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--> Heather rolled her eyes, her lips curling. “Oh my ''God'', that’s so pathetic. Are you this out of touch with the way people work?”
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--> Heather rolled her eyes, her lips curling. “Oh my ''God'', that’s so pathetic. Are you this out of touch with the way people work?”work?”
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Nigel isn't a Woobie Destroyer Of Worlds, he's a smug jerk that people had been a little mean to before
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--> Heather rolled her eyes, her lips curling. “Oh my ''God'', that’s so pathetic. Are you this out of touch with the way people work?”
* WoobieDestroyerofWorlds: [[spoiler: Nigel leaked information on Cam Cos, installed a virus inside Tom's head and attempted to blow up the Pentagonal Spire with his spaceship because he felt resent and hatred for his colleagues that mocked him. His [[EvilPlan plan]] is to emerge as a hero and become the new face of Cam Cos.]]
* WoobieDestroyerofWorlds: [[spoiler: Nigel leaked information on Cam Cos, installed a virus inside Tom's head and attempted to blow up the Pentagonal Spire with his spaceship because he felt resent and hatred for his colleagues that mocked him. His [[EvilPlan plan]] is to emerge as a hero and become the new face of Cam Cos.]]
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--> Heather rolled her eyes, her lips curling. “Oh my ''God'', that’s so pathetic. Are you this out of touch with the way people work?”
* WoobieDestroyerofWorlds: [[spoiler: Nigel leaked information on Cam Cos, installed a virus inside Tom's head and attempted to blow up the Pentagonal Spire with his spaceship because he felt resent and hatred for his colleagues that mocked him. His [[EvilPlan plan]] is to emerge as a hero and become the new face of Cam Cos.]]work?”
* WoobieDestroyerofWorlds: [[spoiler: Nigel leaked information on Cam Cos, installed a virus inside Tom's head and attempted to blow up the Pentagonal Spire with his spaceship because he felt resent and hatred for his colleagues that mocked him. His [[EvilPlan plan]] is to emerge as a hero and become the new face of Cam Cos.]]
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Complaining
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* NarratingTheObvious: Kincaid does this at times.
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* ArchEnemy: Tom acts as one to [[TheBully Karl Masters]] and [[SadistTeacher Blackburn]]. Oficially Medusa could be one as well, although her [[AmazonChaser relationship with Tom]] [[DatingCatwoman is nowhere as antagonistic]].
** Vengerov to Blackburn.
** Vengerov to Blackburn.
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* AllTheOtherReindeer: Nigel Harrison, a loner who is mocked by his peers due to his unusual [[CharacterTics tics]]. [[spoiler: This is the reason why he later leaks information on CamCos combatants, betrays Tom and [[FaceHeelTurn tries to blow up the Pentagonal Spire with the spaceship he's controlling]].]]
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* AllTheOtherReindeer: Nigel Harrison, a loner who is mocked by his peers due to his unusual [[CharacterTics tics]]. [[spoiler: This is the reason why he later leaks information on CamCos [=CamCos=] combatants, betrays Tom and [[FaceHeelTurn tries to blow up the Pentagonal Spire with the spaceship he's controlling]].]]
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* ActionGirl: Medusa, Wyatt and Heather.
* AffablyEvil / FauxAffablyEvil
** Vengerov initially seems rather harmless. [[spoiler:That is, until he almost gets Tom killed after he refuses to incapacitate Medusa with a virus and electrocutes Yuri's brain.]]
** [[spoiler:Heather Akron. Later books reveal her {{chronic backstabbing disorder}}, [[AmbitionIsEvil ambitions]] to become the face of Camelot Company and her former friendship with Wyatt. [[KickTheDog She proceeds to blackmail Tom]] and [[BullyingADragon later Blackburn]]. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard It doesn't]] [[CharacterDeath end well]].]]
* AffablyEvil / FauxAffablyEvil
** Vengerov initially seems rather harmless. [[spoiler:That is, until he almost gets Tom killed after he refuses to incapacitate Medusa with a virus and electrocutes Yuri's brain.]]
** [[spoiler:Heather Akron. Later books reveal her {{chronic backstabbing disorder}}, [[AmbitionIsEvil ambitions]] to become the face of Camelot Company and her former friendship with Wyatt. [[KickTheDog She proceeds to blackmail Tom]] and [[BullyingADragon later Blackburn]]. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard It doesn't]] [[CharacterDeath end well]].]]
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* ActionGirl: Medusa, Wyatt and Heather.
* AffablyEvil / FauxAffablyEvil
** Vengerov initially seems rather harmless. [[spoiler:That is, until he almost gets Tom killed after he refuses to incapacitate Medusa with a virus and electrocutes Yuri's brain.]]
** [[spoiler:Heather Akron. Later books reveal her {{chronic backstabbing disorder}}, [[AmbitionIsEvil ambitions]] to become the face of Camelot Company and her former friendship with Wyatt. [[KickTheDog She proceeds to blackmail Tom]] and [[BullyingADragon later Blackburn]]. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard It doesn't]] [[CharacterDeath end well]].]]Heather are all capable pilots.
* AffablyEvil / FauxAffablyEvil
** Vengerov initially seems rather harmless. [[spoiler:That is, until he almost gets Tom killed after he refuses to incapacitate Medusa with a virus and electrocutes Yuri's brain.]]
** [[spoiler:Heather Akron. Later books reveal her {{chronic backstabbing disorder}}, [[AmbitionIsEvil ambitions]] to become the face of Camelot Company and her former friendship with Wyatt. [[KickTheDog She proceeds to blackmail Tom]] and [[BullyingADragon later Blackburn]]. [[HoistByHisOwnPetard It doesn't]] [[CharacterDeath end well]].]]
