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A creature that must sustain its existence by consuming a vital element that sustains the lives of others, thereby endangering the victim's life, health or vitality in the process.
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A creature that must sustain its existence by consuming a sucks the vital element that sustains the lives force out of others, thereby endangering the victim's life, health or vitality in the process.
living things.
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The ability to suck blood or drain life like a vampire.
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The ability to suck blood or drain life in a "vampiric" fashion.
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The ability to suck blood or drain life in like a "vampiric" fashion.
vampire.
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[[AC:See the unabridged article [[Main/VampiricDraining here]].]]
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