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* BadassPrincess: Ashlin. The first sight of her we get is at sword practice, and first impressions don't lie. ''Almost'' RebelliousPrincess -- she would rather, personally, have had the life of a mercenary soldier than that of the Crown Prince's wife -- but duty won out.
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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Ashlin. The first sight of her we get is at sword practice, and first impressions don't lie. ''Almost'' RebelliousPrincess -- she would rather, personally, have had the life of a mercenary soldier than that of the Crown Prince's wife -- but duty won out.
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* AmazonChaser: Savedra's finds Ashlin attractive despite not normally being interested in women, and a part of that appreciation is for Ashlin's warrior physique, which gets plenty of mention when we're seeing things from Savedra's point-of-view.
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The final battle ended with Savedra having to watch Ginerva, who she became friends with, kill herself rather than be possessed. Niko watched his father die, unable to do anything. Isyllt watched Kiril and Spider die, had lost Forsythia's ghost, and because she let the king die to be by Kiril's side she broke her oath and lost most of her power, leaving her without a job. In the end she decides its too painful to stay and leaves the country with Dahlia.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The final battle ended with Savedra having to watch Ginerva, who she became friends with, kill herself rather than be possessed. Niko watched his father die, unable to do anything. Isyllt watched Kiril and Spider die, had lost Forsythia's ghost, and because she let the king die to be by Kiril's side she broke her oath and lost most of her power, leaving her without a job. In the end she decides its too painful to stay and leaves the country with Dahlia.Dehlia.]]
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* DestructiveRomance: The romance between [[spoiler:Phaedra and Mathiros]] ultimately caused all the problems in the present, as well as spelled their own doom.
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* DestructiveRomance: The romance between [[spoiler:Phaedra and Mathiros]] ultimately caused all the problems in the present, as well as spelled spelling their own doom.
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* {{Familiar}}: Crows for [[spoiler:Phaedra, which is probably due to a number of the tearing her corpse apart when she originally died and ingesting her blood, which contained her power, will, and consciousness.]]
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* {{Familiar}}: Crows for [[spoiler:Phaedra, which is probably due to a number of the them tearing her corpse apart when she originally died and ingesting her blood, which contained her power, will, and consciousness.]]
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Phaedra, Spider, and Varis plans to get revenge ultimately boils down to replacing the current king with Phaedra in a younger body, her current one being the former queen that Kiril took from her tomb. She offers to do the same for Kiril, giving him Nikos' body, but he refuses.]]
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Phaedra, Spider, and Varis plans Varis's plan to get revenge ultimately boils down to replacing the current king with Phaedra in a younger body, her current one being the former queen that Kiril took from her tomb. She offers to do the same for Kiril, giving him Nikos' body, but he refuses.]]
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* HiddenInPlainSight: [[spoiler:Phaedra]] operates out of the ruins of the old castle ruins. Because it's so steeped in ghosts and spirits and old magic no one would really notice her there.
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* HiddenInPlainSight: [[spoiler:Phaedra]] operates out of the ruins of the old castle ruins.castle. Because it's so steeped in ghosts and spirits and old magic no one would really notice her there.
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* InterspeciesRomance: Typically speaking, it's frowned upon to court demons or the vrykoloi, but at a number of characters have done so.
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* ItAmusedMe: Why Spider jumped from a tall ledge to carry Isyllt down to met the vrykoloi elders rather than take the stairs.
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* LeaveNoWitnesses: To prevent an international crises [[spoiler:from killing Phaedra]] Kiril [[spoiler:murdered everyone in the castle in Carnavas.]]
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* LeaveNoWitnesses: To prevent an international crises crisis [[spoiler:from killing Phaedra]] Kiril [[spoiler:murdered everyone in the castle in Carnavas.]]
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* MoodSwinger: Phaedra is known from for going from mania to despair in a blink of an eye.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Varis, Savedra's uncle. He wears gaudy close, aggravates others, and acts in a manner that belays his intelligence. [[spoiler:Which is why few suspect he's the one attempting to kill Mathiros.]]
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. While classified as spirits possessing the dead, they have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they have make them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. While classified as spirits possessing the dead, they have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they have make them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
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* ObfuscatingStupidity: Varis, Savedra's uncle. He wears gaudy close, clothes, aggravates others, and acts in a manner that belays belies his intelligence. [[spoiler:Which is why few suspect he's the one attempting to kill Mathiros.]]
