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* WakeUpGoToSchoolSaveTheWorld: Himei, for 5 years nonstop. [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome [[DeconstructedTrope This causes her to be constantly late to class while permanently depressed and lethargic, which in turn hurts her social standing at Wazaru.]]
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* APartyAlsoKnownAsAnOrgy: The Dark Queen's palace is implied to be filled with these kinds of parties. Given that the Yamiko are people without any inhibitions, the parties are all but stated to end in this. Crosses over a bit into implied FanDisservice when one considers how the Yamiko also have no issue with committing some pretty vile and disturbing acts (and definitely would ''not'' ask for consent).
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** Far worse was the behavior of Shin's parents in her backstory: although not the classical form of abandonment, [[spoiler:leaving your daughter with a known child molester as ''babysitter'' has got to be one of the most negligent acts of parenting '''ever'''.]] It gets worse when you realize that [[spoiler:he did it to others in the family, too.]]
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** Far worse was the behavior of Shin's parents in her backstory: although not the classical form of abandonment, [[spoiler:leaving your daughter with a known child molester as a ''babysitter'' has got to be one of the most negligent acts of parenting '''ever'''.]] It gets worse when you realize that [[spoiler:he did it to others in the family, too.]]]]
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* APartyAlsoKnownAsAnOrgy: The Dark Queen's palace is implied to be filled with these kinds of parties. Given that the Yamiko are people without any inhibitions, the parties are all but stated to end in this. Crosses over a bit into implied FanDisservice when one considers how the Yamiko also have no issue with committing some pretty vile and disturbing acts (and definitely would ''not'' ask for consent).
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* SpiritualSuccessor: Though it probably didn't inspire ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'', the feel's the same. More straightforwardly, it's one of the main inspirations for ''TabletopGame/PrincessTheHopeful''. [[ArcWords Exhaustion is its stated 'mood']].
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** ToCreateAPlaygroundForEvil: The ultimate end goal of the Yamiko if they are allowed to roam the world free. The Sailors keep them in check by destroying them just as they spawn. Argon explains in the final chapter that without the Sailors, humanity would have little means of resistance against the Yamiko's depravity.
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** ToCreateAPlaygroundForEvil: The ultimate end goal of the Yamiko if they are allowed to roam the world free. The Sailors keep them in check by destroying them just as they spawn. Argon explains in the final chapter that without the Sailors, humanity would have little means of resistance against the Yamiko's depravity.
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---> '''Argon''': "Your kind have written about Hell, but never truly experienced it in the flesh. Now they will. Starting tomorrow, they will suffer as this one [ [[spoiler: Ami]] ] suffers. Everybody you hate AND everybody you love will become objects for our ridiculously single-minded desires and lusts. THAT is what you are truly fighting. And if you seek to save yourselves and your entire world from the abyss, you will destroy us NOW, or fail forever!"
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* {{Expy}}: As a GenreDeconstruction of Magical Girls that uses ''[[Anime/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]]'' as a template, these crop up quite a lot:
** Himei is one for Usagi/Sailor Moon herself. Though there's enough to make her stand out from Usagi (really, all the Sailors here are different enough to not be matched to a direct counterpart of the Senshi), Himei starts off as a lone MagicalGirlWarrior until she gains teammates, much like Usagi early on in her career as a Senshi. Her tendency to always be saved by Magnificent Kamen also recalls Tuxedo Mask showing up to assist Sailor Moon now and then. Even her fumbling around while trying to fight the MonsterOfTheWeek is a lot like Usagi being a klutz in the middle of battle, only in Himei's case, it's ''not'' PlayedForLaughs.
** Dusty is an expy of Luna, being a MentorMascot that appears in the form of a cat.
** Magnificent Kamen is one for Tuxedo Mask/Mamoru. [[spoiler: The idea that he's actually a Yamiko Commander can be seen as a reference to Mamoru's stint as the Dark Kingdom's BrainwashedAndCrazy minion near the end of the first arc.]]
** Seiki starts off as a generic high school "Mr. Popular" trope, but eventually [[spoiler: becomes a Kamen in his own right and Himei's boyfriend. This makes him a second expy of Tuxedo Mask/Mamoru.]]
** The Yamiko Commanders are expies of the Dark Kingdom's Four Heavenly Kings.
** The Dark Queen is an expy of Queen Beryl, even having a similar appearance to her. [[spoiler: Her true form in the final chapter is one for Queen Metalia, being a shadowy figure that's absolutely massive in size.]]
** Himei is one for Usagi/Sailor Moon herself. Though there's enough to make her stand out from Usagi (really, all the Sailors here are different enough to not be matched to a direct counterpart of the Senshi), Himei starts off as a lone MagicalGirlWarrior until she gains teammates, much like Usagi early on in her career as a Senshi. Her tendency to always be saved by Magnificent Kamen also recalls Tuxedo Mask showing up to assist Sailor Moon now and then. Even her fumbling around while trying to fight the MonsterOfTheWeek is a lot like Usagi being a klutz in the middle of battle, only in Himei's case, it's ''not'' PlayedForLaughs.
