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* BrickJoke: White Cat mentions the only thing Lilla is good for is boiled, drizzled with teriyaki sauce and served on rice. At the end of the book, he orderis a take-out meal of boiled eel on rice.
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* BrickJoke: White Cat mentions the only thing Lilla is good for is boiled, drizzled with teriyaki sauce and served on rice. At the end of the book, he orderis orders a take-out meal of boiled eel on rice.
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-->Maybe, maybe not, Yes, no, maybe so, yes no maybe so
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* BrickJoke: White Cat mentions the only thing Lilla is good for is boiled, drizzled with teriyaki sauce and served on rice. At the end of the book, he ends up ordering a take-out meal of just that.
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* BrickJoke: White Cat mentions the only thing Lilla is good for is boiled, drizzled with teriyaki sauce and served on rice. At the end of the book, he ends up ordering orderis a take-out meal of just that.boiled eel on rice.
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* CatsAreMean: White Cat is a grumpy, ill-tempered cat who mocks the protagonists on more than one occasion. Granted, it has good intentions, it's just so disdainful.
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* CatsAreMean: White Cat is a grumpy, ill-tempered cat who mocks the protagonists on more than one occasion. Granted, it he has good intentions, it's he's just so disdainful.
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* BrickJoke: White Cat mentions the only thing Lilla is good for is boiled, drizzled with teriyaki sauce and served on rice. At the end of the book, he ends up ordering a take-out meal of just that.
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* CallBack: Yes, no, maybe so, yes no maybe so
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* DeadpanSnarker: 90% of White Cat's dialogue is snark. Gee has his moments too.
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In 2012 a sequel called ''Darkest Light'' was released, continuing several years after the first book. The protagonist themselves is a '''huge spoiler''' for ''Half World'', so be prepared for unmarked spoilers.
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In 2012 a sequel called ''Darkest Light'' was released, continuing several sixteen years after the first book. The protagonist themselves is a '''huge spoiler''' for ''Half World'', so be prepared for unmarked spoilers.
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* DeliberatelyMonochrome: Half World is totally black and white because [[ColorCodedForYourConvenience colours are used to dictate spirits and the living]].
** SplashOfColor: However, anyone alive, from the Realm of Flesh, will retain their colours and shine brightly in the greyness. Half Wolders become coloured when they become spirits.
** SplashOfColor: However, anyone alive, from the Realm of Flesh, will retain their colours and shine brightly in the greyness. Half Wolders become coloured when they become spirits.
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* DeliberatelyMonochrome: Half World is totally black and white because [[ColorCodedForYourConvenience colours are used to dictate spirits Spirits and the living]].
** SplashOfColor: However, anyone alive, from the Realm of Flesh, will retain their colours and shine brightly in the greyness. Half Wolders become coloured when they becomespirits.Spirits.
** SplashOfColor: However, anyone alive, from the Realm of Flesh, will retain their colours and shine brightly in the greyness. Half Wolders become coloured when they become
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* ChekhovsGun: The Magic 8 Ball does nothing but answer in vague questions, and never really helps in any situation. [[spoiler: It's what gives Melanie the key card to Mr. Glueskin's room in the end.]]
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* MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler: Cracker blames herself for not being able to stop Klara's suicide, and sees Half World as a second chance to save Klara.]]
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* HellHotel: the Mirages Hotel.
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* HellHotel: the Mirages Hotel.
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* SayMyName: ''Karuuuuuuuuuuu!''
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''Half World'' by Hiromi Goto is a DownTheRabbitHole ComingOfAgeStory. There are three realms: the Realm of the Flesh, the Realm of the Spirit and Half World, a sort of purgatory where dead souls live out their traumas until they are ready to pass to the Realm of the Spirit. The realms were originally together, but got separated somehow. Melanie is a [[HolyChild child born impossibly into Half World]]. Her mother flees to the Realm of Flesh to raise Melanie. When her mother gets kidnapped by the sinister Mr. Glueskin, Melanie goes on a [[TheQuest quest]] to Half World to save her and [[SaveTheWorld the world]].
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''Half World'' by Hiromi Goto is a DownTheRabbitHole ComingOfAgeStory. ComingOfAgeStory, released in 2009.
