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* TheUnfavourite: At the very least, Kit ''sees himself'' as this, and might actually be it concerning Lochan and Maya, (though he brings most of it on himself.) Lochan is certainly this for his mother.

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* TheUnfavourite: At the very least, Kit ''sees himself'' as this, and might actually be it concerning Lochan and Maya, Maya (though he brings most of it on himself.) himself). Lochan is certainly this for his mother.
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* TeensAreMonsters: Kit, who's in his sister's words, "your standard screwed-up teenager." But it's also a deconstruction, as his screwed up family situation--DisappearedDad, neglectful mother and two older siblings trying to parent while not even adults themselves--more than explain why he's behaves so badly. He improves in the last third of the book.

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* TeensAreMonsters: Kit, who's in his sister's words, "your standard screwed-up teenager." But it's also a deconstruction, as his screwed up family situation--DisappearedDad, neglectful mother and two older siblings trying to parent while not even adults themselves--more than explain why he's he behaves so badly. He improves in the last third of the book.
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* [[spoiler:RayOfHopeEnding: Lochan claims he raped Maya and commits suicide to stop her from getting tried for incest and prevent the family from being taken into Care, leaving Maya grief-stricken. However she decides to keep on living for him, and keep the family together so his sacrifice isn't in vain.]]

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* [[spoiler:RayOfHopeEnding: Lochan claims he raped Maya and commits suicide to stop her from getting tried for incest and prevent the family from being taken into Care, leaving Maya grief-stricken. However However, she decides to keep on living for him, and keep the family together so his sacrifice isn't in vain.]]
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* CharacterDevelopment: Kit seems to be getting over his horrible stage in the last part of the book and treats the rest of the family much better. (Largely because Lochan and Maya have succeeded in establishing a stable and consistent routine with their mum basically out of the picture.) Meanwhile Lochan starts working through his anxiety and shyness, including reading his work aloud to the class and making a proper friend.

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* CharacterDevelopment: Kit seems to be getting over his horrible stage in the last part of the book and treats the rest of the family much better. (Largely better, largely because Lochan and Maya have succeeded in establishing a stable and consistent routine with their mum basically out of the picture.) Meanwhile picture. Meanwhile, Lochan starts working through his anxiety and shyness, including reading his work aloud to the class and making a proper friend.
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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: They're both brooding to a degree, but Lochan has the extra burden of social anxiety, and Maya help ease that.

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* BroodingBoyGentleGirl: They're both brooding to a degree, but Lochan has the extra burden of social anxiety, and Maya help helps ease that.
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** Averted too, though--she's been clear the the incest is ''not'' based on her own experiences.

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** Averted too, though--she's been clear the that the incest is ''not'' based on her own experiences.
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[[caption-width-right:300:Thought it's an ContemptibleCover, that really doesn't do the book justice.]]

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** AlcoholicParent: Their mother again.



** ParentalNeglect She has all but moved out.

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** ParentalNeglect She ParentalNeglect[=/=]MissingMom: By the end of the book, their mother has all but moved out.left the family to live with her boyfriend [[spoiler:including not even attending Lochan's funeral.]]



* AlcoholicParent: Their mother again.



* BigScrewedUpFamily[=/=]DysfunctionalFamily: The Whitelys, complete with alcoholism and incest to boot.



* BrotherSisterTeam[=/=]SiblingTeam: Lochan and Maya acknowledge they've always viewed each other as equals, and have become partners supporting each other for pretty much their whole lives. By the time of the book they're practically co-parents as well.

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* BrotherSisterTeam[=/=]SiblingTeam: BrotherSisterTeam: Lochan and Maya acknowledge they've always viewed each other as equals, and have become partners supporting each other for pretty much their whole lives. By the time of the book they're practically co-parents as well.



* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: After [[spoiler:not having sex for a long time because they are terrified of being caught]], they eventually decide that they're being paranoid, and that no one is actually going around looking in windows to catch [[spoiler: siblings having sex. So they go ahead and have sex,]] and disaster rains down--''instantly''.

