning of horror upon primitive minds that gives me my greatest frisson. I have lived thousand of your own lifecycles and the taste of your revulsion and horror never grows stale.]]
* HumanoidAbomination:[[spoiler:Everyone who has been converted into one of the Children.[[spoiler:The Children whenever they walk around disguised as humans.]]
-->[[spoiler:'''Bronson Ford:''' We sup of blood and fear, we rejoice in flensing away that which occults the truth. Pointless to repeat what you already know. Wolverton and Rourke told you everything. Your recognition of these facts is a chemical bloom that lights your cerebral cortex with fireworks. It is this dawning of horror upon primitive minds that gives me my greatest frisson. I have lived thousand of your own lifecycles and the taste of your revulsion and horror never grows stale.]]
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* EatsBabies: Very much played for horror. [[spoiler:The Children see infants and children from every spices they colonise as a delicacy.]]
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* HumanDisguise: Many of the Children employs this. [[spoiler:Mostly as a way of protection because they are WeakenedByTheLight, but also because looking directly at their undisguised forms tends to inflict normal humans with a milder version of GoMadFromTheRevelation.]]
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* HumanDisguise: Many [[spoiler:Many of the Children employs this. [[spoiler:Mostly this, walking around in the skin of the human they were before. Mostly as a way of protection because they are WeakenedByTheLight, but also because looking directly at their undisguised forms tends to inflict normal humans with a milder version of GoMadFromTheRevelation.]]
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* AncientConspiracy: The Children have been infiltrating human society since pre-historic times, and have been known to recruit humans agents and servants for just about as long.
* AffablyEvil: [[spoiler:Both Don's boss Barry Rourke and Connor Wolverton are central members of TheConspiracy that [[LesCollaborateurs collaborates]] with the Children. But they both are always polite and friendly to Don and are more than glad to answer his questions about their masters (mostly because they know he is not likely to remember any of them afterwards).]]
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* EldritchAbomination: The Old Leech, which the Children serve. [[spoiler:Not many details about it is revealed about it, but Bronson Ford reveals as much that it vastly outclasses him and the other Children in terms of power, and it have the ability to bend time itself.]]
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* EldritchAbomination: The Old Leech, which the Children serve. [[spoiler:Not many details about it is revealed about it, but Bronson Ford reveals as much that it vastly outclasses him and the other Children in terms of power, and it have the ability to bend space and even time itself.]]]] The Old Leech is also but one of the Dark Ones, of which there are quite a few.
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* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler:Several powerful human famlies are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them.]]
* PuppeteerParasite: [[spoiler:The Children are a form of intergalactic parasite that have been infiltrating humankind for centuries, using human bodies to disguise their their true forms. It also overlaps slightly with SymbioticPossession, in that the host body retains the memory of their own identity and eventually willingly works with the parasite.]]
* PuppeteerParasite: [[spoiler:The Children are a form of intergalactic parasite that have been infiltrating humankind for centuries, using human bodies to disguise their their true forms. It also overlaps slightly with SymbioticPossession, in that the host body retains the memory of their own identity and eventually willingly works with the parasite.]]
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* LesCollaborateurs: Several powerful human families are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. [[spoiler:Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them. As as is Don's boss Barry Rourke.]]
* PuppeteerParasite:[[spoiler:The [[spoiler:Combined with TheAssimilator. The Children are a form of intergalactic parasite that have been infiltrating humankind for centuries, using human bodies to disguise their their true forms. It also overlaps slightly with SymbioticPossession, in that the host body retains the memory of their own identity and eventually willingly works with the parasite.]]
* LesCollaborateurs: Several powerful human families are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. [[spoiler:Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them. As as is Don's boss Barry Rourke.]]
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** Your significant other is involved in something highly sinister, something that might even have brought you in harm's way, but in despite of this they are not planning on telling you, and might even count on your own trust in them and your good nature to prevent you from trying to uncover it.
