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* Qurac: Ryganaav: land of sand, camels, and religious fundamentalism.
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Not actual immortality, but Elcenian dragons' human forms age ten times slower than actual humans (with the equivalent age for other races), and stops at equivalent age 20. Barashin elves and Barashin halfbloods all stop aging at 25 and stay in that age for a few centuries, then start aging again.
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Not actual immortality, but Elcenian dragons' human forms age ten times slower than actual humans (with the equivalent age for other races), and stops at equivalent age 20. Barashin elves and Barashin halfbloods all stop aging at 25 and stay in that age for a few centuries, then start aging again. Vampires are a straight example of this trope.
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''Elcenia'' is a series written by Alicorn (author of ''{{Fanfic/Luminosity}})'', and is currently in-progress. ''Summons'' and the ongoing ''Blood'' can be found [[http://elcenia.com/index.shtml here]].
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''Elcenia'' is a series written by Alicorn (author of ''{{Fanfic/Luminosity}})'', and is currently in-progress. ''Summons'' and the ongoing ''Blood'' and ''Silver'' can be found [[http://elcenia.com/index.shtml here]].
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Elcenia's [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=13102307370A87120100&page=1 discussion thread]].
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Basically the premise of the story so far. An unusual example in that Rhysel is also from a a MagicalLand.
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* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Basically the The premise of the story so far.''Summons''. An unusual example in that Rhysel is also from a a MagicalLand.
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* AdultFear: in ''Silver'' [[spoiler: when the egg-parents of Ehail and Gyre's adoptive children start showing up to claim them.]]
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** As of Chapter 13 of ''Silver'' just one of the ten most prominent couples that appeared so far is the same species through and through, with three other couples involving a partial species match with a mixed species partner.
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** As of Chapter 13 of ''Silver'' just one only three of the ten twelve most prominent couples that appeared so far is are the same species through and through, with three other couples involving a partial species match with a mixed species partner.
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* InterspeciesAdoption: [[spoiler: Of shren babies, mostly by Barashin elves, during the events of ''Silver''.]]
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they notice just fine, and can tell how \"bad\" it is e. g. worse than 4 months esu or not, it just doesn\'t seem important
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** Shrens are dragons who can't fly with their natural wings and therefore suffer from esu. They eventually stop noticing most other pain; a shren who ''broke most of her bones'' wasn't particularly bothered by it.
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** Shrens are dragons who can't fly with their natural wings and therefore suffer from esu. They eventually stop noticing caring about most other pain; a shren who ''broke most of her bones'' wasn't particularly bothered by it.
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* InterspeciesRomance: There hardly seems to be any ''intra''-species romance. As of Chapter 12, all romantic involvement has been between people of at least partially different species.
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* InterspeciesRomance: There hardly seems to be any ''intra''-species romance. As of Chapter 12, 12 of ''Summons'', all romantic involvement has been between people of at least partially different species.species.
** As of Chapter 13 of ''Silver'' just one of the ten most prominent couples that appeared so far is the same species through and through, with three other couples involving a partial species match with a mixed species partner.
** As of Chapter 13 of ''Silver'' just one of the ten most prominent couples that appeared so far is the same species through and through, with three other couples involving a partial species match with a mixed species partner.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: One of the abilities of Elcenian dragons. Can also be done with kamai.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: One of the abilities of Elcenian dragons. Can also be done with kamai.kamai and, at least for cosmetic changes, wizardry. Vampires can shift between humanoid and bat form.
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Not actual immortality, but Dragon's human form ages ten times slower than actual humans (with the equivalent age for other races), and stops at equivalent age 20, Barashin Elves and Barashin Half-bloods all stop aging at 25 and stay in that age for a few centuries, all three species eventually start aging again.
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* ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Not actual immortality, but Dragon's Elcenian dragons' human form ages forms age ten times slower than actual humans (with the equivalent age for other races), and stops at equivalent age 20, 20. Barashin Elves elves and Barashin Half-bloods halfbloods all stop aging at 25 and stay in that age for a few centuries, all three species eventually then start aging again.
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* ImmortalityBeginsatTwenty: Not actual immortality, but Dragon's human form ages ten times slower than actual humans (with the equivalent age for other races), and stops at equivalent age 20, Barashin Elves and Barashin Half-bloods all stop aging at 25 and stay in that age for a few centuries, all three species eventually start aging again.
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* ImmortalityBeginsatTwenty: ImmortalityBeginsAtTwenty: Not actual immortality, but Dragon's human form ages ten times slower than actual humans (with the equivalent age for other races), and stops at equivalent age 20, Barashin Elves and Barashin Half-bloods all stop aging at 25 and stay in that age for a few centuries, all three species eventually start aging again.