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. While classified as spirits possessing the dead, they have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they havemake makes them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: The ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. While classified as spirits possessing the dead, they have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they have
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* {{Transsexual}}: In-series they are known as Hijra, the third sex, and keep to themselves in a temple in the Garden. Savedra Severos, mistress to Nikos, the Crown Prince, is one. Dehlia herself will also be one upon reaching sixteen.
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* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra was born with an adam's apple and only small breasts, and retains functional male genitalia; given that she's from an exceedingly rich family and has their full support, this suggests that magical transformation assistance only aids in mild cosmetic ways and cannot completely switch genders.
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* DrivenToSuicide: How [[spoiler:Phaedra]] originally died after [[spoiler:Mathiros killed her lover. She threw herself out of the castle window.]]
* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra was born with an adam's apple and only small breasts, and retains functional male genitalia; given that she's from an exceedingly rich family and has their full support, this suggests that magical transformation assistance only aids in mild cosmetic ways and cannot completely switch genders. [[spoiler:There was the option of GrandTheftMe but she passed on it.]]
* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra was born with an adam's apple and only small breasts, and retains functional male genitalia; given that she's from an exceedingly rich family and has their full support, this suggests that magical transformation assistance only aids in mild cosmetic ways and cannot completely switch genders. [[spoiler:There was the option of GrandTheftMe but she passed on it.]]
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Phaedra's reasoning for insisting on helping Kiril. In her words, he broke himself to help her.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Phaedra's reasoning for insisting on helping Kiril. In her words, he broke himself to help her. [[spoiler:Which made her sad that she had to kill him.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The final battle ended with Savedra having to watch Ginerva, who she became friends with, kill herself rather than be possessed. Niko watched his father die, unable to do anything. Isyllt watched Kiril and Spider die, had lost Forsythia's ghost, and because she let the king die to be by Kiril's side she broke her oath and lost most of her power, leaving her without a job. In the end she decides its too painful to stay and leaves the country with Dahlia.]]
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:The final battle ended with Savedra having to watch Ginerva, who she became friends with, kill herself rather than be possessed. Niko watched his father die, unable to do anything. Isyllt watched Kiril and Spider die, had lost Forsythia's ghost, and because she let the king die to be by Kiril's side she broke her oath and lost most of her power, leaving her without a job. In the end she decides its too painful to stay and leaves the country with Dahlia.]]
* EntropyAndChaosMagic: Isyllt is a entropomancer, meaning she can invoke entropy in other things. [[spoiler:She ultimately uses it to turn Phaedra to dust.]]
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* InVinoVeritas: Ashlin and Savedra were both pretty drunk [[spoiler:when they had sex.]]
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* InVinoVeritas: Ashlin and Savedra were both pretty drunk [[spoiler:when they first had sex.]]
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* NeverFoundTheBody: [[spoiler: Kiril's body, twice. The first time Varis took it to prevent a spirit from possessing it. When he went back to get it, it was gone.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Varis, Savedra's uncle. He wears gaudy close, aggravates others, and acts in a manner that belays his intelligence. [[spoiler:Which is why few suspect he's the one attempting to killNikos.Mathiros.]]
* ObfuscatingStupidity: Varis, Savedra's uncle. He wears gaudy close, aggravates others, and acts in a manner that belays his intelligence. [[spoiler:Which is why few suspect he's the one attempting to kill
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* VengeanceFeelsEmpty: [[spoiler:Phaedra kills Mathiros but only felt it was WorthIt for a moment before it feels like it didn't matter.]]
* WillingChanneler: Isyllt [[spoiler:ultimately has to let Forsythia use her body and magic to kill Phaedra.]]
* WillingChanneler: Isyllt [[spoiler:ultimately has to let Forsythia use her body and magic to kill Phaedra.]]
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* DemonicPossession: Phaedra [[spoiler:is possessing the dead body of another woman after her murder by King Mathiros.]]
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* DemonicPossession: Phaedra [[spoiler:is [[spoiler:has become a demon and is possessing the dead body of another woman the former Queen after her murder by King Mathiros.]]]]