There are three realms: the Realm ofthe Flesh, the living world, the Realm of the Spirit Spirit, afterlife, and Half World, a sort of purgatory where dead souls live work out their traumas until they are ready to pass to the Realm of the Spirit. The realms were originally together, cycling in harmony, but got separated somehow. Now each realm is isolated, locked in perpetual suffering. When Melanie is a [[HolyChild child born impossibly into Half World]]. Her World]] her mother flees to the Realm of Flesh to raise Melanie. When her. After fourteen years, her mother gets kidnapped by the sinister Mr. Glueskin, and Melanie goes on a [[TheQuest quest]] to Half World to save her and [[SaveTheWorld the world]].
There are three realms: the Realm of
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's revealed that [[spoiler: eating living things is how you extend your Half Life and delay when you're thrown back to your breaking point.]]
** The girls in the library capture the main cast with the intent to eat them.
** [[spoiler: Karu's brother forced him to eat so that he'd snap out of his trauma. But this caused Karu to go crazy and eat his own brother.]]
** The girls in the library capture the main cast with the intent to eat them.
** [[spoiler: Karu's brother forced him to eat so that he'd snap out of his trauma. But this caused Karu to go crazy and eat his own brother.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Gee thinks this almost word for word when he [[spoiler: realizes he just tried to strangle Cracker.]]
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* ImAHumanitarian: It's revealed that [[spoiler: eating living things is how you extend your Half Life and delay when you're thrown back to your breaking point.]]
** The girls in the library capture the main cast with the intent to eat them.
** [[spoiler: Karu's brother forced him to eat so that he'd snap out of his trauma. But this caused Karu to go crazy and eat his own brother.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Gee thinks this almost word for word when he [[spoiler: realizes he just tried to strangle Cracker.]]
** The girls in the library capture the main cast with the intent to eat them.
** [[spoiler: Karu's brother forced him to eat so that he'd snap out of his trauma. But this caused Karu to go crazy and eat his own brother.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Gee thinks this almost word for word when he [[spoiler: realizes he just tried to strangle Cracker.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Gee thinks this almost word for word when he [[spoiler: realizes he just tried to strangle Cracker.]]
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* ArcWords: How much can one person bear?
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* EnemyWithin: Mr. Glueskin's personality still thrives, and Gee struggles to keep it from overwhelming him.
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* BigNo: Boy, does Illana start doing this a lot.
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* VillainousCrush: Ilanna loved Mr. Glueskin, so she entices Gee to return to Half World [[spoiler: so he can become Mr. Glueskin again.]]
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* VillainousCrush: Ilanna loved Mr. Glueskin, so she entices Gee to return to Half World [[spoiler: so he can become tries advances on Gee.
** InLoveWithYourCarnage: But she's more in love with what Mr. Glueskinagain.]]did and his power.
** InLoveWithYourCarnage: But she's more in love with what Mr. Glueskin
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* CallBack: Yes, no, maybe so, yes no maybe so
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* RubberMan: Mr. Glueskin, with the added ability of being able to detach pieces of himself.
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* RubberMan: Mr. Glueskin, with the added ability of being able to detach pieces of himself.
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** Though this may have less to do with morals and more on that fact that Karu [[spoiler: is starting to remember his past and emphasizes with the boy.]]
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* HorrorHunger: Gee starts to suffer this when they get to Half World.
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* [spoiler: BittersweetEnding][[spoiler: BittersweetEnding]]
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* FourIsDeath: Door Four in the Cassier Connector leads to Half World, and floor four of Mirages Hotel [[spoiler: is how you get back to the portal to the Realm of Flesh]]. Ms. Wei explains this trope in ''Half World''.
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* FourIsDeath: Door Four in the Cassier Connector leads to Half World, Mr. Glueskin's room is the fourth door on the penthouse level, and floor four of Mirages Hotel [[spoiler: is how you get back to the portal to the Realm of Flesh]]. Ms. Wei explains this trope in ''Half World''.
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** The pile of rags that was offhandedly mentioned in ''Half World'' is now explained and serves as {{Forshadowing}}.
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* BilingualBonus: Gee calls Ms. Wei popo, which is Chinese for 'grandma'.
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* BilingualBonus: Gee calls Ms. Wei popo, Popo, which is Chinese for 'grandma'. 'grandma'.
* BlindingBangs: Gee.
* BlindingBangs: Gee.