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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Concocted by Garse in order to give Dirk a chance to escape the Braiths, and allow Garse to join with them to hunt down Jaan and then turn on them when they find Jaan. Garse brings Dirk to the Braiths as a "blood gift" and as expected they strip him naked and send him running through the woods before giving chase with their hounds. Unbeknownst to them, Garse and Dirk hid a laser rifle and a coat near a wrecked aircar, which Dirk heads straight for once he's set loose.]]
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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark, who sought to ultimately get into a romantic relationship with Gwen by playing Jaan and Dirk against each other. According to Garse, this is the [[PlanetOfHats hat]] of the planet Kimdiss, Arkin's homeworld, as they profess to be non-violent but will happily sell weapons to both sides in a conflict or instigate a war between two other worlds if it will benefit Kimdiss.]]

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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark, who sought to ultimately get into a romantic relationship with Gwen by playing Jaan and Dirk against each other.other; this indirectly leads to a number of people ending up dead. According to Garse, this is the [[PlanetOfHats hat]] of the planet Kimdiss, Arkin's homeworld, as they profess to be non-violent but will happily sell weapons to both sides in a conflict or instigate a war between two other worlds if it will benefit Kimdiss.]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark]]

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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark.]]

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* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark.Ruark, who sought to ultimately get into a romantic relationship with Gwen by playing Jaan and Dirk against each other. According to Garse, this is the [[PlanetOfHats hat]] of the planet Kimdiss, Arkin's homeworld, as they profess to be non-violent but will happily sell weapons to both sides in a conflict or instigate a war between two other worlds if it will benefit Kimdiss.]]
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: [[spoiler: A High Kavalaan banshee, a creature like a flying manta ray with its underside covered with tiny mouths, imported to Worlorn by the Kavalars, saves Dirk from a Braith hound when he's being hunted.]]
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* BlastingItOutOfTheirHands: [[ConversedTrope Conversed]] and ruled to be a bad idea in Kavalar laser duels. In the mode of dueling being discussed, the two ''teyn'' pairs participating take positions at the four corners of a square chalked on the ground. Because they are using dueling lasers which can only fire one burst every fifteen seconds, a miss can mean death if the opponent is of a mind to kill you (and Garse is quite sure that Chell and Bretan intend to kill him and Jaan in the duel challenge they have issued), so trying to shoot to wound or disarm lowers your chances of scoring a hit and increases the chances of being killed.
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* {{Gendercide}}: OnlyFatalToAdultsOnlyFatalToAdults. In his history thesis Jaan theorizes that the "Sorrowing Plague" was a genetically engineered bio-weapon strike by the Hrangans, when they returned to find that the human cities on the surface of High Kavalaan were still in ruins from their initial invasion, but the slave races they left to police the planet were all gone. The disease killed 99% of adult women, but left female children untouched.
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* SnarkToSnarkCombat: Gwen explains to Dirk that this is how she learned to deal with Garse's verbal abuse, by learning to give as good as she got.
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* UngovernableGalaxy: As with Rome, size is where the Empire ran into trouble. The Double War, in which the Empire battle both the Fyndii and the Hrangans on separate fronts, did much to hasten its breakup.

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* UngovernableGalaxy: As with Rome, size is where the Empire ran into trouble. The Double War, in which the Empire battle battled both the Fyndii and the Hrangans on separate fronts, did much to hasten its breakup.
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* UngovernableGalaxy: As with Rome, size is where the Empire ran into trouble.

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* UngovernableGalaxy: As with Rome, size is where the Empire ran into trouble. The Double War, in which the Empire battle both the Fyndii and the Hrangans on separate fronts, did much to hasten its breakup.
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* MeaningfulName: Worlorn is derived from 'Forlorn', meaning ''pitifully sad and abandoned or lonely'.
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* {{Troll}}: In contrast to the other Fringe worlds who wanted to celebrate all their achievements and show the Coreward worlds that they were just as advanced and artistic, Darkdawn deliberately built their city of Kryne Lamiya, with its song of constant sadness from the wind flowing through its spires, to mock the Festival.

