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* TheHero: Trava.
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* TheHero: Trava
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Both Trava and Sajag are outsiders from the rest of the village, Trava for her MismatchedEyes and being the daughter of a blind man, Sajag for being a dwarf and not from the village.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Both Trava and Sajag are outsiders from the rest of the village, Trava for her MismatchedEyes heterochromia and being the daughter of a blind man, Sajag for being a dwarf and not from the village.
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* LastRequest: Trava's father has two for her: to take care of the tavern, and to find her mother and tell her that he still loves her. After the old man burns the tavern down, Trava decides to try to at least fulfil the second one.
* MismatchedEyes: Trava has one brown and one gold eye, which marks her out as unusual in her village.
* MismatchedEyes: Trava has one brown and one gold eye, which marks her out as unusual in her village.
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* LastRequest: Trava's father has two for her: to take care of the tavern, and to find her mother and tell her that he still loves her. After the old man burns the tavern down, Trava decides to try to at least fulfil fulfill the second one.
* MismatchedEyes: Trava has one brown and one gold eye, which marks her out as unusual in her village.one.
* MismatchedEyes: Trava has one brown and one gold eye, which marks her out as unusual in her village.
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''[[http://starterserials.com/dragon-queen/chapter-1-4/ Dragon Queen]]'' is a WebSerialNovel about Trava, a girl who runs her family's tavern now that her father has fallen ill. ''Dragon Queen'' takes place in a StandardFantasySetting where dragons are feared above near all, but while many fantasy protagonists have a long-lost father, Trava has a long-lost ''mother''.
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''[[http://starterserials.com/dragon-queen/chapter-1-4/ Dragon Queen]]'' is a WebSerialNovel about Trava, a girl who doesn't know who her mother is. Dragon Queen takes place in a StandardFantasySetting, but while many fantasy protagonists have a long-lost father, Trava has a long-lost mother. And when she sets out to find her, things get a little messy...
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''[[http://starterserials.com/dragon-queen/chapter-1-4/ Dragon Queen]]'' is a WebSerialNovel about Trava, a girl who doesn't know who runs her mother is. Dragon Queen family's tavern now that her father has fallen ill. ''Dragon Queen'' takes place in a StandardFantasySetting, StandardFantasySetting where dragons are feared above near all, but while many fantasy protagonists have a long-lost father, Trava has a long-lost mother. ''mother''.
And when she sets out to the strange land of Arden to findher, her on her father's request and on the advice of a strange old man, things get a little messy...
And when she sets out to the strange land of Arden to find
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* OrphanedSeries: The serial only has eight chapters, and stopped updating in March of 2015.
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* AllOfTheOtherReindeer: Both Trava and Sajag are outsiders from the rest of the village, Trava for her MismatchedEyes and being the daughter of a blind man, Sajag for being a dwarf and not from the village.
* {{Animorphism}}: The old man can willingly transform himself into a black bird and back again; as a bird, he can still talk.
* AttackItsWeakPoint: The only way to kill a dragon is to shoot out its eyes.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Sajag doesn't like to talk about why he left Arden or why he can't go back. It turns out to be because he'd killed a man there and had almost been executed for it, with his family probably to be killed if he ever returned.
* {{Animorphism}}: The old man can willingly transform himself into a black bird and back again; as a bird, he can still talk.
* AttackItsWeakPoint: The only way to kill a dragon is to shoot out its eyes.
* DarkAndTroubledPast: Sajag doesn't like to talk about why he left Arden or why he can't go back. It turns out to be because he'd killed a man there and had almost been executed for it, with his family probably to be killed if he ever returned.
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* FamilyBusiness: The tavern, for Trava and her father.
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* TheDreaded: Just mentioning dragons is enough to frighten the entire bar, and Trava estimates that if the old man keeps talking about them people would up and leave.
* FamilyBusiness:The tavern, Running the tavern is the family business for Trava and her father.father, with Trava having taken over most of the work now that her father is ill.
* FantasticRacism: Dwarfs aren't treated well by humans in Arden, which is why Sajag doesn't want to see the old man who had been there.
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* FantasticRacism: Dwarfs aren't treated well by humans in Arden, which is why Sajag doesn't want to see the old man who had been there.
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* InTheHood: The old man when he first enters the tavern.
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* InTheHood: The LastRequest: Trava's father has two for her: to take care of the tavern, and to find her mother and tell her that he still loves her. After the old man when he first enters burns the tavern.tavern down, Trava decides to try to at least fulfil the second one.
* MismatchedEyes: Trava has one brown and one gold eye, which marks her out as unusual in her village.
* MismatchedEyes: Trava has one brown and one gold eye, which marks her out as unusual in her village.
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* NoNameGiven: The old man never gets an opportunity to give a name.
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* NoNameGiven: The old man never gets an opportunity to give a name, as Trava interrupts him and tells him to get on with the story before he starts talking about his name.
* ProphetEyes: Trava's father has eyes with white pupils ever since he went blind as a child.
* TellMeAboutMyFather:Gender-flipped.Gender-flipped; Trava's father won't tell her about her mother, but the old man offers to.
* ProphetEyes: Trava's father has eyes with white pupils ever since he went blind as a child.
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* WideEyedIdealist: Trava's father thinks the best of everyone, which is why Trava takes what he says about how wonderful her mother was with a grain of salt.
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''[[http://starterserials.com/dragon-queen/chapter-1-4/ Dragon Queen]]'' is a WebSerialNovel about Trava, a girl who doesn't know who her mother is. Dragon Queen takes place in a StandardFantasySetting, but while many fantasy Protagonists protagonists have a Long-Lost Father, long-lost father, Trava has a Long-Lost Mother.long-lost mother. And when she sets out to find her, things get a little messy...
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* DragonHoard: the Dragon Queen has one, according to the old man.
* FamilyBusiness: the tavern, for Trava and her father.
* IHaveManyNames: the old man claims to have many names.
* InTheHood: the old man when he first enters the tavern.
* DragonHoard: the Dragon Queen has one, according to the old man.
* FamilyBusiness: the tavern, for Trava and her father.
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* YouAllMeetInAnInn: where the story starts.
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* TrueBeautyIsOnTheInside: according According to Trava's father, this is why he fell for Trava mother. She might have been attractive, but he couldn't tell, because he was blind.
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Dragon Queen takes place in a StandardFantasySetting, but while many fantasy Protagonists have a Long-Lost Father, Trava has a Long-Lost Mother. And when she sets out to find her, things get a little messy...
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''[[http://starterserials.com/dragon-queen/chapter-1-4/ Dragon Queen]]'' is a WebSerialNovel about Trava, a girl who doesn't know who her mother is.
is. Dragon Queen takes place in a StandardFantasySetting, but while many fantasy Protagonists have a Long-Lost Father, Trava has a Long-Lost Mother. And when she sets out to find her, things get a little messy...
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* AlcoholInducedStupidity: the old man acts even more ridiculous when he's drunk.
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Dragon Queen takes place in a StandardFantasySetting, but while many fantasy Protagonists have a Long-Lost Father, Trava has a Long-Lost Mother. And when she sets out to find her, things get a little messy...messy...
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Dragon Queen takes place in a StandardFantasySetting, but while many fantasy Protagonists have a Long-Lost Father, Trava has a Long-Lost Mother. And when she sets out to find her, things get a little messy...