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* ImHavingSoulPains: In Elcenian dragons not flying causes a longing called ''esu''. After a while esu will manifest as physical pain and steadily grow worse without upper limit. The only way to end esu is flying under their own power.
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* ImHavingSoulPains: In Elcenian dragons not flying causes a longing called ''esu''. After a while esu will manifest as physical pain and steadily grow worse without upper limit. The only way to end esu is flying under their own power.
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* BodySurf: Barashin [[DemonicPossession demons]].
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Rhysel is half human, half elf.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: Rhysel is and her siblings are half human, half elf.
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''[[http://elcenia.com/book/silver.shtml Silver]]'' is the story of Ehail, who was a tertiary character in ''Summons''. She is a silver shren and the wizard of her house. The story starts at the very end of ''Summons''. Ehail starts dating Gyre, Rhysel's brother.
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* RavenHairIvorySkin: Leekath, and vampires in general.
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* HomosexualReproduction: Directly stated to be possible via magic, though male couples require a surrogate.
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* HomosexualReproduction: Directly stated to be possible via magic, though male couples require a surrogate.surrogate, and female couples can only have daughters.
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* FlatWorld: Elcenia is one.
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* FlatWorld: Elcenia is one. one.
* FunctionalMagic: Several kinds. Barashi has kamai, which is ''Force Magic'' fueled by {{mana}}, and the gods will sometimes intervene if requested and paid. Elcenia has several, of which the most prominent in the story so far is wizardry, a form of ''Rule Magic'' or RitualMagic that mostly behaves like engineering, and witchcraft, which is [[AlchemyIsMagic alchemy]].
* GeometricMagic: Wizardry (see FunctionalMagic above) uses circle diagrams for some spells. The website uses summoning circles as a design motif.
* FunctionalMagic: Several kinds. Barashi has kamai, which is ''Force Magic'' fueled by {{mana}}, and the gods will sometimes intervene if requested and paid. Elcenia has several, of which the most prominent in the story so far is wizardry, a form of ''Rule Magic'' or RitualMagic that mostly behaves like engineering, and witchcraft, which is [[AlchemyIsMagic alchemy]].
* GeometricMagic: Wizardry (see FunctionalMagic above) uses circle diagrams for some spells. The website uses summoning circles as a design motif.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Hearers, vampires that can hear objects talking about themselves. Every single object. '''ALL. THE. TIME.''' Hearing is considering a mental illness because, it eventually does make the vampires crazy.
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* BlessedWithSuck: Hearers, [[HearingVoices Hearers]], vampires that can hear objects talking about themselves. Every single object. '''ALL. THE. TIME.''' Hearing object, all the time. And they can't turn it off. Vampiric Inanimate Audition is considering considered a mental illness because, because it eventually does [[DrivenToMadness make the vampires crazy.crazy]].
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** Hearers, who are considered insane, despite actually having the power to hear objects, see BlessedWithSuck.
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** Hearers, who are considered insane, despite actually having the power to hear objects, objects; see BlessedWithSuck.
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* AlternativeCalendar: One for each world. Neither particularly resembles ours.
* StandardTimeUnits: Played straight within each world, and averted between them. The day-night cycles of the two worlds have different lengths, among other things.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: In the form of a natural dragon ability and various wizard spells.
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* TranslatorMicrobes: In the form of a natural dragon ability and various wizard spells. spells.
* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The characters occasionally mention the need to convert between the two worlds' different timekeeping systems.
* TwoOfYourEarthMinutes: The characters occasionally mention the need to convert between the two worlds' different timekeeping systems.
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* CursedWithAwesome: Spontaneous Kyma, who have less control over their powers.
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** Hearers, who are considered insane, despite actually having the power to hear objects, see BlessedWithSuck.
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* HasTwoDaddies: Leekath and her siblings.
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''Summons'' opens when two school-age wizards summon half-elf kama Rhysel from her home world Barashi. This would normally be mostly harmless... except that no one can ''undo'' the spell, which means Rhysel is stuck on Elcenia until someone can. Rhysel adjusts to the new planet itself fairly well, but finds herself both experiencing and creating various upheavals, ranging from the personal to the romantic to the magical.
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''Blood'' is the story of Talyn, who was a secondary character in ''Summons''. He can read minds, and [[PowerIncontinence does]]. The story starts with him breaking his arm cliff-diving, chronologically a little after the beginning of ''Summons''. Talyn is very interested in how things work; for example, he chose to leave his arm broken longer so that he could see the healing done slowly and learn more about the process.
