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You are an adventurer and a mercenary, on the way to Neuburg, a city in Khul, intending to pay a visit to your old friend, Baron Tholdur, the Margrave of Neuburg Keep. However, as you approach the town, a pack of southern swordsmen attacks you and takes you prisoner. After freeing yourself, you find out that something strange is going on in Neuburg: foreign warriors patrols the streets, the natives look scared and pale and shapeless horrors prowls the city by night. Something terrible happened to Neuburg Keep and Baron Tholdur, an eldritch threat from a half-forgotten past has returned. It's up to you to find a way into the infested keep, investigate the source of this corruption and eradicate it before it extends its tendrils beyond Neuburg, all without losing your life or your mind to the skulking horrors infesting the dungeons.

Much like ''Literature/HouseOfHell'', ''Beneath Nightmare Castle'' takes an approach closer to a horror story than a fantasy one; namely the grotesque alien madness of the [[Creator/HPLovecraft Lovecraftian Horror]] such found in horror classics like ''Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu'' and ''Literature/AtTheMountainsOfMadness''. Along with the usual scores of Skill, Stamina and Luck, you also start with a score of Willpower, which determines your sanity and will, which slowly decreases each time you have to roll a Willpower Test or you see something really disturbing or creepy. If your Willpower drops below 6 and you fail a test, you [[NonStandardGameOver go insane from the ordeal and your quest is over]].

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You are an adventurer and a mercenary, on the way to Neuburg, a city in Khul, intending to pay a visit to your old friend, Baron Tholdur, the Margrave of Neuburg Keep. However, as you approach the town, a pack of southern swordsmen attacks you and takes you prisoner. After freeing yourself, you find out that something strange is going on in Neuburg: foreign warriors patrols patrol the streets, the natives inhabitants look scared and pale pale, and shapeless horrors prowls prowl the city by night. Something terrible has happened to Neuburg Keep and -- Baron Tholdur, an eldritch threat from a half-forgotten past past, has returned. returned! It's up to you to find a way into the infested keep, investigate the source of this corruption corruption, and eradicate it before it extends its tendrils beyond Neuburg, all without losing your life or your mind to the skulking horrors infesting lurking in the dungeons.

Much like ''Literature/HouseOfHell'', ''Beneath Nightmare Castle'' takes an approach closer to a horror story than a fantasy one; one, namely the grotesque alien madness of the [[Creator/HPLovecraft Lovecraftian Horror]] such found in horror classics other works like ''Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu'' and ''Literature/AtTheMountainsOfMadness''. Along with the usual scores of Skill, Stamina Stamina, and Luck, Luck scores, you also start with a score of Willpower, Willpower score, which determines your sanity and will, which force of will. This score slowly decreases each time you have to roll a Willpower Test Test, or if you see something really disturbing or creepy. If your Willpower drops below 6 and you fail a test, you [[NonStandardGameOver go insane from the ordeal and your quest is over]].



* AndIMustScream: The Baron's daughter, pictured above, is very lucid and aware of her situation, but she cannot do anything for her predicament as the cursed armor she wears forces her to attack anyone who comes near.
* ApologeticAttacker: The Spiked Maiden is compelled to attack anyone who comes near, and she profusely apologize for it as she attacks.
* BackFromTheDead: Xakhaz was thought dead and long defeated, his carcass sealed under the Keep. "Thought" being the keyword here...

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* AndIMustScream: The Baron's daughter, pictured above, is very lucid and aware of her situation, but she cannot do anything for about her predicament predicament, as the cursed armor she wears forces her to attack anyone who comes near.
* ApologeticAttacker: The Spiked Maiden is compelled to attack anyone who comes near, and she profusely apologize apologizes for it as she attacks.
* BackFromTheDead: Xakhaz was thought dead and long defeated, his carcass sealed under the Keep. "Thought" being the keyword key word here...



* TheBerserker: People possessed by the Runic Axe or the Armor of Spikes are compelled to attack and fight blindly with no rest. On the good side, Oiden, God of Battle and Madness, is on your side and his priest will give you a Berserk Potion that increases your Skill of 4 for a single combat.
* BigBad: Xakhaz the evil, revenant sorcerer sealed under Neuburg Keep.
* BlackEyesOfEvil: The Tentacle Woman. It's not mentioned in the text, but can be seen in the removed illustration.