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* CantGetAwayWithNuthin: After [[spoiler:not having sex for a long time because they are terrified of being caught]], they eventually decide that they're being paranoid, and that no one is actually going around looking in windows to catch [[spoiler: siblings [[spoiler:siblings having sex. So they go ahead and have sex,]] and disaster rains down--''instantly''.



* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Discussed in depth.

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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale: Discussed {{Discussed|Trope}} in depth.depth.
* DysfunctionalFamily: The Whitelys, complete with alcoholism and incest to boot.



* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Maya, after Lochan's death.]]

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* HeroicBSOD: [[spoiler: Maya, [[spoiler:Maya, after Lochan's death.]]



* MissingMom: By the end of the book, their mother has all but left the family to live with her boyfriend [[spoiler: including not even attending Lochan's funeral.]]



* [[spoiler: RayOfHopeEnding: Lochan claims he raped Maya and commits suicide to stop her from getting tried for incest and prevent the family from being taken into Care, leaving Maya grief-stricken. However she decides to keep on living for him, and keep the family together so his sacrifice isn't in vain.]]

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* [[spoiler: RayOfHopeEnding: [[spoiler:RayOfHopeEnding: Lochan claims he raped Maya and commits suicide to stop her from getting tried for incest and prevent the family from being taken into Care, leaving Maya grief-stricken. However she decides to keep on living for him, and keep the family together so his sacrifice isn't in vain.]]



* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: It's revealed Kit picked up on Lochan and Maya's relationship a while back, but kept quiet.]]

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* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: It's [[spoiler:It's revealed Kit picked up on Lochan and Maya's relationship a while back, but kept quiet.]]



* TakeCareOfTheKids: [[spoiler: Lochan's last request to Maya.]]
* TalkingInBed: Maya and Lochan have a long talk in bed about Lochan's progress talking in class, how their screwed up family may have contributed to them falling in love, AllAbusersAreMale[=/=]DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale, and the illegality of incest.

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* TakeCareOfTheKids: [[spoiler: Lochan's [[spoiler:Lochan's last request to Maya.]]
* TalkingInBed: Maya and Lochan have a long talk in bed about Lochan's progress talking in class, how their screwed up family may have contributed to them falling in love, AllAbusersAreMale[=/=]DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale, AllAbusersAreMale, DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale, and the illegality of incest.



* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Reconstructed. There's no doubt Lochan and Maya's behavior--matter of factly putting aside their own needs to raise their siblings and giving up on their own mother--is worrying for a pair of 16/17-year-olds. However it's generally portrayed in a positive light and the best thing they can do in their situation. They do a pretty good job of raising the kids and holding the family together [[spoiler: until their mother discovers their relationship.]]

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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Reconstructed. There's no doubt Lochan and Maya's behavior--matter of factly putting aside their own needs to raise their siblings and giving up on their own mother--is worrying for a pair of 16/17-year-olds. However it's generally portrayed in a positive light and the best thing they can do in their situation. They do a pretty good job of raising the kids and holding the family together [[spoiler: until [[spoiler:until their mother discovers their relationship.]]



* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler: Kit. Oh Kit. Without thinking and in anger, he tells their mother about Lochan and Maya's relationship. Arrest, suicide, and the near destruction of their family insue.]]

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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler: Kit.[[spoiler:Kit. Oh Kit. Without thinking and in anger, he tells their mother about Lochan and Maya's relationship. Arrest, suicide, and the near destruction of their family insue.]]

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*AffectionateNickname: The family calls Lochan "Loch" and "Lochie" sometimes. It's ''not'' ok when a policeman calls him that.



* InSeriesNickname: The family calls Lochan Loch and Lochie sometimes. It's not ok when a policeman calls him that.



