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* * FamilyDisunion: Happens in the first chapter, when the Thorburn family gathers at Hillsglade House to hear who Grandma's heir will be. Rosalyn's death sets in motion events that lead to Molly's death and threaten Blake's life and the lives of everyone in line for her inheritance.
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* * FamilyDisunion: Happens in the first chapter, when the Thorburn family gathers at Hillsglade House to hear who Grandma's heir will be. The bickering state of the meeting and relationships Rosalyn's death sets in motion events that lead to Molly's death and threaten Blake's life and the lives of everyone in line for her inheritance.
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*** Also, this is the assumption one should make for all magical beings, because of the tens of thousands of years of elimination preceding the story. Any magical being who cannot cut the mustard in terms of lying through the truth would have been killed, banished and/or enslaved by then.
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*** Also, this is the assumption one should make for all the entire magical world. For magical beings, because of the tens of thousands of years of elimination preceding the story. Any story, and any magical being who cannot cut the mustard in terms of lying through the truth would have been killed, banished and/or enslaved by then.then. For human practitioners, because they know how to deal with the above mentioned crafty magical beings.
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Rosalyn\'s death? She did not die. Not yet...
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* FamilyDisunion: Happens in the first chapter, when the Thorburn family gathers at Hillsglade House to hear who Grandma's heir will be. Rosalyn's death The bickering state of the meeting and relationships sets in motion events that lead to Molly's death and threaten Blake's life and the lives of everyone in line for her inheritance.
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*** Also, this is the assumption one should make for all magical beings, because of the tens of thousands of years of elimination preceding the story. Any magical being who cannot cut the mustard in terms of lying through the truth would have been killed, banished and/or enslaved by then.
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* CannotTellALie: Technically, they can, but temporarily losing their power is a very steep price for a magical being to do so. Some get around this by employing non-magical 'witch hunters' who don't have this restriction.
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* ExactWords: Already abused to absurd degrees by the fifth chapter.
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* ExactWords: Already abused to absurd degrees by the fifth chapter. chapter.
** To elaborate, most of the magical beings in the setting will temporarily lose their power [[CannotTellALie if they tell a lie]] and worse if they break a vow. This naturally leads to many ending up as [[LiteralGenie Literal Genies]].
** To elaborate, most of the magical beings in the setting will temporarily lose their power [[CannotTellALie if they tell a lie]] and worse if they break a vow. This naturally leads to many ending up as [[LiteralGenie Literal Genies]].
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* Familiar: Gained by enacting a ritual in the book ''Famulus''; seemingly important for most magical practitioners.
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* Familiar: {{Familiar}}: Gained by enacting a ritual in the book ''Famulus''; seemingly important for most magical practitioners.
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* AerithAndBob: Essylt and Blake. Understandable as Essylt is an Other, aka Faerie.
* Familiar: Gained by enacting a ritual in the book ''Famulus''; seemingly important for most magical practitioners.
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* TomeOfEldritchLore: Several. The fact that a selection of the worst are given a place of honor in the Thorburn library makes everyone involved leery, to say the least.
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* TimeMaster: Behaim's circle specializes in chronomancy: Laird Behaim's pocketwatch is his implement, allowing him a degree of control over time - or at least how people perceive time.
* TomeOfEldritchLore: Several. The fact that a selection of the worst are given a place of honor in the Thorburn library makes everyone involved leery, to say the least. The main character believes comparing them to nuclear weapons is apt.
* TomeOfEldritchLore: Several. The fact that a selection of the worst are given a place of honor in the Thorburn library makes everyone involved leery, to say the least. The main character believes comparing them to nuclear weapons is apt.
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* HatesBeingTouched: Blake.Blake lived on the streets for a period of time, and has an aversion to even friendly contact from people he trusts, like his landlord and friend.
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* TheMultiverse: According to a ShrugOfGod via the [[http://pactwebserial.wordpress.com/2014/01/04/bonds-1-5/#comment-25 comments]] [[http://pactwebserial.wordpress.com/2014/01/04/bonds-1-5/#comment-26 section]], ''Pact'' is in the same multiverse as ''Worm'', ''Peer'', ''Boil'', etc. However, the protagonists from other stories won't be showing up.
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* TheMultiverse: According to a ShrugOfGod WordOfGod via the [[http://pactwebserial.wordpress.com/2014/01/04/bonds-1-5/#comment-25 comments]] [[http://pactwebserial.wordpress.com/2014/01/04/bonds-1-5/#comment-26 section]], ''Pact'' is in the same multiverse as ''Worm'', ''Peer'', ''Boil'', etc. However, the protagonists from other stories won't be showing up.
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* TheMultiverse: According to a ShrugOfGod via the [[http://pactwebserial.wordpress.com/2014/01/04/bonds-1-5/#comment-25 comments]] [[http://pactwebserial.wordpress.com/2014/01/04/bonds-1-5/#comment-26 section]], ''Pact'' is in the same multiverse as ''Worm'', ''Peer'', ''Boil'', etc. However, the protagonists from other stories won't be showing up.
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* CountryMatters: Blake makes his opinion about his grandmother quite clear by calling her a, "disgusting, evil, ''rancid'' cunt."
