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[[http://thegoldfishtechnique.home.blog: Fishbowl]] is a science fiction Web Serial Novel by Anna Boekelheide. The story follows four online friends, Chelsea, Naomi, Angelina, and Lachlan, all of whom are fans of a band called The Goldfish Technique.
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[[http://thegoldfishtechnique.home.blog: Fishbowl]] is a science fiction Web Serial Novel by Anna Boekelheide.B. The story follows four online friends, Chelsea, Naomi, Angelina, and Lachlan, all of whom are fans of a band called The Goldfish Technique.
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* DualWielding: Mona’s weapons of choice are two fire axes, one in each hand.
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Lily Clyde was responsible for her late husband's disappearance.
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* DualWielding: Mona’s weapons of choice are two fire axes, one in each hand.
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Lily Clyde was responsible for her late husband's disappearance.
* DualWielding: Mona’s weapons of choice are two fire axes, one in each hand.disappearance.
* DualWielding: Mona’s weapons of choice are two fire axes, one in each hand.
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* DualWielding: Mona’s weapons of choice are two fire axes, one in each hand.
* DualWielding: Mona’s weapons of choice are two fire axes, one in each hand.
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* AnotherDimension: Mostly subverted. When Lachlan suggests he and Sam have traveled to another dimension, Sam mocks him before giving a flawed but relatively accurate explanation of inter-dimensional travel.
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* Sarah subjects Chelsea to a PsychicStrangle while trying to capture her in Naomi's apartment.
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* Sarah subjects Chelsea to a PsychicStrangle while trying to capture her in Naomi's apartment. She does the same to Naomi after cornering her in an elevator.
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* TentacledTerror: 98 and the Sisters have many tendril-like limbs.
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* TentacledTerror: 98 and the Sisters have many tendril-like limbs.limbs, as does the monster that attacks Lachlan and Sam.
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* InstantSedation: Lachlan's kidnappers inject him with a substance that renders him unconscious within a few seconds.
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[[http://thegoldfishtechnique.home.blog: Fishbowl]] is a Web Serial Novel by Anna Boekelheide.
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[[http://thegoldfishtechnique.home.blog: Fishbowl]] is a science fiction Web Serial Novel by Anna Boekelheide.Boekelheide. The story follows four online friends, Chelsea, Naomi, Angelina, and Lachlan, all of whom are fans of a band called The Goldfish Technique.
A man named Falcon shows up at Naomi's apartment, claiming to have been sent there by The Goldfish Technique's bass player Dominic. The four friends find themselves pursued by a mysterious woman named Sarah, who works for the CEO of Clyde Packaging Solutions--the company where Chelsea is an intern.
A man named Falcon shows up at Naomi's apartment, claiming to have been sent there by The Goldfish Technique's bass player Dominic. The four friends find themselves pursued by a mysterious woman named Sarah, who works for the CEO of Clyde Packaging Solutions--the company where Chelsea is an intern.
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* PinnedToTheWall: Falcon pins Sarah to the wall with a metal table frame during their altercation in Naomi's apartment..
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* SouthernGentleman: Billy Clyde.
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* SouthernGentleman: Subverted with Billy Clyde.Clyde, who despite his wealth, white linen suit, and Georgia accent, is anything but a gentleman.
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* Sarah briefly considers using an ExtradimensionalShortcut as a way to travel to Australia to capture Lachlan, then dismisses it as too time-consuming, as she'd still end up almost a day's drive away from Lachlan's home in Brisbane.
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* In chapters 1.6 and 2.1, Sarah subjects Chelsea to a PsychicStrangle.
* RichBitch: Lily Clyde. She berates an air parkemployee employee, fires someone in chapter 1.4 front of their coworkers for getting her coffee order wrong, and is generally nasty to others.
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* DeafComposer: Jessica, The Goldfish Technique's drummer, is deaf.
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* MindOverMatter: Sarah and Falcon can both move objects with their minds.
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* PsychicPowers: 98 uses psychic powers to hunt for prey, and later to read Nancy's thoughts.
* In chapters 1.6 and 2.1, Sarah subjects Chelsea to a PsychicStrangle.
* In chapters 1.6 and 2.1, Sarah subjects Chelsea to a PsychicStrangle.
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* TilMurderDoUsPart: Lily Clyde was responsible for her late husband's disappearance.
* TilMurderDoUsPart: Lily Clyde was responsible for her late husband's disappearance.
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[[http://thegoldfishtechnique.home.blog: Fishbowl]] is a Web Serial Novel by Anna Boekelheide.
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!!This web serial novel provides examples of:
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Billy.
* RichBitch: Lily. She berates an air park employee in chapter 1.4 and is generally nasty to others.
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!!This web serial novel provides examples of:
* CorruptCorporateExecutive: Billy.
* RichBitch: Lily. She berates an air park employee in chapter 1.4 and is generally nasty to others.