* DestructiveRomance: The romance between [[spoiler:Phaedra and Mathiros]] ultimately caused all the problems in the present, as well as spelled their own doom.
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Phaedra, Spider, and Varis plans to get revenge utimately boils down to replacing the current king with Phaedra in a younger body. She offers to do the same for Kiril, giving him Nikos' body, but he refuses.]]
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* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Phaedra, Spider, and Varis plans to get revenge utimately ultimately boils down to replacing the current king with Phaedra in a younger body.body, her current one being the former queen that Kiril took from her tomb. She offers to do the same for Kiril, giving him Nikos' body, but he refuses.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Kirilos [[spoiler:wiped all traces of Phaedra from the memories of all but a few people to cover up her death by the king.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Kirilos Kiril [[spoiler:wiped all traces of Phaedra from the memories of all but a few people to cover up her death by the king.]]
* LeaveNoWitnesses: To prevent an international crises [[spoiler:from killing Phaedra]] Kiril [[spoiler:murdered everyone in the castle in Carnavas.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: Kirilos [[spoiler:considers Phaedra as his own, both her death and the fact that she inhabits a dead body.]]
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* MoodSwinger: Phaedra is known from going mania to despair in a blink of an eye.
* MyGreatestFailure: Kirilos [[spoiler:considers Phaedra as his own,both from her death, every death he committed to cover it up, and the fact that she inhabits a dead body.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: Kirilos [[spoiler:considers Phaedra as his own,
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* ThePowerOfBlood: Blood acts as a power source for both the vrykoloi[[spoiler: and Phaedra.]]
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* {{Unperson}}: [[spoiler:Kiril did this to Phaedra by murdering all the castle servants, taking their ghosts and offering them and three years of their life to a higher being to wipe away the memories while he got rid of the physical evidence. Not even Mathiros, the one responsible, remembers her.]]
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* MysticalPlague: [[spoler:Phaedra creates one using her magic to further weaken the city.]]
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* MysticalPlague: [[spoler:Phaedra [[spoiler:Phaedra creates one using her magic to further weaken the city.]]
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Phaedra's reasoning for insisting on helping Kiril. In her words, he broke himself to help her.
* GrandTheftMe: [[spoiler:Phaedra, Spider, and Varis plans to get revenge utimately boils down to replacing the current king with Phaedra in a younger body. She offers to do the same for Kiril, giving him Nikos' body, but he refuses.]]
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* HiddenInPlainSight: [[spoiler:Phaedra]] operates out of the ruins of the old castle ruins. Because it's so steeped in ghosts and spirits and old magic no one would really notice her there.
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* MySpeciesDothProtestTooMuch: Azarne admits she longs to kill and hunt freely, since she is a predator, but doesn't want to go through with [[spoiler:Spider's]] plans because as bad as humans are with power, true monsters would be a ''hell'' of a lot worse.
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* ButNotTooBi: Kiril is mostly known to the audience as Isyllt's former lover, but he was also Varis' lover for a time.
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* SignatureScent: Orange, cinnamon, and almond are [[spoiler:Phaedra's]] signature scent, which hints to Isyllt that [[spoiler:Kiril]] was an accomplice.
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* DemonicPossession: Pheadra [[spoiler:is possessing the dead body of another woman after her murder by King Mathiros.]]
* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute, Forsythia, who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedra killed her so that her relationship with the vrykolos did not come to light or distract him.]]
* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute, Forsythia, who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedra killed her so that her relationship with the vrykolos did not come to light or distract him.]]
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* ContinuityNod: Isyllt mentions the events of Literature/TheDrowningCity, like Asheris sending her gifts every summer.
* DemonicPossession:Pheadra Phaedra [[spoiler:is possessing the dead body of another woman after her murder by King Mathiros.]]
* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute, Forsythia, who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedrakilled used her as a blood sacrifice so that her relationship with the vrykolos did not come to light or distract him.]]
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* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute, Forsythia, who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedra
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* {{Familiar}}: Crows for[[spoiler:Phaedra, for [[spoiler:Phaedra, which is probably due to a number of the tearing her corpse apart when she originally died and ingesting her blood, which contained her power, will, and consciousness.]]
