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* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with it bring noted by the narrator that they tend to repeat names so everyone knows for sure to whom they're related to. An example is Colonel Francisco, married to Carolina Tosta (his wife and niece) and their son, (eventually Colonel) Francisco, who gets married to Emilia Bandeira (or Iaiá Bandeira). Another is Maria da Conceição Tosta (or Maricota, the daughter of Iaiá Bandeira with Francisco) and two of her daughters: [[BilingualBonus Mary]] and Maria Auxiliadora.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with it bring being noted by the narrator that they tend to repeat names so everyone knows for sure to whom they're related to. An example is Colonel Francisco, married to Carolina Tosta (his wife and niece) and their son, (eventually Colonel) Francisco, who gets married to Emilia Bandeira (or Iaiá Bandeira). Another is Maria da Conceição Tosta (or Maricota, the daughter of Iaiá Bandeira with Francisco) and two of her daughters: [[BilingualBonus Mary]] and Maria Auxiliadora.
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* OldRetainer: Dodó becomes this to a branch of the Tosta family. [[spoiler: [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome They make her exhaust herself while working for them, suffering emotional abuse to stay at their house, has few leaves, receives a "salary" which is just a meager wage (only enough so she wouldn't be considered a slave in the technical sense of the world), to the point where her health declines and she develops a tumor which kills her. Her family once didn't see her for two years, and was continuously appalled by her treatment at their hands.]]]]
* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with it being noted by the narrator that they tend to repeat names so everyone knows for sure to whom they're related to. An example is Colonel Francisco, married to Carolina Tosta (his wife and niece) and their son, (eventually Colonel) Francisco, who gets married to Emilia Bandeira (or Iaiá Bandeira). Another is Maria da Conceição Tosta (or Maricota, the daughter of Iaiá Bandeira with Francisco) and two of her daughters: [[BilingualBonus Mary]] and Maria Auxiliadora.
* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with it being noted by the narrator that they tend to repeat names so everyone knows for sure to whom they're related to. An example is Colonel Francisco, married to Carolina Tosta (his wife and niece) and their son, (eventually Colonel) Francisco, who gets married to Emilia Bandeira (or Iaiá Bandeira). Another is Maria da Conceição Tosta (or Maricota, the daughter of Iaiá Bandeira with Francisco) and two of her daughters: [[BilingualBonus Mary]] and Maria Auxiliadora.
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* OldRetainer: Dodó becomes this to a branch of the Tosta family. [[spoiler: [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome They make her exhaust herself while working for them, suffering emotional abuse to stay at their house, has few leaves, receives a "salary" which is just a meager wage (only enough so she wouldn't be considered a slave in the technical sense of the world), to the point where her health declines and she develops a tumor which kills her. Her family once didn't see her for two years, and was continuously appalled by her treatment at their hands.]]]]
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with itbeing bring noted by the narrator that they tend to repeat names so everyone knows for sure to whom they're related to. An example is Colonel Francisco, married to Carolina Tosta (his wife and niece) and their son, (eventually Colonel) Francisco, who gets married to Emilia Bandeira (or Iaiá Bandeira). Another is Maria da Conceição Tosta (or Maricota, the daughter of Iaiá Bandeira with Francisco) and two of her daughters: [[BilingualBonus Mary]] and Maria Auxiliadora.
* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with it
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** After one of the freedmen call Moreno due to a land dispute with other freedmen, including Firmino, they fight again and the same blind fury appears. They only stop fighting after two freedmen come to take Firmino away.
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** After one of the freedmen call calls Moreno due to a land dispute with other freedmen, including Firmino, they fight again and the same blind fury appears. They only stop fighting after two freedmen come to take Firmino away.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler: Damiana ends up having a longer life than Dodó.]]
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: [[spoiler: Damiana Martha ends up having a longer life than Dodó.]]
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with it being noted by the narrator that they tend to repeat names so everyone knows for sure to who they're related to. An example is Colonel Francisco, married to Carolina Tosta (his wife and niece) and their son, (eventually Colonel) Francisco, who gets married to Emilia Bandeira (or Iaiá Bandeira). Another is Maria da Conceição Tosta (or Maricota, the daughter of Iaiá Bandeira with Francisco) and two of her daughters: [[BilingualBonus Mary]] and Maria Auxiliadora.
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* OneSteveLimit: Averted by the white families, with it being noted by the narrator that they tend to repeat names so everyone knows for sure to who whom they're related to. An example is Colonel Francisco, married to Carolina Tosta (his wife and niece) and their son, (eventually Colonel) Francisco, who gets married to Emilia Bandeira (or Iaiá Bandeira). Another is Maria da Conceição Tosta (or Maricota, the daughter of Iaiá Bandeira with Francisco) and two of her daughters: [[BilingualBonus Mary]] and Maria Auxiliadora.
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* RapeAsBackstory: Moreno goes to Isabel while drunk, takes her forcefully to a ravine, in which they both fell down and she passed out. Moreno then rapes her. It makes her lose her kid.
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* RapeAsBackstory: Moreno goes to Isabel while drunk, takes her forcefully to a ravine, ravine in which they both fell accidentally fall down and she passed passes out. Moreno then rapes her. It makes her lose her kid.
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* RiddleForTheAges: Just what did Shango (while on Martha's body) said to João Paulo to make him compliant? (For a time, at least). Martha doesn't remember anything and Regina (their neighbor) and João Paulo don't want to say anything.
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* RiddleForTheAges: Just what did Shango (while on Martha's body) said say to João Paulo to make him compliant? (For a time, at least). Martha doesn't remember anything and Regina (their neighbor) and João Paulo don't didn't want to say anything.
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** Martha is born looking a lot like her grandmother, Ewa Oluwa.
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** Martha is born looking a lot like her African grandmother, Ewa Oluwa.Oluwa, just lighter.
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** João Paulo to Damiana, he spends most of their money on drinking and gambling, cheats on her and almost beats her up. [[spoiler: He then steals Marta's money and runs away, only being found years later]].
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** João Paulo to Damiana, he spends most of their money on drinking and gambling, cheats on her and almost beats her up. [[spoiler: He then steals Marta's money and runs away, only being found years later]].later.]]
