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I corrected a grammar mistake (although I've made some myself). I also tried to make this page more concise, which I'm trying to work on with my writing.
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A character who yearns for the approval of his or her parent or role model, regardless of whether that person is likely to give it.
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Edited description to make it clear that it refers to the person seeking approval.
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The role model who knows you but never acknowledges you and thus you never stop trying to please them hoping one day they will.
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The role model you never stop trying to please.
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The role model who knows you but never acknowledges you and thus you never stop trying to please.please them hoping one day they will.
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Obsessed with the role model you can never please.
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