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* BloodMagic: Known as Haematurgy, a practice which [[spoiler:Phaedra]] specialized in while alive. It can be used to both heal and hurt.
* {{Familiar}}: Crows for[[spoiler:Phaedra, which is probably due to a number of the tearing her corpse apart when she originally died and ingesting her blood, which contained her power, will, and consciousness.]]
* InVinoVeritas: Ashlin and Savedra were both pretty drunk [[spoiler:when they had sex.]]
* ParentalAbandonment: Dehlia never knew her father and her mother only cares about Opium, so she ended up elsewhere.
* ThePowerOfBlood: Blood acts as a power source for both the vrykoloi[[spoiler: and Phaedra.]]
* ThePowerOfBlood: Blood acts as a power source for both the vrykoloi[[spoiler: and Phaedra.]]
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* {{Transsexual}}: In-series they are known as Hijra, the third sex, and keep to themselves in a temple in the Garden. Savedra Severos, mistress to Nikos, the Crown Prince, is one.
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* {{Transsexual}}: In-series they are known as Hijra, the third sex, and keep to themselves in a temple in the Garden. Savedra Severos, mistress to Nikos, the Crown Prince, is one. Dehlia herself will also be one upon reaching sixteen.
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* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedra killed her so that her relationship with the vrykolos did not come to light.]]
* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra has an adam's apple and only small breasts, and retains functional male genitalia; given that she's from an exceedingly rich family and has their full support, this suggests that magical transformation assistance only aids in mild cosmetic ways.
* EyeOfNewt: Squid Ink is a valuable component in charms of illusions, distraction, and obfuscation.
* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra has an adam's apple and only small breasts, and retains functional male genitalia; given that she's from an exceedingly rich family and has their full support, this suggests that magical transformation assistance only aids in mild cosmetic ways.
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* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute prostitute, Forsythia, who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedra killed her so that her relationship with the vrykolos did not come to light.light or distract him.]]
* DistinguishingMark: A rose with barbed vines twisting beneath it mark [[spoiler: Mekaran]] as an enforcer of the Rose Council.
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ways and cannot completely switch genders.
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* DistinguishingMark: A rose with barbed vines twisting beneath it mark [[spoiler: Mekaran]] as an enforcer of the Rose Council.
* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra
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* {{Glamour}}: The vrykoloi have this, enabling them to go out without drawing too much attention.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. While classified as spirits possessing the dead, they have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they have make them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the The ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. While classified as spirits possessing the dead, they have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they have make them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
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* DemonicPossession: Pheadra [[is possessing the dead body of another woman after her murder by Mathiros.]]
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* DemonicPossession: Pheadra [[is [[spoiler:is possessing the dead body of another woman after her murder by King Mathiros.]]
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* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute who has a ring belonging to the royal family.
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* DemonicPossession: Pheadra [[is possessing the dead body of another woman after her murder by Mathiros.]]
* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedra killed her so that her relationship with the vrykolos did not come to light.]]
* DisposableSexWorker: What starts out Isyllt's case is the murder of a prostitute who has a ring belonging to the royal family. [[spoiler:Phaedra killed her so that her relationship with the vrykolos did not come to light.]]
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* FeministFantasy: it doesn't hit you too hard over the head with it, but Selafai and elsewhere appear to be fairly egalitarian as to gender. We see many women in what would be considered male roles in our world, including a female police inspector and captain of the guard, and nobody acts like this is unusual. Crown Prince Nikos isn't a warrior, while his wife Ashlin is, and Savedra, while not a warrior, certainly knows how to fight and is an effective counter-assassin.
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* FeministFantasy: it It doesn't hit you too hard over the head with it, but Selafai and elsewhere appear to be fairly egalitarian as to gender. We see many women in what would be considered male roles in our world, including a female police inspector and captain of the guard, and nobody acts like this is unusual. Crown Prince Nikos isn't a warrior, while his wife Ashlin is, and Savedra, while not a warrior, certainly knows how to fight and is an effective counter-assassin.counter-assassin.
* HeroicBastard: Varis [[spoiler:is mentioned as the brother of Nikos, due to his mother being with the old king until she was hastily removed from the court and married to her cousin in an effort to cover it up.]]