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* TheBerserker: People possessed by the Runic Axe or the Armor of Spikes are compelled to attack and fight blindly with no rest. On the good side, Oiden, God of Battle and Madness, is on your side side, and his priest will give you a Berserk Potion that increases your Skill of by 4 for a single combat.
* BigBad: Xakhaz Xakhaz, the evil, revenant sorcerer sealed under Neuburg Keep.
* BlackEyesOfEvil: The Tentacle Woman. It's not mentioned in the text, but can be seen in the accompanying illustration, which was removed illustration.in some printings.



** Subverted with the Spiked Maiden, she is aware of what's going on but she cannot do anything about it.

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** Subverted with the Spiked Maiden, Maiden; she is aware of what's going on on, but she cannot do anything about it.



* CoversAlwaysLie: While you do meet the Spiked Maiden, she's encountered inside the castle. Second, Neuburg Keep is on a hill in the middle of the city itself. Also, the cover implies she's some kind of assassin for the villains, but she's actually an innocent victim, and will plead with you to run away while she's attacking you.

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* CoversAlwaysLie: While you do meet the Spiked Maiden, she's encountered inside the castle. Second, Neuburg Keep is on a hill in the middle of the city itself. Also, the cover implies she's that the person depicted is some kind of assassin for the villains, but she's actually an innocent victim, and will plead with you to run away while she's attacking you.



* DemBones: You fight a skeleton rising out of a coffin. Its notable that this skeleton has a ridiculously low SKILL of 4, but a surprisingly high STAMINA of 10, unusual stats compared to skeleton enemies from other entries.
* DistractedByTheSexy: One room in the dungeon reveal three beautiful girls that entertain you with a captivating dance, [[spoiler:who're actually Senyakhaz and two illusions, trying to mesmerize you enough to lure you into a trap.]]

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* DemBones: You fight a skeleton rising out of a coffin. Its It's notable that this skeleton has a ridiculously low SKILL Skill of 4, but a surprisingly high STAMINA Stamina of 10, unusual stats compared to skeleton enemies from other entries.
* DistractedByTheSexy: One room in the dungeon reveal reveals three beautiful girls that entertain you with a captivating dance, [[spoiler:who're actually Senyakhaz and two illusions, trying to mesmerize distract you enough to lure you into a trap.]]



** While most of the Southern Swordsmen have relatively low SKILL and STAMINA in the single digits, you might get into a fight with an elite swordsman (accompanying a dwarf) which has surprisingly high stats of '''SKILL 9 STAMINA 18'''.
** You can find another Swordsman with SKILL 11 later on, though he only has STAMINA 6.

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** While most of the Southern Swordsmen have relatively low SKILL Skill and STAMINA Stamina in the single digits, you might get into a fight with an elite swordsman (accompanying a dwarf) which who has surprisingly high stats of '''SKILL '''Skill 9 STAMINA Stamina 18'''.
** You can find another Swordsman with SKILL Skill 11 later on, though he only has STAMINA Stamina 6.



* InfinityPlusOneSword: The Trident of Skarlos, if you manage to find both its components (and the spearhead is mandatory to find the handle): it was made to kill undead and sorcerous creatures, which means it gives you more Skill, deals extra damage to those foes and restores some of your Willpower and Luck upon finding it. [[spoiler:It also ''really'' enjoys ripping Xakhaz's undead body apart, doing lots of extra damage to the FinalBoss.]]

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* InfinityPlusOneSword: The Trident of Skarlos, if you manage to find both its components (and having the spearhead is mandatory needed to find the handle): it was made to kill undead and sorcerous creatures, which means it gives you more Skill, deals extra damage to those foes foes, and restores some of your Willpower and Luck upon finding it. [[spoiler:It also ''really'' enjoys ripping Xakhaz's undead body apart, doing lots of extra damage to the FinalBoss.]]



