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Savannah Sunset is an online novel written by RedstonePrime and the second installment of the KTG Saga.
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Savannah Sunset is an online novel written by RedstonePrime [[Tropers/{{Hyenaboy}} RedstonePrime]] and the second installment of the KTG Saga.
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The leader of the hyena clan is known as the "Savannah Slayer".
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* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The leader of the hyena clan is known as the "Savannah Slayer".Slayer".
* ShownTheirWork: All the facts told about hyenas by Richard and Arakan are actual facts regarding the species, and not just made up.
* ShownTheirWork: All the facts told about hyenas by Richard and Arakan are actual facts regarding the species, and not just made up.
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* EvilAllAlong: Both [[spoiler:Frederick Charles Arkwright and Arakan]] are revealed to be responsible for the main plot of the story.
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both Richard and Harry when they discover that [[spoiler:Daniella is the "Savannah Slayer"]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Daniella pulls one]] towards the end of the story after realising she was [[spoiler:being manipulated]].
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both Richard and Harry when they discover that [[spoiler:Daniella is the "Savannah Slayer"]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Daniella pulls one]] towards the end of the story after realising she was [[spoiler:being manipulated]].
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* EvilAllAlong: Both [[spoiler:Frederick [[spoiler: Frederick Charles Arkwright and Arakan]] are revealed to be responsible for the main plot of the story.
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both Richard and Harry when they discover that[[spoiler:Daniella [[spoiler: Daniella is the "Savannah Slayer"]]
* HeelFaceTurn:[[spoiler:Daniella [[spoiler: Daniella pulls one]] towards the end of the story after realising she was [[spoiler:being [[spoiler: being manipulated]].
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both Richard and Harry when they discover that
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* INeverSaidItWasPoison: Harry is quickly able to figure out that [[spoiler: Arkwight was tracking them]] when the latter mentions the fact that Harry rescued an injured hyena cub.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Daniella gets one in chapter four after she realises that [[spoiler: working with Arkwright ended up getting half of her clan killed]].
** Harry has a moment of this in chapter five after [[spoiler: he's forced to kill an injured hyena cub he's been looking after. Especially as he realises that keeping the cub has lead Arkwright's men right to them]].
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
** Daniella gets one in chapter four after she realises that [[spoiler: working with Arkwright ended up getting half of her clan killed]].
** Harry has a moment of this in chapter five after [[spoiler: he's forced to kill an injured hyena cub he's been looking after. Especially as he realises that keeping the cub has lead Arkwright's men right to them]].
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both William and Harry when they discover that [[spoiler:Daniella is the "Savannah Slayer"]]
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both William Richard and Harry when they discover that [[spoiler:Daniella is the "Savannah Slayer"]]
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Savannah Sunset is an online novel written by RedstonePrime and the second installment of the KTG Saga.
The story centres around an ex-military man who, along with his friend, are trying to save another friend who has been abducted and taken to Africa. There, they realise there's a malicious plot to use the reserve's hyenas for nefarious reasons.
Savannah Sunset can be found here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/18371264
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This story has examples of:
* CoolBike: Daniella's customised Harley-Davidson.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler: Charles, the aide to the Ambassador of international trade]].
* EvilAllAlong: Both [[spoiler:Frederick Charles Arkwright and Arakan]] are revealed to be responsible for the main plot of the story.
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both William and Harry when they discover that [[spoiler:Daniella is the "Savannah Slayer"]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Daniella pulls one]] towards the end of the story after realising she was [[spoiler:being manipulated]].
* HeinousHyena: Subverted. The hyenas may be killing people, but they are simply just trying to survive.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The leader of the hyena clan is known as the "Savannah Slayer".
The story centres around an ex-military man who, along with his friend, are trying to save another friend who has been abducted and taken to Africa. There, they realise there's a malicious plot to use the reserve's hyenas for nefarious reasons.
Savannah Sunset can be found here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/18371264
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This story has examples of:
* CoolBike: Daniella's customised Harley-Davidson.
* CorruptPolitician: [[spoiler: Charles, the aide to the Ambassador of international trade]].
* EvilAllAlong: Both [[spoiler:Frederick Charles Arkwright and Arakan]] are revealed to be responsible for the main plot of the story.
* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Both William and Harry when they discover that [[spoiler:Daniella is the "Savannah Slayer"]]
* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Daniella pulls one]] towards the end of the story after realising she was [[spoiler:being manipulated]].
* HeinousHyena: Subverted. The hyenas may be killing people, but they are simply just trying to survive.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: The leader of the hyena clan is known as the "Savannah Slayer".
