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* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Carl and Donut finally get back to Clarabelle about the money she scammed out of them on the third floor when they first hired security, because not they have something they want from her ''and'' they have leverage.
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* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Carl and Donut finally get back to Clarabelle about the money she scammed out of them on the third floor when they first hired security, because not now they have something they want from her ''and'' they have leverage.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Carl goes above and beyond by immediately teleporting into ''Zockau'', the capital city full of Hunters. Donut and Mordecai both rip him apart for it. But it works.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Carl goes above and beyond by immediately teleporting into ''Zockau'', the capital city full of Hunters. Donut and Mordecai both rip him apart for it. But it works.works.
** In a darker example, Carl beats a person to death resulting in Donut getting scared and a couple of werecastors to share a disturbed look.
** In a darker example, Carl beats a person to death resulting in Donut getting scared and a couple of werecastors to share a disturbed look.
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* ShoutOut: Donut gets a complicated one when she complains that she thought the All-Tree was "like that tree from that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman's mom]] on ''Series/{{Friends}}''".
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* ShoutOut: Donut gets a complicated one when she complains that she thought the All-Tree was "like that tree from that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady ''Franchise/{{Ghostbusters}}'' [[Creator/SigourneyWeaver lady]] and [[Creator/GiovanniRibisi that Scientologist guy guy]] who married [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman's Forman's]] [[Creator/DebraJoRupp mom]] on ''Series/{{Friends}}''".
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* OneManArmy: At the start of act three, Cascadia notes that the Hunter death rate is at 25% instead of the usual 2%. When Carl jumped Zockau at the start of the floor, he single-handedly killed 3% of the Hunters.
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* MortonsFork: Without really intending to do so, Carl forced the male Mantis, Edict, into a nightmare scenario. Carl knew that Vahl, as a future brood queen, would opt to [[spoiler:pass the Enthusiastic Double Gonorrhea on]] to Edict rather than remove her genitalia, so offered the man a choice: we'll protect you in exchange for all your gear (he was the Hive's merchant). Unfortunately, the gear was already contracted out and giving it to Carl would destroy Edict's family, so he passed it along to a contact immediately, leaving him nothing to bargain with. The alternative, mating with Vahl, would ''also'' destroy his family, because Mantis matings are carefully contracted and it would be seen as a disgusting betrayal for him to mate with Vahl. [[DrivenToSuicide So he]] [[TakeAThirdOption takes a third option.]]
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* MortonsFork: Without really intending to do so, Carl forced the male Mantis, Edict, into a nightmare scenario. Carl knew that Vahl, as a future brood queen, would opt to [[spoiler:pass the Enthusiastic Double Gonorrhea on]] to Edict rather than remove her genitalia, so offered the man a choice: we'll protect you in exchange for all your gear (he was the Hive's merchant). Unfortunately, the gear was already contracted out and giving it to Carl would destroy Edict's family, so he passed it along to a contact immediately, leaving him nothing to bargain with. The alternative, mating with Vahl, would ''also'' destroy his family, because Mantis matings are carefully contracted and it would be seen as a disgusting betrayal for him to mate with Vahl. On the other hand, ''refusing'' to mate with Vahl would be seen as an insult and her family would take revenge on his. [[DrivenToSuicide So he]] [[TakeAThirdOption takes a third fourth option.]]
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* AsYouKnow: At the Dungeon Crawl History panel, Drick and Uptown Hal spend some time discussing Carl's situation (with Sydnee the historian somewhat confused sitting between them), knowing that the mudskippers will have made it so Carl can hear and they can off-handedly give him information and advice while pretending to just chitchat.
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* ShoutOut: Donut gets a complicated one when she complains that she thought the All-Tree was like that tree from that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''Series/{{Friends}}''".
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* ShoutOut: Donut gets a complicated one when she complains that she thought the All-Tree was like "like that tree from that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''Series/{{Friends}}''".
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* ShownTheirWork: Donut gets a complicated one when she complains that she thought the All-Tree was like that tree from
that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''Series/{{Friends}}''".
that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''Series/{{Friends}}''".
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* ShownTheirWork: ShoutOut: Donut gets a complicated one when she complains that she thought the All-Tree was like that tree from
from that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''Series/{{Friends}}''".
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that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[LiveActionTV/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''LiveActionTV/{{Friends}}''".
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that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[LiveActionTV/ThatSeventiesShow [[Series/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''LiveActionTV/{{Friends}}''".''Series/{{Friends}}''".
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* ShownTheirWork: Donut gets a complicated one when she complains that she thought the All-Tree was like that tree from
that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[LiveActionTV/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''LiveActionTV/{{Friends}}''".
that [[Film/{{Avatar}} weird, blue alien movie]] with the ''Film/{{Ghostbusters}}'' lady and that Scientologist guy who married [[LiveActionTV/ThatSeventiesShow Eric Forman’s mom]] on ''LiveActionTV/{{Friends}}''".
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* DueToTheDead: Imani names the new guild Safehouse Yolanda.
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* BewareTheSillyOnes: Donut used her message board to engineer the overthrow of a government.
-->'''Carl:''' What the hell? What just happened? Did you have anything to do with this?\\
'''Donut:''' Viva la revolución, Carl.
-->'''Carl:''' What the hell? What just happened? Did you have anything to do with this?\\
'''Donut:''' Viva la revolución, Carl.
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* NotCompletelyUseless: Benefactors gift Katia and Donut with a magic hammer and a magic stick to go along with Pony's magic solvent. They don't have any use, they don't have any stats or bonuses. It's just a regular hammer, a long metal stick, and a tube of solvent, all marked magic. At the end of the book, [[spoiler:Pony puts the clues together and uses all three to completely destroy the seventh floor before it even begins, sending everyone to the eighth]].
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* NotSoDifferentRemark: Carl notes that many of the Hunters have jobs like "refugee" and the like. It doesn't stop him, but he does pause a moment. One hunter even uses this to try and appeal to him for mercy... until she makes the mistake of calling herself a "real" person.
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* ComfortFood: Bea's was apparently root beer floats, judging by Donut's song.