--->'''Maya''': ''[yelling and crying]'' He didn’t kiss me! He tried to, okay, but I didn’t let him! D’you know why? D’you want to know why? D’you really, really want to know why? This is why… ''[kisses his cheek]'' This is why… ''[kisses the corner of his lips]'' This is why… ''[kisses his mouth]''\\
''[They kiss for a minute]''\\
'''Lochan''': Maya, what the hell are we doing? I don’t understand. Why--why the hell is this happening to us?\\
'''Maya''': All I know right now is that I love you. I love you far more than just as a brother. I… I love you in--in every kind of way.\\
'''Lochan''': I feel like that too… It’s--it’s a feeling so big, I sometimes think it’s going to swallow me. It’s so strong, I feel it could kill me. It keeps growing and I can’t--I don’t know what to do to stop it.
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** Enforced. Editors wanted the relationship to be more romantic and less sexual, but they're unsupervised teenagers, so…

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** Enforced. Editors EnforcedTrope--the editors wanted the relationship to be more romantic and less sexual, but they're unsupervised teenagers, so…
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** LoveConfession follows, quite dramatically.

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** LoveConfession AnguishedDeclarationOfLove follows, quite ''quite'' dramatically.
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* InSeriesNickname: The family calls Lochan Loch and Lochie sometimes. It's not ok when a policeman calls him that.


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**LoveConfession follows, quite dramatically.
--->'''Maya''': ''[yelling and crying]'' He didn’t kiss me! He tried to, okay, but I didn’t let him! D’you know why? D’you want to know why? D’you really, really want to know why? This is why… ''[kisses his cheek]'' This is why… ''[kisses the corner of his lips]'' This is why… ''[kisses his mouth]''\\
''[They kiss for a minute]''\\
'''Lochan''': Maya, what the hell are we doing? I don’t understand. Why--why the hell is this happening to us?\\
'''Maya''': All I know right now is that I love you. I love you far more than just as a brother. I… I love you in--in every kind of way.\\
'''Lochan''': I feel like that too… It’s--it’s a feeling so big, I sometimes think it’s going to swallow me. It’s so strong, I feel it could kill me. It keeps growing and I can’t--I don’t know what to do to stop it.
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Told through {{sympathetic|POV}}, SwitchingPOV.
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**Enforced. Editors wanted the relationship to be more romantic and less sexual, but they're unsupervised teenagers, so…
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* TheWoobie: Maya and Lochan, though {{Stoic Woobie}}s at that. As narrators, they are very open to the audience about their woobiehood. However in-universe, they hide their situation very well, lest a social worker notice.

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* TheWoobie: Maya and Lochan, though {{Stoic Woobie}}s at that. As narrators, they are very open to the audience about their woobiehood. However in-universe, they hide their situation very well, lest a social worker notice.notice.
* WriteWhatYouKnow: Lochan's social anxiety is directly based on the author's own experiences.
** Averted too, though--she's been clear the the incest is ''not'' based on her own experiences.

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->''For my part, the choice has already been made. Having the children taken into care is something I have been trying to guard against since the age of twelve. No sacrifice is too great to keep my family together, yet the long path ahead looks so rocky and steep that I regularly wake up at night fearing I will fall. Only the thought of Maya at my side makes the ascent seem possible at all.''
-->-- '''Lochan Whitely'''



* CharacterDevelopment: Kit seems to be getting over his horrible stage in the last part of the book and treats the rest of the family much better. (Largely because Lochan and Maya have succeeded in establishing a stable and consistent routine with their mum basically out of the picture). Meanwhile Lochan starts working through his anxiety and shyness, including reading his work aloud to the class and making a proper friend.

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* CharacterDevelopment: Kit seems to be getting over his horrible stage in the last part of the book and treats the rest of the family much better. (Largely because Lochan and Maya have succeeded in establishing a stable and consistent routine with their mum basically out of the picture). picture.) Meanwhile Lochan starts working through his anxiety and shyness, including reading his work aloud to the class and making a proper friend.



* ConvenientSlowDance: First homework, which leads to procrastinating/taking-a-break, which leads to salsa dancing, and then the song the radio plays after the salsa is a slow, crooning one. DanceOfRomance ensues.

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* ConvenientSlowDance: ConvenientSlowDance[=/=]DanceOfRomance: First homework, which leads to procrastinating/taking-a-break, which leads to salsa dancing, and then the song the radio plays after the salsa is a slow, crooning one. DanceOfRomance ensues.