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* CountryMatters: Blake makes his opinion about his grandmother quite clear by calling her a, a "disgusting, evil, ''rancid'' cunt."" With all due respect.
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* FamilyDisunion: Happens in the first chapter, when the Thorburn family gathers at Hillsglade House to hear who Grandma's heir will be. Rosalyn's death sets in motion events that lead to Molly's death, threatens death and threaten Blake's life, life and the lives of everyone in line for her inheritance.inheritance.
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: In the very first chapter, Molly dies and the house--and all associated problems--goes to Blake.
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: In the very first chapter, Molly dies and the house--and all associated problems--goes to Blake.
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* EvilMatriarch: Blake's grand mother, Rosalyn D. Thorburn.
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An modern supernatural/horror story centered on Blake Thorburn, a young man who returns after a long absence from his dysfunctional family when his wealthy, terminally ill grandmother calls the family together to appoint a heir. After her death, Blake discovers that she has been keeping a secret that puts him and the rest of his family in grave danger. Started on December 17th, 2013, this WebSerialNovel is the author's second, following the popular superhero serial {{Literature/Worm}}. It updates on Tuesdays and Saturdays.
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An modern supernatural/horror story centered on Blake Rosine, a young man who returns after a long absence from his dysfunctional family when his wealthy, terminally ill grandmother calls the family together to appoint a heir. After her death, Blake discovers that she has been keeping a secret that puts him and the rest of his family in grave danger. Started on December 17th, 2013, this WebSerialNovel is the author's second, following the popular superhero serial {{Literature/Worm}}. It updates on Tuesdays and Saturdays.
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An modern supernatural/horror story centered on Blake Rosine, Thorburn, a young man who returns after a long absence from his dysfunctional family when his wealthy, terminally ill grandmother calls the family together to appoint a heir. After her death, Blake discovers that she has been keeping a secret that puts him and the rest of his family in grave danger. Started on December 17th, 2013, this WebSerialNovel is the author's second, following the popular superhero serial {{Literature/Worm}}. It updates on Tuesdays and Saturdays.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Rosine family, as shown in FamilyDisunion below.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: The Rosine Thorburn family, as shown in FamilyDisunion below.
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* FamilyDisunion: Happens in the first chapter, when the Rosine Thorburn family gathers at Hillsglade House to hear who Grandma's heir will be. Rosalyn's death sets in motion events that lead to Molly's death, threatens Blake's life, and the lives of everyone in line for her inheritance.
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* TheRunaway: Blake Rosine was one before returning.
* TomeOfEldritchLore: Several. The fact that a selection of the worst are given a place of honor in the Rosine library makes everyone involved leery, to say the least.
* EvilMatriarch: Blake's grand mother, Rosalyn D. Rosine.
* TomeOfEldritchLore: Several. The fact that a selection of the worst are given a place of honor in the Rosine library makes everyone involved leery, to say the least.
* EvilMatriarch: Blake's grand mother, Rosalyn D. Rosine.
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* TheRunaway: Blake Rosine Thorburn was one before returning.
* TomeOfEldritchLore: Several. The fact that a selection of the worst are given a place of honor in theRosine Thorburn library makes everyone involved leery, to say the least.
* EvilMatriarch: Blake's grand mother, Rosalyn D.Rosine.Thorburn.
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* EvilMatriarch: Blake's grand mother, Rosalyn D.
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* FamilyDisunion: Happens in the first chapter, when the Rosine family gathers at Hillsglade House to hear who Grandma's heir will be. Rosalyn's death sets in motion events that lead to molly's death, threatens Blakes life and the lives of everyone in line for her inheritance.
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* FamilyDisunion: Happens in the first chapter, when the Rosine family gathers at Hillsglade House to hear who Grandma's heir will be. Rosalyn's death sets in motion events that lead to molly's Molly's death, threatens Blakes life Blake's life, and the lives of everyone in line for her inheritance.
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An modern supernatural/ horror novel written by wildbow. started on the 17th of December 2013. his next story after the popular superhero serial {{Literature/Worm}}. it centers around Blake Rosine, a young man who ran away from his dysfunctional family who returns when his wealthy but terminally ill grandmother calls the family together to appoint an heir. after her death Blake finds out that she has been keeping a secret that puts his and the rest of his family in grave danger.
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An modern supernatural/ horror novel written by wildbow. started on the 17th of December 2013. his next supernatural/horror story after the popular superhero serial {{Literature/Worm}}. it centers around centered on Blake Rosine, a young man who ran away returns after a long absence from his dysfunctional family who returns when his wealthy but wealthy, terminally ill grandmother calls the family together to appoint an a heir. after After her death death, Blake finds out discovers that she has been keeping a secret that puts his him and the rest of his family in grave danger.
danger. Started on December 17th, 2013, this WebSerialNovel is the author's second, following the popular superhero serial {{Literature/Worm}}. It updates on Tuesdays and Saturdays.
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An modern supernatural/ horror novel written by wildbow. started on the 17th of December 2013. his next story after the popular superhero serial {{Literature/Worm Worm}}.{{Literature/Worm}}. it centers around Blake Rosine, a young man who ran away from his dysfunctional family who returns when his wealthy but terminally ill grandmother calls the family together to appoint an heir. after her death Blake finds out that she has been keeping a secret that puts his and the rest of his family in grave danger.
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