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as said on the main page, character development could include a character losing layers over time
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A character who grows, changes, and showcases more layers as the story progresses.
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A character who grows, changes, grows and showcases more layers changes as the story progresses.
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A character who gets fleshed out as the story progresses.
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A character who gets fleshed out grows, changes, and showcases more layers as the story progresses.