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** A ''building'' is doing this on Worlorn: ai-Emerel's city created for the Festival is one massive skyscraper, dubbed Challenge. It is fully automated and the Emereli claimed it would remain functional and active forever, even as Worlorn drifts back into the cold of deep space.



* TheGhost: Kirak Redsteel.

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* TheGhost: Kirak Redsteel. The others know he's around Larteyn somewhere, but he's never actually on page [[spoiler: until he shows up at the very end of the story; he's the one who draws the death square on the ground in preparation for Dirk and Bretan's duel.]]

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* TheFundamentalist: Braith is a rather conservative holdfast, and ones that travelled to Worlorn are Fundiest Of All.

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* TheFundamentalist: Braith is a rather conservative holdfast, and ones that travelled traveled to Worlorn are the Fundiest Of All.



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* LovingAShadow: [[spoiler: It turns out that Gwen is no longer the "Jenny" that Dirk has carried a torch for over the years, and in the end she stays with Jaan.]]
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* DuelToTheDeath: High Kavalaan has a rather elaborate system for dueling. The duelists must decide on the weapons used, the location, the mode, and whether or not they fight with a teyn. The challenged gets the first choice, any of the four, followed by the challenger, the challenged again, and finally the challenger. The dueling code also covers special circumstances, such as if one party is young, sick, or without teyn.

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* DuelToTheDeath: High Kavalaan has a rather elaborate system for dueling. The duelists must decide on the weapons used, the location, the mode, and whether or not they fight with a teyn. The challenged gets the first choice, any of the four, followed by the challenger, the challenged again, and finally the challenger. The dueling code also covers special circumstances, such as if one party is young, sick, or without teyn. [[spoiler: The trope is actually subverted as the duel does not have to end in death. In the most cases, each participant will deal one hit and receive one hit, and honor will be satisfied.]]



* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early on, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address for him is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is being generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''."]]

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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being.being; he didn't even really believe in mockmen, though he would use the term as an insult. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early on, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address for him is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is being generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan slaps Dirk and sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''.him, "I am not 'Bretan' to you. Call me Bretan Braith if you must address me, mockman."]]
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* OfThePeople: The more conservative factions of Kavalars refer to non-Kavalar humans as "mockmen".
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* GlassEye: Bretan Braith's glowstone eye. It actually makes Dirk ''less'' scared of him, as he had to have specifically chosen it for that effect.
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* FreakingLaserBeams: Ubiquitous among the Kavalar. It adds to the seventies feel of the novel.

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* FrickenLaserBeams: Ubiquitous among the Kavalar. It adds to the seventies feel of the novel.

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* DuelToTheDeath: An acceptable way of solving disputes, although how deadly the duel is depends on the participants.

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* DuelToTheDeath: An acceptable way of solving disputes, although how deadly the duel is depends High Kavalaan has a rather elaborate system for dueling. The duelists must decide on the participants.weapons used, the location, the mode, and whether or not they fight with a teyn. The challenged gets the first choice, any of the four, followed by the challenger, the challenged again, and finally the challenger. The dueling code also covers special circumstances, such as if one party is young, sick, or without teyn.
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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early on, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is being generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''."]]

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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early on, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address for him is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is being generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''."]]
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--> "He has a violent way of mourning," Dirk, on Bretan [[spoiler: who just burned down an entire city.]]

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--> "He has a violent way of mourning," Dirk, on Bretan [[spoiler: who just burned down an entire (empty) city.]]



* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early on, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address is "Garse Ironjade", and that is being generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''."]]

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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early on, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is being generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''."]]
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* AndYoureLittleDogToo: When Jaan's less-than-wise attempt to [[spoiler: help Dirk]] leads to Chell fre-Braith challenging him, Bretan starts raving that now they're going kill Jaan and Garse and Dirk and then they'll wake the hounds and hunt Gwen and Arkin through the forest. Jaan ignores him.

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* AndYoureLittleDogToo: AndYourLittleDogToo: When Jaan's less-than-wise attempt to [[spoiler: help Dirk]] leads to Chell fre-Braith challenging him, Bretan starts raving that now they're going kill Jaan and Garse and Dirk and then they'll wake the hounds and hunt Gwen his "betheyn bitch" and Arkin the "fat Kimdissi" through the forest. Jaan ignores him.



* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early in the novel, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''."

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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early in the novel, on, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is being generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''.""]]
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* AndYoureLittleDogToo: When Jaan's less-than-wise attempt to [[spoiler: help Dirk]] leads to Chell fre-Braith challenging him, Bretan starts raving that now they're going kill Jaan and Garse and Dirk and then they'll wake the hounds and hunt Gwen and Arkin through the forest. Jaan ignores him.


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* HiddenDepths: [[spoiler: Bretan Braith, despite the fact that the other entries on this page make him out to be a frothing lunatic. He was a true teyn to Chell, and, unlike every other Braith in the novel, recognized that Dirk was a human being. By his culture he had perfect right to kill him on sight after he ran the first time, but was still willing to duel him in Challenge, and then outside the spaceport. This is foreshadowed early in the novel, after Garse points out to Dirk that the proper address is "Garse Ironjade", and even that is generous. When Dirk nervously calls Bretan by just his first name, Bretan sharply tells him that it's "Bretan ''Braith''."
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--> "He has a violent way of mourning," Dirk, on Bretan [[spoiler: who just burned down an entire city.]]
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* HeManWomanHater: The Kavalaan, except Jaan Vikary.

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* HeManWomanHater: The Kavalaan, Kavalars, except Jaan Vikary.


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* StayInTheKitchen: Or, "Stay In The Rape Closet", for the less charitable.
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* ProudWarriorRace: The Kavalaan.

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* ProudWarriorRace: The Kavalaan.Kavalar.
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Her marriage is the type to raise eyebrows. She is a ''betheyn'' in the custom of High Kavalaan. A warlike culture high on dueling and honor, the men are in the habit of pairing off into ''[[HeterosexualLifePartners teyns]]'', while the native-born women (''eyn-kethi'') are essentially community breeders with the occasional betheyn belonging to a teyn-pair. Gwen had agreed to this arrangement out of love for [[AGentlemanAndAScholar Jaan Vikary]], but year after year of dealing with [[StayInTheKitchen his society]], as well as his teyn {{Jerkass Garse}} [[TheGadfly Janacek]], has worn her down. Yet, she doesn't ask for help, nor bring up the summons, but Dirk understands. He's ready to do anything to help her escape the situation she's found herself in. But other things are happening on Worlorn.

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Her marriage is the type to raise eyebrows. She is a ''betheyn'' in the custom of High Kavalaan. A warlike culture high on dueling and honor, the men are in the habit of pairing off into ''[[HeterosexualLifePartners teyns]]'', while the native-born women (''eyn-kethi'') are essentially community breeders with the occasional betheyn belonging to a teyn-pair. Gwen had agreed to this arrangement out of love for [[AGentlemanAndAScholar [[GentlemanAndAScholar Jaan Vikary]], but year after year of dealing with [[StayInTheKitchen his society]], as well as his teyn {{Jerkass Garse}} [[JerkAss Garse]] [[TheGadfly Janacek]], has worn her down. Yet, she doesn't ask for help, nor bring up the summons, but Dirk understands. He's ready to do anything to help her escape the situation she's found herself in. But other things are happening on Worlorn.
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The planet Worlorn is dying. Indeed, it had been dead for most of recorded history.

Worlorn was a rogue planet, a dead rock floating through space, and of no particular interest to anyone until it was realized that it would pass a star system as it left the galaxy. The outer worlds, joining together, terraformed Worlorn into a festival planet, each of the fourteen worlds building a city to showcase it's culture. For a good ten years it was the pride of the out-worlds. But now the window of habitability is closing, and the businesses have left. Shrouded in twilight, the vast cities are now inhabited only by stragglers, the computers dutifully keeping it all maintained as Worlorn awaits the final dying of the light.

Dirk t'Larien travels to Worlorn, and to his old flame Gwen Delvano. Seven years ago, they had made each other a promise: no matter what passed between them, no matter how much they changed, no matter what happened, if one of them called the other would answer. Soon after, Gwen dumped him, and didn't answer when he called. Now she's sent for him. A world-weary Dirk t'Larien, with nothing else going on in his life, decides to make the trip. To his surprise, the Gwen he meets is polite, but distant and less than enthused by his arrival. She's also married.