** [[spoiler:What is ultimately most important to you? Your spouse and your child, or your grandchild?]]
** Your significant other is involved in something highly sinister, something that might even have brought you in harm's way, but in despite of this they are not planning on telling you, and might even count on your own trust in them and your good nature to prevent you from trying to uncover it.
** [[spoiler:What is ultimately most important to you? Your spouse and your child, or your grandchild?]]
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* ContinuityNod: There is a reference to Laird Barron's short story, ''The Broadsword'', which takes place in the same universe.
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* CuriosityKilledTheCast: Kurt, Don, Argyle, and Hank decide to go in search of a strange clearing in the forestry wilderness behind the old Mock House that Kurt encountered in his childhood. [[spoiler:The expedition stumbles something much more horrible than expected, and Argyle and Hank are killed in the process, while Kurt and Don barely manage to escape.]]
* CuriosityKilledTheCast: Kurt, Don, Argyle, and Hank decide to go in search of a strange clearing in the forestry wilderness behind the old Mock House that Kurt encountered in his childhood. [[spoiler:The expedition stumbles something much more horrible than expected, and Argyle and Hank are killed in the process, while Kurt and Don barely manage to escape.]]
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* EldritchLocation: [[spoiler:Don and Hank stumbles upon a strange, old [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dolmen dolmen]] tomb in a clearing in the wilderness far behind the Mock House. Don notices that there shouldn't be such a tomb there, since no Native American culture was known to build dolmens, and such a structure should by all means already have been discovered by government or private surveyors long ago. Even stranger, it seems to be BiggerOnTheInside. Hank decides to enter and explore it despite Don's warnings and misgivings, [[CuriosityKilledTheCast and is never seen again]].]]
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: The beginning of the story does this twice, with the first chapter being told from the viewpoint of the Spy, then the next from the viewpoint of Tommy Crane, first at the third chapter, the reader is introduced to Don Miller, who is the primary main character of the story.
* AnachronicOrder: Though the narrative for the most part most often follows Don as an old man in the present day, the story jumps a bit around in time, mostly between the present and 1980, but also does some detours to 1958 and even the early medieval period.
* AnachronicOrder: Though the narrative for the most part most often follows Don as an old man in the present day, the story jumps a bit around in time, mostly between the present and 1980, but also does some detours to 1958 and even the early medieval period.
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In 1980, Agent Tommy Crane of the NSA is investigating a highly strange case, involving the suicide of a mysterious well-connected entomologist named Dr. Louis Plimpton. Before he died, Plimpton relayed a personal message to Crane, which eerily reminds him of something from his childhood.
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In 1980, Agent Tommy Crane of the NSA is investigating a highly strange case, involving the suicide of a mysterious mysteriously well-connected entomologist named Dr. Louis Plimpton. Before he died, Plimpton relayed a personal message to Crane, which eerily reminds him of something from his childhood.
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In 1980, Agent Tommy Crane of the NSA is investigating a highly strange case, involving the suicide of a strangely well-connected entomologist named Dr. Louis Plimpton. Before he died, Plimpton relayed a personal message to Crane, which eerily reminds him of something from his childhood.
In the present, a much older Don Miller is enjoying his retirement alongside Michelle in the country outside Olympia, Washington, where they living in a old, rustic house, that once belonged to Michelle's family. While everything seems peaceful and idyllic on the surface, the ageing Don notices much to his concern that he is struggling with an unexplainable fear of darkness and occasional gabs in his memories, especially regarding some field work he did in 1980. During a visit from him and Michelle's adult twins, outlandish things starts happening around the house, and Don's fuzzy memory starts clearing up, as he soon begins to unearth some dark secrets about his wife and her family.
In the present, a much older Don Miller is enjoying his retirement alongside Michelle in the country outside Olympia, Washington, where they living in a old, rustic house, that once belonged to Michelle's family. While everything seems peaceful and idyllic on the surface, the ageing Don notices much to his concern that he is struggling with an unexplainable fear of darkness and occasional gabs in his memories, especially regarding some field work he did in 1980. During a visit from him and Michelle's adult twins, outlandish things starts happening around the house, and Don's fuzzy memory starts clearing up, as he soon begins to unearth some dark secrets about his wife and her family.
