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* CaughtTheHeartOnHisSleeve: After one of her drinking sessions, Holo is recovering in her bed when she goes to grab Lawerence's sleeve.
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* CaughtTheHeartOnHisSleeve: After one of her drinking sessions, Holo is recovering in her bed when she goes to grab Lawerence's Lawrence's sleeve.
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* FreakOut: Holo has a nasty one when she learns that Yoitsu was destroyed long ago by the Moon-Hunting Bear. In her despair, she pleads with Lawerence to impregnate her, so she can have a living reminder of her home. Lawerence manages to snap her out of it and gives her a shoulder to cry on.
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* FreakOut: Holo has a nasty one when she learns that Yoitsu was destroyed long ago by the Moon-Hunting Bear. In her despair, she pleads with Lawerence Lawrence to impregnate her, so she can have a living reminder of her home. Lawerence Lawrence manages to snap her out of it and gives her a shoulder to cry on.
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* HandsomeLech: Weiz, one of Lawerence's business associates, is a fairly easy-looking man who flirts with Holo soon after meeting her.
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* HandsomeLech: Weiz, one of Lawerence's Lawrence's business associates, is a fairly easy-looking man who flirts with Holo soon after meeting her.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Official merch and advertising has made it no secret that Holo and Lawerence [[spoiler:get married and have a child together]].
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Official merch and advertising has made it no secret that Holo and Lawerence Lawrence [[spoiler:get married and have a child together]].
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* InconsistantSpelling: Due to the vast differences between the Japanese and English languages, there are a ''lot'' of names that could be spelled any number of ways. Horo/Holo, Kraft/Craft, Diana/Dianna/Deanna, Eve/Abe, Col/Cole, the list goes on.
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS: Due to the vast differences between the Japanese and English languages, there are a ''lot'' of names that could be spelled any number of ways. Horo/Holo, Kraft/Craft, Diana/Dianna/Deanna, Eve/Abe, Col/Cole, the list goes on.
