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* ShoutOut: Grimsy the Fleshmongler is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[Franchise/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]", ie the Cookie Monster.
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy the Fleshmongler is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[Franchise/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]", ie TV]]"; i.e., the Cookie Monster.
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Short stories should have quotation marks, not italicized.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the ''Literature/{{Otherverse}}'', but isn't directly connected to either of the main {{Web Serial Novel}}s, posted on April 27th, 2022.
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Corrected publishing date; The google doc for the story was created on february 17th, but the story wasn't posted publicly until april 27th
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the ''Literature/{{Otherverse}}'', but isn't directly connected to either of the main {{Web Serial Novel}}s, posted on February 17, 2022.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the ''Literature/{{Otherverse}}'', but isn't directly connected to either of the main {{Web Serial Novel}}s, posted on February 17, April 27th, 2022.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the same universe as his {{Web Serial Novel}}s ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't directly connected to either, posted on February 17, 2022.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the same universe as his {{Web Serial Novel}}s ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', ''Literature/{{Otherverse}}'', but isn't directly connected to either, either of the main {{Web Serial Novel}}s, posted on February 17, 2022.
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* AnotherDimension: ''Pâté'' takes place in the Shrinefall of Meru, a crossroads located at the intersection of Nature, Spirit, and a literal viceral offshoot of Earth. Its primary inhibitants are crossroads people, humans with animal qualities and features that mostly still count as human enough to not be under the Seal of Solomon. It's also noted that its food and water are deeply infused with Nature and Life energy as a result.
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* AnotherDimension: ''Pâté'' takes place in the Shrinefall of Meru, a crossroads located at the intersection of Nature, Spirit, and a literal viceral visceral offshoot of Earth. Its primary inhibitants inhabitants are crossroads people, humans with animal qualities and features that mostly still count as human enough to not be under the Seal of Solomon. It's also noted that its food and water are deeply infused with Nature and Life energy as a result.
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* GreasySpoon: Grimsy's Meathook is a street vendor run by an Other that's basically a living tumor, includes human body parts on the menu, and payment involves being willing to part with literal pounds of your flesh, but everything on the menu tastes great.
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* GreasySpoon: Grimsy's Meathook is a street vendor run by an Other that's basically a living tumor, includes human body parts on the menu, and payment involves being willing to part with literal pounds of your own flesh, but everything on the menu tastes great.
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy the Fleshmongler is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[Franchise/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]".
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy the Fleshmongler is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[Franchise/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]".TV]]", ie the Cookie Monster.
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* AnotherDimension: ''Pâté'' takes place in the Shrinefall of Meru, a crossroads located at the intersection of Nature, Spirit, and a literal viceral offshoot of Earth. Its primary inhibitants are crossroads people, humans with animal qualities and features that mostly still count as human enough to not be under the Seal of Solomon. It's noted that its food and water are deeply infused with Nature and Life energy as a result.
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* AnotherDimension: ''Pâté'' takes place in the Shrinefall of Meru, a crossroads located at the intersection of Nature, Spirit, and a literal viceral offshoot of Earth. Its primary inhibitants are crossroads people, humans with animal qualities and features that mostly still count as human enough to not be under the Seal of Solomon. It's also noted that its food and water are deeply infused with Nature and Life energy as a result.
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* DimensionalTraveler: Cheryl's line of work has her traveling to various realms on the regular.
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* FoodPorn: Grimsy's dishes are gone over in explicit detail, even the ones made from humans.
-->"Iliana's dish was a shallow bowl with the look and aroma of red wine, with a creamy glaze swirled around it. The skin of a human face had been cut into strips, but left positioned so the features were in place- with voids for the eyes and mouth. Grimsy tilted his head and then used the tip of his cleaver, poking the ends of the mouth into a smile."
-->"Iliana's dish was a shallow bowl with the look and aroma of red wine, with a creamy glaze swirled around it. The skin of a human face had been cut into strips, but left positioned so the features were in place- with voids for the eyes and mouth. Grimsy tilted his head and then used the tip of his cleaver, poking the ends of the mouth into a smile."
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* GreasySpoon: Grimsy's Meathook is a street vendor run by an Other that's basically a living tumor, includes human body parts on the menu, and payment involves being willing to part with literal pounds of your flesh, but everything on the menu tastes great.
* ImAHumanitarian: Cheryl eats her dish of human tooth soup without much in the way of hesitation, and even describes it as one of the best things she's ever eaten.
* ImAHumanitarian: Cheryl eats her dish of human tooth soup without much in the way of hesitation, and even describes it as one of the best things she's ever eaten.
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* FleshGolem: Grimsy is a Fleshmongler, an Other from the Deep Warrens made of miscellaneous tumors, boils, meat, and other such viscera capable of making just about anything using meat.
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Cheryl Whitehorn and Alphonse Nasser, two practitioners working for an organization that does guidebooks for different realms, go to a liminal realm related to Nature to collect information for a project based around crossroads where different realms meet. As Cheryl tries to do that while carting around an obnoxious NewMeat partner, shenanigans ensue.
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Cheryl Whitehorn and Alphonse Nasser, two practitioners working for an organization that does guidebooks for different realms, go to the Shrinefall of Meru, a liminal realm related to Nature to collect information for a project based around crossroads where different realms meet. As Cheryl tries to do that while carting around an obnoxious NewMeat partner, shenanigans ensue.
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* AnotherDimension: ''Pâté'' takes place in the Shrinefall of Meru, a crossroads located at the intersection of Nature, Spirit, and a literal viceral offshoot of Earth. Its primary inhibitants are crossroads people, humans with animal qualities and features that mostly still count as human enough to not be under the Seal of Solomon. It's noted that its food and water are deeply infused with Nature and Life energy as a result.