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In 1980, Agent Tommy Crane of the NSA is investigating a highly strange case, involving the suicide of a strangely mysterious well-connected entomologist named Dr. Louis Plimpton. Before he died, Plimpton relayed a personal message to Crane, which eerily reminds him of something from his childhood.
In the present, a much older Don Miller is enjoying his retirement alongside Michelle in the country outside Olympia, Washington, where they living in a old, rustic house, that once belonged to Michelle's family. While everything seems peaceful and idyllic on the surface, the ageing Don notices much to his concern that he is struggling with an unexplainable fear of darkness and occasional gabs in his memories, especially regarding somefield work he did enigmatic event that happened to him in 1980. During a visit from him and Michelle's adult twins, outlandish things starts happening around the house, and Don's fuzzy memory starts clearing up, as he soon begins to unearth some dark secrets about his wife and her family.
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* WeakenedByTheLight: [[spoiler:The Children themselves feel uncomfortable in light, even when they are walking about in human form, and their God requires to dwell in complete darkness to stay alive. And so their plan to TakeOverTheWorld, is really just a LongGame, where they wait for the Sun to die out and leave the Earth in darkness, as they recruit some new human followers along the way.]]
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* DealWithTheDevil: The speciality of the Children. They can grant you quite a few things, and even fulfil some wishes otherwise thought impossible. All it costs is [[spoiler:is a child. Preferably one of your own, or just one related to you]]. In the end, [[spoiler:Don agrees to such a deal too in exchange for him and Michelle again immortality]].
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''The Croning'' is a CosmicHorrorStory from 2012, written by American author Laird Barron.
In the early middle ages, a Spy goes on a mission given to him by his sister, the Queen. He is to track down a strange, misshapen dwarf, who has made a deal with the Queen; she must learn his true name, or he will take her firstborn child as payment for a favor he once did her. The mysterious dwarf proves much more illusive than originally thought, and the quest takes the Spy to the end of civilisation at the far edges of the realm, where he discovers something terrible and very old lurking in an ancient temple hidden in shadows of the mountains.
In 1958, Donald "Don" Miller, a professor in geology is on vacation in Mexico City with his wife, Michelle, who is a renowned professor in anthropology, but after a phone call from a colleague, Michelle goes missing. As he attempts to find her, a worried Don is recommended to seek out help from two local retired police officers, who joins Don in his search. But his two companions quickly prove to somewhat unhinged and untrustworthy, and Don finds himself getting involved in a series of increasingly bizarre and dangerous situations in the far outskirts of the city, that culminates in him ending up in a cave in the mountains outside the city, which is rumoured to contain a bottomless pit. Here, he has a close brush not only with death, but also something much, much worse...
In 1980, Agent Tommy Crane of the NSA is investigating a highly strange case, involving the suicide of a strangely well-connected entomologist named Dr. Louis Plimpton. Before he died, Plimpton relayed a personal message to Crane, which eerily reminds him of something from his childhood.
In the present, a much older Don Miller is enjoying his retirement alongside Michelle in the country outside Olympia, Washington, where they living in a old, rustic house, that once belonged to Michelle's family. While everything seems peaceful and idyllic on the surface, the ageing Don notices much to his concern that he is struggling with an unexplainable fear of darkness and occasional gabs in his memories, especially regarding some field work he did in 1980. During a visit from him and Michelle's adult twins, outlandish things starts happening around the house, and Don's fuzzy memory starts clearing up, as he soon begins to unearth some dark secrets about his wife and her family.
Tying all these strings together is the Children of the Old Leech. They always have been lurked in the shadows, and been with our speices from times immortal. And they love us.
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!!Tropes:
* AliensAreBastards: The Children are powerful, immortal, and are leagues beyond humans in techology. They are also extremely petty jerks who love to torture and scare humans out of their wits simply because they enjoy feeding on their fear.
* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler:It is indicated that Don's holes in his memory is not just due to onset dementia, but also his mind trying to protect itself from remembering the full implications of what it has witnessed during his encounters with the Children of the Old Leech.]]
* BlackEyesOfEvil: [[spoiler:People taken over by the Children manifests these.]]
* ContinuityNod: There is a reference to Laird Barron's short story, ''The Broadsword'', which takes place in the same universe.
* DealWithTheDevil: The speciality of the Children. They can grant you quite a few things, and even fulfil some wishes otherwise thought impossible. All it costs is [[spoiler:is a child. Preferably one of your own, or just one related to you]]. In the end, [[spoiler:Don agrees to such a deal too in exchange for him and Michelle again immortality]].
* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Don decides to enter into a deal with the Children. Eternal life for him and Michelle, and the safe return of his daughter, in exchange for the life of his infant grandson.]]
* EatsBabies: Very much played for horror. [[spoiler:The Children see infants and children from every spices they colonise as a delicacy.]]
* EldritchAbomination: The Old Leech, which the Children serve. [[spoiler:Not many details about it is revealed about it, but Bronson Ford reveals as much that it vastly outclasses him and the other Children in terms of power, and it have the ability to bend time itself.]]
* EmotionEater: The Children have the ability to feed on human fear. [[spoiler:It is indicated that they strictly speaking don't ''need'' it, per say, but they find the sensation of absorbing it extremely delightful, like a recreational drug.]]
* ForTheEvulz: The Children delights in casually inflicting traumatizing horror and pain upon any hapless human unlucky enough who happen to stumble upon them, just for kicks.
** [[spoiler:Most telling, Bronson Ford doesn't need to give the people he offers to make a deal (a wish in exchange for one of their children) with any choice in the matter. He admits that him and his kin could just take whatever they damned well pleased if they wanted do so. He really just likes to see the unfortunate human squirm under the weight of the SacasticChoice.]]
* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:Everyone who has been converted into one of the Children.]]
* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler:Several powerful human famlies are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them.]]
* PuppeteerParasite: [[spoiler:The Children are a form of intergalactic parasite that have been infiltrating humankind for centuries, using human bodies to disguise their their true forms. It also overlaps slightly with SymbioticPossession, in that the host body retains the memory of their own identity and eventually willingly works with the parasite.]]
* ToServeMan: The Children prey upon humanity. [[spoiler:Not so much grown humans, but human infants and children are a delicacy to them.]]
* UncannyValley: InUniverse. [[spoiler:Humans who has being converted to one of the Children, has this this to them. People who seem them notice that they appear to have too many vertebrae in their necks, have BlackEyesOfEvil, and their bodies moves in ways that are either weird, or even impossible for a regular human. Worse still, it is even implied that the Children have the ability to turn this effect on or off at will and uses it to frighten humans for their amusement.]]
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In the early middle ages, a Spy goes on a mission given to him by his sister, the Queen. He is to track down a strange, misshapen dwarf, who has made a deal with the Queen; she must learn his true name, or he will take her firstborn child as payment for a favor he once did her. The mysterious dwarf proves much more illusive than originally thought, and the quest takes the Spy to the end of civilisation at the far edges of the realm, where he discovers something terrible and very old lurking in an ancient temple hidden in shadows of the mountains.
In 1958, Donald "Don" Miller, a professor in geology is on vacation in Mexico City with his wife, Michelle, who is a renowned professor in anthropology, but after a phone call from a colleague, Michelle goes missing. As he attempts to find her, a worried Don is recommended to seek out help from two local retired police officers, who joins Don in his search. But his two companions quickly prove to somewhat unhinged and untrustworthy, and Don finds himself getting involved in a series of increasingly bizarre and dangerous situations in the far outskirts of the city, that culminates in him ending up in a cave in the mountains outside the city, which is rumoured to contain a bottomless pit. Here, he has a close brush not only with death, but also something much, much worse...
In 1980, Agent Tommy Crane of the NSA is investigating a highly strange case, involving the suicide of a strangely well-connected entomologist named Dr. Louis Plimpton. Before he died, Plimpton relayed a personal message to Crane, which eerily reminds him of something from his childhood.