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* AnArmAndALeg / {{Artificial Limbs}}: [[spoiler: In ''Vortex'' Tom gets cybernetic fingers.]]
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-->"Wyatt stared at her. “You only sit with me now when you want something.” She stung with the realization. “You dont want to be my friend; you just want me to do stuff for you.”
-->Heather rolled her eyes, her lips curling. “Oh my God, that’s so pathetic. Are you this out of touch with the way people work?”
-->Heather rolled her eyes, her lips curling. “Oh my God, that’s so pathetic. Are you this out of touch with the way people work?”
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--> She stung with the realization. “You dont want to be my friend; you just want me to do stuff for you.”
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* BettyAndVeronica: Medusa (Veronica) and Heather Akron (Betty) to Tom's Archie. While both Medusa and Heather are [[ActionGirl action girls]], Medusa is a more dangerous option due to being a [[LivingLegend world famous space combatant]] [[FoeYay fighting for the opposing side]] [[DatingCatwoman in the international conflict]].
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* BettyAndVeronica: Medusa (Veronica) and Heather Akron (Betty) to Tom's Archie. While both Medusa and Heather are [[ActionGirl action girls]], Medusa is a more dangerous option due to being a [[LivingLegend world famous space combatant]] [[FoeYay fighting for the opposing side]] side [[DatingCatwoman in the international conflict]].
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* Insignia (#1) (2012)
* Allies (#1.5) (2013)
* Vortex (#2) (2013)
* Catalyst (#3) (2015)
* Allies (#1.5) (2013)
* Vortex (#2) (2013)
* Catalyst (#3) (2015)
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* Insignia ''Insignia'' (#1) (2012)
*Allies ''Allies'' (#1.5) (2013)
*Vortex ''Vortex'' (#2) (2013)
*Catalyst ''Catalyst'' (#3) (2015)
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* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler:In ''Vortex'' Blackburn throws Heather down a vactube. Tom is well aware [[NightmareFuel how she will die]].]]
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* CharacterDeath: [[spoiler:In ''Vortex'' Blackburn throws Heather down a vactube. Tom is well aware [[NightmareFuel how she will die]].]]
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: OneWordTitle: ''Insignia'', ''Allies'', ''Vortex'', ''Catalyst''
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The planet's natural resources are almost gone, and war is being fought to control the assets of the solar system. The enemy is winning. The salvation may be Tom Raines. Tom doesn't seem like a hero. He's a short fourteen-year-old with bad skin. But he has the virtual-reality gaming skills that make him a phenom behind the controls of the battle drones.
As a new member of the Intrasolar Forces, Tom's life completely changes. Suddenly, he's someone important. He has new opportunities, friends, and a shot at having a girlfriend. But there's a price to pay. . . .
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The planet's natural resources are almost gone, and war is being fought to control the assets of the solar system. The enemy is winning. The salvation may be Tom Raines. Tom doesn't seem like a hero. He's a short fourteen-year-old with bad skin. But he has the virtual-reality gaming skills that make him a phenom behind the controls of the battle drones.
As a new member of the Intrasolar Forces, Tom's life completely changes. Suddenly, he's someone important. He has new opportunities, friends, and a shot at having a girlfriend. But there's a price to pay. . . .
As a new member of the Intrasolar Forces, Tom's life completely changes. Suddenly, he's someone important. He has new opportunities, friends, and a shot at having a girlfriend. But there's a price to pay. . . .
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As a new member of the Intrasolar Forces, Tom's life completely changes. Suddenly, he's someone important. He has new opportunities, friends, and a shot at having a girlfriend. But there's a price to pay. . . .
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* NarratingTheObvious: Kincaid does this at times.
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* FourTemperamentEnsemble: [[HotBlooded Tom Raines]] (choleric), [[ThePollyanna Vik Ashwan]] (sanguine), [[BrainyBrunette Wyatt Enslow]] (melancholic) and [[NiceGuy Yuri]] [[GentleGiant Sysevich]] (phlegmatic).
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* BetaCouple: Wyatt Enslow and Yuri Sysevich. [[spoiler:Even though Yuri was unwittingly made Vengerov's spy]], unlike Tom and Medusa they aren't fighting for two opposing sides of an international war and are allowed to meet without being charged for treason.
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* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler: Tom and Medusa.]]
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* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler: OfficialCouple
**[[BrainyBrunette Wyatt]] and [[GentleGiant Yuri]].
**[[DatingCatwoman Tom andMedusa.Medusa]]. In ''Insignia'' [[BigDamnKiss they share a kiss]] and as of ''Vortex'' [[spoiler:Tom is willing to pretend to cooperate with Vengerov in order to keep her secret safe.]]
**[[BrainyBrunette Wyatt]] and [[GentleGiant Yuri]].
**[[DatingCatwoman Tom and
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* StarCrossedLovers: [[DatingCatwoman Tom and Medusa]], definitely. They fight for two sides of an international conflict and have met only on-line, due to living in the U.S and China respectively, at the same time risking a charge for treason.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Blackburn is mplied to act one towards Wyatt as her mentor. He even remarks that Wyatt doesn't have much support from her parents and that she reminds him what it was like to be a father. [[spoiler: It's sort of a {{tearjerker}} knowing that he accidentally killed his own kids after having a neural processor installed in his brain.]]
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* ParentalSubstitute: Blackburn is mplied to act one towards Wyatt as her mentor. He even remarks that Wyatt doesn't have much support from her parents and that she reminds him what it was like to be a father. [[spoiler: It's sort of a {{tearjerker}} {{tear jerker}} knowing that he accidentally killed his own kids after having a neural processor installed in his brain.]]
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-->"Wyatt stared at her. “You only sit with me now when you want something.” She stung with the realization. “You don’t dont want to be my friend; you just want me to do stuff for you.”