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* NoFocusOnHumans: To the extreme. The world to which Thedeim was sent has elves, dwarves, ratkin, and the like, but no humans at all. Even the word "human" has no meaning. Furthermore, [[spoiler:visions of Thedeim's old world have humans completely blanked out]].
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* NoFocusOnHumans: To the extreme. The world to which Thedeim was sent has [[StandardFantasyRaces elves, dwarves, ratkin, dwarves]], [[BeastMan beastkin]], and the like, but no humans at all. Even the word "human" has no meaning. Furthermore, [[spoiler:visions of Thedeim's old world have humans completely blanked out]].
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* NonIndicativeName: [[InvokedTrope Deliberately invoked]] by Thedeim in the case of Tiny, who eventually grows big enough that a party of adventurers once rode him into battle. ...The ''whole'' party, not just one of them.
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* NonIndicativeName: [[InvokedTrope Deliberately invoked]] by Thedeim in the case of Tiny, who eventually grows big enough that a party of adventurers once rode ride him into battle. ...The ''whole'' party, not just one of them.
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* NonIndicativeName: [[InvokedTrope Deliberately invoked]] by Thedeim in the case of Tiny, who is big enough that a party of adventurers once rode him into battle. ...The ''whole'' party, not just one of them.
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* NonIndicativeName: [[InvokedTrope Deliberately invoked]] by Thedeim in the case of Tiny, who is eventually grows big enough that a party of adventurers once rode him into battle. ...The ''whole'' party, not just one of them.
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* ADungeonIsYou The whole basis of the story, using the dungeon core variant for where the Genius Loci is housed.
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* ADungeonIsYou ADungeonIsYou: The whole basis of the story, using the dungeon core variant for where the Genius Loci GeniusLoci is housed.housed.
* MeaningfulName: Thedeim is the story's main character. As in, The DM, or The Dungeon Master.
* NoFocusOnHumans: To the extreme. The world to which Thedeim was sent has elves, dwarves, ratkin, and the like, but no humans at all. Even the word "human" has no meaning. Furthermore, [[spoiler:visions of Thedeim's old world have humans completely blanked out]].
* NonIndicativeName: [[InvokedTrope Deliberately invoked]] by Thedeim in the case of Tiny, who is big enough that a party of adventurers once rode him into battle. ...The ''whole'' party, not just one of them.
* MeaningfulName: Thedeim is the story's main character. As in, The DM, or The Dungeon Master.
* NoFocusOnHumans: To the extreme. The world to which Thedeim was sent has elves, dwarves, ratkin, and the like, but no humans at all. Even the word "human" has no meaning. Furthermore, [[spoiler:visions of Thedeim's old world have humans completely blanked out]].
* NonIndicativeName: [[InvokedTrope Deliberately invoked]] by Thedeim in the case of Tiny, who is big enough that a party of adventurers once rode him into battle. ...The ''whole'' party, not just one of them.
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The execution is considerably more complex.
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The execution is considerably more complex.complex.
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* ADungeonIsYou The whole basis of the story, using the dungeon core variant for where the Genius Loci is housed.
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* ADungeonIsYou The whole basis of the story, using the dungeon core variant for where the Genius Loci is housed.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54476/dungeon-life/Dungeon Life]]'' is a [[ADungeonIsYou Dungeon Core]] story published on Website/RoyalRoad.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54476/dungeon-life/Dungeon com/fiction/54476/dungeon-life/ Dungeon Life]]'' is a [[ADungeonIsYou Dungeon Core]] story published on Website/RoyalRoad.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54476/dungeon-life]]'' is a [[ADungeonIsYou Dungeon Core]] story published on Website/RoyalRoad.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54476/dungeon-life]]'' com/fiction/54476/dungeon-life/Dungeon Life]]'' is a [[ADungeonIsYou Dungeon Core]] story published on Website/RoyalRoad.
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''[[https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/54476/dungeon-life]]'' is a [[ADungeonIsYou Dungeon Core]] story published on Website/RoyalRoad.
The premise is simple:
"A normal guy gets hit by a truck and isekai'd. Why? Because trucks are apparently some cosmic loophole. He decides to be a dungeon, because it sounds weird and interesting to be one. Is it? Let's find out."
The execution is considerably more complex.
The premise is simple:
"A normal guy gets hit by a truck and isekai'd. Why? Because trucks are apparently some cosmic loophole. He decides to be a dungeon, because it sounds weird and interesting to be one. Is it? Let's find out."
The execution is considerably more complex.
