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* ReplacementGoldfish: Step Mom: Baldric's children hope that Miss Fletcher will marry their dad. [[spoiler: In the last chapter it's revealed that she does.]]
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* [[ReplacementGoldfish Step Mom]]: Baldric's children hope that Miss Fletcher will marry their dad. [[spoiler: In the last chapter it's revealed that she does.]]
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* [[MassiveNumberedSiblings Big Family]]: Baldric has five children; Victoria, Veronica, Vernon, Valerie and Vincent.
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* [[ChekhovsGun ChekhovsGun: Chekhov's Questions]]: Questions: The questions that Baldric's kids ask Sir Derek clearly don't have anything with what's to come, such as:
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** Vincent: Did you slay any dragons?
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* DecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of his bind
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* DecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of his bind
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** Vincent: Did "Did you slay any dragons?
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* DecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of hisbindbind.
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* DecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of his
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* MissingMom: Baldric's wife died sometime before the story began and he's been trying to manage ever since
* TheQuest: Sir Derek's quest to create a peace treaty with the faeries. [[PlayingWithATrope However]], quests are seen as a form of Banishment for those too politically difficult to kill outright so no on expects him to really succeed
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* MassiveNumberedSiblings: Baldric has five children; Victoria, Veronica, Vernon, Valerie and Vincent.
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* TheQuest: Sir Derek's quest to create a peace treaty with the faeries. [[PlayingWithATrope However]], quests are seen as a form of Banishment for those too politically difficult to kill outright so no on expects him to reallysucceedsucceed.
* MissingMom: Baldric's wife died sometime before the story began and he's been trying to manage ever
* TheQuest: Sir Derek's quest to create a peace treaty with the faeries. [[PlayingWithATrope However]], quests are seen as a form of Banishment for those too politically difficult to kill outright so no on expects him to really
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of his bind
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: DecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of his bind
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!! SirDerekAndTheFaeries This work includes examples of:
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** Valerie: Have you saved any damsels while you were away, or saved any kingdoms from a terrible enchantment?
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* [[ChekhovsGun Chekhov's Questions]]: The questions that Baldric's kids ask Sir Derek clearly don't have anything with what's to come, such as:
** Victoria: Did you go to any balls, feasts or dances?
** Valerie: Have you saved any damsels while you were away, or saved any kingdoms from a terrible enchantment?
** And later: ... Have you met a fairy princess?
** Vincent: Did you slay any dragons?
*** This doubles as a BrickJoke
** Victoria: Did you go to any balls, feasts or dances?
** Valerie: Have you saved any damsels while you were away, or saved any kingdoms from a terrible enchantment?
** And later: ... Have you met a fairy princess?
** Vincent: Did you slay any dragons?
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* TheAce: Sir Derek, which is why no one in the court likes him
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** They're celebrating the feast of Saint [[Creator/GaryGygax Gygax]] when Sir Derek is made the heir of an Baron
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** They're celebrating the feast of Saint [[Creator/GaryGygax Gygax]] when Sir Derek is made the heir of an Baron
** They're celebrating the feast of Saint [[Creator/GaryGygax Gygax]] when Sir Derek is made the heir of an Baron
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* TheQuest: [[PlayingWithATrope Played With]]. Quests are seen as a form of Banishment for those too politically difficult to kill outright.
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* TheQuest: Sir Derek's quest to create a peace treaty with the faeries. [[PlayingWithATrope Played With]]. Quests However]], quests are seen as a form of Banishment for those too politically difficult to kill outright. outright so no on expects him to really succeed
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* [[ReplacementGoldfish Step Mom]]: Baldric's children hope that Miss Fletcher will marry their dad. [[spoiler: In the last chapter it's revealed that she does.]]
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* [[ReplacementGoldfish Step Mom]]: Baldric's children hope that Miss Fletcher will marry their dad. [[spoiler: In the last chapter it's revealed that she does.]]]]
* SupernaturalElite: The Lady of the Woods is the ruler of the local faeries
* SupernaturalElite: The Lady of the Woods is the ruler of the local faeries
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* KingInTheMountain: King Ulric and his Knights are this to the folks in the area. [[spoiler: They're also the ones who trained Sir Derek on how to be a knight]]
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*[[MassiveNumberedSiblings Big Family]]: Baldric has five children; Victoria, Veronica, Vernon, Valerie and Vincent.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Baldric's children hope that Miss Fletcher will marry their dad. [[spoiler: In the last chapter it's revealed that she does.]]
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* TheHerosJourney: WordOfGod says that this started life as a short story which expanded into a novel once he fully began to incorporate TheHerosJourney into it
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* MissingMom: Baldric's wife died sometime before the story began and he's been trying to manage ever since
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* MissingMom: Baldric's wife died sometime before the story began and he's been trying to manage ever since
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of his bind
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* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The King's court. Not helped by the fact that the King himself is [[TheCaligula something of an idiot]], as he sleeps with the Queen's Ladies-In-Waiting despite knowing what a terrible idea that is then banishes the only person who could get him out of his bindbind
* TheHerosJourney: WordOfGod says that this started life as a short story which expanded into a novel once he fully began to incorporate TheHerosJourney into it
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* OurFairiesAreDifferent: Faeries more or less include anything at all supernatural
* TheBlacksmith: Sir Derek's brother Baldric is one of the best blacksmiths
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It had all been so simple. Keep the King safe from himself, make sure the Queen was happy and avoid the machinations of the court. It had almost become routine when Sir Derek found the King in the arms of the Queen’s various Ladies-in-waiting.
Now banished to the furthest corner of the kingdom, Sir Derek’s only chance at returning to his old life is to fulfill a quest given to him by the King: Create a permanent peace treaty between their kingdom and the fickle leader of the faeries, the mysterious Lady of the Woods.
This will prove to be more than his match as he faces off against pixies, satyrs, dryads and the dreaded Fafnir, a faerie so mysterious and deadly that he is only spoken of in whispered tones by those who know of his existence. On a quest deemed impossible by all who hear of it, Sir Derek will be pushed to the very limits of his cunning and strength in a land where survival can be the greatest victory of all.
Updated on Mondays, it can be read [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3184252/ Here]]
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!! SirDerekAndTheFaeries includes examples of:
* TheAce: Sir Derek, which is why no one in the court likes him
* OurFaeriesAreDifferent: Faeries more or less include anything at all supernatural
* TheBlacksmith: Sir Derek's brother Baldric
* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The King's court
Now banished to the furthest corner of the kingdom, Sir Derek’s only chance at returning to his old life is to fulfill a quest given to him by the King: Create a permanent peace treaty between their kingdom and the fickle leader of the faeries, the mysterious Lady of the Woods.
This will prove to be more than his match as he faces off against pixies, satyrs, dryads and the dreaded Fafnir, a faerie so mysterious and deadly that he is only spoken of in whispered tones by those who know of his existence. On a quest deemed impossible by all who hear of it, Sir Derek will be pushed to the very limits of his cunning and strength in a land where survival can be the greatest victory of all.
Updated on Mondays, it can be read [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3184252/ Here]]
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!! SirDerekAndTheFaeries includes examples of:
* TheAce: Sir Derek, which is why no one in the court likes him
* OurFaeriesAreDifferent: Faeries more or less include anything at all supernatural
* TheBlacksmith: Sir Derek's brother Baldric
* DeadlyDecadentCourt: The King's court