Her marriage is the type to raise eyebrows. She is a ''betheyn'' in the custom of High Kavalaan. A warlike culture high on dueling and honor, the men are in the habit of pairing off into ''[[HeterosexualLifePartners teyns]]'', while the native-born women (''eyn-kethi'') are essentially community breeders with the occasional betheyn belonging to a teyn-pair. Gwen had agreed to this arrangement out of love for [[AGentlemanAndAScholar Jaan Vikary]], but year after year of dealing with [[StayInTheKitchen his society]], as well as his teyn {{Jerkass Garse}} [[TheGadfly Janacek]], has worn her down. Yet, she doesn't ask for help, nor bring up the summons, but Dirk understands. He's ready to do anything to help her escape the situation she's found herself in. But other things are happening on Worlorn.

Jaan Vikary is a very controversial man on his planet. An historian and reformer, he put forth a theory that High Kavalaan had suffered a near-{{Gendercide}} during an extermination war in the ancient past. Teynship was a predictable result of grieving widowers, and the communities that ''didn't'' lock up their women simply died off. This has made him rather despised among TheFundamentalist set. After being challenged to one duel too many, he arranged to have himself, his teyn, and his betheyn sent to document Worlorn. They arrived to discover that several members of the conservative Braith Gathering were also on Worlorn, with beliefs that even others Braiths would find shocking. They believe in ''mockman'', essentially the disfigured radiation victims of the old war, hunted as demons in the past but protected now. These holdouts, born very much too late on a world that passed them by, now intend to revive to old ways on a planet with no law, with stragglers as prey. They have been stymied in part by Jaan and Garse's maneuvering, but the tensions between them are coming to a head, and Dirk's [[LockedOutOfTheLoop ignorance of the situation]] may be the spark that lights the powder-keg.

''Literature/DyingOfTheLight'' is the debut novel of famed ''Literature/ASongOfIceAndFire'' author GeorgeRRMartin. It was first published in 1977 as "After The Festival", serialized in Analog Science Fiction And Fact.