* TheCutie: Willa.
* DanceOfRomance: Homework → procrastination → salsa dancing → DanceOfRomance.
* {{Delinquent|s}}: Kit and his friends

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* TheCutie: TheCutie[=/=]{{Moe}}: Willa.
* DanceOfRomance: Homework → procrastination → salsa dancing → DanceOfRomance.
* {{Delinquent|s}}:
{{Delinquents}}: Kit and his friends



* [[spoiler: HopeSpot: In the last part of the book, the family are happier and more settled than they've ever been, Kit's finally behaving, Lochan's anxiety is improving, and Lochan and Maya seem to have found peace together. Then their mother discovers their relationship and everything falls apart.]]

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* [[spoiler: HopeSpot: [[spoiler:HopeSpot: In the last part of the book, the family are happier and more settled than they've ever been, Kit's finally behaving, Lochan's anxiety is improving, and Lochan and Maya seem to have found peace together. Then their mother discovers their relationship and everything falls apart.]]



* LoveEpiphany: It's not until Maya goes on a date that either Maya or Lochan really understand that they like each other. On Lochan's side it's a GreenEyedEpiphany, while for Maya, she realizes than ever this guy she thought she liked isn't who she wants to be with.

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* LoveEpiphany: It's not until Maya goes on a date that either Maya or Lochan really understand that they like each other. On Lochan's side it's a GreenEyedEpiphany, while for GreenEyedEpiphany. For Maya, she realizes than ever this a guy she thought ''thought'' she liked isn't who she wants to be with.



* {{Moe}}: Willa



* PleaseDontLeaveMe: Lochan and Maya to each other. Lochan when Maya goes on a date with Nico [=DiMarco=] and he imagines she'll stop paying attention to the family because she can do better. Maya, when she thinks about Lochan going away to university and leaving her to manage the kids by herself. Neither of them voice it initially, because [[{{IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy}} they want the other to be happy.]]

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* PleaseDontLeaveMe: Lochan and Maya to each other. Lochan when Maya goes on a date with Nico [=DiMarco=] and he imagines she'll stop paying attention to the family because she can do better. Maya, when she thinks about Lochan going away to university and leaving her to manage the kids by herself. Neither of them voice it initially, because [[{{IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy}} they want the other to be happy.]] happy]].



* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted hard. Lochan and Maya are all too aware of the risk social services could investigate their situation, especially as a family like the Whitleys (living in state housing, DisappearedDad, neglectful mother) are already on the radar. Many of the pair's actions - raising the other three, covering up their mother's neglectfulness, resisting their feelings and putting on a brave face at school - are because they don't want to social services to step in and put the younger ones into foster care. Lochan admits that the moment he turns 18, he plans to become Kit, Tiffin and Willa's legal guardian to give the family some security.

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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted hard. Lochan and Maya are all too aware of the risk social services could investigate their situation, especially as a family like the Whitleys (living in state housing, DisappearedDad, [[ParentalNeglect neglectful mother) mother]]) are already on the radar. Many of the pair's actions - raising actions--raising the other three, covering up their mother's neglectfulness, resisting their feelings and putting on a brave face at school - are school--are because they desperately [[DontSplitUsUp don't want to social services to step in and put the younger ones into foster care.care]]. Lochan admits that the moment he turns 18, he plans to become Kit, Tiffin and Willa's legal guardian to give the family some security.



* TalkingInBed: Maya and Lochan have a long talk in bed about Lochan's progress talking in class, how their screwed up family may have contributed to them falling in love, AllAbusersAreMale[=/=]DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale, and the illegality of incest. They also chat in bed after Willa's shoulder is dislocated.
* TeensAreMonsters: Kit, who's in his sister's words, "your standard screwed-up teenager." But it's also a deconstruction, as his screwed up family situation - DisappearedDad, neglectful mother and two older siblings trying to parent while not even adults themselves - more than explain why he's behaves so badly. He improves in the last third of the book.