* LuckBasedMission: If you find yourself in the Baron's wine cellar, your gluttony gets the better of you and you decide to tap one of the casks, which is determined by a random die roll. One of the possible results of this is you drinking a potion the Baron had made that's supposed to inhibit his appetite so he can lose weight, and means you can't eat Provisions anymore.

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* LuckBasedMission: If you find yourself in the Baron's wine cellar, your gluttony gets the better of you and you decide to tap one of the casks, which is determined by a random die roll. One of the possible results of this is you drinking a potion the Baron had made that's supposed to inhibit his appetite so he can lose weight, and it means you can't eat Provisions anymore.any more.



* MagicPotion: The Potion of Berserk Rage boosts your SKILL by four points. However, it can only be used in one combat, and players who drink this potion must fight an enemy to the finish, even if an option to escape or stop fighting is available.

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* MagicPotion: The Potion of Berserk Rage boosts your SKILL Skill by four points. However, it can only be used in lasts for one combat, and players who drink this potion must fight an enemy to the finish, even if an option to escape or stop fighting is available.



* NiceJobBreakingItHero: You can end up killing people who were out to help you, and you ''will'' end up if you wield the Runic Axe. [[spoiler:You can also get a second-rate ending if you smash the portal machine in Senyakhaz's room, which means that you won't be able to reach Xakhaz.]]
* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: Xakhaz is an evil sorcerous mad-scientist revenant cultist with a body made of spare bodyparts and tentacles. [[spoiler:Plays against him, as he's both undead and a sorcerous creation, which means that the Trident of Skarlos will butcher him like there's no tomorrow.]]
* NonStandardGameOver: Going insane if your Willpower is under 6 and you fail a test, regardless of the situation.
* PoisonMushroom: One of the potions you can drink is a diet concoction for the Baron, which will render you unable to consume food and rations for the rest of the adventure (so, no more healing).
* PressXToDie: In paragraph 1, you're free to ignore the unseen man who's trying to cut your ropes to help you escape. If you do, you will die horribly two paragraphs later. TooDumbToLive defined...

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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: You can end up killing people who were out to help you, and you ''will'' end up doing so if you wield the Runic Axe. [[spoiler:You can also get a second-rate ending if you smash the portal machine in Senyakhaz's room, which means that you won't be able to reach Xakhaz.]]
* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: Xakhaz is an evil sorcerous mad-scientist revenant cultist with a body made of spare bodyparts body parts and tentacles. [[spoiler:Plays against him, as he's both undead and a sorcerous creation, which means that the Trident of Skarlos will butcher him like there's no tomorrow.]]
* NonStandardGameOver: Going insane if If your Willpower is under less than 6 and you fail a Willpower test, regardless of you go insane and cannot continue the situation.
adventure.
* PoisonMushroom: One of the potions you can drink is a diet concoction for the Baron, which will render you unable to consume food and or rations for the rest of the adventure (so, no more healing).
* PressXToDie: In paragraph 1, you're free the very first paragraph, you have the choice to ignore the unseen man who's trying to cut your ropes to and help you escape. If you do, you will die horribly two paragraphs later. TooDumbToLive defined...



* RedHerring: A Downplayed example, [[spoiler: despite the insistence of Oidan's clerics, the Talisman of Loth only gives you a minor combat bonus against Xakhaz, while the unmentioned Trident of Skarlos is far more useful.]]

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* RedHerring: A Downplayed example, example. [[spoiler: despite the insistence The Talisman of Loth, which Oidan's clerics, the Talisman of Loth clerics insist you must find, only gives you a minor combat bonus against Xakhaz, while the unmentioned Xakhaz. The Trident of Skarlos Skarlos, which they don't tell you about, is far more useful.]]



* SanityMeter: Willpower, which decreases as you're faced by the nightmarish beasts dwelling Neuburg.

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* SanityMeter: Willpower, Your Willpower score represents your sanity, which decreases as you're faced you face by the nightmarish beasts horrors dwelling in Neuburg.



* SpikesOfVillainy: The Spiked Maiden. Zigzagged in that she's the sweetest girl ever, but it's the armor itself that controls her.