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''Blood'' is the story of Talyn, who was a secondary character in ''Summons''. He can read minds, and [[PowerIncontinence does]]. The story starts with him breaking his arm cliff-diving, chronologically a little after the beginning of ''Summons''. Talyn is very interested in how things work; for example, he chose to leave his arm broken longer so that he could see it done and learn more about healing bones.
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''Blood'' is the story of Talyn, who was a secondary character in ''Summons''. He can read minds, and [[PowerIncontinence does]]. The story starts with him breaking his arm cliff-diving, chronologically a little after the beginning of ''Summons''. Talyn is very interested in how things work; for example, he chose to leave his arm broken longer so that he could see it the healing done slowly and learn more about healing bones.the process.
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* [[TheyCallMeMisterTibbs They Call Me Aar Kithen]]: Aar Kithen repeatedly declines Rhysel offer of changing to FirstNameBasis and keeps calling her Aaral Camlenn. [[spoiler: Once they start dating he agrees to call her Rhysel and be called Tekaal in private.]]
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* [[TheyCallMeMisterTibbs They Call Me Aar Kithen]]: TheyCallMeMisterTibbs: Aar Kithen repeatedly declines Rhysel Rhysel's offer of changing to FirstNameBasis and keeps calling her Aaral Camlenn. [[spoiler: Once they start dating he agrees to call her Rhysel and be called Tekaal in private.]]
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''Blood'' is the story of Talyn, who was a main-ish character in ''Summons''. He can read minds, and [[PowerIncontinence does]]. The story starts with him breaking his arm cliff-diving, chronologically a little after the beginning of ''Summons''. Talyn is very interested in how things work; for example, he chose to leave his arm broken longer so that he could see it done and learn more about healing bones.
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''Blood'' is the story of Talyn, who was a main-ish secondary character in ''Summons''. He can read minds, and [[PowerIncontinence does]]. The story starts with him breaking his arm cliff-diving, chronologically a little after the beginning of ''Summons''. Talyn is very interested in how things work; for example, he chose to leave his arm broken longer so that he could see it done and learn more about healing bones.
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''Blood'' is the story of Talyn, who was a main-ish character in ''Summons''. He can read minds, and [[PowerIncontinence does]]. The story starts with him breaking his arm cliff-diving, chronologically a little after the beginning of ''Summons''. Talyn is very interested in how things work, work; for example, he chose to leave his arm broken longer so that he could see it done and learn more about healing bones.
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* InconvenientSummons: Rhysel getting teleported while asleep kicks off the whole plot.
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* InconvenientSummons: Rhysel getting teleported while asleep kicks off the whole plot.plot of ''Summons''.
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''Elcenia'' is a series written by Alicorn (author of ''{{Fanfic/Luminosity}})'', and is currently in-progress. What is posted of the first book, ''Summons'', can be found [[http://elcenia.com/index.shtml here]].
Summons opens when two school-age wizards summon half-elf kama Rhysel from her home world Barashi. This would normally be mostly harmless... except that no one can ''undo'' the spell, which means Rhysel is stuck on Elcenia until someone can. Rhysel adjusts to the new planet itself fairly well, but finds herself both experiencing and creating various upheavals, ranging from the personal to the romantic to the magical.
Summons opens when two school-age wizards summon half-elf kama Rhysel from her home world Barashi. This would normally be mostly harmless... except that no one can ''undo'' the spell, which means Rhysel is stuck on Elcenia until someone can. Rhysel adjusts to the new planet itself fairly well, but finds herself both experiencing and creating various upheavals, ranging from the personal to the romantic to the magical.
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''Elcenia'' is a series written by Alicorn (author of ''{{Fanfic/Luminosity}})'', and is currently in-progress. What is posted of ''Summons'' and the first book, ''Summons'', ongoing ''Blood'' can be found [[http://elcenia.com/index.shtml here]].
Summons ''Summons'' opens when two school-age wizards summon half-elf kama Rhysel from her home world Barashi. This would normally be mostly harmless... except that no one can ''undo'' the spell, which means Rhysel is stuck on Elcenia until someone can. Rhysel adjusts to the new planet itself fairly well, but finds herself both experiencing and creating various upheavals, ranging from the personal to the romantic to the magical.
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''Blood'' is the story of Talyn, who was a main-ish character in ''Summons''. He can read minds, and [[PowerIncontinence does]]. The story starts with him breaking his arm cliff-diving, chronologically a little after the beginning of ''Summons''. Talyn is very interested in how things work, for example, he chose to leave his arm broken longer so that he could see it done and learn more about healing bones.