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* OurSoulsAreDifferent: [[spoiler:After Jermaine dies by suicide, his soul rises up from his body.]]
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* VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory: All of Jermaine's questionable actions actually happened in RealLife.
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* VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory: All of Jermaine's intrusive thoughts, questionable actions actions, and unwanted memories actually happened in RealLife.
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* VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory: All of Jermaine's questionable actions actually happened in RealLife.
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* {{Hell}}: This is where [[spoiler:Jermaine]] ends up after he [[DrivenToSuicide dies by suicide]].
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* {{Hell}}: This is where [[spoiler:Jermaine]] ends up after he [[DrivenToSuicide [[spoiler:[[DrivenToSuicide dies by suicide]].suicide.]]]]
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Artwork for the story can be found [[https://www.deviantart.com/gelefant/art/Infernal-Torture-828831572 here]].
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories for eternity.
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories for eternity.''forever''.
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* YourWorstMemory: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.
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* YourWorstMemory: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.
''forever''.
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories ‘’forever’’.
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories ‘’forever’’.for eternity.
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories ‘’forever’’
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories ‘’forever’’‘’forever’’.
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories ‘’forever’’.
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories ‘’forever’’.‘’forever’’
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.
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* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.‘’forever’’.
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* ShoutOut: The way [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] decomposing corpse is described is a clear reference to the lyrics of "The Hearse Song."
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* WaxingLyrical: The way [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] decomposing corpse is described is a clear reference to "The Hearse Song."
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* WaxingLyrical: The way [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] decomposing corpse is described is a clear reference are largely the exact lyrics to "The Hearse Song."
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* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag [[spoiler:Jermaine]] off to Hell]]]] are black and red, and they're ''definitely'' evil.
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* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag [[spoiler:Jermaine]] off to Hell]]]] Hell are black and red, and they're ''definitely'' evil.
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* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag [[spoiler:Jermaine]] off to Hell]] are black and red, and they're ''definitely'' evil.
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* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag [[spoiler:Jermaine]] off to Hell]] Hell]]]] are black and red, and they're ''definitely'' evil.
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* ForceFeeding: At the end, {{Satan}} force feeds [[spoiler:Jermaine]] a slice of bread with pus from the stomach of [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] corpse.
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* {{Satan}}: He appears to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], introduces himself to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], and welcomes him to {{Hell}} when he's DraggedOffToHell.
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* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag [[spoiler:Jermaine]] off to Hell]] are black and red, and they're ''definitely'' evil.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: Unsurprisingly, {{Satan}} cackles and laughs at [[spoiler:Jermaine]] as he forces [[spoiler:Jermaine]] to eat a slice of bread with pus from the stomach of [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] corpse.
* {{Satan}}: He appears to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], introduces himself to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], and welcomes him to {{Hell}} when he'sDraggedOffToHell. DraggedOffToHell.
* VomitIndiscretionShot: [[spoiler:Jermaine]] vomits after {{Satan}} [[ForceFeeding force feeds]] him a slice of bread with pus from the stomach of his corpse.
* WaxingLyrical: The way [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] decomposing corpse is described is a clear reference to "The Hearse Song."
* {{Sadist}}: Unsurprisingly, {{Satan}} cackles and laughs at [[spoiler:Jermaine]] as he forces [[spoiler:Jermaine]] to eat a slice of bread with pus from the stomach of [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] corpse.
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* VomitIndiscretionShot: [[spoiler:Jermaine]] vomits after {{Satan}} [[ForceFeeding force feeds]] him a slice of bread with pus from the stomach of his corpse.
* WaxingLyrical: The way [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] decomposing corpse is described is a clear reference to "The Hearse Song."
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[[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3362618/1/Into-the-Fiery-Abyss Into the Fiery Abyss]] is an original fictional story written by Creator/{{Gelefant}}.
It deals with bad or stupid things Jermaine's done and the consequences of those actions.
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!!Tropes:
* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.
* AnyLastWords: {{Satan}} asks [[spoiler:Jermaine]] this before he throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all his worst memories ''forever''.
* BigRedDevil: [[spoiler:Some of the demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag Jermaine off to Hell]] are red.]]
* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:After he dies by suicide, Jermaine's soul is swarmed by black and red demons who drag him off to Hell.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: About halfway through the story, [[spoiler:Jermaine takes his own life by slitting his wrist with a large kitchen knife. Before then, he'd dealt with suicidal thoughts since seventh grade.]]
* FireAndBrimstoneHell: This is the version of Hell [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] [[DraggedOffToHell dragged off to]].
* {{Hell}}: This is where [[spoiler:Jermaine]] ends up after he [[DrivenToSuicide dies by suicide]].
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag [[spoiler:Jermaine]] off to Hell]] are black and red, and they're ''definitely'' evil.]]
* {{Satan}}: He appears to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], introduces himself to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], and welcomes him to {{Hell}} when he's DraggedOffToHell.
* YourWorstMemory: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.
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It deals with bad or stupid things Jermaine's done and the consequences of those actions.
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!!Tropes:
* AngryCollarGrab: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.
* AnyLastWords: {{Satan}} asks [[spoiler:Jermaine]] this before he throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all his worst memories ''forever''.
* BigRedDevil: [[spoiler:Some of the demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag Jermaine off to Hell]] are red.]]
* DraggedOffToHell: [[spoiler:After he dies by suicide, Jermaine's soul is swarmed by black and red demons who drag him off to Hell.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: About halfway through the story, [[spoiler:Jermaine takes his own life by slitting his wrist with a large kitchen knife. Before then, he'd dealt with suicidal thoughts since seventh grade.]]
* FireAndBrimstoneHell: This is the version of Hell [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] [[DraggedOffToHell dragged off to]].
* {{Hell}}: This is where [[spoiler:Jermaine]] ends up after he [[DrivenToSuicide dies by suicide]].
* RedAndBlackAndEvilAllOver: The demons who [[DraggedOffToHell drag [[spoiler:Jermaine]] off to Hell]] are black and red, and they're ''definitely'' evil.]]
* {{Satan}}: He appears to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], introduces himself to [[spoiler:Jermaine]], and welcomes him to {{Hell}} when he's DraggedOffToHell.
* YourWorstMemory: After [[spoiler:Jermaine's]] DraggedOffToHell, Satan grabs him by the shirt and throws him into a fiery pit where he'll relive all of his worst memories forever.
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