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* TalkingInBed: Maya and Lochan have a long talk in bed about Lochan's progress talking in class, how their screwed up family may have contributed to them falling in love, AllAbusersAreMale[=/=]DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnMale, and the illegality of incest. They also chat in bed after Willa's shoulder is dislocated.
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* TeensAreMonsters: Kit, who's in his sister's words, "your standard screwed-up teenager." But it's also a deconstruction, as his screwed up family situation - DisappearedDad, situation--DisappearedDad, neglectful mother and two older siblings trying to parent while not even adults themselves - more themselves--more than explain why he's behaves so badly. He improves in the last third of the book.



* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Reconstructed. There's no doubt Lochan and Maya's behavior - matter of factly putting aside their own needs to raise their siblings and giving up on their own mother - is worrying for a pair of sixteen/seventeen year old's. However it's generally portrayed in a positive light and the best thing they can do in their situation. They do a pretty good job of raising the kids and holding the family together [[spoiler: until their mother discovers their relationship.]]

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* TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Reconstructed. There's no doubt Lochan and Maya's behavior - matter behavior--matter of factly putting aside their own needs to raise their siblings and giving up on their own mother - is mother--is worrying for a pair of sixteen/seventeen year old's.16/17-year-olds. However it's generally portrayed in a positive light and the best thing they can do in their situation. They do a pretty good job of raising the kids and holding the family together [[spoiler: until their mother discovers their relationship.]]

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* CharacterDevelopment: Kit seems to be getting over his horrible stage in the last part of the book and getting on much better with the rest of the family. (Largely because Lochan and Maya have succeeded in establishing a stable and consistent routine with their mum basically out of the picture). [[spoiler: It's revealed he knew about Lochan and Maya's relationship for a while but kept quiet to protect them.]] Meanwhile Lochan starts working through his anxiety and shyness, including reading his work aloud to the class and making a proper friend.

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* CharacterDevelopment: Kit seems to be getting over his horrible stage in the last part of the book and getting on much better with treats the rest of the family.family much better. (Largely because Lochan and Maya have succeeded in establishing a stable and consistent routine with their mum basically out of the picture). [[spoiler: It's revealed he knew about Lochan and Maya's relationship for a while but kept quiet to protect them.]] Meanwhile Lochan starts working through his anxiety and shyness, including reading his work aloud to the class and making a proper friend.



* [[spoiler: HopeSpot: In the last part of the book, the family are happier and more settled than they've ever been, Kit's finally behaving, Lochan's anxiety is improving, and Lochan and Maya seem to have found peace together. Then their mother discovers their relationship and everything falls apart.]]



* PleaseDontLeaveMe: Lochan and Maya to each other. Lochan when Maya goes on a date with Nico [=DiMarco=] and he imagines she'll stop paying attention to the family because she can do better. Maya, when she thinks about Lochan going away to university and leaving her to manage the kids by herself. Neither of them voice it initially, because [[{{IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy}} they want the other to be happy.]]



* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted hard. Lochan and Maya are all too aware of the risk social services could investigate their situation, especially as a family like the Whitleys (living in state housing, DisappearedDad, neglectful mother) are already on the radar. Many of the pair's actions - raising the other three, covering up their mother's neglectfulness, resisting their feelings and putting on a brave face at school - are because they don't want to social services to step in and put the younger ones into Care. Lochan admits that the moment he turns 18, he plans to become Kit, Tiffin and Willa's legal guardian to give the family some security.

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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted hard. Lochan and Maya are all too aware of the risk social services could investigate their situation, especially as a family like the Whitleys (living in state housing, DisappearedDad, neglectful mother) are already on the radar. Many of the pair's actions - raising the other three, covering up their mother's neglectfulness, resisting their feelings and putting on a brave face at school - are because they don't want to social services to step in and put the younger ones into Care.foster care. Lochan admits that the moment he turns 18, he plans to become Kit, Tiffin and Willa's legal guardian to give the family some security.



* TroublingUnChildlikeBehaviour: Reconstructed. There's no doubt Lochan and Maya's behavior - automatically assuming responsibility for their younger siblings, matter of factly putting aside their own wants and needs, and giving up on their own mother - is worrying for a pair of sixteen/seventeen year old's. However it's generally portrayed in a positive light and the best thing they can do in their situation.