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* SpikesOfVillainy: The Spiked Maiden. Zigzagged in that she's the sweetest girl ever, but it's the armor itself that controls her.her and forces her to kill everyone on sight.



* SurvivalHorror: While it may not play all the tropes of the genre right, this book seems a hybrid of this and the standard heroic fantasy story. The Willpower points probably help.

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* SurvivalHorror: While it may not play by all the tropes of the genre right, genre, this book seems can be seen as a hybrid of this and the a standard heroic fantasy story. The Willpower points probably help.story.



* WeaponOfXSlaying: The Trident of Skarlos was made to destroy the undead and abomination created through sorcery.

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* WeaponOfXSlaying: The Trident of Skarlos was made to destroy the undead and abomination abominations created through sorcery.
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* LaserBlade: You can find a wand which projects a blade of freezing light. Unfortunately this weapon is powered with some of your life force.

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* LaserBlade: You can find a wand which projects a blade of freezing light. Unfortunately this weapon is [[CastFromHitPoints powered with some of your life force.force]].
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* InfinityPlusOneSword: The Trident of Skarlos, if you manage to find both its components (and the spearhead is mandatory to find the handle): it was made to kill undead and sorcerous creatures, which means it gives you more Skill, deals extra damage to those foes and restores some of your Willpower and Luck upon finding it. [[spoiler:It also ''really'' enjoys ripping Xakhaz's undead body apart.]]

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* InfinityPlusOneSword: The Trident of Skarlos, if you manage to find both its components (and the spearhead is mandatory to find the handle): it was made to kill undead and sorcerous creatures, which means it gives you more Skill, deals extra damage to those foes and restores some of your Willpower and Luck upon finding it. [[spoiler:It also ''really'' enjoys ripping Xakhaz's undead body apart.apart, doing lots of extra damage to the FinalBoss.]]
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* {{Transflormation}}: One of the book's least-disgusting demises you can suffer, getting hit by magic liquid from the Elven Fountain turns you into a plant.
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* CoversAlwaysLie: While you do meet the Spiked Maiden, she's encountered inside the castle. Second, Neuburg Keep is on a hill in the middle of the city itself.

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* CoversAlwaysLie: While you do meet the Spiked Maiden, she's encountered inside the castle. Second, Neuburg Keep is on a hill in the middle of the city itself. Also, the cover implies she's some kind of assassin for the villains, but she's actually an innocent victim, and will plead with you to run away while she's attacking you.
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* AndIMustScream: The Baron's daughter is very lucid and aware of her situation, but she cannot do anything for her predicament as the cursed armor she wears forces her to attack anyone who comes near.

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* AndIMustScream: The Baron's daughter daughter, pictured above, is very lucid and aware of her situation, but she cannot do anything for her predicament as the cursed armor she wears forces her to attack anyone who comes near.

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* BittersweetVictory: You can destroy the portal that Xakhaz's main minion uses to report to him, but it's acknowledged in the ending that this has delayed, but not stopped, his plans.


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* PyrrhicVictory: You can destroy the portal that Xakhaz's main minion uses to report to him, but it's acknowledged in the ending that this has delayed, but not stopped, his plans.
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* BittersweetVictory: You can destroy the portal that Xakhaz's main minion uses to report to him, but it's acknowledged in the ending that this has delayed, but not stopped, his plans.
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* ExcaliburInTheRust: [[spoiler: The "broken fork" you can find in the stall of an old, seemingly demented Goblin merchant is actually the spearhead of the Trident of Skarlos, the most useful item in the story.]]

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* ExcaliburInTheRust: [[spoiler: The "broken fork" you can find in the stall of an old, seemingly demented Goblin merchant is actually the spearhead of the Trident of Skarlos, the most useful item powerful weapon in the story.]]
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* ExcaliburInTheRust: The "broken fork" you can find in the stall of an old Goblin merchant is actually the spearhead of the Trident of Skarlos, the most useful item in the story.

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* ExcaliburInTheRust: [[spoiler: The "broken fork" you can find in the stall of an old old, seemingly demented Goblin merchant is actually the spearhead of the Trident of Skarlos, the most useful item in the story.]]

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