In the present, a much older Don Miller is enjoying his retirement alongside Michelle in the country outside Olympia, Washington, where they living in a old, rustic house, that once belonged to Michelle's family. While everything seems peaceful and idyllic on the surface, the ageing Don notices much to his concern that he is struggling with an unexplainable fear of darkness and occasional gabs in his memories, especially regarding some field work he did in 1980. During a visit from him and Michelle's adult twins, outlandish things starts happening around the house, and Don's fuzzy memory starts clearing up, as he soon begins to unearth some dark secrets about his wife and her family.
Tying all these strings together is the Children of the Old Leech. They always have been lurked in the shadows, and been with our speices from times immortal. And they love us.
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!!Tropes:
* AliensAreBastards: The Children are powerful, immortal, and are leagues beyond humans in techology. They are also extremely petty jerks who love to torture and scare humans out of their wits simply because they enjoy feeding on their fear.
* AwfulTruth: [[spoiler:It is indicated that Don's holes in his memory is not just due to onset dementia, but also his mind trying to protect itself from remembering the full implications of what it has witnessed during his encounters with the Children of the Old Leech.]]
* BlackEyesOfEvil: [[spoiler:People taken over by the Children manifests these.]]
* ContinuityNod: There is a reference to Laird Barron's short story, ''The Broadsword'', which takes place in the same universe.
* DealWithTheDevil: The speciality of the Children. They can grant you quite a few things, and even fulfil some wishes otherwise thought impossible. All it costs is [[spoiler:is a child. Preferably one of your own, or just one related to you]]. In the end, [[spoiler:Don agrees to such a deal too in exchange for him and Michelle again immortality]].
* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Don decides to enter into a deal with the Children. Eternal life for him and Michelle, and the safe return of his daughter, in exchange for the life of his infant grandson.]]
* EatsBabies: Very much played for horror. [[spoiler:The Children see infants and children from every spices they colonise as a delicacy.]]
* EldritchAbomination: The Old Leech, which the Children serve. [[spoiler:Not many details about it is revealed about it, but Bronson Ford reveals as much that it vastly outclasses him and the other Children in terms of power, and it have the ability to bend time itself.]]
* EmotionEater: The Children have the ability to feed on human fear. [[spoiler:It is indicated that they strictly speaking don't ''need'' it, per say, but they find the sensation of absorbing it extremely delightful, like a recreational drug.]]
* ForTheEvulz: The Children delights in casually inflicting traumatizing horror and pain upon any hapless human unlucky enough who happen to stumble upon them, just for kicks.
** [[spoiler:Most telling, Bronson Ford doesn't need to give the people he offers to make a deal (a wish in exchange for one of their children) with any choice in the matter. He admits that him and his kin could just take whatever they damned well pleased if they wanted do so. He really just likes to see the unfortunate human squirm under the weight of the SacasticChoice.]]
* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:Everyone who has been converted into one of the Children.]]
* LesCollaborateurs: [[spoiler:Several powerful human famlies are in league with the Children, in exchange for riches, power, and a chance at immortality. Michelle's family, the Mocks, turns out to be one of them.]]
* PuppeteerParasite: [[spoiler:The Children are a form of intergalactic parasite that have been infiltrating humankind for centuries, using human bodies to disguise their their true forms. It also overlaps slightly with SymbioticPossession, in that the host body retains the memory of their own identity and eventually willingly works with the parasite.]]
* ToServeMan: The Children prey upon humanity. [[spoiler:Not so much grown humans, but human infants and children are a delicacy to them.]]
* UncannyValley: InUniverse. [[spoiler:Humans who has being converted to one of the Children, has this this to them. People who seem them notice that they appear to have too many vertebrae in their necks, have BlackEyesOfEvil, and their bodies moves in ways that are either weird, or even impossible for a regular human. Worse still, it is even implied that the Children have the ability to turn this effect on or off at will and uses it to frighten humans for their amusement.]]
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