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* TroublingUnChildlikeBehaviour: TroublingUnchildlikeBehaviour: Reconstructed. There's no doubt Lochan and Maya's behavior - automatically assuming responsibility for their younger siblings, matter of factly putting aside their own wants and needs, needs to raise their siblings and giving up on their own mother - is worrying for a pair of sixteen/seventeen year old's. However it's generally portrayed in a positive light and the best thing they can do in their situation. They do a pretty good job of raising the kids and holding the family together [[spoiler: until their mother discovers their relationship.]]



* TheUnfavourite: At the very least, Kit ''sees himself'' as this, and might actually be it. Lochan is certainly this for his mother.

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* TheUnfavourite: At the very least, Kit ''sees himself'' as this, and might actually be it. it concerning Lochan and Maya, (though he brings most of it on himself.) Lochan is certainly this for his mother.

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* PromotionToParent: Lochan and Maya. The two of them raising their siblings and dealing with their neglectful mother takes up most of the book, especially as the beginning.

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* PromotionToParent: Lochan and Maya. The two of them raising their siblings and dealing with their neglectful mother takes up most of the book, is given just as much focus than their romance, especially as at the beginning. They even plan to become Willa, Tiffin and Kit's legal guardians when they turn 18 so they don't have to deal with their mother at all anymore.


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* SocialServicesDoesNotExist: Averted hard. Lochan and Maya are all too aware of the risk social services could investigate their situation, especially as a family like the Whitleys (living in state housing, DisappearedDad, neglectful mother) are already on the radar. Many of the pair's actions - raising the other three, covering up their mother's neglectfulness, resisting their feelings and putting on a brave face at school - are because they don't want to social services to step in and put the younger ones into Care. Lochan admits that the moment he turns 18, he plans to become Kit, Tiffin and Willa's legal guardian to give the family some security.


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* TroublingUnChildlikeBehaviour: Reconstructed. There's no doubt Lochan and Maya's behavior - automatically assuming responsibility for their younger siblings, matter of factly putting aside their own wants and needs, and giving up on their own mother - is worrying for a pair of sixteen/seventeen year old's. However it's generally portrayed in a positive light and the best thing they can do in their situation.

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* AbusiveParents: Their mother is shockingly neglectful, as well as financially abusive--not to mention a little emotionally/verbally abusive towards Lochan.

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* AbusiveParents: Their mother is shockingly neglectful, as well as financially abusive--not to mention a little emotionally/verbally emotionally and verbally abusive towards Lochan.



* CharacterDevelopment: Kit seems to be getting over his horrible stage in the last part of the book and getting on much better with the rest of the family. (Largely because Lochan and Maya have succeeded in establishing a stable and consistent routine with their mum basically out of the picture). [[spoiler: It's revealed he knew about Lochan and Maya's relationship for a while but kept quiet to protect them.]] Meanwhile Lochan starts working through his anxiety and shyness, including reading his work aloud to the class and making a proper friend.



* PromotionToParent: Lochan and Maya

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* PromotionToParent: Lochan and MayaMaya. The two of them raising their siblings and dealing with their neglectful mother takes up most of the book, especially as the beginning.



* TeensAreMonsters: Kit, who's in his sister's words, "your standard screwed-up teenager." But it's also a deconstruction.

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* TeensAreMonsters: Kit, who's in his sister's words, "your standard screwed-up teenager." But it's also a deconstruction.deconstruction, as his screwed up family situation - DisappearedDad, neglectful mother and two older siblings trying to parent while not even adults themselves - more than explain why he's behaves so badly. He improves in the last third of the book.
* TeenGenius: Lochan is intelligent enough to basically be a shoo-in for competitive universities like Oxford and Cambridge, despite going to a pretty rough state school and lacking time to study because he's raising three younger siblings.



* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:Kit. Oh Kit. Without thinking and in anger, he tells their mother about Lochan and Maya's relationship. Arrest, suicide, and the near destruction of their family insue.]]