* HeroicBastard: Varis [[spoiler:is mentioned as the brother of Nikos, due to his mother being with the old king until she was hastily removed from the court and married to her cousin in an effort to cover it up.]]
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: Kirilos [[spoiler:wiped all traces of Phaedra from the memories of all but a few people to cover up her death by the king.]]
* MyGreatestFailure: Kirilos [[spoiler:considers Phaedra as his own, both her death and the fact that she inhabits a dead body.]]
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. They have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they have make them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. They While classified as spirits possessing the dead, they have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless, and the venom they have make them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
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* TheBard: Ciaran, an old friend of Isyllt and occasional lover.
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* ItAmusedMe: Why Spider jumped from a tall ledge to carry Isyllt down to met the vrykoloi elders rather than take the stairs.
-->'''Spider:''' It's not as much fun.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. They have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
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* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. They have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless.helpless, and the venom they have make them unwilling to fight back. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
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* {{Transsexual}}: Savedra Severos, mistress to Nikos, the Crown Prince.
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* {{Transsexual}}: In-series they are known as Hijra, the third sex, and keep to themselves in a temple in the Garden. Savedra Severos, mistress to Nikos, the Crown Prince.Prince, is one.
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* LoveTriangle: Both [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] are in love with [[spoiler:Savedra]], who loves both of them. After the tears when things come to a head, it looks like a TenchiSolution is the answer they all choose, with the wonderful possibility that this will help relations between [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] as well.
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* LoveTriangle: Both [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] are in love with [[spoiler:Savedra]], who loves both of them. After the tears when things come to a head, it looks like a TenchiSolution MarryThemAll is the answer they all choose, with the wonderful possibility that this will help relations between [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] as well.
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''The Bone Palace'' is a LowFantasy novel by AmandaDownum and was released in December 2010. It is the second in ''The Necromancer Chronicles'', and is a sequel to ''Literature/TheDrowningCity''; however, the plots are self-contained, and only the main character, the necromancer Isyllt Iskaldur, carries over from the previous novel. Her mentor and former lover, Kiril, was mentioned there, but is an on-page character here.
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''The Bone Palace'' is a LowFantasy novel by AmandaDownum Creator/AmandaDownum and was released in December 2010. It is the second in ''The Necromancer Chronicles'', and is a sequel to ''Literature/TheDrowningCity''; however, the plots are self-contained, and only the main character, the necromancer Isyllt Iskaldur, carries over from the previous novel. Her mentor and former lover, Kiril, was mentioned there, but is an on-page character here.
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''The Bone Palace'' is a LowFantasy novel by AmandaDownum and was released in December 2010. It is the second in ''The Necromancer Chronicles'', and is a sequel to ''TheDrowningCity''; however, the plots are self-contained, and only the main character, the necromancer Isyllt Iskaldur, carries over from the previous novel. Her mentor and former lover, Kiril, was mentioned there, but is an on-page character here.
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''The Bone Palace'' is a LowFantasy novel by AmandaDownum and was released in December 2010. It is the second in ''The Necromancer Chronicles'', and is a sequel to ''TheDrowningCity''; ''Literature/TheDrowningCity''; however, the plots are self-contained, and only the main character, the necromancer Isyllt Iskaldur, carries over from the previous novel. Her mentor and former lover, Kiril, was mentioned there, but is an on-page character here.
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''The Bone Palace'' is a LowFantasy novel by AmandaDownum and was released in December 2010. It is the second in ''The Necromancer Chronicles'', and is a sequel to ''TheDrowningCity''; however, the plots are self-contained, and only the main character, the necromancer Isyllt Iskaldur, carries over from the previous novel. Her mentor and former lover, Kiril, was mentioned there, but is an on-page character here.
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!!This book provides examples of:
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: both major viewpoint characters, Isyllt Iskaldur and Savedra Severos.
* AmazonChaser: Savedra's finds Ashlin attractive despite not normally being interested in women, and a part of that appreciation is for Ashlin's warrior physique, which gets plenty of mention when we're seeing things from Savedra's point-of-view.
* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Ashlin]] for [[spoiler:Savedra]]
* ArrangedMarriage: Crown Prince Nikos and his foreign bride Ashlin. Their marriage is a fractious one, although they appear to respect each other and the problems can't be laid at the feet of either of them; it's simply that their personalities clash, they aren't really to each other's sexual tastes, and both were in relationships when the marriage was arranged; Nikos got to keep his mistress, Savedra, but Ashlin had to abandon her lover, possibly explaining her unhappiness and anger.
* AssassinOutclassin: Savedra frequently personally dispatches assassins attempting to kill her, Nikos, or Ashlin. She's aided in this by good information on threats from her mother's spy network. The lack of a good Crown intelligence/counter-assassin chief, since King Mathiros dismissed Kiril as his spymaster and refused to pick Kiril's chosen successor, Isyllt, has left Savedra to pick up the pieces -- especially since the King, and much of his intelligence and military muscle, is off at war.
* BadassPrincess: Ashlin. The first sight of her we get is at sword practice, and first impressions don't lie. ''Almost'' RebelliousPrincess -- she would rather, personally, have had the life of a mercenary soldier than that of the Crown Prince's wife -- but duty won out.
* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra has an adam's apple and only small breasts, and retains functional male genitalia; given that she's from an exceedingly rich family and has their full support, this suggests that magical transformation assistance only aids in mild cosmetic ways.
* FeministFantasy: it doesn't hit you too hard over the head with it, but Selafai and elsewhere appear to be fairly egalitarian as to gender. We see many women in what would be considered male roles in our world, including a female police inspector and captain of the guard, and nobody acts like this is unusual. Crown Prince Nikos isn't a warrior, while his wife Ashlin is, and Savedra, while not a warrior, certainly knows how to fight and is an effective counter-assassin.
* IfItsYouItsOkay: [[spoiler:Savedra and Ashlin]] both admit that they aren't normally attracted to people of the same gender.
* LawOfInverseFertility: [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] are supposed to have children, so of course it doesn't work out; but when she has sex with [[spoiler:Savedra]], pregnancy is inevitable exactly because they don't want to get caught.
* LoveTriangle: Both [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] are in love with [[spoiler:Savedra]], who loves both of them. After the tears when things come to a head, it looks like a TenchiSolution is the answer they all choose, with the wonderful possibility that this will help relations between [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] as well.
* TheMistress: Savedra, to Nikos, the Crown Prince of Selafai. Their relationship actually precedes his marriage, but as Savedra is a transsexual, marriage between them is not permitted; a lot of the point of a Royal marriage is heirs, after all. Despite her unhappiness at Nikos having to marry Ashlin, a foreign warrior princess, the two women become friends; there are more strains between Nikos and Ashlin than between Ashlin and Savedra.
* {{Necromancer}}: Isyllt Iskaldur's profession.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. They have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
* SexlessMarriage: Nikos and Ashlin's marriage is close to this. They have separate bedrooms and Ashlin frequently keeps the door between them locked. They have had sex -- Ashlin has become pregnant but miscarried the child -- but it seems that she can only tolerate it by getting very drunk indeed.
* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: Savedra and Ashlin share a bed in the small village inn in Valcov. Ashlin is used to sleeping with others, but Savedra is not, except for Nikos. [[spoiler: This seems to be one of the things that leads up to Ashlin's confession of love for Savedra soon after.]]
* {{Transsexual}}: Savedra Severos, mistress to Nikos, the Crown Prince.
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''The Bone Palace'' is a LowFantasy novel by AmandaDownum and was released in December 2010. It is the second in ''The Necromancer Chronicles'', and is a sequel to ''TheDrowningCity''; however, the plots are self-contained, and only the main character, the necromancer Isyllt Iskaldur, carries over from the previous novel. Her mentor and former lover, Kiril, was mentioned there, but is an on-page character here.
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!!This book provides examples of:
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: both major viewpoint characters, Isyllt Iskaldur and Savedra Severos.
* AmazonChaser: Savedra's finds Ashlin attractive despite not normally being interested in women, and a part of that appreciation is for Ashlin's warrior physique, which gets plenty of mention when we're seeing things from Savedra's point-of-view.
* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: [[spoiler:Ashlin]] for [[spoiler:Savedra]]
* ArrangedMarriage: Crown Prince Nikos and his foreign bride Ashlin. Their marriage is a fractious one, although they appear to respect each other and the problems can't be laid at the feet of either of them; it's simply that their personalities clash, they aren't really to each other's sexual tastes, and both were in relationships when the marriage was arranged; Nikos got to keep his mistress, Savedra, but Ashlin had to abandon her lover, possibly explaining her unhappiness and anger.
* AssassinOutclassin: Savedra frequently personally dispatches assassins attempting to kill her, Nikos, or Ashlin. She's aided in this by good information on threats from her mother's spy network. The lack of a good Crown intelligence/counter-assassin chief, since King Mathiros dismissed Kiril as his spymaster and refused to pick Kiril's chosen successor, Isyllt, has left Savedra to pick up the pieces -- especially since the King, and much of his intelligence and military muscle, is off at war.
* BadassPrincess: Ashlin. The first sight of her we get is at sword practice, and first impressions don't lie. ''Almost'' RebelliousPrincess -- she would rather, personally, have had the life of a mercenary soldier than that of the Crown Prince's wife -- but duty won out.
* EasySexChange: Averted, despite the magic of the setting. Savedra has an adam's apple and only small breasts, and retains functional male genitalia; given that she's from an exceedingly rich family and has their full support, this suggests that magical transformation assistance only aids in mild cosmetic ways.
* FeministFantasy: it doesn't hit you too hard over the head with it, but Selafai and elsewhere appear to be fairly egalitarian as to gender. We see many women in what would be considered male roles in our world, including a female police inspector and captain of the guard, and nobody acts like this is unusual. Crown Prince Nikos isn't a warrior, while his wife Ashlin is, and Savedra, while not a warrior, certainly knows how to fight and is an effective counter-assassin.
* IfItsYouItsOkay: [[spoiler:Savedra and Ashlin]] both admit that they aren't normally attracted to people of the same gender.
* LawOfInverseFertility: [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] are supposed to have children, so of course it doesn't work out; but when she has sex with [[spoiler:Savedra]], pregnancy is inevitable exactly because they don't want to get caught.
* LoveTriangle: Both [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] are in love with [[spoiler:Savedra]], who loves both of them. After the tears when things come to a head, it looks like a TenchiSolution is the answer they all choose, with the wonderful possibility that this will help relations between [[spoiler:Nikos and Ashlin]] as well.
* TheMistress: Savedra, to Nikos, the Crown Prince of Selafai. Their relationship actually precedes his marriage, but as Savedra is a transsexual, marriage between them is not permitted; a lot of the point of a Royal marriage is heirs, after all. Despite her unhappiness at Nikos having to marry Ashlin, a foreign warrior princess, the two women become friends; there are more strains between Nikos and Ashlin than between Ashlin and Savedra.
* {{Necromancer}}: Isyllt Iskaldur's profession.
* OurVampiresAreDifferent: the ''vrykoloi'' are vampires who live in catacombs beneath the city sewers, by ancient treaty with the Crown. They have some similarities with the [[LooksLikeOrlok "Nosferatu"]] school of vampire appearance, being fairly ugly to human eyes; they're yellow-eyed, pale, deathly skinny, with fangs, bat-like ears (often pierced), and a face only somewhat human-like. They can move impossibly quickly when they choose to, making fighting them difficult; silver, however, is a weakness. They shun sunlight mainly because of sensitive eyesight, as well as wanting to avoid notice; their treaty requires them to be discreet. They drink blood, obtained through willing or paid donors or from preying on the poor and helpless. Isyllt classifies them as demons, but they are apparently all once human, somehow infected or converted; there are two ancient vampire elders (both female) named Aphra and Tenebris who rule their society.
* SexlessMarriage: Nikos and Ashlin's marriage is close to this. They have separate bedrooms and Ashlin frequently keeps the door between them locked. They have had sex -- Ashlin has become pregnant but miscarried the child -- but it seems that she can only tolerate it by getting very drunk indeed.
* ThereIsOnlyOneBed: Savedra and Ashlin share a bed in the small village inn in Valcov. Ashlin is used to sleeping with others, but Savedra is not, except for Nikos. [[spoiler: This seems to be one of the things that leads up to Ashlin's confession of love for Savedra soon after.]]
* {{Transsexual}}: Savedra Severos, mistress to Nikos, the Crown Prince.
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