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* BastardAngst: Inverted with [[spoiler: Bell]]. "Bastards have more fun!"
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* BastardAngst: Inverted with [[spoiler: Bell]].Bell. After finding out she's the illegitimate child of the mayor, she's largely unbothered, and cracks a few jokes about it with her friends after]]. "Bastards have more fun!"
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* LetXBeTheUnknown: The year is 302X, an unknown amount of time after humans were wiped out.
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* CityOfAdventure: Pondovadia is a big city, and there's lots to explore.
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* CityOfAdventure: Pondovadia is a big city, and there's lots to explore. Chapters feature such places as underwater cults, amusement parks, the local CoolSchool, and the nearby Livestock farm.
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* CreepyGymCoach: The since-fired Coach Maladice was fired for having an affair with a fourteen year old girl and went to court for it. The kids' morbid senses of humor lead to them bringing his name up a few times mockingly, especially during sporting events.
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* CreepyGymCoach: The since-fired Coach Maladice was fired for having an affair with a fourteen year old girl and went to court for it. The kids' morbid senses of humor lead to them bringing his name up a few times mockingly, especially during sporting events.
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** Chapter four is about their friends Chris and Aster
** Chapter fifteen focuses on the aesthetic club
** Chapter twenty one follows Bell's older sister Klarisse
** Chapter fifteen focuses on the aesthetic club
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** Chapter four Four is about their friends Chris and Aster
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** Chapter twenty one follows Bell's older sister
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* CreepyCoach: CreepyGymCoach: The since-fired Coach Maladice was fired for having an affair with a fourteen year old girl and went to court for it. The kids' morbid senses of humor lead to them bringing his name up a few times mockingly, especially during sporting events.
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* CreepyCoach: The since-fired Coach Maladice was fired for having an affair with a fourteen year old girl and went to court for it. The kids' morbid senses of humor lead to them bringing his name up a few times mockingly, especially during sporting events.
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* CompleteTheQuoteTitle: The subtitles of both entries come together to form a chorus from "[[Music/RedHotChiliPeppers Can't Stop]]"- ''"The world I love, the tears I dropped, to be part of the wave, can't stop"''.
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* CompleteTheQuoteTitle: The subtitles of both entries come together to form a chorus from "[[Music/RedHotChiliPeppers Can't Stop]]"- ''"The world I love, the tears I dropped, to be part of the wave, can't stop"''.
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* CompleteTheQuoteTitle: The subtitles of both entries come together to form a chorus from "[[Music/RedHotChiliPeppers Can't Stop]]"- ''"The world I love, the tears I dropped, to be part of the wave, can't stop"''.
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* AbortedArc: Minthe is the star of the first chapter, which features her running from her parents and the cult she was raised in to reach the surface. After she joins the school, she ceases to be the star of anything. She's only mentioned a few more times, and her arc is never closed.
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: The children of Pondovadia seem to be completely at ease with the danger they're constantly put into, as well as the crassness of the older residents (which sometimes stretches to them as well). Chapter 16 features the protagonists tearing open the body of a Livestock with their teeth and sharing its organs for a snack, long before they would have even begun starving.
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: The children of Pondovadia seem to be completely at ease with the danger they're constantly put into, as well as the crassness of the older residents (which sometimes stretches to them as well). Chapter 16 features the protagonists tearing open the body of a Livestock with their teeth and sharing its organs for a snack, long before they would have even begun starving. That same chapter, they see a corpse and only consider it 'nasty'.
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* ConditionedToAcceptHorror: The children of Pondovadia seem to be completely at ease with the danger they're constantly put into, as well as the crassness of the older residents (which sometimes stretches to them as well). Chapter 16 features the protagonists tearing open the body of a Livestock with their teeth and sharing its organs for a snack, long before they would have even begun starving.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Every chapter in part one has some for [[spoiler: Bell being the mayor's illegitimate child]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Every chapter in part one has some for [[spoiler: Bell being the mayor's illegitimate child]].child. A news report in chapter 13 talks about the mayor going around to visit all of his children in a row, with eight left at the time of reporting]].
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* DeepSouth: Technically. The story takes place in West Virginia after all.
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* DeepSouth: Technically. The story takes place in West Virginia after all. Nearly everyone has an accent, and many of the kids fit stereotypes of southern hicks such as being crass and running around without much parental supervision.
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* {{Expy}}: A few minor characters are these.
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* FakeBand: Blyned Jagwar, a somewhat old post-war band several characters are a fan of, said to have begun in the California punk scene before striking it big. Chapter 12 revolves around one of their concerts.
