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* BeardnessProtectionProgram: Inverted, but Ronnie actually recognizes him immediately, though he doesn't let on [[spoiler: even after knowing he could trust Peter until he tried to take Ronnie into custody]].
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* BeardnessProtectionProgram: Inverted, but Ronnie actually recognizes him immediately, though he doesn't let on [[spoiler: even after knowing thinking he could trust Peter until he tried to take Ronnie into custody]].
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* DamselInDistress/BadassInDistress: Ana Maria Rosalita was locked up in a room and denied food by half brother and his aunt so she couldn't use her magical abilities to free herself or cause other problems.
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* DamselInDistress/BadassInDistress: Ana Maria Rosalita was is locked up in a room and denied food by her half brother and his aunt so she couldn't can't use her magical abilities to free herself or cause other problems.
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** The Senora Breton was this her nephew and Ana Maria Rosalita's half brother, Bernardo.
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** The Senora Breton was this to her nephew and Ana Maria Rosalita's half brother, half-brother, Bernardo.
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** Both Luis Black and Ana Maria Rosalita had mothers who died much earlier and fathers who died only about a year earlier or less.
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** Both Luis Black and Ana Maria Rosalita had mothers who died much earlier and fathers who died only about a year earlier or less.
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* ThereAreNoCoincidences: Ana Maria Rosalita believed this, especially with Ronnie making his way to the ship which she was on.
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* ThereAreNoCoincidences: Ana Maria Rosalita believed this, especially with Ronnie making his way to the ship which that she was on.
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* TwoGuysAndAGirl: Ronnie Cleveland, Luis Black, and Ana Maria Rosalita. They qualify as a TokenTrio with Ronnie as white while Ana Maria Rosalita is Puerto Rican/Irish and Luis a very dark skinned Puerto Rican. It was a platonic group as well as they felt more like a family.
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* TwoGuysAndAGirl: Ronnie Cleveland, Luis Black, and Ana Maria Rosalita. They qualify as a TokenTrio with Ronnie as white while Ana Maria Rosalita is Puerto Rican/Irish and Luis a very dark skinned Puerto Rican. It was a platonic group as well well, as they felt more like a family.
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It follows Ronnie Cleveland, who is a famous twelve-year-old entertainer with a PhotographicMemory as he runs away from the people responsible for him after his guardian/manager warns him before being killed. He meets up with two others his age, Ana Maria Rosalita--a girl who knows about magic and is with an abusive aunt--and Luis Black, her best friend. Helping them all is the enigmatic Marlowe.
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It follows Ronnie Cleveland, who is a famous twelve-year-old entertainer with a PhotographicMemory PhotographicMemory, as he runs away from the people responsible for him after his guardian/manager warns him before being killed. He meets up with two others his age, Ana Maria Rosalita--a girl who knows about magic and is with an abusive aunt--and Luis Black, her best friend. Helping them all is the enigmatic Marlowe.
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* DamselInDistress/BadassInDistress: Ana Maria Rosalita was locked up in a room and denied food by half brother and his aunt so she couldn't use her magical abilities to free herself or cause other problems.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: As seen above, Ana Maria Rosalita was denied food so she was too weak to use her magical abilities, but also because her half brother and his aunt simply didn't like her.
* DeniedFoodAsPunishment: As seen above, Ana Maria Rosalita was denied food so she was too weak to use her magical abilities, but also because her half brother and his aunt simply didn't like her.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Captain Anders. He demands to know why Ronnie is traveling alone on his ship and then does everything in his power to help out. He also has been trying to figure out how to deal with Ana Maria Rosalita for a while, but is too busy and too removed from the situation to be of much help.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The Senora Breton smacked Ana Maria Rosalita in the face so hard, she could barely walk for a few hours after. The bruise was still prominent about two days later.
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* WouldHurtAChild: WouldHurtAChild:
** The Senora Breton smacked Ana Maria Rosalita in the face so hard, she could barely walk for a few hours after. The bruise was still prominent about two days later.
** The Senora Breton smacked Ana Maria Rosalita in the face so hard, she could barely walk for a few hours after. The bruise was still prominent about two days later.
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Flight to the Lonesome Place is a children's novel by Creator/AlexanderKey published in 1971.
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''Flight to the Lonesome
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* While Ronnie is GenreSavvy regarding the law, he has serious GenreBlindness about magic despite having dreams that came true, a gunman who was unable to shoot him because of Ana Maria Rosalita, Marlowe, and the mangoes.