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* {{Guyliner}}: Franz Carter, a male minor practitioner, wears heavy eye makeup.
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* {{Guyliner}}: Franz Carter, a male minor practitioner, practitioner living in the Shrinefell, wears heavy eye makeup.makeup.
* LittleBitBeastly: Crossroads people are mixed with animal qualities and features, but the majority remain human enough to not be under the jurisdiction of the Seal of Solomon.
* LittleBitBeastly: Crossroads people are mixed with animal qualities and features, but the majority remain human enough to not be under the jurisdiction of the Seal of Solomon.
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* UpperClassTwit: Alphonse is a practition who went to an elite [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hogwarts]]-style school, and is about as obnoxious as you'd expect someone from that background to be.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Discussed when Cheryl asks Franz if the crossroads realm they're in has slower time compared to the outside world while seeing if there are any catches to staying there long-term.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Discussed when Cheryl asks Franz if the crossroads realm they're in has slower time compared to the outside world while seeing if there are any catches to staying there long-term.
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* UpperClassTwit: Alphonse is a practition practitioner who went to an elite [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hogwarts]]-style school, and is about as obnoxious as you'd expect someone from that background to be.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Discussed when Cheryl asks Franz if thecrossroads realm they're in Shrinefall of Meru has slower time compared to the outside world while seeing if there are any catches to staying there long-term.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Discussed when Cheryl asks Franz if the
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[Franchise/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]".
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy the Fleshmongler is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[Franchise/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]".
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[LiveAction/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]".
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[LiveAction/SesameStreet [[Franchise/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]".
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* UpperClassTwit: Alphonse is a practition who went to an elite [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hogwarts]]-style school, and is about as obnoxious as you'd expect someone from that background to be.
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* ShoutOut: Grimsy is described as sounding like "a garbage disposal mingled with [[LiveAction/SesameStreet a certain cookie obsessed puppet on children's TV]]".
* UpperClassTwit: Alphonse is a practition who went to an elite [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hogwarts]]-style school, and is about as obnoxious as you'd expect someone from that background tobe.be.
* YearInsideHourOutside: Discussed when Cheryl asks Franz if the crossroads realm they're in has slower time compared to the outside world while seeing if there are any catches to staying there long-term.
* UpperClassTwit: Alphonse is a practition who went to an elite [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hogwarts]]-style school, and is about as obnoxious as you'd expect someone from that background to
* YearInsideHourOutside: Discussed when Cheryl asks Franz if the crossroads realm they're in has slower time compared to the outside world while seeing if there are any catches to staying there long-term.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the same universe as his {{Web Serial Novel}}s ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't connected to either, posted on February 17, 2022.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the same universe as his {{Web Serial Novel}}s ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't directly connected to either, posted on February 17, 2022.
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* {{Guyliner}}: Franz Carter, a minor practitioner, wears heavy eye makeup.
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* {{Guyliner}}: Franz Carter, a male minor practitioner, wears heavy eye makeup.
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* SharedUniverse: Set in the same universe as ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't directly connected to either.
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* SharedUniverse: Set in the same universe as ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't directly connected to either.is more or less self-contained.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the same universe as his {{Web Serial Novel}}s ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't connected to either.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the same universe as his {{Web Serial Novel}}s ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't connected to either.either, posted on February 17, 2022.
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* BeePeople: Iliana is a ''krayvad'', a man-eating Other with the head of a praying mantis and miniature scythes for thumbs.
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* NonHumanHead: Iliana is a ''krayvad'', a man-eating Other with the head of a praying mantis and miniature scythes for thumbs.
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''[[https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YXzbO86597STHrWdX7K_kSIC3lBZuzYkrFyN1e8sp70/edit Pâté]]'' is a short story by Creator/{{Wildbow}} set in the same universe as his {{Web Serial Novel}}s ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't connected to either.
Cheryl Whitehorn and Alphonse Nasser, two practitioners working for an organization that does guidebooks for different realms, go to a liminal realm related to Nature to collect information for a project based around crossroads where different realms meet. As Cheryl tries to do that while carting around an obnoxious NewMeat partner, shenanigans ensue.
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* BeePeople: Iliana is a ''krayvad'', a man-eating Other with the head of a praying mantis and miniature scythes for thumbs.
* CatFolk: Madan is a humanoid catlike Other known as a Lawkeeper, who Cheryl guesses is in some way related to sphinxes, due to his feline appearance and association with Law and by extension karma.
* {{Guyliner}}: Franz Carter, a minor practitioner, wears heavy eye makeup.
* SharedUniverse: Set in the same universe as ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't directly connected to either.
* UpperClassTwit: Alphonse is a practition who went to an elite [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hogwarts]]-style school, and is about as obnoxious as you'd expect someone from that background to be.
Cheryl Whitehorn and Alphonse Nasser, two practitioners working for an organization that does guidebooks for different realms, go to a liminal realm related to Nature to collect information for a project based around crossroads where different realms meet. As Cheryl tries to do that while carting around an obnoxious NewMeat partner, shenanigans ensue.
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* BeePeople: Iliana is a ''krayvad'', a man-eating Other with the head of a praying mantis and miniature scythes for thumbs.
* CatFolk: Madan is a humanoid catlike Other known as a Lawkeeper, who Cheryl guesses is in some way related to sphinxes, due to his feline appearance and association with Law and by extension karma.
* {{Guyliner}}: Franz Carter, a minor practitioner, wears heavy eye makeup.
* SharedUniverse: Set in the same universe as ''Literature/{{Pact}}'' and ''Literature/{{Pale}}'', but isn't directly connected to either.
* UpperClassTwit: Alphonse is a practition who went to an elite [[Franchise/HarryPotter Hogwarts]]-style school, and is about as obnoxious as you'd expect someone from that background to be.