** Dusty is an expy of Luna, being a MentorMascot that appears in the form of a cat.
** Magnificent Kamen is one for Tuxedo Mask/Mamoru. [[spoiler: The idea that he's actually a Yamiko Commander can be seen as a reference to Mamoru's stint as the Dark Kingdom's BrainwashedAndCrazy minion near the end of the first arc.]]
** Seiki starts off as a generic high school "Mr. Popular" trope, but eventually [[spoiler: becomes a Kamen in his own right and Himei's boyfriend. This makes him a second expy of Tuxedo Mask/Mamoru.]]
** The Yamiko Commanders are expies of the Dark Kingdom's Four Heavenly Kings.
** The Dark Queen is an expy of Queen Beryl, even having a similar appearance to her. [[spoiler: Her true form in the final chapter is one for Queen Metalia, being a shadowy figure that's absolutely massive in size.]]
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* DarkerAndEdgier: The story takes the basic premise of [[Franchise/SailorMoon]] ''[[Anime/SailorMoon Sailor Moon]]'' and plays it up for horror instead of a magical adventure. Twoflower describes it as if [[Creator/HPLovecraft]] [[Creator/HPLovecraft H.P. Lovecraft]] wrote a Magical Girl story.
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* {{Shadowland}}: The Yami-gaia is basically Dark Tokyo. The narrative even once uses the phrase "[[NamesTheSame shadow realm]] once".
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* BigFancyHouse: Seiki's, to some degree, which highlights that he's [[spoiler: a LonelyRichKid after his parents' death.]]
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** Very, ''very'' few Yamiko can stand against even a normal-power Sailor. None can withstand their UnstoppableRage [[spoiler:except the Dark Queen.]]
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** Shin: [[spoiler: initially subverts this, as her creation was actually ''planned'' by the heroes, and she helps Shin kill Dark General Xenon, but immediately afterward, she incapacitates the real Shin, kisses Kotashi, then runs off to go kill Shin's uncle ([[RapeAsBackstory who raped her and got away with it]]).]]
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** Shin: [[spoiler: initially [[spoiler:initially subverts this, as her creation was actually ''planned'' by the heroes, and she helps Shin kill Dark General Xenon, but immediately afterward, she incapacitates the real Shin, kisses Kotashi, then runs off to go kill Shin's uncle ([[RapeAsBackstory who raped her and got away with it]]).]]
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* TheAtoner: Aki bows to be a better friend to Himei after her fall from grace made her realize she was ashamed of the only girl who offered her true friendship.
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* KnifeNut: A whole lot of Yamiko, including Dark General Argon.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: Darker than usual, but used as straight as possible. Himei manages to live on and [[spoiler:destroy the Yamiko once and for all]] thanks to her newfound friends. She accomplished more as Sailor Nothing in a few months, with them as her team, than she did as Sailor Salvation in 5 years, all alone with Dusty.
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* ThePowerOfFriendship: Darker than usual, but used as straight as possible. Himei manages to live on and [[spoiler:destroy the Yamiko once and for all]] thanks to her newfound friends. She accomplished more as Sailor Nothing in a few months, with them as her team, than she did as Sailor Salvation in 5 years, all alone with Dusty. [[{{Irony}} Ironically, Sailor Salvation was nothing while Sailor Nothing was the world's salvation. ]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding: And Himei damn well deserved it. Aki, Shin, Kotashi and Seiki also get their peace and happiness.
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* AndIMustScream: [[spoiler:Ami at the hands of Argon. The worst part is that we don't know for sure what happens to her after her torture.]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Ami at the hands of Argon. Even [[IWishedYouWereDead wishing her dead]] turns into this, and Shin feels guilty for still hating her even after seeing how Ami was tortured.]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Ami [[spoiler:Averted ''big time'' with Ami at the hands of Argon. Even [[IWishedYouWereDead wishing her dead]] turns into this, KickTheDog instead, and Shin feels guilty for still hating her even after seeing how Ami was tortured.tortured. It's made clear her AndIMustScream fate is worse than anything she ever deserved. Argon deliberately defied this trope to motivate the heroes further.]]
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: Chapter 7 departs from the written format to an animated sprite comic with captions.
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* ThoseTwoBadGuys: Xenon and Neon. No one can really tell them apart, and Cobalt actually refers to them as the "[=WhateverOns=]".
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* MinionShipping: As observed elsewhere, Cobalt and Ohta have a definite [[TheSimpsons Burns/Smithers]] vibe.
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* SingleWomanSeeksMostPopularGuy: Himei is attracted to Seiki, who greets her every morning and never insults her, and as an athlete is higher than her in Wazaru High's social hierarchy. [[spoiler:and he likes her back, because she doesn't want anything from him unlike most girls who seek to date him.]]
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* SingleWomanSeeksMostPopularGuy: SingleGirlSeeksMostPopularGuy: Himei is attracted to Seiki, who greets her every morning and never insults her, and as an athlete is higher than her in Wazaru High's social hierarchy. [[spoiler:and he likes her back, because she doesn't want anything from him unlike most girls who seek to date him.]]
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* SpearCounterpart: Turns out, men don't become Sailors, [[spoiler:they become Kamens instead.]]
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