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* PottyEmergency: The effects of a large lemonade catch up with Sunset while in line to meet Post Crush, so she asks Pinkie Pie to hold her place in line while she runs off to the bathroom. Pinkie being [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Pinkie], of course, this ends badly.
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* PottyEmergency: The effects of a large lemonade catch up with Sunset while in line to meet Post Crush, [=PostCrush=], so she asks Pinkie Pie to hold her place in line while she runs off to the bathroom. Pinkie being [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Pinkie], Pinkie]], of course, this ends badly.
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* PottyEmergency: Sunset has one early on after drinking too much lemonade.
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* PottyEmergency: The effects of a large lemonade catch up with Sunset has one early on after drinking too much lemonade.while in line to meet Post Crush, so she asks Pinkie Pie to hold her place in line while she runs off to the bathroom. Pinkie being [[AttentionDeficitOohShiny Pinkie], of course, this ends badly.
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* PowerOfFriendship: Pinkie tries to use this with the guards of the VIP section; it fails hilariously.
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* PowerOfFriendship: ThePowerOfFriendship: Pinkie tries to use this with the guards of the VIP section; it fails hilariously.
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* ShipSinking: Sunset Shimmer does infact makes less of Flash Sentry while lusting after the yoga guy an entire page, in that route she also actively tries to learn as much as she can about him with the help of the loop so she could kiss him in the mouth, something that we never see in Sunset.
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* ShipSinking: Sunset Shimmer does infact makes less of Flash Sentry while lusting after the yoga guy an entire page, in that route she also actively tries to learn as much as she can about him with the help of the loop so she could kiss him in the mouth, something that we never see in Sunset.
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* HeadTurningBeauty: This is how yoga guy is introduced with everyone stopping what their doing to look at him.
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* ShipSinking: Sunset Shimmer does infact makes less of Flash Sentry while lusting after the yoga guy an entire page, in that route she also actively tries to learn as much as she can about him with the help of the loop so she could kiss him in the mouth, something that we never see in Sunset.
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All the Equestria Girls are excited to be at the Starswirl Music Festival, but no one is more excited to see [=PostCrush=], the most amazing pop duo ever, than Sunset Shimmer and Pinkie Pie! The only problem is... Sunset Shimmer is trapped in a time loop! She keeps reliving day one of the festival over and over, and she hasn't been able to make the right decisions to get to the big show. Help Sunset Shimmer find a way to figure out what kind of Equestrian magic is behind this and make it to the [=PostCrush=] concert with her best friend so she doesn't stay stuck forever!
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: In the route where Sunset decides to use the loop to pass the time having fun, she meets a yoga guy and Sunset has an entire page talking about how hot he is and how he is more cool and manly than Flash Sentry, very superficial from Sunny but she could not help herself.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: In the route where Sunset decides to use the loop to pass the time having fun, she meets a yoga guy and Sunset has an entire page talking about how hot he is and how he is more cool and manly with a better body than Flash Sentry, very superficial from Sunny but she could not help herself.
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* AlternateSelf: One of the alternate intros to the story ends with Pinkie being the one that rages at Sunset, instead of the other way around, she is pretty passive aggressive about it and ends up making Sunset run away.
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** One of the alternate intros to the story ends with Pinkie being the one that rages at Sunset, instead of the other way around, she is pretty passive aggressive about it and ends up making Sunset run away.
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* AmbiguousCloneEnding: All of them although without the clone part, more like "ambiguous alternate-self ending", if Sunset exposes herself to the light she just swapped places with another Sunset from another route.
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* AmbiguousCloneEnding: All of them although without the clone part, more like "ambiguous alternate-self ending", if Sunset exposes herself to the light she just swapped places with another Sunset from another route.
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* AmbiguousCloneEnding: All of them funny enough, if Sunset exposes herself to the light she just swapped places with another Sunset.
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* AmbiguousCloneEnding: All of them funny enough, although without the clone part, more like "ambiguous alternate-self ending", if Sunset exposes herself to the light she just swapped places with another Sunset.Sunset from another route.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy; In the route where Sunset decides to use the loop to pass the time having fun, she meets a yoga guy and Sunset has an entire page talking about how hot he is and how he is more cool and manly than Flash Sentry.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy; EatingTheEyeCandy: In the route where Sunset decides to use the loop to pass the time having fun, she meets a yoga guy and Sunset has an entire page talking about how hot he is and how he is more cool and manly than Flash Sentry.Sentry, very superficial from Sunny but she could not help herself.