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* UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: [[spoiler:Kit.[[spoiler: Kit. Oh Kit. Without thinking and in anger, he tells their mother about Lochan and Maya's relationship. Arrest, suicide, and the near destruction of their family insue.]]
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* InnocentBlueEyes: Willa of course, but also Maya.
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* TroubledButCute: Lochan. Played with. He's antisocial, and with a difficult home life, and beautiful, with plenty of girls who like home as is traditional for the trope, but he's also got social anxiety and is a far cry from a bad boy or rebel.

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* TroubledButCute: Played with with Lochan. Played with. He's As is traditional for the trope he's antisocial, and with a difficult home life, and beautiful, with plenty of girls who like home as is traditional for the trope, but him. But he's also got social anxiety anxiety, and is a far cry from a classic Troubled, but Cute bad boy or rebel.

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* BigScrewedUpFamily[=/=]DysfunctionalFamily: The Whitelys, complete with alcoholism and incest to boot.

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* BigScrewedUpFamily[=/=]DysfunctionalFamily: BigManOnCampus: Nico [=DiMarco=]
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* {{Delinquent|s}}: Kit and his friends
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* SingleTargetSexuality: Lochan is Maya-sexual. Before they figure this out, she even asks him if he's gay.
-->''I look around the class but there is no one. Attractive girls--yes. A girl that I care about--no. She can't just be a face, a body; there has to be more than that, some kind of connection. And I can't connect, don't want to connect, with anyone.''

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* SingleTargetSexuality: Lochan is Maya-sexual. Before they figure this out, she even Early in the book, Maya asks him if Lochan--jokingly--if he's gay.
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gay, because he's never kissed a girl. He says no, he's not. Later they both realized he's in love with ''her''. The singularity of his sexuality becomes most visible when he's looking for someone else to transfer his affections too and can't.
-->''No, that’s ridiculous. My problem is that I need someone to focus my attention on, some object of desire, some girl to fantasize about. I
look around the class but there is no one. Attractive girls--yes. A girl that I care about--no. She can't can’t just be a face, a body; there has to be more than that, some kind of connection. And I can't can’t connect, don't don’t want to connect, with anyone.''
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* TroubledButCute: Lochan. Played with, in that he's certainly troubled with social anxiety and generally reclusive but is a far cry from a bad boy or rebel.

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* TroubledButCute: Lochan. Played with, in that with. He's antisocial, and with a difficult home life, and beautiful, with plenty of girls who like home as is traditional for the trope, but he's certainly troubled with also got social anxiety and generally reclusive but is a far cry from a bad boy or rebel.
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* CoolTeacher: Downplayed, but Miss Azley.


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* LoveEpiphany: It's not until Maya goes on a date that either Maya or Lochan really understand that they like each other. On Lochan's side it's a GreenEyedEpiphany, while for Maya, she realizes than ever this guy she thought she liked isn't who she wants to be with.
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* AbusiveParents: Their mother is incredibly neglectful, as well as financially abusive--not to mention emotionally/verbally abusive towards Lochan.

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* AbusiveParents: Their mother is incredibly shockingly neglectful, as well as financially abusive--not to mention a little emotionally/verbally abusive towards Lochan.

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* AbusiveParents: Their mother is certainly emotionally and financially abusive, particularly towards Lochan.

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* AbusiveParents: Their mother is certainly emotionally and incredibly neglectful, as well as financially abusive, particularly abusive--not to mention emotionally/verbally abusive towards Lochan. Lochan.
** FinancialAbuse: She gives her kids money for bills and food very grudgingly.
** ParentalNeglect She has all but moved out.



* MissingMom: By the end of the book, their mother has all but left thee family to live with her boyfriend [[spoiler: including not even attending Lochan's funeral.]]

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* MissingMom: By the end of the book, their mother has all but left thee the family to live with her boyfriend [[spoiler: including not even attending Lochan's funeral.]]



* ParentalNeglect: Their mother. With a little [[AbusiveParents verbal/emotional abuse toward Lochan]] too.



* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: It's revealed Kit picked up on Lochan and Maya's relationship a while back but kept quiet.]]

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* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler: It's revealed Kit picked up on Lochan and Maya's relationship a while back back, but kept quiet.]]

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