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* [[spoiler: AntiClimax]]: After a frantic chase through Challenge and the forests and [[spoiler: the destruction of Kryne Lamiya, the antagonists all die while the main characters hide out in Larteyn. Dirk realizes that a person needs to have a code, and honors his duel with Bretan.]]
* AxCrazy: Bretan Braith gives off this vibe.
* AwesomeMcCoolname: Jaantony Riv Wolf high-Ironjade Vikary. Kavalars partially name themselves.
* BerserkButton: For Jaan, [[spoiler: hurting Gwen]], as [[spoiler: Myrik]] finds out.
* BitchInSheepsClothing: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark]]
* [[spoiler: BolivianArmyEnding]]: [[spoiler: The story ends before we see the duel's outcome.]]
* BrownNote: The constant depressing music of Kryne Lamiya. There was a high incidence of suicide there during the festival, and the music seems to particularly hit Dirk.
* CarFu: Dirk and Gwen are stumped by Jaan's comment that they have a weapon, until they remember their aircar.
* ChekovsGun: The story about the Banshee.
* DoNotGoGentleIntoThatGoodNight: A theme of the book. Also, the title comes from the poem.
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark. Might fit under RedemptionEqualsDeath.]]
* DuelToTheDeath: An acceptable way of solving disputes, although how deadly the duel is depends on the participants.
* EnemyCivilWar: [[spoiler: Bretan goes berserk after Chell dies, killing every high-Larteyn he can find.]]
* EvenEvilHasStandards: Chell, Garse, Lorimar, Bretan... everyone present disapproves in some way when [[spoiler: Jaan murders Myrik.]]
* FamousFamousFictional: Arkin Ruark, mocking Dirk's idea of going to the duel and announcing that he won't fight:
--> ''Jesus Christ and Socrates and Erika Stormjones and now Dirk t'Larien, great martyrs of history, yes. Maybe the Redsteel poet will write something on you.''
* TheFundamentalist: Braith is a rather conservative holdfast, and ones that travelled to Worlorn are Fundiest Of All.
* {{Gendercide}}: OnlyFatalToAdults
* TheGhost: Kirak Redsteel.
* HeManWomanHater: The Kavalaan, except Jaan Vikary.
* HuntingTheMostDangerousGame: The killing of mockmen in general. The most notable instance is when Pyr and his teyn hunt [[spoiler: Dirk. It's not so much fun when the prey gets to a rifle.]]
* IKnowYourTrueName: The effects of names on things is a recurring theme.
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* IntergenerationalFriendship: Bretan and Chell. {{Subverted}} in that Jaan and Garse speculate that [[GoldDigger Bretan's only in it for Chell's money.]] [[spoiler: They are wrong.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Several. Even if he's a JerkWithAHeartOfGold [[BlueAndOrangeMorality raised on a different world]], Garse still verbally abuses Gwen every chance he gets. And that's not even getting started on the Braiths. [[spoiler: Or Ruark]].
* LastEpisodeNewCharacter: [[spoiler: The oft-discussed Kirak Redsteel shows up to chat with Dirk, and to arrange a duel with Bretan.]]
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Dirk. And, amusingly, [[spoiler: ManipulativeBastard Arkin Ruark. His plans, (see NearVillainVictory) didn't take into account the fact that there were a renegade group of fanatics hunting people on Worlorn.]]
* ManipulativeBastard: [[spoiler: Arkin Ruark.]]
* MohsScaleOfScienceFictionHardness: Pretty soft.
* NearVillainVictory: Of a sort, Gwen suspects that [[spoiler: Arkin's plan was for Dirk to help Gwen escape, then catch her on the rebound when they break up. He did succeed in getting Dirk to Worlorn, and in convincing Gwen to leave Jaan, when Bretan Braith and Dirk collided.]]
* PerfectPacifistPeople: Subverted with [[spoiler: Kimdiss. Despite how they present themselves, they're far more [[ManipulativeBastard fox]] than [[ActualPacifist dove.]]]]
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* ProudWarriorRace: The Kavalaan.
* [[PunctuatedPounding Punctuated Blasting]]: "And ''you'' do not duel. ''You''... ''do''... ''not''... ''duel!''"
* RightForTheWrongReasons: The decision to hide in Challenge. Jaan calls the choice unintentionally subtle in that there were better places to hide, and thus no one would have looked for them there. Also, [[spoiler: Garse's distrust for Ruark was right on the money, but based on racism.]]
* SerialKiller: Obviously, the hunters, but especially Pyr. As opposed to the fanatical Lorimar, Garse comments that Pyr only cared about taking mockman heads.
* SillyRabbitCynicismIsForLosers: Dirk learned this the hard way in the seven years before arriving on Worlorn. It's also one of the major themes. The importance of having ideals is touched on near the end of the story, when a Kavalar recalls the first time he heard of mockmen as a boy. The eyn-kethi telling the story claimed that mockmen weren't supernatural at all. Rather, they are all just men, but men who forgot their codes and bonds and thus ''are'' shapechangers of a sort: Illusion of humanity, with no substance within.
* StartMyOwn: A couple holdfasts got their start by splitting off from old ones. [[spoiler: Lorimar leads his handful in starting one on Worlorn. It's clear to the reader, and to Garse, that Lorimar is out of his mind.]]
* StrawNihilist: When [[PlanetOfHats your race]] decides to fly a black flag, and build a city designed to constantly play depressing music, there may be a problem.
* TookALevelInBadass: Dirk and Gwen.
* [[spoiler: TrackingDevice:]] This is how Chell and Bretan [[spoiler: trace Dirk to Challenge. Arkin planted a wildlife tracer on Dirk in exchange for Bretan protecting Gwen.]]
* TwoFaced: Watching Bretan Braith pace about, Dirk is struck by how different he looks from different angles.
* UnfriendlyFire: [[spoiler: Jaan shoots Garse down, not knowing about his HeelFaceTurn.]]
* UngovernableGalaxy: As with Rome, size is where the Empire ran into trouble.
* VerbalTic: Ruark's "eh?" He says it all the time, utter truth.
* WeaponOfChoice: When people start to turn up dead by firearm, [[spoiler: Jaan]] realizes that [[spoiler: Bretan]] is about.
* WouldHitAGirl: Myrik.

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